Final Breath (Book) - 10/31/2003 7:05:35 AM
Paul: Excellent writing, very well done. The tension & suspense are palpable. I'm impressed & hope to add this one to my "to read" list.
Final Breath (Book) - 7/29/2003 8:10:59 PM
The excerpt from your "Final Breath" left me breathless and ready for more. Great flow-the reader can really feel the girl's terror. Can hardly wait for more!
Final Breath (Book) - 5/4/2003 10:44:50 PM
Your narrative voice is compelling and the dialogue flows so naturally. The preview was a pleasure to read even though it was filled with suspenseful tension. I look forward to reading more!
Final Breath (Book) - 12/19/2002 11:15:31 AM
Chilling. A nightmare come to life. This promises to be a best seller murder mystery! I could feel the terror and shock of her discovery.
Final Breath (Book) - 12/9/2002 4:36:37 PM
The synopsis sounds sounds wonderful, strong suspense story, I look forward to reading all of this book!!
Renee Bagley Author
Final Breath (Book) - 12/8/2002 7:10:02 PM
Strong narrative with a rising tension and a rapidly building and suspenseful feel! Looks like a great read! Good stuff.
Final Breath (Book) - 12/8/2002 3:48:06 PM
Lvoed the suspese and flow. Makes me want to read more! Sounds like you have done a fine job with this one.
Fellow P/A author
Sherry
Only a Game
Final Breath (Book) - 11/26/2002 6:29:26 AM
Paul…I truly like your writing style, building suspense with every sentence…excellent use of details…a winner!!
Final Breath (Book) - 11/25/2002 1:54:50 PM
Wow! The suspense builds with each moment. A breathless thriller keeps the reader on edge and wanting more!
Final Breath (Book) - 11/23/2002 4:49:29 AM
Vivid descriptions! Sounds like a winner!
Final Breath (Book) - 11/21/2002 1:14:02 PM
Each sentence rolls nicely. I love your style. Short descriptive sentences. One WANTS to read the next one! Nice suspense building too! Sounds like a possible best seller.
Good luck and write on!
GUS
Final Breath (Book) - 11/20/2002 3:14:58 PM
Preview show much promise. Well written with plenty of suspense. I'm sure it will be a great book!
