Love (Poetry) - 12/11/2009 4:08:17 AM
Beautiful poem,take care
Second Chance (Poetry) - 12/5/2009 2:14:52 PM
Love is sometimes something our reasoning can't control. Enjoyed the poem.
I Wish (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 3:16:49 AM
Sweet and beautiful poem.take care
I Wish (Poetry) - 11/13/2009 4:27:24 PM
Old feelings of love seldom dissappear but linger in the recesses of our hearts where we can visit them now and then.
fee
Love Triangle (Poetry) - 11/6/2009 1:55:32 PM
GOOD WRITE...DONE WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Magic Fingers (Poetry) - 11/6/2009 10:52:26 AM
Woo woo...hot stuff and my glasses are fogging and my old heart pounding as you steam up the pages here with such an erotically delightful work.
fee
Want & Need (Poetry) - 11/6/2009 10:48:48 AM
I really love this one and the thought process behind it, should use spell check if you can for there are a number of spelling mistakes that take away from the beauty of your work...example your should be you're, im should be I'm and thught should be thought. Hope you don't mind the tips....
Fee
Love Triangle (Poetry) - 11/6/2009 10:39:56 AM
Excellant write Breia,and sounds like fun but sadly fact is in most triangles someone always ends up getting hurt...hope it's not you.
hugsf
fee
Love Triangle (Poetry) - 11/6/2009 10:27:09 AM
This was nice and it has depth to it that I am too dealing with...very nice !
Want & Need (Poetry) - 11/6/2009 8:50:41 AM
I LIKE THE PHRASES, IMAGERY AND RHYME SCHEME. YOUR WORDS REMIND ME OF HOW JESUS FELT ABOUT ME...WHEN HE WAS CAJOLING AND TRYING TO GET ME TO BECOME 'HIS'...AND I REMEMBER...I WAS HESITANT AND 'CONFUSED' BUT...ALL HE WANTED WAS ME...NOW, I AM GLAD THAT HE WAS PATIENT AND WAITED FOR ME. WANT AND NEED...WELL WRITTEN AND ENJOYED. BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Always Mine (Poetry) - 11/6/2009 8:41:34 AM
THIS IS TOUCHING AND DONE WELL. GOD BLESS AND THANKS FOR SHARING.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
What if you did? (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 2:59:29 AM
Excellent poem,keep up the great work,take care
EDWIN
Breath Taking Beauty (Poetry) - 10/15/2009 11:10:56 AM
Did she have a beard? this would have made the whole thing awkward.
"comic write" made me laugh. well done.
What if you did? (Poetry) - 10/15/2009 9:28:58 AM
Great capture Breia' of what so many people go through when they have been burned by love and then fall again. Sadly there are no guarentees that say love is going to work or it isn't but to live life we have to be prepared to take that chance and if it doesn't work or we get hurt...we brush ourselves off, dry our tears and move on.
fee
Breath Taking Beauty (Poetry) - 10/15/2009 6:54:20 AM
I like the open honesty of the feelings you had for this girl, would make one sugestion and that would be to use some other word in place of beautiful such as: disarming smile, heart warming song, and captivating or soulfull eyes. You have beauty in the title, in the second last line and the last line so just too repetitive. Hope I don't offend you with my suggestion for I think it is a great poem.
hugs
fee
I just had to.... (Poetry) - 9/24/2009 2:29:01 PM
I Really Love this poem Breia ...It speaks what so many of us feel upon seeing that special someone!! Keep writing ..you have a gift !
Angela Wilson
I just had to.... (Poetry) - 9/24/2009 9:01:22 AM
I like it, a unique and origianal writing style, and speaks from the heart with true feelings.
Fee
