Forgiven (Poetry) - 7/1/2010 9:55:41 PM
Such a good write,forgiveness is most important (:
Well done xx (:
Forgiven (Poetry) - 6/27/2010 4:18:01 AM
Forgiveness is the key to living, and though one word isn't perfect in the rhyme, the message is spot on!
Oh if more ppl could forgive, the world would be a better place.
Well done
xx Ch'erie
Born to Priviledge (Poetry) - 3/11/2010 12:08:04 AM
Some excellent thoughts penned here Acire..The last line says so much in one word. "born at all"
So many aren't..I like this
XX Ch'erie
Silent Heart (Poetry) - 2/27/2010 5:15:21 AM
A very touching introspective look here.
Nice to read you again, been too long in between writes. Hope to see more of you. xx Ch'erie
Forever Unfinished (Poetry) - 9/24/2009 7:53:50 PM
None of us are ever finished, we are all clay in the potters hands, and you illustrate this quite candidly..
The finished product wont be an earthly one :)
Ch'erie xx
Finding (Poetry) - 8/11/2009 9:19:04 AM
My heart is open,
leaving it to be either broke or nurtured.
So true, Acirè; and I can completely relate to what you express via your verses here. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace,
Régis
Missing (Poetry) - 8/11/2009 9:17:28 AM
Honest and real; I like the way you share what is going on inside your "self," Acirè. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Régis
Missing (Poetry) - 8/10/2009 1:54:35 AM
This was about the things i miss and then it went kinda hay wire from there Ma i didn't think that it would be seen and missplacing myself.
Missing (Poetry) - 8/8/2009 8:33:12 AM
Ah Don't worry, You'll find it when you least suspect it. We all go Missing from time to time...MIA or Just missing.
Now where did I put myself??hmmm
:) CH'erie
Finding (Poetry) - 8/3/2009 10:33:48 AM
Honest and very beautiful
Finding (Poetry) - 8/1/2009 1:53:33 AM
My Heart is open
leaving it to be either broke or nurtured
Love these lines, sums it up well
Hugzzz Ch'erie
Finding (Poetry) - 7/31/2009 4:49:06 PM
Expressive emotions well stated...
Be always safe,
Karen
Sitting on the Sidelines (Poetry) - 7/26/2009 3:39:07 AM
Very well written sweet lady..enjoyed very much..stay safe and well..Hugss
Sitting on the Sidelines (Poetry) - 7/23/2009 4:12:51 AM
Thank you to all who have given me such a lovely welcome.
Thank you to all who have commented.
Will be posting more when i get a chance and if it allows me to post more.
Sitting on the Sidelines (Poetry) - 7/22/2009 7:43:13 AM
Welcome to the Den and congrats on your first posting here at AD. May this just be the first of many more to come.
Cheers,
Dan
Sitting on the Sidelines (Poetry) - 7/22/2009 5:53:17 AM
Since this is posted in the family section, I make a bit of an assumption. It's best sometimes to stay on the sidelines.
Welcome to Author's Den, you came higly recomended.
Walt
Sitting on the Sidelines (Poetry) - 7/22/2009 3:49:42 AM
Great poem, Acire; welcome to the Den! You are among friends! :) Well done!
Sitting on the Sidelines (Poetry) - 7/22/2009 1:59:19 AM
An excellent and well written poem,take care.Welcome to the den
EDWIN
Sitting on the Sidelines (Poetry) - 7/21/2009 11:40:35 PM
Welcome to the Den, Acire. A great first offering indeed. God bless.
Sitting on the Sidelines (Poetry) - 7/21/2009 9:35:35 PM
i agree-a powerful write well expressed
Sitting on the Sidelines (Poetry) - 7/21/2009 9:25:21 PM
Such powerful thoughts and expression and a big welcome aboard....
Be always safe,
Karen
Sitting on the Sidelines (Poetry) - 7/21/2009 7:57:30 PM
INDEED!
A wonderful offering, with such a tenderhearted compulsion to do for others.
Well done Acire, lots of Hugzzz
Ch'erie xx
Sitting on the Sidelines (Poetry) - 7/21/2009 7:42:23 PM
I find your poem very compelling, Acire. There is such a helpless feeling when one cannot do anything about "fixing things" and yet such a yearning to be able to do so. Thank you for sharing. Welcome to AD. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
