Snapshot (Short Story) - 9/6/2009 7:25:39 AM
Touching heartfelt write. R
Rainy Day (Short Story) - 6/25/2009 8:16:29 AM
A touching short story beautifully written. R
Full Moon Morning (Poetry) - 9/21/2011 2:25:14 AM
Very enjoyable, Mike
Full Moon Morning (Poetry) - 1/18/2011 6:45:54 PM
Rosemarie is right! This is incredibly moving.
Just. exactly. right.
Thank you so much for sharing this lovingly polished gem.
May you be consoled by your memories and your talent for
writing about them so beautifully,
xOx Phyllis xOx
xOx Phyllis xOx
Standing in the Rain (Poetry) - 12/10/2010 6:09:57 PM
Interesting and well done.
Connie
Full Moon Morning (Poetry) - 10/19/2009 3:05:02 PM
Tremendously moving. One of your best, Mike. I hope you have submitted it. R
Dervish (Poetry) - 5/19/2009 8:35:32 AM
This write so reflects the struggle, the dichotomy, the Jekyll and Hide of tumultuous attraction. R
Wayside Elegy (Poetry) - 5/15/2009 1:56:20 PM
Captured concept -- from dust thou art, to dust thou shalt return. Quality write. R
Spring (Poetry) - 5/14/2009 7:38:33 AM
Love this mystic verse. R
something's waking (Poetry) - 5/12/2009 9:20:09 AM
I like the way you come back to your opening in your conclusion -- tying the thoughts all together. Excellent write. R
Standing in the Rain (Poetry) - 5/9/2009 1:37:22 PM
Excellent write. I enjoyed being led along in your rainy day. R
Days between Days (Poetry) - 5/8/2009 4:39:29 PM
This poem expresses very well a sense of loss as well as an effort to cope. I especially liked these lines:
to find another part of me,
when something inside was dying
and something living inside stirred
an essence unknown
Good to read your work again, Mike. R
