1 World (Poetry) - 7/30/2003 6:01:33 PM
Thoughtful and Insightful...GOOD PIECE!
Write On (Poetry) - 7/29/2003 10:08:29 PM
lovely write...BHUWAN
Forth & Back (Poetry) - 7/29/2003 5:25:11 PM
Zeta
This poem carries a lot of impression
in the form. The title, "Forth and Back"
obviously catches the reader to a balanced/off-balance setting to start, and I don't know if you planned it, but for me the
emotional fulcrum is "so much has happened"
This line is also the visual center.
There are eight lines leading to center, and six lines after--might there be two lines to add to polishing the power of this form?
Excellent piece! Vicky
Write On (Poetry) - 7/29/2003 5:06:03 PM
Get your groove on.. Love it!
Forth & Back (Poetry) - 7/29/2003 4:33:12 PM
Yeah, been there! Don't make it a trend, Zeta! Stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear
Cemented (Poetry) - 7/25/2003 10:52:58 PM
Love this one and Erica is right what a twist....
PJ
Cemented (Poetry) - 7/25/2003 9:02:54 PM
Love the twist in the end..
Great write.. Enjoyed much..
Erica~
Cemented (Poetry) - 7/25/2003 9:18:33 AM
Oh, how I love this, Zeta!!!!! Love it....
In Spirit,
Bear
Trippin On Words (Poetry) - 7/25/2003 4:09:58 AM
I love the title and this whole poem was a beautiful little trip for me....thanks!
