Fletcher (Article) - 2/14/2008 4:13:37 AM
Well Penned Barbara
Let the Arrow strike its aim
Love & Peace be with you
Happy Valentine's Day
William
Fletcher (Article) - 2/12/2008 6:22:43 AM
Barb...nice write, I hope you get what you are wishing for.
Peace,
Dan
A Don Juan (Poetry) - 10/12/2007 1:35:53 AM
Excellent write, but as Don Jaun below said so rightly, some Don Jauns are better off forgotten,
Thank you for sharing
Steve
NINE / ELEVEN - SIX YEARS ON (Poetry) - 10/12/2007 1:33:18 AM
Barbara, this is brilliant, heart renching and tender, a beautiful tribute to a terrible time, thank you for sharing it.
Steve
NINE / ELEVEN - SIX YEARS ON (Poetry) - 9/14/2007 2:39:50 PM
A most heartfelt tribute to all who were killed that horrific day of days, for all those injured, for their families and for our country. May God Bless all.....
Be safe,
Karen
NINE / ELEVEN - SIX YEARS ON (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 6:46:41 PM
Barbara,
A powerful longing in heartbroken lines: you capture the loss in vivid detail. Well done, and thank you for remembering. NEVER forget.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
NINE / ELEVEN - SIX YEARS ON (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 6:43:50 PM
Wonderfully written and captures the intensity of emotions felt that day. Thank you
Best regards,
Chris
NINE / ELEVEN - SIX YEARS ON (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 12:42:17 PM
An outstanding write Barbar
Peace be with you
Great to see you again, welcome back
Love & Peace
William
A Don Juan (Poetry) - 8/8/2007 4:50:52 AM
Don Juans are usually unforgetable but sometimes are best forgotten! Enjoyed the poem Lovely Lady.
A Don Juan (Poetry) - 8/7/2007 6:22:39 PM
So few words, yet such a vivid picture painted with words, great.....
Be safe,
Karen
A Don Juan (Poetry) - 8/7/2007 9:35:54 AM
Barbara, this is a truly great write...well done, Poetess.
Thanks,
Dan
A Don Juan (Poetry) - 8/7/2007 9:29:24 AM
A Good Poem! A Lucky Girl ! ! ! I have believed for many years that some kind power keeps certain memories from us... for fear that keen recall might tear apart the lives we've come to love. Should this not be so in your case, know that you write poetry of beauty, which is appreciated by your friends. - Bill
A Don Juan (Poetry) - 8/7/2007 8:17:23 AM
Brabra
This short wonderful piece
Is outstanding, Well penned
Welcom Back
Love & Peace
William
A Don Juan (Poetry) - 8/7/2007 8:16:59 AM
Trying to rekindle is like lighting a short wooden match at both ends. Good write!
George
First Love (Poetry) - 8/1/2007 7:56:26 AM
Truly a heart touching memoir.
First Love (Poetry) - 7/24/2007 8:09:43 PM
So well penned, Barbara, enough to make me recollect a similar situation in my own life although I dare not call it love at all. You cover a gamut of information and vivid memory in this vignette without sacrificing the heartfelt nature of the tme and the emotional tangibility of the relationship.
Angels who watch over us read, Barbara, and I'm certain he has had a glimpse of and a reminescent smile in his peek at this special memory.
I love the colors you have chosen for your painting...reminds me of the warmth of fine Imari.
Love, Taylor
First Love (Poetry) - 7/19/2007 6:27:32 PM
Ahhh first love, the one you never forget. Sweet!!!:-)
First Love (Poetry) - 7/19/2007 2:15:15 PM
Beautifully written Barbara
Of a love from the past
Your First at that
Golden thoughts hard to forget
Enjoyed your wonderful shared thoughts
Peace be with you
Love & Peace
William
First Love (Poetry) - 7/18/2007 2:09:18 PM
Barbara, the admiration of someone you will never forget...you've written a beautiful memory of someone you admire and someone you could have possible cared for even more. You brought this writing to life and gave this reader a most interesting and enjoyable read.
First Love (Poetry) - 7/18/2007 7:25:01 AM
Barbara, isn't it wonderful to remember?
Peace,
Dan
A DREAM (Poetry) - 7/17/2007 9:17:33 PM
Barbara...beautifully written words,sensually stunning, loved the flow of the words...Hugs, Peggy
First Love (Poetry) - 7/17/2007 4:06:45 PM
A touching memoir--very poignant.
First Love (Poetry) - 7/17/2007 1:02:47 PM
True love; I like this format. Great job!
George
Shadows (Poetry) - 7/7/2007 11:48:37 AM
Love the way you wrote this.
Simple yet it creates your vision
of the shadows of city. Excellent!
Shadows (Poetry) - 7/7/2007 2:41:20 AM
Excellent work, Barbara
Shadows (Poetry) - 7/6/2007 1:59:02 AM
Hi Barbara,
I love this opportunity to view Bay Street through your artistic eyes my friend. Thank you for sharing your beautiful soul......
Peace,
Bill
A DREAM (Poetry) - 7/5/2007 5:55:55 AM
A Truly Delight post, rendered by a talented and skilled mind and hand! HUGS! SC
Shadows (Poetry) - 7/4/2007 7:23:02 PM
Enjoyed very much...Hugssss
Shadows (Poetry) - 7/3/2007 11:08:02 PM
I find this one rather fascinating, all the wonderful sights and sounds, enjoyed.
Be safe,
Karen
Shadows (Poetry) - 7/3/2007 5:30:22 PM
Yep! sound like the fast track of any Large City USA
I guess all City dwelling is aboots the same
Thanks for sharing
Peace be with you
William
Love & Peace
Shadows (Poetry) - 7/3/2007 2:09:11 PM
shadows, just about everywhere...excellent pen!
Thanks,
Dan
Jazz (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 1:19:16 PM
Barbara,
Excellent choice of words in this piece you have penned. It says so much to your readers and runs fast-paced all the way to the end. Bravisimo!!!
George
Gods And Goddesses (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 8:33:37 AM
Wonderful write...loved each line.
Thanks,
Dan
Jazz (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 8:15:38 AM
Beautiful Barbara
I can almost dig your piano Jazz from where I'm at
Love all that Jazz.
Exlellent write
Peace be with You
William
Love & Peace
Jazz (Poetry) - 6/25/2007 9:06:48 PM
How beautiful! I can hear the music and feel the vibrations! Love the piano and the violin most of all. Such beautiful music.....
Be safe,
Karen
Jazz (Poetry) - 6/25/2007 3:01:28 PM
Barbara, I found myself listening intently for the music. I loved the images, the beat, and the sense of playing a piano. Great Job!
Jazz (Poetry) - 6/25/2007 12:42:37 PM
I often listen to jazz and blues while writing, so this piece of yours was something I could relate to...and it made me smile. Excellent work!
Jazz (Poetry) - 6/25/2007 10:37:15 AM
Now that's an up-beat poem.
Jazz (Poetry) - 6/25/2007 7:40:20 AM
Maybe we'll see you playing at the upcoming Porltand Jazz and Blues Festival...great write.
Thanks,
Dan
Jazz (Poetry) - 6/25/2007 6:33:14 AM
Your rag-time jazz is delightful. Something like this makes me weep that I didn't kee3p taking those lessons. Without an ear and a skill for playing an instrument, I have for all adult years, been a music hungry man. I like it all... except for that hard candy the young'uns call, Rock or whatever. Am embedded in classical compositions, but can't quite take some of the more strident ones coming along. I can just see your whole body responding to play the Grand... even the bench is tested in those purposeful bumps as fingers set the tempo! Way to go, Barbara! ! ! - Bill
Jazz (Poetry) - 6/25/2007 6:00:47 AM
Tis a beautiful thing {wonder-filled} evol=love - Ted
Gods And Goddesses (Poetry) - 6/24/2007 2:46:53 AM
Magnificent composition in imagery, rhythm and contents, and striking closing lines.
I have enjoyed the reading of "Gods And Goddesses".
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Gods And Goddesses (Poetry) - 6/23/2007 10:03:43 PM
Excellent poem. Lucky you if it is true...Best wishes...Joyce
Gods And Goddesses (Poetry) - 6/23/2007 7:53:31 PM
Outstanding write Barbara
Enjoyed your wonderful thoughs
That created this excellent piece
Love & Peace
William
Gods And Goddesses (Poetry) - 6/23/2007 7:50:46 PM
Great writing,enjoyed...Hugssss
Gods And Goddesses (Poetry) - 6/23/2007 11:28:18 AM
Things gathered and remembered. Good write.
George
Singing Sands (Poetry) - 6/21/2007 3:33:02 PM
Beautifully done, Barbara...this brought out so many images from the vignettes in these lines.
Amor
Singing Sands (Poetry) - 6/20/2007 6:46:11 PM
Great writing,enjoyed...Hugsssssss
Singing Sands (Poetry) - 6/20/2007 6:37:51 PM
This is really very lyrical, Barbara. A total thrill to read and yet see everything as if this were an armchair travelogue. Good writing with lots of imagery.
George
Singing Sands (Poetry) - 6/20/2007 5:32:21 PM
This one is good and different... Like the line, "Your song of picnics past...." Others equally as good. Thanks. - Bill
Singing Sands (Poetry) - 6/20/2007 4:31:13 PM
Barbara, this is such a thoughtful poem, I had never thought about lying or walking on the beach in such a manner. Yes, if it could talk their would be so much activity and happiness sifting through the sands, singing and joyful noises. This is beautiful!
Singing Sands (Poetry) - 6/20/2007 3:15:08 PM
A lovely hand in hand walk at the sands of the seashore. Beautiful
Singing Sands (Poetry) - 6/20/2007 2:37:05 PM
And as I lay on the beach we seranade each other, the waves and the singing, shifting sands. Loved this poem.
Singing Sands (Poetry) - 6/20/2007 2:29:14 PM
Singing sands
I can hear you !
I believe you, and I'm very glad I read this marvelous poem, Barbara!
Entertainer (Poetry) - 6/17/2007 7:09:41 AM
Hope no one falls off your lighthouse roof! Good write.
George
Existing On The Inside Of Myths (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 8:40:38 PM
"Gears oiled - presuming truths"
I love this combination Barbara......Deep message and such a flowing piece.......Beautiful my friend!
Peace,
Bill
Live (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 6:57:20 PM
Well done,enjoyed...Hugssss
Live (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 6:44:08 PM
A much needed message in this deeply felt poem!Beautiully done!
ET
Live (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 6:38:36 PM
Oh what a beautiful state of mind to be in, enjoyed....
Be safe,
Karen
Live (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 2:06:55 PM
That thou is indeed [beautiful} Ted
Live (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 10:57:25 AM
A call to humanity and a sublime message... "Live" flows from the fountain of wisdom to the seas of Justice.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Live (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 10:12:59 AM
A very telling write, well done.
Thanks,
Dan
Live (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 8:39:25 AM
this is well written piece of work...
its composition gives it an airy look and feel, which compliments the theme splendidly.
Live (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 8:03:17 AM
Powerful thought-eliciting sentiments and emotions, Barbara. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Live (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 8:01:42 AM
watch out for those poppy fields. good poem, barbara
Entertainer (Poetry) - 6/14/2007 9:08:39 AM
Wow! I like this, see if the entertainer needs an agent.
thanks,
dan
Cyberlove (Poetry) - 6/12/2007 6:31:25 PM
A wit-wise play of words... "Cyberlove" sings beautifully.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Mythological Time (Poetry) - 6/12/2007 6:26:32 PM
Sublime rhythm leads the "Mythological Time" to friendship and humanity celebrating gratitude.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Existing On The Inside Of Myths (Poetry) - 6/12/2007 6:22:01 PM
This is poetic excellence in composition, subjects dealt and message.
"Existing On The Inside Of Myths" bears the aroma of history and the scent of wisdom.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Existing On The Inside Of Myths (Poetry) - 6/12/2007 12:21:26 PM
Time stood still while I read this wonderful write. Expressive and deep feelings about myths. Excellent!
George
A DREAM (Poetry) - 6/7/2007 6:29:11 AM
Excellent writing,enjoyed very much sweet lady,Hugs
A DREAM (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 10:15:29 PM
Interesting write! Dreams are a wonderful to express our inner thoughts......
Be safe,
Karen
A DREAM (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 8:33:29 PM
A Excelllent well Penned write Barbara
This dream is a gem
Love & Peace
William
A DREAM (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 1:43:13 PM
Enjoyed the thought-line within this pen. Well delivered
A DREAM (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 11:51:15 AM
An outstanding composition in poetic excellence... "A DREAM" glows.
I salute You, Poet.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
A DREAM (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 11:32:09 AM
Barbara,
Would that each could have this sort of dream with one of our books found well-used by others and standing the "true" test of time as a remembrance by others who've read its author. Great, just great!
George
A DREAM (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 11:25:45 AM
Stunning in every way, the images, the ambience, exquisite.
A DREAM (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 10:34:00 AM
What a great dream...one to be cherished.
Thanks,
Dan
Cyberlove (Poetry) - 6/3/2007 1:17:43 PM
Barbara, This is great. I love it. But that is the way with true love...Regards Joyce
Cyberlove (Poetry) - 6/3/2007 6:06:18 AM
Barbara,
Imagination running wild. Who would have thought up this idea of the comparisons made here? Marvelous job of writing!
George
Cyberlove (Poetry) - 6/2/2007 10:15:13 PM
A fantastic write Barbara
Mac,Pc all those gals are the same...lol
a realy Kool PeaCe
Love & peace
William
Cyberlove (Poetry) - 6/2/2007 7:23:38 PM
The age old arguement, Apple or PC, loves me, loves me not and the two shall never meet......
Be safe,
Karen
Cyberlove (Poetry) - 6/2/2007 11:33:23 AM
haha you summed up cyber love perfectly
Cyberlove (Poetry) - 6/2/2007 11:29:56 AM
Good write, fun to read...If I had to use a Mac, I'm sure I'd have to go back to college to figure out how to use it.
Thanks,
Dan
Wish To The Grand River (Poetry) - 5/31/2007 2:15:44 PM
That is some wishing place, Barbara. It's not the Fraser upon which I am gazing right now? Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
Wish To The Grand River (Poetry) - 5/31/2007 9:15:09 AM
Extremely descriptive...I truly enjoyed this write,
Thanks,
Dan
Wish To The Grand River (Poetry) - 5/31/2007 7:31:15 AM
I found a peaceful atmosphere as I read this, Barbara. You really have a way with very creative metaphors. I must read more of your works.
Thanks,
George
Wish To The Grand River (Poetry) - 5/31/2007 6:01:45 AM
An enjoyable write Barbara
Sometimes I wish I could think of something
Worthy of a wanted wish.
Thanks for sharing
William
Love & Peace
Wish To The Grand River (Poetry) - 5/31/2007 12:10:45 AM
That's some wishing well! There should be more just like it, enjoyed!
Be safe,
Karen
May Full Moon - Milk Moon - Planting Moon (Poetry) - 5/24/2007 9:31:10 AM
I have enjoyed the reading of this outstanding composition. "May Full Moon - Milk Moon - Planting Moon" is a poetic grand.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
May Full Moon - Milk Moon - Planting Moon (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 8:32:58 PM
An excellent write Barbara
I do Love The silvery beams from A pale blue moon
Most exciting
William
Love & Peace
May Full Moon - Milk Moon - Planting Moon (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 1:11:05 PM
Excellent write. I do believe this is a very special moon for new beginnings and emotional endings. The best of times and the worst of times...JDM
May Full Moon - Milk Moon - Planting Moon (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 12:57:04 PM
Beautifully imaged, Barbara; well done! But what's with the little squares after each line??? Just curious...
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Storm , May 15, 2007 (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 11:39:14 AM
You've conveyed the power of Storm effectively in dynamic imagery and verse; well done, Barbara!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
They call me StormSpinner: wish I'd written this. :)
Storm , May 15, 2007 (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 11:37:02 AM
Those storms have a way of humbling us, don't they? Great descrption.
Thanks,
Dan
Storm , May 15, 2007 (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 11:36:37 AM
VERY WELL DESCRIPTIVE WRITING MY FELLOW POET.
Mexican Butterfly (Poetry) - 5/12/2007 10:03:37 AM
Lovely! The butterfly can symbolize so much. Well done, Barbara. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Colour (Poetry) - 5/6/2007 7:43:37 PM
Really enjoyed these lines.
Colour (Poetry) - 5/6/2007 2:46:05 PM
Beautifully written Barbra
outstanding piece
Love & Peace
William
Colour (Poetry) - 5/6/2007 2:00:45 PM
Very beautiful. You are indeed a gifted artist.
Colour (Poetry) - 5/6/2007 1:59:46 PM
Love this wonderful descripton of 'Colour'
Thanks,
Dan
Merrill Boy (Poetry) - 5/5/2007 9:26:30 AM
Interesting write
busy guy
William
Love 7 peace
Haiku (Poetry) - 5/5/2007 9:18:31 AM
Nice piece Barbra
Kool Ku,
Love & Peace
William
Mexican Butterfly (Poetry) - 9/28/2003 11:20:44 AM
Ron, this is such a beautiful poem
Mexican Butterfly (Poetry) - 9/27/2003 4:21:48 PM
Very lovely poem I enjoyed this one.
Taylor
Mexican Butterfly (Poetry) - 9/27/2003 9:15:04 AM
lovely words you pen; enjoyed this very much! :D (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn.
Mexican Butterfly (Poetry) - 9/27/2003 7:31:07 AM
You are very gifted. Beautiful work!
MUSIC IN MY SOUL (Poetry) - 9/27/2003 7:18:59 AM
Love this expression of love Barbara. what a poem. G
Mexican Butterfly (Poetry) - 9/27/2003 7:17:01 AM
Expression of event poetically entertaining."I danced for him." This line touches me. G
Song Of Wolves (Poetry) - 9/27/2003 7:00:58 AM
Loved the imagery!
MUSIC IN MY SOUL (Poetry) - 8/28/2003 4:01:58 AM
wow....very beautiful poem!!!
MUSIC IN MY SOUL (Poetry) - 8/27/2003 9:53:02 PM
Beautiful poem.
PJ
MUSIC IN MY SOUL (Poetry) - 8/27/2003 9:02:58 PM
Such lovely expression in this piece, and if he truly makes you feel this way I wuld never let him go/ or get away!
~Nikki~
MUSIC IN MY SOUL (Poetry) - 8/27/2003 4:42:56 PM
An excellent poem and the ending evoked for me a vision of a happy ending in the future for the poems subject character.Many wonderful lines,I'm glad I read it.
my favorite line was:
'Volcanic smoldering expectation '.
Best wishes always
Kay.
My Heart Sings (Poetry) - 7/3/2003 1:56:43 PM
"We lead one another
Tentatively
Through the past
Which has become the present
As our hearts touch once more"
This one touched me with remembrance...thank you...
In Spirit,
Bear
My Heart Sings (Poetry) - 7/3/2003 1:53:21 PM
Congratulations....lovely poem to celebrate too.
Merrill Boy (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 4:33:18 PM
Cute...he needs a computer chip.
~E
Merrill Boy (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 3:52:53 PM
"Merrill Boy" is just cute, striking and lovely. Good Poetry flowing through in to the hearts. Lovely.
I Salute the Author.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Song Of Wolves (Poetry) - 2/23/2003 5:54:10 PM
loved a true portrait poem
Song Of Wolves (Poetry) - 2/16/2003 8:24:36 AM
Great job...very sweet and beautiful!!!!
Song Of Wolves (Poetry) - 2/16/2003 8:21:49 AM
Neat poem which paints a picture one can actually envision in their minds as they read your work. Great job!
Jill
Mythological Time (Poetry) - 2/13/2003 4:07:23 PM
Well done
Enjoyed immensely..
Thanks for stopping my way.
