The Seeds of Venus (Poetry) - 5/2/2009 1:38:37 PM
Excellent poem,take care
Edwin
A Reflection Too Late (Poetry) - 5/2/2009 1:37:09 PM
Very deep and sad poem that was indeed well written,take care
Edwin
A Reflection Too Late (Poetry) - 4/29/2009 1:42:40 PM
How heartbreaking a tale, how difficult it is to live with....
Be always safe,
Karen
A Reflection Too Late (Poetry) - 4/29/2009 7:05:42 AM
A sad and deep longing so well expressed in these few lines.
The last line makes the regret more profound "Too late to change my world".
Cynthia
The Seeds of Venus (Poetry) - 4/16/2009 3:47:09 AM
Lovely writing sweet man..enjoyed...stay safe and well...Hugss
The Seeds of Venus (Poetry) - 4/15/2009 12:59:08 PM
An abbundance of tender and eadearing emotions....
Be always safe,
Karen
The Seeds of Venus (Poetry) - 4/15/2009 7:47:22 AM
good poem thanks for sharing
Applause (Poetry) - 4/15/2009 2:18:20 AM
Great writing indeed dear man..have a wonderful and safe day...Hugss
Last Breath (Poetry) - 4/15/2009 1:42:13 AM
Clever and thought-provoking, but remarkably written in fine lines and rhyme. I enjoyed it very much as a reader/writer.
Cynthia
Applause (Poetry) - 4/15/2009 1:39:20 AM
Very nice and well written - I really like poems with rhyme and something to say, not just a conundrum of vagaries and prolixity.
Cynthia
Last Breath (Poetry) - 4/13/2009 5:35:01 PM
Profoundly wonderful and so delicately written....
Be always safe,
Karen
