Earth's Jealous Lover (Poetry) - 6/4/2003 11:48:15 AM
Nekesh,
Excellent imagery and emotion through this one
"Spots misty and evergreen.
Beauty that runs skin deep.
Disturbed, I wander up and down,
Fidgeting to the river’s sound."
Peggy
Eyes (Poetry) - 6/4/2003 11:47:16 AM
Outstanding imagery again
"How I would love
To get lost in your eyes."
Peg
To college in a traditional sari (Poetry) - 5/30/2003 8:55:48 AM
I find the rhythym in this poem unfolding like cloth rippling in the wind. Nice work.
Earth's Jealous Lover (Poetry) - 9/10/2002 11:22:58 AM
Hey Nikesh..good to see you here.
Beautiful write..
Earth's Jealous Lover (Poetry) - 9/10/2002 10:50:45 AM
this is absolutely beautiful, nikesh!! i loved it!!
Earth's Jealous Lover (Poetry) - 9/10/2002 10:43:34 AM
Wonderful imagery and beautifully woven. Great.
Joel
Earth's Jealous Lover (Poetry) - 9/10/2002 10:31:42 AM
lyrical and lovely, verse and images
