Bittersweet (Poetry) - 11/8/2003 7:19:18 PM
Divorce is so awful. Take hope that you still have them as parents even though they're not under the same roof. Love often comes in untraditional forms, and we are made the wiser because of it. You wlll experience awesome experiences because of the divorce.
First and foremost, you are writing beautiful, meaningful poetry. Just think, you would not have this remarkable thing to write and think about had it never happened.
What if . . . ?
Great job. Continue on.
Latorial Faison
www.latorial.com
How Many? (Poetry) - 11/8/2003 7:16:43 PM
Excellent poetry! It's so matter of fact, simple and complex simultaneously. How Many? It reminds me of the question How Long?
Great job. Keep on writing.
Latorial Faison, Poet & Author
www.latorial.com
www.authorsden.com/latorialdfaison
How Many? (Poetry) - 11/4/2003 10:01:04 PM
Very good, Diana, very good. As you say, earth IS running out of time and no longer can support life. Visit my A/D pages.
Love in Christ~~
Bonnie Q
Unicorn Haven
How Many? (Poetry) - 9/22/2003 5:07:49 PM
Very good, powerful and thought provoking work!
~Nikki~
Bittersweet (Poetry) - 9/18/2003 3:11:32 PM
Quite nice write. Very well indeed.
Greetings.
Goreja.com
Bittersweet (Poetry) - 9/18/2003 10:59:59 AM
loved the format of your write, story of life well told
Sunset Storm (Poetry) - 9/17/2003 8:59:41 AM
(((david)))
o, such beauty in this descriptive write
"crimson claws tear up the clouds
orange and yellow spiders weave their webs..."
i've seen storms like this, here in texas
what an incredible opening sequence! *applause* this one's going into my library, it's absolutely GORGEOUS, this write
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Enslaved (Poetry) - 9/15/2003 9:01:55 PM
I think this poem is great. You have a really good way of expressing your emotions.
Raindrops (Poetry) - 9/15/2003 7:29:49 PM
very good
Mister
Goddess (Poetry) - 9/15/2003 5:58:32 PM
Very lovely!! Thanks for this kyrielle. I learned something!
Goddess (Poetry) - 9/15/2003 10:06:26 AM
"Body forever encased in
A perfume you could never buy" -----WOW! This is excellent! The images, strong love and emotions....just absolutely lovely! Poem is fit for a goddess. Lovely in every way.
Teresa Emilie
Enslaved (Poetry) - 9/14/2003 11:11:18 PM
encompassing imagery... well done!
Corroded (Poetry) - 9/14/2003 11:02:50 PM
it already is reality...
