The Photos in the Closet (Poetry) - 10/5/2009 2:31:50 AM
Excellent poem,keep up the great work,take care
EDWIN
The waking sun (Poetry) - 10/5/2009 2:30:41 AM
Nice poem
Adrenaline kicks in (Poetry) - 10/5/2009 2:30:05 AM
Good poem,take care
EDWIN
The waking sun (Poetry) - 9/28/2009 4:02:29 AM
Good work !
Shadow (Poetry) - 9/21/2009 7:25:52 AM
Interesting indeed..great writing...stay safe and well..Hugss
Shadow (Poetry) - 9/21/2009 7:15:30 AM
I like the Ideal,and feeling but i would and it's just my sugestion
distill it down to bare bones...i think it needs to be edited down less words...but it's good enouhg to stand alone either way
Shadow (Poetry) - 9/21/2009 6:03:42 AM
A very unique pen, thought provoking.
