THE GIFT (Poetry) - 5/30/2014 2:26:12 AM
An imaginative poem James. I was entertained by it. At the center it looks like an opinion on the capitalist system. Although I could never agree with the message, it is nevertheless well done. The use of an alien on a leash isn't as effective as say a creature that would attach itself to the brainstem and send behavioral messages directly to the cortex. That would be a more believable scenario than one that walks alongside the boy. Bob
CATARACT (Poetry) - 5/30/2014 2:02:04 AM
A most poetic interpretation of groping in the dark James. I enjoyed the feel of it. Bob
THE GIFT (Poetry) - 8/4/2009 2:47:53 AM
A well written poem,take care
EDWIN
PARTY (Poetry) - 8/2/2009 2:08:13 PM
Very good poem. I enjoyed reading this very much, James :-)
Sue
PARTY (Poetry) - 6/22/2009 7:40:09 AM
james this is a great peom, very inspiring keep up the good work
Tuchy
