A Gift of Time (Poetry) - 6/25/2009 9:42:42 PM
Toni, A Most Excellent Write! Thank You. Sis "D"
Understand (Poetry) - 5/5/2008 10:47:19 AM
A piece of your heart beating to the tune of love to restore all in its beauty....
Be always safe,
Karen
Rapture (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 12:27:20 AM
Beautiful expression.
Rapture (Poetry) - 9/10/2007 6:02:29 PM
A most wonderful piece filled with many loving emotions....
Be safe,
Karen
A Mother (Poetry) - 7/31/2007 12:36:36 AM
Nice write.
Dancing...and more (Poetry) - 7/31/2007 12:35:16 AM
A very profound piece! Outstanding write. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Dance (Poetry) - 7/31/2007 12:33:48 AM
Very uniquie and vivid. Nice flow.
Night Calypso (Poetry) - 2/8/2007 3:48:41 PM
Hey so i'm white...no chance huh
Weeping Willow (Poetry) - 10/11/2006 1:35:35 AM
Very good ku.
Enjoyed...
Massage (Poetry) - 4/19/2006 9:10:09 AM
This is a remarkably sensual poem given the inherently sensual subject. I know nothing about poetry except what I like, and I like this one. Thanks.
Cultivated Storms (Poetry) - 4/9/2006 11:08:54 AM
Nature is boss, Toni. Well-expressed. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
Broken Dreams (Poetry) - 4/9/2006 11:07:46 AM
Yes, Toni. Well-expressed. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Massage (Poetry) - 4/9/2006 11:06:46 AM
You convey the sentiments well via your verses, Toni. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
Massage (Poetry) - 4/7/2006 12:35:27 PM
ahhhhhhhh I need a massage now! Good write
Broken Dreams (Poetry) - 2/14/2006 6:25:51 PM
Toni,
This is the blood that flows through poetry. The ability to soldier on after all hope is gone. You've captured that feeling very well.
Peace,
B
Cultivated Storms (Poetry) - 8/2/2005 9:13:43 AM
Well done. Very well done.
Cultivated Storms (Poetry) - 6/14/2005 5:38:14 AM
nicely penned ... i enjoyed reading ...
Tainted Youth (Poetry) - 10/7/2004 6:04:46 PM
Very thought provoking-nice work!
Tainted Youth (Poetry) - 10/6/2004 12:46:16 PM
great poem
Tainted Youth (Poetry) - 10/6/2004 12:36:47 PM
Great imagery and descriptions! You have written this emotion out extremely well.
Tainted Youth (Poetry) - 9/29/2004 9:26:51 AM
tragic but well written, i was interested from start to finish
Lost (Poetry) - 5/23/2004 1:59:54 PM
This is so true for today in our society with tow family incomes.
So many wake up and realize that career has taken over their lives and most will not stop and give up all to it. Strong deep love for each other normally wins out.
This has a great message to it
Tommy
Little Girl (Poetry) - 3/29/2004 3:58:28 AM
Lovely ending! Writing is a self-therapy for some. Keep writing!
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
A Gift of Time (Poetry) - 3/29/2004 3:56:46 AM
You are very lucky to be such a compassionate person. Sometimes a traumatic event in her life can change her outlook entirely; and she wakes up from her misery.
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
Lost (Poetry) - 3/29/2004 3:53:59 AM
What a wonderful story! Only true love can survive.
Good one!
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
Lost (Poetry) - 3/29/2004 2:19:59 AM
Touching and deep felt write Toni...we sometimes close the doors on our relationships before they have time to enter..and these days we are consumed by life and simply forget that there are others that need us! Excellent write! Lisa
Lost (Poetry) - 3/19/2004 1:06:25 AM
Toni, a terrific poem. Bill Murray
Lost (Poetry) - 3/16/2004 5:47:36 PM
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!!
Broken (Poetry) - 1/8/2004 10:06:03 AM
a poignant gracefulness about this--hope comes at last!
Wrinkles (Poetry) - 12/25/2003 9:26:17 AM
Thanks for sharing, humbling write, we are all wrinkles in search of the perfect iron.
Merry Christmas!
God Bless You and Your Loved Ones
Officer William Heffner
Wrinkles (Poetry) - 11/10/2003 4:49:56 PM
I loved your poem! Such a great message!
Wrinkles (Poetry) - 11/10/2003 4:03:59 PM
Great words, great lines.
Wrinkles (Poetry) - 11/10/2003 2:16:41 PM
Great advice! Enjoyed your write.
Fly Away.....addition (Poetry) - 7/25/2003 3:31:53 PM
Beautiful!! I am glad I dropped in.
Fly Away.....addition (Poetry) - 7/25/2003 2:18:39 PM
This is really a great poem! All three times! ~SH~
Broken (Poetry) - 7/4/2003 1:30:56 AM
May God fill your heart
With much love to share
To your spirit His strength impart,
Bless you with many friends to care
Who will never from you depart,
To our God I send up this fervent prayer
That a miraculous healing He'll start.
Jackie <> <
Broken (Poetry) - 6/26/2003 2:12:01 PM
This is quite different and unique, a poem about ones self so open and bared...quite a rare and lovely gem!
~Nikki~
Empty Promise (Poetry) - 6/23/2003 2:14:37 AM
Excellsnt X2...poem and advice!
Empty Promise (Poetry) - 6/22/2003 10:27:53 PM
Amen to that. Well done.
Empty Promise (Poetry) - 6/22/2003 5:17:05 PM
Wise advice in this,,thanks for sharing your wisdom,,~SH~
Empty Promise (Poetry) - 6/22/2003 4:40:28 PM
Well said. If all the time we spent lying were used for truth, children could stay childlike all their lives.
Men (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 12:32:49 PM
You have a nice style of writing.
~E
Little Girl (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 12:31:57 PM
Love the happy ending.
~E
Timeless (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 12:31:19 PM
This is sweet.
~E
Little Girl (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 12:31:08 PM
powerful write; glad this had a happy ending; too many stories like this do not! :( >tears < (((HUGS)))
Little Girl (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 12:23:40 PM
Such a sad story -- I'm so glad there's a happy ending. She deserves real love.
Men (Poetry) - 2/26/2003 8:56:04 PM
"Excellent Smithers!" - Mr Burns from the Simpsons
I liked it. º¿º
-RedM
Men (Poetry) - 2/26/2003 5:21:27 PM
Excellent write.
Men (Poetry) - 2/26/2003 1:34:52 PM
This is priceless, love it!
Love Is (Poetry) - 2/26/2003 9:15:01 AM
Yessssss !
~E
Love Is (Poetry) - 2/26/2003 7:54:56 AM
Marie here are a few more words for you..wonderful, expressive, original..great write..floria
Simple Things (Poetry) - 2/10/2003 12:07:37 PM
Marie, enjoyed this poem and its humor. Bill Murray
Simple Things (Poetry) - 2/10/2003 8:53:52 AM
i loved those last two lines they bowled me over with laughter yes killing time is not a crime at least not one that can be proven LOL :) Great poem back pain can be so annoying :( but you did such a great job on this poem:)
Simple Things (Poetry) - 2/10/2003 8:19:17 AM
Speedy recovery for u...wonderful read....cheers.
Simple Things (Poetry) - 2/10/2003 8:18:36 AM
Very good write.
Peg
A Mother (Poetry) - 12/19/2002 1:52:01 PM
Grand piece of writing, Marie. It does make you stronger. Happy Holidays to you and yours.
Amor
A Mother (Poetry) - 12/19/2002 12:46:06 PM
I understand dear. It did happen, but it happen to me and I failed all those that loved me. Failed so badly, but I am stronger now. You must grow stornger or die I guess. Bill MUrray
The Gift (Poetry) - 12/3/2002 3:41:22 PM
heartbreaking, but what a lovely ending to the story...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
The Gift (Poetry) - 12/3/2002 8:29:11 AM
The Good People always come through.
Broken Back, Heart, Spirit (Poetry) - 11/25/2002 7:29:35 AM
Very touching and eloquent.
Thanks for sharing.
Afrika
