Give me that old time religion (Article) - 1/5/2010 5:29:07 PM
I concur heartily with this. Really, if we all just pitched in and looked out for one another, then other than a few absolute common necessities, there would be no need for taxes. I "get" and understand some people's desire to use government to take care of the sick, the poor, etc., but behold the possibilities when Christ-like charity is involved!
I spent a good while in Peru as a missionary, and it was amazing to me how giving the people were--people who had next to nothing and lived under a piece of tin held up with a few cement blocks! We're spoiled rotten with excess, and too unwilling to give it up. However, when we do, there is a high greater than any drug could give you that lasts forever! I believe we just need a little nudge to remind us--to teach us to share it, and THAT is what will bring the good old US economy back into place.
Well written, good reminder of the meaning of true love. --Charlie
Seeing is believing (Article) - 12/23/2009 8:41:44 AM
Yes. IN Him, J'nia <> <
Give me that old time religion (Article) - 12/2/2009 9:48:25 AM
Your write is a reminder for us, especially during the holidays when being without is more magnified. I also think of these classic verses:
James 2 (KJV)
15 If a brother or sister be naked, and destitute of daily food,
16 And one of you say unto them, Depart in peace, be ye warmed and filled; notwithstanding ye give them not those things which are needful to the body; what doth it profit?
Susan
I Am a Poet (Poetry) - 4/5/2013 12:17:36 PM
And you do it well, Carol! Never let yourself be sold short. Poetry doesn't make a lot of money, but it creates a refuge for the weary. Maintain, my Dear ... Maintain!
The Gospel of Peace (Poetry) - 4/5/2013 12:14:57 PM
Very nicely done, Carol. The Word is not only truth, but power. It is the Sword of the Spirit, and will bring your prayers to fruitfulness.
Help Them Now (Poetry) - 6/13/2012 11:12:57 AM
So sad, but such a profound truth, Carol. You have given a voice to the many innocent ones, and may God continue to use you,and us in The Den, as harbingers of His love and mercy.
Continued success~
Barbara J. Henry
The Gospel of Peace (Poetry) - 6/13/2012 11:09:09 AM
Beautiful, and so very true! What if we, the people,actually lived this out daily?
Thanks for sharing this one,and continued success~
Barbara J. Henry
The Gospel of Peace (Poetry) - 8/1/2011 10:14:17 PM
a lovely write, carol & a wonderful reminder why one should
always see the world through the lense of peace.
very nice, indeed.
carolyn
The Gospel of Peace (Poetry) - 12/14/2010 8:06:53 AM
Yes. To master life one must spend time with the master. Wonderful poem. Bless you, J'nia
The Gospel of Peace (Poetry) - 12/13/2010 7:14:04 PM
The love in your heart joins your soul to pen a work of spiritual art...
Be always safe,
Karen
The Gospel of Peace (Poetry) - 12/13/2010 2:59:36 PM
"The Gospel of Peace" this is a very moving piece of work, Carol. It has lifted my soul, I'm sure that it'll bless many more people.
The Potter and the Clay (Poetry) - 12/1/2010 7:38:11 AM
Oh so very true. Powerfully and wonderfully penned. A favorite.
I Am a Poet (Poetry) - 11/23/2010 2:06:53 PM
Beautiful description of the poet's craft-Words used are filled with energy and life.
Continued success/
Barbara J Henry
I Am a Poet (Poetry) - 10/23/2010 10:07:34 AM
I am a storyteller, a poet,
and life is shrunk to exist
on twenty pound paper
between soft covers held together
by the glue of passion and observation.
So very well expressed, Carol. I appreciate the philosophical outlook that you have shared within your verses. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Next Year in Jerusalem (Poetry) - 10/20/2010 5:23:01 PM
Wow, what an exciting vision of what is to come--rather, The One Who is to come! A wonderful and forceful poem!
Connie
I Am a Poet (Poetry) - 10/20/2010 10:02:50 AM
this is lovely!
I Am a Poet (Poetry) - 10/20/2010 4:47:18 AM
Eloquent ~
Love the last stanza!
Best Wishes,
Christine
I Am a Poet (Poetry) - 10/20/2010 2:28:11 AM
You are an accomplished poet in any genre.
George
I Am a Poet (Poetry) - 10/19/2010 10:15:09 PM
Carol, I understand this well. Beautiful piece.
Next Year in Jerusalem (Poetry) - 7/7/2010 11:17:07 AM
Dear Carol, I missed this beautiful poem. But there is a French expression which says, it is never late to right a wrong. Your Redeemer is my brother too and my closest friend. He is always with me. Love Emile
Next Year in Jerusalem (Poetry) - 6/10/2010 4:58:30 AM
Can hardly wait. Well penned and powerfully phrased. Tomorrow in Jerusalem! That is my prayer. Hugs, J'nia
Next Year in Jerusalem (Poetry) - 6/8/2010 10:06:42 PM
Your words ring with your belief and spirit!
Next Year in Jerusalem (Poetry) - 6/8/2010 12:23:17 PM
Passionately graceful is the hopes of what is yet to come...
Be always safe,
Karen
Next Year in Jerusalem (Poetry) - 6/8/2010 8:32:57 AM
Amen - God Save Us All
Open our eyes and our ears
So we may discern what we hear!
A Glimpse into Heaven (Poetry) - 4/20/2010 4:45:43 PM
Sublime potency of these gracious words; so utterly beautiful.
Peace and Blessings,
Carolyn
A Hill of Beans (Poetry) - 4/19/2010 7:09:58 AM
Carol - Enjoyed your meditation on life and the analogy to the Mayfly. Though they live only for a day, still it is the length of a life.
we can no longer take on knowledge
but instead let any new thought
pour out of us like a sieve,
losing one grain at a time until
there is no new thinking,
no new resolve?
These words are especially apropriate to our lives today. - David
A Glimpse into Heaven (Poetry) - 3/22/2010 7:46:27 AM
I am awed by your touching poem. The door between this temporal existence and spiritual was held ajar briefly and oh what joy does flood the soul. Thank you for sharing this with us. In Him, J'nia
A Glimpse into Heaven (Poetry) - 3/21/2010 5:56:30 PM
This is a wonderful poem that offers hope in sadness. Those last few days can be so terrible/wonderful as we tread lightly in the neighborhood of heaven.
Connie
A Glimpse into Heaven (Poetry) - 3/21/2010 12:31:08 AM
Very beautiful and inspiring. There are many things we have yet to learn about existance, anything is possible. Thank you for sharing.
A Glimpse into Heaven (Poetry) - 3/20/2010 7:57:46 PM
Carol
Wonderful write and reminder life doesn't end on earth
Mary
A Glimpse into Heaven (Poetry) - 3/20/2010 4:36:48 PM
I liked this. To leave this plane of earth isn't the easiest thing for many of us to do. Would that we all had this faith to ease us through.
A Glimpse into Heaven (Poetry) - 3/20/2010 4:19:47 PM
An engaging and uplifting offering, Carol. Thank you for sharing it. Love and blessings to you,
Regis
Help Them Now (Poetry) - 3/19/2010 3:37:19 AM
very emotional-words escape me as this deed is so vile, you have written well
Help Them Now (Poetry) - 3/18/2010 8:16:24 AM
I have to tell you and have told anyone who would listen and some who didn't want to, but if, when a man molests a child, not necessarily would he have to kill them, he should be executed, never mind if they actually kill them. We are far too lenient on these sick-minded people. I say sick-minded, because they have to be to do what they do, but I do NOT mean they are insane and I DO believe they know what they are doing and they know it is wrong, but the do it anyway. Shame on our society.
Who Knew? (Poetry) - 2/13/2010 12:10:37 PM
Dear Carol, first, I feel sorry that I did not visit your den earlier. In this poem you express very nicely the goodness of your heart towards your friend that you met a long time ago. It is very nice to keep a friendship alive. I myself am still connected with friends of over sixty-five years, both alive and passed. I am always delighted to speak on the phone with those alive, although thousands of miles separate us, and remembering those who passed on. The latter always need our love and our prayers. Love Emile
Who Knew? (Poetry) - 2/10/2010 1:27:51 PM
A beautiful and meaningful tribute, Carol. Some people never leave us even if their physical presence is taken from us for the time being. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Who Knew? (Poetry) - 2/9/2010 8:25:08 PM
I felt this way when I turned 51, Grace--the age my sister died of leukemia. Is this your mother? I interpreted it as such and a lump came to my throat--as my mother can't be long for this world. Will I remember her voice? So softly mournful...
Lin
Who Knew? (Poetry) - 2/7/2010 3:34:09 AM
This is very beautiful Carol.I enjoy it.take care
Who Knew? (Poetry) - 2/6/2010 7:07:42 PM
Outstanding write Carol
a beautiful tribute to a loved one
Love & Peace be with you Both
William
Who Knew? (Poetry) - 2/4/2010 7:36:01 AM
Beautifully written. J'nia
Who Knew? (Poetry) - 2/3/2010 11:49:53 PM
Carol, I assume that this was written for your mom. Beautiful work that touches the heart.
Who Knew? (Poetry) - 2/3/2010 1:32:48 PM
If this is about your mother, Carol, then it is sublimely beautiful and a true testimony of her legacy to you. We are ALWAYS who we are in relationship to our familys, no matter our age and circumstance. You are always her little girl and she your Mom. Your feelings are therefore very natural and on-going. But, as I'm finding myself, the beauty is that in many ways we BECOME them, in terms of how often we develop genetically and psychologically. I would never have believed this until experiencing it for myself. But day after day now I look in the mirror and in every way it is my mother staring back at me... even temperamentally I'm becoming like her. A lovely contemplation and outpouring. So bittersweet. Thank you. xx
Who Knew? (Poetry) - 2/3/2010 8:54:18 AM
beautiful tribute, carol. lovingly tend her consciousness within and be at peace, poetess.
blessings,
carolyn
Who Knew? (Poetry) - 2/3/2010 7:40:49 AM
I am assuming these poems of late are not merely poems, but heartache within. I used to have people tell me for years and years to leave the past in the past. It took me a long time before I was able to do that. I wish for you that it doesn't take as long as it did for me.
Who Knew? (Poetry) - 2/3/2010 5:54:37 AM
Carol,
your pain for missing this person comes through loud and strong. I don't know if it was a dear friend, family member, no matter, your words tell all. Very well done.
Mary
Who Knew? (Poetry) - 2/3/2010 5:26:08 AM
Carol, this is a heart-touching poem. My Mom, too, is gone nearly 35 years. The thought of seeing her again is a comfort, and I think I will know her voice as soon as I hear it, even if we are not face-to-face. I'll turn and say, "Mom?" and give her the biggest hug! I recognize her in myself in a lot of ways, too.
I read a bit of your writing on the last site you listed on your bio page. (why can't I think of the name now?) It's a very nice site with great content!
Connie
Who Knew? (Poetry) - 2/3/2010 4:37:12 AM
beautifully written--the sadness and longing well expressed
Flying Time (Poetry) - 2/3/2010 12:27:23 AM
Carol, I like this right fro the very first line...profound writing.
Until (Poetry) - 1/15/2010 12:45:21 PM
Yes, happiness and contentment comes from within. Even without everything else. Thank you, Dawn
Until (Poetry) - 1/12/2010 1:48:54 PM
Excellent- I agree with every word, and I love how you formed this one.
The In Between Words (Poetry) - 1/12/2010 8:47:46 AM
The eyes have it. pun intended. Well said Carol. J'nia
Until (Poetry) - 1/11/2010 2:10:38 PM
Sterling write! So true, so true. Your inner compass lacks nothing, Grace. Blessings...Lin
Until (Poetry) - 1/11/2010 7:29:24 AM
beautiful and well penned
love & peace be with you
Willim
Until (Poetry) - 1/10/2010 6:17:33 PM
I realized I must search for
completion within myself,
and then, only then, can
I become close enough
to another person to
feel, at last, complete.
I appreciate the truth and wisdom that you share within your verses, Carol. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and blessings,
Regis
Until (Poetry) - 1/10/2010 8:37:52 AM
So wise and beautiful, Carol.
Until (Poetry) - 1/10/2010 7:03:14 AM
Beautiful, Carol: much wisdom in these lines. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Until (Poetry) - 1/10/2010 6:56:27 AM
Wise, wise words you have penned, my friend. It is a matter of life itself that we come to these kinds of conclusions, if we are luckky and can look at life in a real sense. It took me so many years of self-doubt and other inner problems, but at the end of last summer I finally lay my burden to rest. I have never been happier in my long life. To say that this poem reached out to me would be putting it mildly.
Until (Poetry) - 1/10/2010 6:49:29 AM
beautiful and filled with the wisdom of living!
The Risen King (Poetry) - 1/8/2010 11:23:17 PM
Dar Carol,
Your faith shines through in this wonderful poem.
God Bless you!
JMD
The In Between Words (Poetry) - 1/8/2010 10:40:42 PM
You are right about the eyes, that's for sure.
The In Between Words (Poetry) - 1/8/2010 8:09:19 AM
And many of the sheeple fall for those lies - not me, not me! My Mom used to tell me she knew when I lied. She could see it in my eyes, no matter what I was saying. She KNEW. As do you, as do I. God help us. POWERFULLY penned truths in these words. Well done, Carol.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
The In Between Words (Poetry) - 1/8/2010 5:30:09 AM
I have to say, Carol, that he said on numerous occasions what he was about / Distribution of wealth / Changing the constitution / So, we can't say that we didn't know / the man was upfront with a lot of it if you remember his campaign.
The In Between Words (Poetry) - 1/8/2010 5:25:31 AM
profound write--scary stuff going on
The In Between Words (Poetry) - 1/8/2010 3:35:02 AM
an awesome write Carol
truer words I've read yet
what we see is a puppet seducing a nation
with smiles and charms
As the words of others who speak
like illusions exit his lips
through the side of their mouths
behind closed doors......
Love & Peace be with you
William
The In Between Words (Poetry) - 1/8/2010 12:33:25 AM
You know you are right, the eyes NEVER lie and beware to those who choose not to see, fantastic writing...
Be always safe,
Karen
Flying Time (Poetry) - 1/5/2010 8:50:28 AM
I concur. J'nia
Flying Time (Poetry) - 1/5/2010 8:36:05 AM
Very well said, I just cannot write about this New Year yet, I am still mulling some things over in my mind and my heart just isn't into a New Year just yet. Soon though, someday soon I will accept the inevitable, the beginning of another year of struggle and dealing with people who just don't get it. A soul just gets tired of always being upbeat.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Flying Time (Poetry) - 1/4/2010 2:56:44 PM
Excellent poem- one of the best I've read on here about the New Year. Love it- the picture, too.
Flying Time (Poetry) - 1/4/2010 3:36:01 AM
Love that first line. A unique perspective towards the end, too - the personification of 2010 seeking fame. Great write:)
Sheila
Flying Time (Poetry) - 1/3/2010 6:06:04 PM
Very profound Carol! I find this pom very interesting!
Much Love,
Margaret
Flying Time (Poetry) - 1/3/2010 4:50:24 PM
good poem
Flying Time (Poetry) - 1/3/2010 1:48:04 PM
The times they are a-changing, as one disillusionment poet/singer once said / If we are not careful America will no longer be ours in the very near future. Good writing.
Flying Time (Poetry) - 1/3/2010 7:59:33 AM
Happy New Year Carol.All the best to you.Good poem.take care
The End of Another Year (Poetry) - 1/2/2010 4:50:03 PM
Thanks so much, Michelle. Happy New year.
The End of Another Year (Poetry) - 1/2/2010 4:49:42 PM
Whoa!! This sure as heck took me back to my grandmother cooking for the whole bunch on a wood stove and she put put a darn banquet and topped it all off with the famous teacakes. Never had teacakes as good as hers. Never.
The End of Another Year (Poetry) - 1/1/2010 9:58:56 PM
Holy crap, this is a brilliant, well-written poem explaining the conflicting feelings within about the new year's arrival-the best i've read on here so far, for sure-a keeper. You have some excellent descriptions here, especially the brown eggs.
One for the record books (Poetry) - 12/30/2009 2:01:16 PM
Thanks, Karla. Wasn't sure I was making myself clear enough that I wasn't just talking about nature, but human nature as well and really the state of the world. Appreciate your encouragement.
One for the record books (Poetry) - 12/30/2009 5:48:18 AM
That ending: pow. Right between the eyes in spot on truth! Excellent, Carol.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
The Risen King (Poetry) - 12/28/2009 9:19:24 AM
Well rhymed and well said. J'nia
The Risen King (Poetry) - 12/22/2009 7:08:13 AM
Most of my poetry is not in rhyme, but it seems when I write a religious poem I almost always gravitate toward a rhyming scheme. Not sure why, but just seems to work out that way.
The Journey (Poetry) - 12/15/2009 10:43:24 AM
Many follow this direction, Carol. Your faith shines through your verses. Love and blessings,
Regis
Lord, Hear our Prayer (Poetry) - 12/15/2009 10:05:58 AM
A very inspirational write Carol! He is answering even now and you shall see the manifesting of His word in demonstration! "Lord Hear our Prayer"
Much Love,
Margaret
The Journey (Poetry) - 12/14/2009 2:14:38 PM
A very powerful write Carol and yes I found it very timely and interesting! Thanks for sharing!
Much Love,
Margaret
A Hill of Beans (Poetry) - 12/11/2009 7:24:26 AM
Beautifully thought provoking work!
Hope (Poetry) - 12/11/2009 7:22:55 AM
Hope...without it, life doesn't make much sense, does it? Lovely work, Carol.
The Journey (Poetry) - 12/11/2009 7:21:31 AM
Beautiful, Carol. I found your sixth verse particularly interesting, because I have often felt the same!
The Journey (Poetry) - 12/11/2009 4:00:51 AM
Excellent piece Carol.Its always a pleasure reading your poetry,take care
The Journey (Poetry) - 12/9/2009 1:03:51 PM
Amen to that, Carol. Thank You for this excellent read.
GOD BLESS
Tony Nerone
Will We Be Angels When We Die? (Poetry) - 12/9/2009 8:10:30 AM
I with that that were true for all; that we'd be better people when we die. Well penned. J'nia
and your sons and your daughters will prophesy (Poetry) - 12/2/2009 7:12:52 PM
What a wonderful subject you have chosen! I'm so glad you shared this true story. God can be heard by the simple of heart.
Connie
and your sons and your daughters will prophesy (Poetry) - 12/2/2009 4:16:12 PM
BEAUTIFUL...GOD'S WORD AND PROPHECIES CANNOT BE DENIED...THEY VALIDATE THEMSELVES EACH AND EVERY DAY IN THIS WORLD. BLESSINGS AND THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
and your sons and your daughters will prophesy (Poetry) - 12/2/2009 9:20:21 AM
Touching sentiment.
I believe that your son
is dead-on. I believe, too, very soon,
that the war prophesied in Ezekiel
38-39 will explode on the global stage
in the Middle East.
thankyou for posting this.
Blessings ...
r
Lord, Hear our Prayer (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 7:32:09 PM
Thanks, everyone, for your comments and your prayers. Sometimes the state of the world seems more than I can bear.
Lord, Hear our Prayer (Poetry) - 11/21/2009 8:37:56 PM
God hears our pleas Carol, God hears our pleas and yes there are many out there who do care...
Be always safe,
Karen
Lord, Hear our Prayer (Poetry) - 11/21/2009 7:10:28 PM
I hear Carol. I care.I am not sure if you are writing about yourself or the world in general. In any case I will pray tonight for you and the world. Wonderful prayer from the heart.
With Love,
Cindy
Lord, Hear our Prayer (Poetry) - 11/21/2009 10:41:08 AM
Prayerful and inspirational; thank you for sharing this spiritual gift, Carol. Love and blessings to you,
Regis
Contentment (Poetry) - 11/18/2009 4:53:08 PM
Envelops the senses. Serene and Warm. Thank you for sharing. Carin
Contentment (Poetry) - 11/18/2009 4:12:49 PM
I could stand and have stood on bridges such as in your picture. I always find it very mesmerizing and will be lost for hours. Wonderful writing...
Be always safe,
Karen
A Hill of Beans (Poetry) - 11/6/2009 10:44:30 AM
Can we learn from the Mayfly,
or is our mindset so firmly fixed
we can no longer take on knowledge
but instead let any new thought
pour out of us like a sieve,
losing one grain at a time until
there is no new thinking,
no new resolve?
Great question, Carol. I appreciate your philosophical perspective as shared here via your verses. Love and best wishes,
Regis
A Hill of Beans (Poetry) - 11/3/2009 7:43:29 AM
Excellent questions here Grace. I think too often that the answer is yes. Well said. J'nia
Pride (Poetry) - 10/29/2009 10:37:14 AM
A word-bomb. Love it. Well done, Carol.
Pride (Poetry) - 10/29/2009 12:18:50 AM
Excellent and powerful written piece.I enjoy reading it,take care
Pride (Poetry) - 10/28/2009 3:43:01 AM
Powerful, powerful writing, Carol, that contains so much truth.
Pride (Poetry) - 10/27/2009 7:56:24 AM
Well penned. I wish everyone could read this and follow its directive. Exceptional. Hugs, J'nia
Pride (Poetry) - 10/26/2009 10:34:15 AM
Ahh; free will. It's a burden. Good write.
Pride (Poetry) - 10/26/2009 9:55:32 AM
In my humble estimation, there is a great deal of wisdom in what you express via your verses here, Carol. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
I'll take the ocean waves, please (Poetry) - 10/25/2009 1:07:34 PM
You have shared the moment most effectively via your verses, Carol. Sometime "odd" moments are a powerful source of inspiration. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Writing what you know (Poetry) - 10/25/2009 1:05:59 PM
So true. Your verses express very meaningful substance, Carol. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Writing what you know (Poetry) - 10/21/2009 6:57:15 AM
You cut deep into the truth with this one. Well done. J'nia
Age of Aquarius (Poetry) - 10/21/2009 6:55:33 AM
So very true. I enjoyed this very much. J'nia
Soliloquy (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 6:16:40 AM
Fade to black. Well done. J'nia
I'll take the ocean waves, please (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 5:58:56 AM
Well penned and a fun read except for the tinnitus. Not nice. J'nia
Writing what you know (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 2:41:35 AM
This is an excellent poem.Poetry is such a wonderful part of literature,culture and this whole world.We can express ourselves in a way that we can't even express in front of people whether its a family member or a friend.Sometimes we have addictions in our lives like the poet you described or something makes us get very angry.People have a right to express how they truly feel.take care.Thank you for this well written piece
Less than Reality (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 5:16:09 AM
An exceptional ethereal offering of what it often is to catch a gimps of something that is real but is also no more. Well penned. J'nia
Kindness (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 5:04:25 AM
It would most certainly make a big difference in my lives. Thank you for sharing. J'nia
I'll take the ocean waves, please (Poetry) - 10/17/2009 9:11:28 AM
LOVELY WRITE...DONE WELL AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
My Hiding Place (Poetry) - 10/17/2009 7:40:48 AM
Steve, I love your sense of humor. Keep on laughing (out loud)
Waiting... (Poetry) - 10/17/2009 12:12:24 AM
Wonderful poetry.
My Hiding Place (Poetry) - 10/16/2009 11:15:58 PM
And from your hiding place, come the most wonderful poems.
Never draw poems on a napkin. They rip!
steve
Waiting... (Poetry) - 10/16/2009 11:13:59 PM
Well. where's the rest??? I'm sitting here wondering if there might be more I reckon there is! You're holding out.lol
Hurry with the rest. waiting...
Waiting... (Poetry) - 10/16/2009 10:43:39 PM
Carol wnat an interesting concept to walk all through, well said...
Be always safe,
Karen
Less than Reality (Poetry) - 10/15/2009 12:55:15 PM
Good point, Dallas. I see what you mean. Changing it now. Thanks for your help. Carol
Soliloquy (Poetry) - 10/15/2009 11:36:18 AM
Cue the curtain. Nice!
Mirror of the Soul (Poetry) - 10/15/2009 11:34:45 AM
You just need a different bait. Nicely done, Carol.
Less than Reality (Poetry) - 10/15/2009 11:32:24 AM
Carol, after the second line in the third stanza, the last line becomes redundant. If it were me (I know it's not), I'd eliminate the third line altogether. If you want to keep the three line stanza, break the second.
Always keep the screen door locked (Poetry) - 10/15/2009 11:27:10 AM
I don't think there'll be rejoicing once she gets inside. It gives such a neat peek into the minds of children.
That's just the way it was (Poetry) - 10/15/2009 6:37:00 AM
I appreciate your comments. I'm afraid I sometimes take poetic license in my work and do not always stick to the facts. I am aware that the motto "In God we Trust" did not come into being until the Civil War, and only appeared on our monetary units periodically from that time until adopted as a permanent change by Congress in the 1950's. However, the idea of in God we trust was certainly present when our Founding Fathers penned the Constitution of the United States, and as a Christian I believe the reason we have been blessed by a nation is two-fold--first, for most of our 233 years the majority of the United States has been faithful to God, and secondly, we have stood by Israel since her birth as a nation in 1948.
Unfortunately, we have become lapsed Christians where God is no longer at the forefront of our lives and now our government is beginning, for the first time, to pull away from Israel. The sentiment of my poem addresses these issues, not with historical facts, but by reminding people that our country used to be so much more and if we do not return to the God of our Fathers, the faith of our Fathers, we will not prevail.
Here I go again. Lori, I hope I have not offended. My faith and my politics are so intermingled I have a great deal of difficulty separating the two. Have a great and blessed day.
Carol
That's just the way it was (Poetry) - 10/15/2009 6:03:36 AM
"Until this year I thought the Nobel Prize was awarded
for excellence achieved, not dreams conceived--
I thought praise was reserved for good that was done
not good that was undone--
I thought honor was given for bravery on the front
not cowardice in the back rooms of Congress--
I thought unity was the backbone of America,
and “In God we trust” was the foundation--
when did these things change?"
Though it would probably be different if most of us on AD were on the Nobel committee, the Nobel has often been awarded based on what might be done. Most Americans simply don't pay close enough attention to it to know. Perhaps we assume too much. America has never been a unified nation. Just look at the state votes in 1788 concerning the ratification of the constitution. So, in a way "these" things never were nationwide... they simply existed in the hearts of good individuals such as yourself. I hope you are able to have that conversation with your grandchildren. I agree with your sentiments and enjoyed the poem, but I think most Americans need a good history lesson.
That's just the way it was (Poetry) - 10/15/2009 3:42:33 AM
Carol, this is SO powerful and so very well written. You have said much so very eloquently.
That's just the way it was (Poetry) - 10/14/2009 12:40:16 PM
Right on. Powerful write and well penned. J'nia
Always keep the screen door locked (Poetry) - 10/12/2009 6:34:56 AM
Oh my goodness. Too funny and yet somewhat poignant too. Very well penned. Enjoyed it very much. J'nia
This Old House (Poetry) - 10/10/2009 7:39:31 AM
THAT'S WHAT HAPPENS WHEN, NO MATTER WHAT, YOU'RE IN LOVE ENOUGH TO STICK IT OUT TOGETHER. YOU GO DOWN TOGETHER AND YOU COME BACK UP TOGETHER...GOOD HOUSE! THANKS FOR SHARING THIS VERY WELL WRITTEN WORK WITH UNIQUELY EXPRESSED METAPHORS. BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Malice in Wonderland (Poetry) - 10/9/2009 10:58:01 AM
I fully understand the demise but believe "we the people" have the power to make things right again....
Be always safe,
Karen
Malice in Wonderland (Poetry) - 10/9/2009 8:33:12 AM
I can feel the frustration in this. Job's friend spoke on and on and on to hear themselves talk. The ultimate good was in believing God. Remember, the only news you see is 'sensational news.' The good news happens, but is not trumpeted from the mountain.
If I could turn back time (Poetry) - 10/9/2009 8:29:06 AM
Here here! I know that feeling. Reboot ... abort, retry, fail. Well done, Carol!
The Journey Always Takes You Home (Poetry) - 8/2/2009 7:10:37 PM
Beautifully done, Carol. It reminds me of the wise saying that is true in every circumstance: "This too, shall pass."
Walking with a purpose (Poetry) - 8/2/2009 5:19:19 PM
A fascinating journey in self-examination. I like the fresh determination as your walk resumes. What lies ahead? Life is full of surprises, so expect many changes to come. Remember the lines from the old song, "Put your hand in the hand of the One who stilled the water........" He will help you walk on that straight path.
Connie
Walking with a purpose (Poetry) - 8/1/2009 9:10:03 AM
Thank you for your comments, Dallas. You got it.
Carol
Walking with a purpose (Poetry) - 8/1/2009 8:29:45 AM
I love this, Carol! Well said. I often ponder decisions of the past that would have been life-changing had I made them differently. If I could go back, would I? The decisions I've made have made me the person that I am, and I'm happy with who I am.
Salvaging Time (Poetry) - 7/30/2009 11:15:14 PM
Great write. The Dali canvas was a nice touch.
I Should Have Told You (Poetry) - 7/29/2009 11:12:53 AM
THE PHRASES AND IMAGERY IN THIS PIECE IS OUTSTANDING AS THE AUTHOR DEPICTS ONE FILLED WITH FEELINGS OF DEEP REGRET...AND LAMENTING ALL THE 'OPPORTUNITIES SCORNED' TO SAY WHAT SHOULD HAVE BEEN SAID SO LONG AGO, THUS, WITH FINAL BREATH...SAYS IT NOW. EXCELLENT. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Salvaging Time (Poetry) - 7/27/2009 8:56:22 PM
So very true and you do justice to the emotions through your words...
Be always safe,
Karen
Salvaging Time (Poetry) - 7/27/2009 1:44:47 PM
I've been there, more times than I can count. Well presented, Carol!
Salvaging Time (Poetry) - 7/27/2009 9:22:51 AM
TWO THINGS THAT WAIT FOR NO ONE; TIME AND TIDE. WE OFTEN WISH THAT TIME COULD WAIT, AS WE WATCH HELPLESSLY AND SEE IT...SLIPPING AWAY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
I Should Have Told You (Poetry) - 7/27/2009 9:14:09 AM
Oh my ...how sad your words are sweet lady..well written indeed...stay safe and well...Hugss
Salvaging Time (Poetry) - 7/27/2009 8:12:41 AM
I like it good write :-)
I Should Have Told You (Poetry) - 7/15/2009 7:56:40 PM
Oh how emotionally deep and saddened. How much this pearcess the heart and shatters it into shards of nothingness. Yes, how profoundly sad as your words reveal such truths...
Be always safe,
Karen
I Should Have Told You (Poetry) - 7/15/2009 4:47:23 AM
Love never dies. Oh, it may be scuffed and worn like that old luggage, or rejected and even neglected ... but it does not die. Well said, Carol!
All Roads Lead to Rome (Poetry) - 7/12/2009 4:53:11 PM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry Carol, welcome to AD. Holly
The Back of the Bus was Full (Poetry) - 6/9/2009 6:43:29 PM
Seems like forever ago-half a century. You can enact laws but to change men's hearts takes a generation(or more). Ignorance doesn't seem to have a shelf-life. The message is particulary potent through the eyes of a child. We arn't born with prejudice. It is learned. Fine poem, Carol...
Lin
All Roads Lead to Rome (Poetry) - 6/9/2009 6:30:38 PM
The power of our pride has been broken. Can we put the pieces back together again? Hope so and hopefully we can learn from those whose greed overcame justice and loyalty. Excellent write, Carol!
Lin
All Roads Lead to Rome (Poetry) - 6/7/2009 5:39:17 PM
An outstaning write Carol
Most enjoyable reading
Peae be with you
William
Down but not out (Poetry) - 6/4/2009 6:09:44 AM
This is very good.I look forward to reading the next poem :-)
EDWIN
Reflections of a Life Well Spent (Poetry) - 6/4/2009 6:08:00 AM
Fantastic and beautiful poem,I enjoy reading your works,take care.You are a talented writer.Keep up the great work
EDWIN
The Back of the Bus was Full (Poetry) - 6/4/2009 6:05:10 AM
Thank you for sharing this poem in terms of what things used to be.As a country we come a long way,but we still have a lot of work to do.take care
EDWIN
All Roads Lead to Rome (Poetry) - 6/4/2009 6:03:35 AM
Excellent and well written poem,take care
EDWIN
All Roads Lead to Rome (Poetry) - 5/31/2009 7:50:37 PM
Absolutely amazing and yes like other great empires this one is crumbling too, how utterly sad....
Be always safe,
Karen
The Back of the Bus was Full (Poetry) - 5/30/2009 1:14:58 PM
I'm old enough to remember those days. I admire the way you capture them. And in Chapter Twelve of my novel, Savage Days Haunted Nights .Amazon.com, I relive them too.
The Back of the Bus was Full (Poetry) - 5/29/2009 8:08:14 AM
Carol, beautifully written, an honest picture of times we like to
hope are gone forever, but... Thank you for this. -gene.
Down but not out (Poetry) - 5/29/2009 7:26:30 AM
Very well done! I love the way you write.
Cicada Time in Richmond (Poetry) - 5/29/2009 7:24:21 AM
Another vivid word-picture. I remember cicadas singing in the hot Michigan summers. Well done!
The Back of the Bus was Full (Poetry) - 5/29/2009 7:22:23 AM
This is a powerful word picture, drawn with just a few words. A complete memory of those perilous times. Well done!
Cicada Time in Richmond (Poetry) - 5/26/2009 9:32:32 PM
Oh this brings memories of my honeymoon. We were serenaded by these creatures at Sun-Moon Lake. You've captured the almost overwhelming intensity of their sound and have shed light on the mystery also. I love the dramatic unfolding of this write. Almost like a miniature film with stunning visuals! Publication was certainly well-earned. Kudos, Carol...
Lin
Lin
Down but not out (Poetry) - 5/26/2009 6:51:42 PM
Living in Southwest Mo. I know that feeling of the humidity clinging to you so tight you can hardly breathe. Excellent poem. Liz
Down but not out (Poetry) - 5/26/2009 6:45:01 PM
I can feel the churning of many emotions that are held within, beautifully written...
Be always safe,
Karen
Down but not out (Poetry) - 5/26/2009 11:49:45 AM
A sad poem of love that sounds inescapable. Very well written, and you feel the frustration.
Mary
Reflections of a Life Well Spent (Poetry) - 5/26/2009 6:05:40 AM
Very well penned Carol. You are absolutely right that clarity about life comes with age. Nice job.
Anna
