You Hurt Me (Poetry) - 7/9/2012 1:41:42 AM
SOME PEOPLE CANNOT UNDERSTAND EMOTIONAL PAIN...THEY JUST DON'T SEE HOW EMOTIONAL PAIN CAN BE JUST AS DEEP, JUST AS PAINFUL AND AS REAL... AS PHYSICAL PAIN. AND SOMETIMES ITS EVEN MORE SO BECAUSE WHEN PHYSICAL WOUNDS HAVE LONG HEALED, EMOTIONAL HURTS CAN GO ON AND ON...FOR YEARS. WELL DONE, DEBRA AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Broken Hearted (Poetry) - 11/3/2009 8:25:19 AM
Been there. Well penned. J'nia
I'm Sorry Baby (Poetry) - 11/1/2009 7:39:02 PM
GOOD WRITE WITH AN INTERESTING RHYME SCHEME. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Gray Days (Poetry) - 10/11/2009 1:56:51 PM
GRAY DAYS COMES TO US ALL...AS YOU SAID,AND WE ARE ABLE TO APPRECIATE OUR DELIVERANCE SO MUCH MORE WHEN WE PASS 'THROUGH' THE GRAY. THERE IS NOTHING LIKE A LITTLE DIMNESS TO MAKE US APPRECIATE THE BRIGHT. FOR AS THE WORD SAYS...HE GIVES US BEAUTY FOR ASHES(IS 61:3). THIS IS A WORK THAT WAS REALLY ENJOYED...YOUR OPENESS IS BEAUTIFUL AND YOUR IMAGERY DRAWS A CLEAR PICTURE OF ONE ON AN UPWARD JOURNEY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
A Critics Bite II (Poetry) - 10/11/2009 9:10:26 AM
It is true to say that sometimes we swim with sharks. Love it. PS; thank you for visiting my den. Most welcome. J'nia
Sentimentally Blue (Poetry) - 9/12/2009 12:49:02 PM
GOOD WRITE WITH VERY WELL DONE IMAGERY. HAND IN THERE...IT'LL GET EASIER...ONE DAY AT A TIME. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Love Passes Me By (Poetry) - 9/12/2009 8:45:37 AM
An inspirational and encouraging poem.I enjoy reading it,take care
EDWIN
Sunshine (Poetry) - 9/12/2009 8:42:23 AM
Thank you for sharing your sunshine with us pertaining to this beautiful and well written poem :-).Don't ever let your sun set,take care
EDWIN
I Cry (Poetry) - 9/1/2009 9:01:21 AM
I cry is about a woman that thought she had found true love to be lead astray by being naive to love; heart torn asunder she now has to cry for the love she has lost by sharing her innermost thoughts
Wet Sensations (Poetry) - 9/1/2009 8:56:57 AM
this poem was written for a gentleman that owns a site by the name of wet sensations....he did me a favor by introducing me to people that were into writing music to which, i had an interest of turning my poems into songs.....so i wrote this around the name: of his site and the name of his boat.....
A Critics Bite II (Poetry) - 9/1/2009 8:51:48 AM
this poem was written when i first started writing and new to the game i was criticized for a misspelling of a word...which, put me off a little to bit so, this is what i came up with to give insight to anyone that critiques a poem of another poet.....the part II addenum is for another poet that was totally nasty in their critique of something else i wrote.....so i just added a few more words to the original poem...that's why we have a critics bite II...that poet herself wrote me back after reading a critics bite II to say that she stood corrected for her snipe.....
I Cry (Poetry) - 9/1/2009 8:35:52 AM
Debra,
What a heart wrenching poem. Breaking up with a loved up is always a very hard thing to. I hope writing this got some of the hurt out.
No one can understand who hasn't been there. God Bless.
Mary
My Innermost Thoughts (Poetry) - 8/22/2009 3:46:57 PM
This poem is the title of my book of poetry that I just had published thru lulu.com website....hopefully it will be a great success story for an upcoming author of poetry.....I wrote this after I thought about what the title meant to me regarding my innermost thoughts as an individual and a woman foremost....this is what came to mind when composing the poem.....love peace & harmony
Dark Chocolate II (Poetry) - 8/22/2009 3:32:22 PM
I entered this poem into a contest that was the premise of how you felt about someone erotically that was/is unattainable by you as a person of interest and this is what i felt about the gentleman in question that this poem is about....my deep down feelings for this individual that I do correspond with but, isn't able to have a relationship with totally....not that we don't have a relationship if, you can call it a relationship just not in the physical sense of a relationship...hope that makes sense......love peace & harmony
Broken Hearted (Poetry) - 8/22/2009 4:58:46 AM
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Make Love to My Soul (Poetry) - 8/21/2009 1:35:31 PM
Thx.....Karen & Joyce....for your critique of my poem.....appreciate it.....love peace & harmony
Broken Hearted (Poetry) - 8/21/2009 1:31:14 PM
thx Edwin.....appreciate the critique.....i will be posting others....thx again.......love peace & harmony
Broken Hearted (Poetry) - 8/20/2009 3:01:20 AM
Excellent poem,very well written,take care.Welcome to the den Debra.Hopefully you will post more poems in the future :-)
EDWIN
Make Love to My Soul (Poetry) - 8/19/2009 7:48:40 PM
Such sweet beauty in words of romance between to loving and compassionate souls...
Be always safe,
Karen
Make Love to My Soul (Poetry) - 8/19/2009 12:08:43 PM
THE IMAGERY AND PHRASES IN THIS WRITE THAT SUPPORTS YOUR THEME SOLIDLY, IS TERRIFIC. DONE WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
