Unbound (Poetry) - 5/12/2010 8:16:53 PM
It is absolutely invigorating to read someone with such precocious wisdom and inspirational passion! Your words convey not only the essence of those tacit emotions encountered in our occassional brush with warped convictions, but also the menial, amorous fallacies with brevity and unabashed verity!
Softness (Poetry) - 5/12/2010 7:50:09 PM
Illucidating and insightful, Layla! A woman's touch can definitely calm the raging beast... although, it may also incite the tepid torturer and ignite the pent up fury of a forlorn lust.
Pawns of Desire (Poetry) - 5/12/2010 7:43:04 PM
Tantalizing trepidations that summon our innermost turmoil until we succumb to copious copulations of the most carnal kind... Marvelously expressed!
Rise (Poetry) - 5/12/2010 7:29:05 PM
Wow! Your words meandered the caverns of my mind and like a helpless autumn leaf, my rationality released itself upon the apparently savage, foaming waters of your sinuous words...
Unbound (Poetry) - 5/1/2010 8:56:54 AM
This a really good work! Love couched in a sad kind of passion never fulfilled.
Peace,
Dayvid
Unbound (Poetry) - 5/1/2010 4:33:27 AM
Layla ,this touches the heart to the core----yes many times we have done this ----in many lifetimes------it is the merging and seperating of our souls like the waves in the sea------an attempt to cross the boundaries---to reach over and become one ---with the Divine---every time a lttle closer to our goal!
We and our soulmates teach and learn from each other------this is our gift in the linear from the Universe.
loved this poem!
