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Recent Reviews for OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper


 Love aka Romance (Book) - 3/14/2012 10:16:10 AM
Congratulations, Grady!!! Wonderful accomplishment.
 Guyz & Girlz X-Rated (Book) - 8/6/2009 12:49:29 PM
Congrats on your new book Grady, I know it must be really interesting. I hope it becomes a best seller.
 OnepoetGem Rhymes (Book) - 7/11/2009 5:35:34 AM
Keep writing. It's great. God bless, Lew
 OnepoetGem Rhymes (Book) - 7/6/2009 1:03:43 PM
sounds like it will have many of my favorites!
 Guyz & Girlz X-Rated (Book) - 5/24/2009 6:58:43 PM
Congrats One. Wishing you all the success through your books "Guyz & Girlz X" sounds interesting. Pardon me for not commenting sooner, certainly thought I had. Friend take care and enjoy, Gwendolyn
 Guyz & Girlz X-Rated (Book) - 9/9/2008 1:29:25 PM
Sounds like a book I'd like to read, bring it on! Love Holly
 Guyz & Girlz X-Rated (Book) - 5/6/2008 7:19:21 PM
Congratulations on your second book. The excerpt is inviting, indeed. Very interesting -- let us know when the book is published. R
 Guyz & Girlz X-Rated (Book) - 5/6/2008 6:17:12 AM
Guys and girls started in the Garden of Eden, since then it has been one hard struggle to survive with each other. Quite a struggle, indeed, and most intriguing, my friend. Sounds like quite a book!
 Guyz & Girlz X-Rated (Book) - 5/6/2008 6:03:08 AM
Sounds very intiguing O, I can't wait to know more....
 Guyz & Girlz X-Rated (Book) - 5/6/2008 3:28:18 AM
sounds good!
Thin Line between Rap and Poetry (Article) - 5/8/2011 6:46:29 AM
Poetry...Rap...or whatever, Grady...I always enjoyed your works. Good to know you are continuing; sorry to know you are leaving AD. Blessings and Love - Micke (I'm not writing here myself right now, but that is due to health problems. Had to say "HI" to you, 'tho!)

Thin Line between Rap and Poetry (Article) - 5/6/2011 8:52:27 AM
Best wishes to you, friend. Love and peace, Regis

Not Easy to Die (Poetry) - 2/22/2026 10:37:17 AM
I accidentally found this posting about my late aunt and wanted to counter this fictional version from my Grady. She was well cared for in her last days. Grady lived away and rarely visited. The day to day care was provided by my brother, as was the case with our deceased parents and, today, our last living Uncle. Few, if any relatives visit him at our ancestral farm. Be careful what you read and consider the author.

I Wish U Well (Poetry) - 7/12/2015 8:05:58 AM
I wish love and peace and well-being to all; thank you for sharing, Grady. Love and peace to you too, Regis

Paper Bag Poet (Poetry) - 4/5/2015 9:31:25 AM
OPG where are you? Miss your poetic touch here! Are you gone to the ashes and versing there? Where you have gone stir it up there!

Deliver Us From Evil (Poetry) - 3/3/2015 10:11:24 AM
You speak the truth here in such a powerful, effective way. I enjoy reading your work. Thank you for sharing,and continued success- Barbara J. Henry

AllThe Work (Poetry) - 2/13/2013 11:45:52 AM
This is so very true! God has given us all we need to overcome the challenges life toss our way,but He also, I believe,want us to acknowledge Him in all things and to seek "His Take" on the challenge. Continued success- Barbara J. Henry

Your Day (Poetry) - 10/6/2012 6:55:00 PM
Very nice poem and we should appreciate each day because them fly by quite expeditiously as time ages us! Thanks for the share Debbie

Pissed Off People (Poetry) - 11/25/2011 2:58:53 AM
A real pisser of a poem I would say. This is the best pissed off poem I read all day! Enjoyed! JMD

Paper Bag Poet (Poetry) - 11/25/2011 2:56:06 AM
Funny! But how true! Sometimes the poet can be sad or blue. The poet can be dead to the world but still alive on paper and pen. Keep writing funny stuff so we can all enjoy it on the den. Amen!

I Wish U Well (Poetry) - 10/27/2011 3:59:36 PM
YOU HAVE ATTAINED THE WISDOM THAT FEW EVER REACH...NO MATTER HOW WE ARE TREATED...SIN NOT BY RETALIATION, FOR GOD 'IS' FIGHTING OUR BATTLES AND HE DOESN'T NEED OUR HELP. DO NOT BECOME BITTER AND JUDGE PRAY FOR THEM AND LEAVE THEM TO GOD. I AM REMINDED OF DAVID THAT FOUND SAUL IN A CAVE...IN VULNERABLE POSITION AND COULD HAVE KILLED HIM BUT REFUSED TO DO SO, LEAST HE SINNED AND 'TOUCHED' GOD ANOINTED. DAVID WAS REWARDED FOR LEAVING SAUL TO GOD AND SAUL WAS REWARDED FOR HIS ACTIONS AGAINST DAVID. WHEN 'I WILL YOU WELL' IS FROM OUR HEARTS, WE HAVE NOTHING TO FEAR, BUT A LACK OF 'PATIENCE' WHILE WE WAIT ON GOD. EXCELLENT WORK AND ADVICE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

I Wish U Well (Poetry) - 8/26/2011 10:09:46 AM
I've been underground for a while...health and vision problems...but I read, and now able to comment more. I take this verse personally, inasmuch as it just might help my "aging" situation! Thanks, Grady Blessings and love - Micke

I Wish U Well (Poetry) - 4/7/2011 5:19:19 AM
Just a lovely job "I Wish U Well" OnepoetGem * the poetic Rapper I'm also wishing you well, with God's blessings!

I Wish U Well (Poetry) - 3/10/2011 5:26:20 PM
Love is the cure and the answer...what a wonderful poem you've written here, dear GEM! love to you, as well Gina

I Wish U Well (Poetry) - 1/10/2011 8:10:21 AM
Very wise indeed as always sweet sweet man...so sorry I haven't been commenting in here been rough couple of months for me trying to deal with death in my family etc.please forgive me darlin...but I did post a poem the other day I certainly hope you are OK I miss you very much Happy New Years sweet sweet man you are...Hugsss Love Always, cHANTI lACE XOXOX

I Wish U Well (Poetry) - 12/4/2010 9:29:10 AM
Uplifting and peaceful OPG ~ Unique and powerful! Be well, Christine

I Wish U Well (Poetry) - 12/1/2010 1:28:13 PM
Wise words very well written. If everyone wished everyone else well, and live by the words, there would be no more problems of any kind. 3,675 poems - WOW! Write On!

I Wish U Well (Poetry) - 12/1/2010 11:58:05 AM
You must have that Devil worried or he wouldn't be on your tail. Wonderful write. God bless, Lew

I Wish U Well (Poetry) - 12/1/2010 10:18:09 AM
very nice thoughts

I Wish U Well (Poetry) - 12/1/2010 7:06:44 AM
There aint no Devil. God just made him up to keep us on our toes. Cool poem. well done.

I Wish U Well (Poetry) - 12/1/2010 6:52:48 AM
One Poet, I also wish YOU well! Blessings, ~Linda

I Wish U Well (Poetry) - 12/1/2010 6:00:47 AM
I wish you well even those that belong in hell. That is the way we all should be. Forgive, forget, and move on. My father always said two wrongs don't make a right. Love all even those that have been cold. If they can't love then it's a personal problem not your problem. Love is the answer...Great poem! Take care my friend. :)

I Wish U Well (Poetry) - 12/1/2010 4:46:21 AM
It is the Key to heaven-LOVE

I Wish U Well (Poetry) - 12/1/2010 4:27:44 AM
How timely for me this poem of truth. Thanks, OPG. Simple and interesting. Thanks for being you! Starman

Paper Bag Poet (Poetry) - 11/22/2010 8:20:45 PM
G, this is the best of yours I have read, hell, the best I have read of anyone including my junk, this is as well a keeper...e

Paper Bag Poet (Poetry) - 11/22/2010 8:29:24 AM
write on!!

Paper Bag Poet (Poetry) - 11/22/2010 5:59:47 AM
I'll verse walking around in my head even under the ground when I'm dead Hmmmm! A poetic ghost should make a gastly host. Cute,Gem. God bless, Lew

Paper Bag Poet (Poetry) - 11/21/2010 7:10:30 PM
you have the heart of a real poet, Grady ...

Paper Bag Poet (Poetry) - 11/21/2010 4:15:36 PM
Well you're a born natural at it, talented creative versing! Be well, Christine

Thorns End (Poetry) - 11/18/2010 6:47:20 AM
Sounds like one of many sad stories. God bless, Lew

Thorns End (Poetry) - 11/17/2010 3:16:21 PM
"Romance gone thorn" Brilliance! I'll use that in conversations :) I think you may mean, sCreamed? Top work, bro!

Thorns End (Poetry) - 11/17/2010 12:55:06 PM
Ah yes, OPG; love gone wrong. I think that "love" gone wrong was never love in the first place; but that's just my opinion. Thanks for sharing, friend. Love and peace to you, Regis

Thorns End (Poetry) - 11/17/2010 9:34:01 AM
Unique and absorbing poem in your persuasive signature style! Really nice ending too ~ Blessings, Christine

Pissed Off People (Poetry) - 11/15/2010 11:06:09 PM
well said

Pissed Off People (Poetry) - 11/15/2010 9:22:24 PM
Life is just too short to be filled with anger and hate, pitty those who do no see the light... Be always safe, Karen

Pissed Off People (Poetry) - 11/15/2010 8:12:31 PM
Silence Is Golden... It Is Better To Walk Away Never Look Back,i.e. Misery Loves Company! TRASK

Deliver Us From Evil (Poetry) - 11/11/2010 1:59:50 PM
Enjoyed this clever one! Blessings, Christine

Deliver Us From Evil (Poetry) - 11/11/2010 7:56:44 AM
Grady, i like the idea of most negatives just being in your head. Great write as usual. Hugs, Mary

Nut Action (Poetry) - 11/11/2010 5:38:04 AM
Dont believe in the Devil as a being as such, but I do believe in man; and the Devils they can sometimes be. 'Nice flow to the whole creative blow! Respect.

No Change of Heart (Poetry) - 11/11/2010 5:35:42 AM
Men never say "It's sweet" so excuse me for not saying that one! But 'Brilliant' I think will make the chink clink.

Deliver Us From Evil (Poetry) - 11/11/2010 5:34:57 AM
Hey guys, keep in mind, "Be evil and happy" is an oxymoron. Just thought I'd throw that in there. God bless, Lew

Fond of Fun (Poetry) - 11/11/2010 5:33:01 AM
Some complex issues hidden then cleverly revealed in this fine scroll. ol chap' great stuff.

Come Alive (Poetry) - 11/11/2010 5:29:43 AM
"Yeah, class write....Hmmmm"

Boxed in Feeling (Poetry) - 11/11/2010 5:28:17 AM
I'm starting to like your stuff a little more.. It catches me slow and then speeds up and keeps in time. I noticed this effect later on and actually do like it after all!! keep writing. Respect

Deliver Us From Evil (Poetry) - 11/11/2010 5:25:37 AM
"I'm happy and clowning" what other way is there in this crap world? If the others would only come out from hiding maybe we could have that long over due 'feelgood factor party! 'Clever writing and very current. Respect!

Lung Answer (Poetry) - 11/11/2010 1:22:18 AM
A powerful composition, opg

Lung Answer (Poetry) - 11/10/2010 7:22:50 PM
I've Work Nuclear Sites 20 Years--Hot Labs & Administrative Offices/Publications -- Use Plutonium, (Breathing) Other Radioactive Materials...We Built 1st Engine For Space Shuttles(WANL LABS CLOSED By Politician$) Rocketdyne Got Contracts--Never Caused Anything My Health Only Thing If Any To My Son Is Worlds Greatest Intellectual Liar... Theres Blown Smoke Then Theres Smoke Blown... Anything Is Can Become Habit Over Blown Like Cancer Of The Talk To Much (Blown)Evil Mouth... Yes Devil Always Does Win In Sin --Simply Because NOBODY CARES Until It AFFECT$ Their WALLET$ Or Their Child Is ONE (Blown) Molested Killed They Become (Over-Blown) Self Glorified Martyrs... TRASK...

Lung Answer (Poetry) - 11/10/2010 7:27:40 AM
That is true that no man knows his fate until it happens. Smoking is a choice that can kill. Keep going and death could be knocking. Excellent write! Take care, ~Chessly

Lung Answer (Poetry) - 11/10/2010 6:03:58 AM
And with that, I take a deep breath. God bless, Lew

Lung Answer (Poetry) - 11/10/2010 4:00:15 AM
Well you know 'Gem' I've been smoking since I was 14 and there's nothing wrong with my 'Lung'..lol Great stuff, as ever!

Lung Answer (Poetry) - 11/10/2010 2:16:48 AM
We have God's assurance that the gates of hell will not prevail, and His grace is stronger than anything the devil can throw at you, if you ask for it.

Peoples Dislikes (Poetry) - 11/9/2010 7:15:36 PM
Off Wall,i.e. Just Watch Diane Sawyer World News-Interview 2 Preachers Of 20 (Hid In Disguise) Years All Sudden Lost Their Faith In (Don't Believe )Bible And (God)... Tell That To A D Humanoid Bigots As Jesus Freaks Religious Others Who Write Tell You (Live Own Fantasy World) That God-Jesus Loves You... Keep Right On Writing It Like It Is... TRASK

Peoples Dislikes (Poetry) - 11/9/2010 4:00:00 PM
It is good to rant now and then, OPG; and I always appreciate your sharing of your philosophical point of view. Thank you. Love and peace to you, Regis

Peoples Dislikes (Poetry) - 11/9/2010 10:20:29 AM
love it!

Peoples Dislikes (Poetry) - 11/9/2010 5:23:31 AM
Good thought provoking write OPG! It's time we open our hearts and embrace each other no matter what differences we may have! Peace, Dayvid

Peoples Dislikes (Poetry) - 11/9/2010 5:19:59 AM
Grady, Bigotry is a terrible thing. You probably know this more than a lot of people. This is very well written,and gives a lot of think about. Mary

Peoples Dislikes (Poetry) - 11/9/2010 4:43:36 AM
Will there be an end to it before the world folds its tent and is no more?

What U Escape (Poetry) - 11/9/2010 1:14:20 AM
I'm happy just to rate it coz nearly went and I ate it- But I'm happy to reading it again! I'm happy to be nappin when your snappin off your rappin- but I'm happy coz the poem dulls the pain.

8-Year AD Poet (Poetry) - 11/8/2010 5:34:55 PM
I've Been Here Since 2001 So What Else Is New? Take Vitamin E 400 I U... TRASK...

8-Year AD Poet (Poetry) - 11/8/2010 3:06:33 PM
Indeed, I know where this comes from, ducking and diving. Yet the site has changed, once your poem would go from top of the list to the bottom in hours, now it takes many days.

8-Year AD Poet (Poetry) - 11/8/2010 2:37:41 PM
I know where you're coming from and how well you have weathered the storms that occur in AD from time to time. God Bless you and keep you strong in your beliefs and truthful poetry.

8-Year AD Poet (Poetry) - 11/8/2010 12:55:35 PM
Eight years deserve congratulations for sure. I joined 3/31/01 --. I always enjoy your work. R

8-Year AD Poet (Poetry) - 11/8/2010 9:55:02 AM
"Once bit it almost seems like religion" Excellent description, G, I wish I'd thought of it...e

8-Year AD Poet (Poetry) - 11/8/2010 8:04:56 AM
Congrats on making it this far..I enjoy your cheese..lol Much peace, love and light, Amber

8-Year AD Poet (Poetry) - 11/8/2010 7:23:28 AM
congrats!

8-Year AD Poet (Poetry) - 11/8/2010 5:41:02 AM
Congratulations OPG! You rock! You are right about versing being a bit of a cursing. Peace, Dayvid

8-Year AD Poet (Poetry) - 11/8/2010 5:23:26 AM
You're awesome OPG! Your poems are those of truth and inner strength. Christine

8-Year AD Poet (Poetry) - 11/8/2010 4:55:32 AM
Happy 8 Years OnepoetGem!! You were here when they first started out! Keep Versing! Vickie

Fond of Fun (Poetry) - 11/7/2010 3:49:31 AM
fun little write!

Fond of Fun (Poetry) - 11/6/2010 3:50:15 PM
Charming poem, full of little tidbits of truth ~ Blessings, Christine

Fond of Fun (Poetry) - 11/6/2010 2:28:51 PM
Oh yes, I do love my fun. But no russian roulette or drugs. God bless, Lew

Come Alive (Poetry) - 11/5/2010 5:55:10 AM
Beautifully written. thank you for this positive note. God bless, Lew

Come Alive (Poetry) - 11/5/2010 4:56:06 AM
Sweet one OPG! Blessings, Christine

Come Alive (Poetry) - 11/5/2010 2:09:28 AM
very nice!

Nut Action (Poetry) - 11/3/2010 2:12:25 PM
If only we were not such nuts, huh? God bless, Lew

No Change of Heart (Poetry) - 11/3/2010 2:06:56 PM
Superb. Wonderful. Keep writing romance. It's you! God bless, Lew

No Change of Heart (Poetry) - 11/3/2010 9:23:11 AM
aaawwww, pencil me in!!!!. cheers :)morgan

No Change of Heart (Poetry) - 11/3/2010 9:22:34 AM
Thank you for sharing this sweet, romantic offering, OPG. A fine gift for the one you love. Love and peace to you, Regis

Nut Action (Poetry) - 11/3/2010 5:22:26 AM
Grady, Well written as usual, but so sorrowful and contains much truth. Hugs, Mary

Nut Action (Poetry) - 11/3/2010 5:10:16 AM
Through your refreshing wit and imagination you lead us here carefully into a more serious place. Really well done OPG. Blessings, Christine

Love & Roses (Poetry) - 11/2/2010 9:45:50 AM
Yes the rose has its thorn. Well penned Sir Gem.

Reading Faces (Poetry) - 11/2/2010 9:44:40 AM
Grady you are a wise man and a true observer of life

Reading Faces (Poetry) - 11/1/2010 8:25:27 PM
Odds That Next Door Neighbor Smiling At You (Jerk)Child Molester! TRASK...

Reading Faces (Poetry) - 11/1/2010 5:29:04 AM
Oh yes, one never knows. Great write. God bless, Lew

Reading Faces (Poetry) - 11/1/2010 3:30:02 AM
well written and expressed

Love & Roses (Poetry) - 10/31/2010 8:48:20 AM
yes, the thorns protect the delicacies of the heart ...

Love & Roses (Poetry) - 10/30/2010 9:09:32 PM
If You Want Some Peace Of Mind Keep Red Rose (Even Artificial) In Your Bedroom Or At Your Desk Where You Spend Most Of Your Daily Time... One Dead Red Rose Petal Has More Life In It Than All Rocks- Material-Matter (God) Created In Entire Universe.. Kool Write On... TRASK

Love & Roses (Poetry) - 10/30/2010 5:19:31 AM
thought provoking-and why i don't care for roses

Love & Roses (Poetry) - 10/30/2010 5:07:41 AM
You paint a dark picture. Why is it that like Romeo and Juliet love stories seem to end sad? God bless, Lew

Trying to Correct (Poetry) - 10/28/2010 7:03:09 AM
I hope you would never cook and eat a peace dove!!!! ~ enjoy the ride best, Morgan

Trying to Correct (Poetry) - 10/28/2010 5:52:27 AM
Oh yes: Mans no perfect creature In fact screwing up is his main feature Amen to that. And thank God for Jesus Well written, God bless, Lew

Trying to Correct (Poetry) - 10/28/2010 5:35:43 AM
Grady, Great poem about life's bumpy ride. Mary

Trying to Correct (Poetry) - 10/28/2010 3:29:04 AM
i like this-you have put a positive spin on things!

Boxed in Feeling (Poetry) - 10/26/2010 7:37:59 AM
Food for thought Sir Gem.

Un-Holy-Match-trimony (Poetry) - 10/26/2010 7:37:13 AM
Yes the children pay the highest price. Well written Grady.

Boxed in Feeling (Poetry) - 10/25/2010 4:41:37 PM
Eloquent and accessible ~ Stay safe OPG ! Blessings, Christine

Boxed in Feeling (Poetry) - 10/25/2010 8:01:47 AM
George is right. The secret is to trust God and live. God bless, Lew

Boxed in Feeling (Poetry) - 10/25/2010 7:42:55 AM
Cain and Able was its beginning

Un-Holy-Match-trimony (Poetry) - 10/23/2010 2:15:39 PM
Yes, but then... That is what makes it exciting. God bless, Lew

Gravitational Bull 2 (Poetry) - 10/23/2010 1:40:52 PM
I always appreciate your outlook on life on this planet at this time, OPG. Love and peace, Regis

The Inner Limits (Poetry) - 10/23/2010 1:39:21 PM
break free from being a manipulated man following some other fools plan Good advice, OPG. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you, Regis

Un-Holy-Match-trimony (Poetry) - 10/23/2010 1:37:47 PM
As usual, I appreciate the perspective that you share through your verses, OPG. Love and peace to you, Regis

The Inner Limits (Poetry) - 10/23/2010 12:52:29 PM
Sounds as if someone lived a rather unhappy life. I'll remember you in my prayers. God bless, Lew

Gravitational Bull 2 (Poetry) - 10/23/2010 8:14:41 AM
Tough and stand up poetry. outstanding.

Monster Has Arrived (Poetry) - 10/21/2010 7:34:51 AM
Hey, I'm famous, again! Ha.Ha. Great write "Thanks 1Gem. Erm...Did you see mine? Kind Regards..

Letting it Go (Poetry) - 10/21/2010 7:08:54 AM
So true! A good writer will let everything out! Who cares what other's think! If they don't like what you have to say they should just stay away!! Letting it go is always good for the soul...Peace, ~Chessly

Makes U Wonder (Poetry) - 10/21/2010 7:04:27 AM
With God in our hearts we will never go under!! LOve, and peace always!! ~Chessly

Going Down (Poetry) - 10/21/2010 7:00:34 AM
Do good and good will come back to you!! Excellent write! Take care and god bless! ~Chessly

Monster Has Arrived (Poetry) - 10/21/2010 4:57:53 AM
Hey, how do you rap mouse anyway. LOL God bless, Lew

Monster Has Arrived (Poetry) - 10/21/2010 2:51:31 AM
LOL George

Letting it Go (Poetry) - 10/20/2010 4:30:34 PM
Yep A Ds Has Nothin On (Never Take Off Mask) Halloween... TRASK

Letting it Go (Poetry) - 10/20/2010 1:48:53 PM
thought provoking read

Going Down (Poetry) - 10/20/2010 12:15:45 PM
true enough!

Letting it Go (Poetry) - 10/20/2010 7:24:44 AM
There would be less shrinks around if people didn't keep everything hidden. Good one, with sound reasoning.

Letting it Go (Poetry) - 10/20/2010 5:52:18 AM
Ah, yes but some of those bones can make really interesting reading if you drag them out of the closet and into the light. Keep on keepn' on. God bless, Lew

Non-Perfect-Poet (Poetry) - 10/20/2010 3:52:20 AM
You said, "I seek no honorable mention!" Despite your angry review on my kneck} I still do like this!!!! "But dont worry, not all reviews are perfect" Hope this new review gives you the honourable mention you deserve. Keep writing.

Non-Perfect-Poet (Poetry) - 10/19/2010 5:42:53 PM
Call It Like It Is...A D If It Isn't Jesus Freaks Its Jesus (Creeps) Creaks... Keep On Telling It Like It Is... Etal: My News Says: ...You Can't Handle It Go Someplace Else... TRASK

Non-Perfect-Poet (Poetry) - 10/19/2010 2:21:04 PM
Good one and right on. To hell with the detractors unless they are constructive they are not true poets. Keep writing George Carroll

Non-Perfect-Poet (Poetry) - 10/19/2010 1:33:05 PM
Hey, buddy. Nobody forced them here. If they send their so-called expertise respond or don't. That's their problem. Non the less, you might pick up something useful now and then. Otherwise just keep on writing. God bless, Lew

Going Down (Poetry) - 10/19/2010 8:33:30 AM
I especially like that last line. Well put together piece. God bless, Lew

Going Down (Poetry) - 10/19/2010 6:06:38 AM
It's not authentic Rhyming in the sence of the word. It jitters a little here n there. the 'beat' gets itself lost now n then.That's why I'm so sure that you will edit it. Cause the theme is great, and worth editing.

Day Breaker (Poetry) - 10/19/2010 3:36:31 AM
keep that chin up!!

Going Down (Poetry) - 10/19/2010 2:52:39 AM
another enjoyable rhyming poem of which it seems you're the best at it thanks for sharing Grady Peace be with you Brother William

Going Down (Poetry) - 10/19/2010 2:15:03 AM
Let he who is without sin cast the first stone. Wisdom in your write. George

Day Breaker (Poetry) - 10/18/2010 2:17:21 PM
When things turn sour it does become difficult to continue putting on a happy face, knowing what the truth is... Be always safe, Karen

Day Breaker (Poetry) - 10/18/2010 9:02:47 AM


Day Breaker (Poetry) - 10/18/2010 8:58:02 AM
And I guess that is why you keep on clownin' God bless, Lew

Makes U Wonder (Poetry) - 10/18/2010 4:53:43 AM
Excellent write Grady If one dose not wonder He'll stay idle as time passes him by Most enjoyable reading Peace be with you Brother William

Makes U Wonder (Poetry) - 10/17/2010 4:01:35 PM
Makes U think alright. I do believe our existance is not a blunder. We did that ourselves. God bless, Lew

Money 2 Buy (Poetry) - 10/16/2010 5:36:19 PM
Welcome To $$$$ Greed Mongering America $$$$$.... Only An Act Of (God) Will Stop (Decay) It... TRASK

Damage is Done (Poetry) - 10/16/2010 2:53:58 PM
Substance to think about, OPG; an apt and timely message about life in this world. Love and peace to you, Regis

Money 2 Buy (Poetry) - 10/16/2010 2:52:43 PM
As always, I appreciate the philosophy that you share within your verses, OPG. Love and peace to you, Regis

Money 2 Buy (Poetry) - 10/16/2010 1:49:40 PM
And I gotta tell you Brother, his tooth is not the only thing decaying. God bless... I enjoyed your write. Lew

Damage is Done (Poetry) - 10/15/2010 7:33:47 PM
Think it is so disheartening and sad how society as a whole no longer values life, the one gift we all need to treasure... Be always safe, Karen

Damage is Done (Poetry) - 10/15/2010 7:03:22 PM
Even Tho They Are Not Your Children You As I Are Is Just As Responsible For Their Welfare,i.e.It Doesn't Always Take $ Save Kid--**PEER PRESSURE WORKS... I Am **Result Of 2nd Like Daddy Who Taught Me Well--Where Ever He Bill Is If In Holy Hell I Will Go To Hell & Back Save His Soul... If Not Then: {{{ DAMAGE IS (DID) DONE }}}}} TRASK...

Damage is Done (Poetry) - 10/15/2010 2:44:43 PM
You speak the hard truth,OPG, and we all should take heed,and try to do better!Blessings to you and yours! Love, Eileen

Damage is Done (Poetry) - 10/15/2010 8:36:45 AM
Oh yes, just grand. And why does this remind me of that song Elvis sang? In he ghetto? God bless, Lew

Damage is Done (Poetry) - 10/15/2010 4:45:01 AM
Powerfully conveyed, OnepoetGem

Foolishly Eye Beat (Poetry) - 10/14/2010 12:31:20 AM
YES: Just Are Just As Guilty YES: Unjust Will Suffer Fate Those Guilty... TRASK

Foolishly Eye Beat (Poetry) - 10/13/2010 3:28:44 PM
OMW, how dreadful. I can understand anyone wanting to avenge such evil.

Foolishly Eye Beat (Poetry) - 10/13/2010 1:36:31 PM
diamond indeed...don't you dare vanish! (Speechless re your nephew..so sorry..hellish experience) Gina

Foolishly Eye Beat (Poetry) - 10/13/2010 12:54:30 PM
Sad and yet it tells us something. God bless, Lew

Hogma (Poetry) - 10/13/2010 10:45:16 AM
yup, you have written well!

Fighting Comes Easy (Poetry) - 10/13/2010 10:43:32 AM
interesting how very cruel we are to our fellow humans-all through history not just race but the Indians scalped one another and the black man owned others of his race as well-we have much to learn

Fighting Comes Easy (Poetry) - 10/13/2010 5:43:26 AM
Every man picks his own fight don't make it all wrong don't make it all right Ain't it the truth? God bless, Lew

Hogma (Poetry) - 10/13/2010 5:32:06 AM
Grady, A fine write describing the corrupt government. But I really wish you hadn't dragged the Catholic church into it, there are a lot of misconceptions. Hugs, Mary (also a Catholic)

Cover Girl (Poetry) - 10/12/2010 8:20:02 AM
Have you ever really noticed the very famous often have such a sad way to end up. I feel you have. God bless, Lew

Cover Girl (Poetry) - 10/12/2010 4:34:09 AM
Yeah...we all have skeletons in our closets. Some of us are better at living with them than others are. Good write. Peace, Dayvid

Quit Telling (Poetry) - 10/12/2010 3:58:17 AM
clever!

Quit Telling (Poetry) - 10/11/2010 6:33:57 PM
Of Course (All) Humanity Is (Consumed) Doomed... TRASK

Quit Telling (Poetry) - 10/11/2010 11:03:47 AM
You could put this one to music. God bless, Lew

Quit Telling (Poetry) - 10/11/2010 7:54:42 AM
Very creative and lyrical OPG ~ Best Wishes, Christine

- & + (Poetry) - 10/11/2010 5:27:09 AM
Somehow after all this is read I find myself thinking about the fear you feel getting in the way. Just so you'll know it takes courage to admit to that. You'll be fine. God bless, Lew

- & + (Poetry) - 10/11/2010 3:32:48 AM
good, honest write!

Door Knob Split-U (Poetry) - 10/10/2010 11:34:58 AM
No problem here either. Liz

Door Knob Split-U (Poetry) - 10/10/2010 10:47:08 AM
you sure have the words to tell em off Grady,and in rhyme no less!hahaha;-)

Door Knob Split-U (Poetry) - 10/10/2010 5:13:26 AM
LOL no problem here. God bless, Lew

Freaky Freaky (Poetry) - 10/8/2010 10:17:34 PM
Its outragous. I've never been so shocked..because you missed out...'of'...[Most men freak for this [] type satisfaction] The rest was finer than fine.

Freaky Freaky (Poetry) - 10/8/2010 9:25:43 PM
You are so right, yes, sometimes "it is just the nature of the beast"... Be always safe, Karen

Freaky Freaky (Poetry) - 10/8/2010 5:11:19 PM
The Highest,Most Varied,Most Lasting Pleasures Are Intellectual,However You We May Deceive Ourselves About It In Our (Adult) Youth... Your Poem I Love It Truth... Etal: Its Safer To Masturbate,i.e. Modern Day Sexually Transmitted Disease' Girls & Women Hides It In Their Immune System...1st Piece Ass You I Get The ** HIV Or Any Disease Comes With It... FACT: **Over 1/2 Million = Girls & Women Age 15 To 44 Die Each Year From HIV - Aids Due Having Had Sex With (Unknown) Gays In Between... TRASK...

Freaky Freaky (Poetry) - 10/8/2010 4:33:45 PM
Bet you know well of that viagra stuff, huh, G...? LOl, e

Freaky Freaky (Poetry) - 10/8/2010 3:58:59 PM
Very good point made here. I would make to points sex is not the apple. I agree that sex without love is a pretty empty itch. and about the old men and viagra. It isn't worth it any more. I'll quote George Burns who said, sex at my age would be like shooting pool with a rope. God bless, Lew

R U Having Fun (Poetry) - 10/8/2010 9:41:33 AM
And keep on smiling. I will light the way on the darkest of day. God bless, Lew

R U Having Fun (Poetry) - 10/8/2010 3:35:58 AM
just keep smiling-there is much brighness inside too!

Mustings (Poetry) - 10/7/2010 8:12:04 PM
Interesting and so very true.... Be always safe, Karen

my Attitude (Poetry) - 10/7/2010 3:41:01 PM
OnepoetGem, I like your style and the wisdom of your poems. Continued success~ Barbara Henry

Mustings (Poetry) - 10/7/2010 12:59:51 PM
Sad but true and very well versed. I have to agree with Dayvid, too. If it is true that in God we trust why do so many of our churches demand money to be a member? God bless, Lew

Mustings (Poetry) - 10/7/2010 10:02:11 AM
Oh my....what can I say sweet sweet man..I love how you think ..oh myyyyyyyyy.. as always excellent writing darlin...keep smiling OK....have a wonderful and safe day...Hugsss Love Always, Chanti Lace xoxoxoo

Mustings (Poetry) - 10/7/2010 9:26:26 AM
I find it ironic that our money says "In God we trust." Because it is really in money we trust. I like your mustings. Peace, Dayvid

Hot Tingles (Poetry) - 10/6/2010 2:10:33 PM
awwwwwe, great poem,even though unfullfilled;-) ET

Hot Tingles (Poetry) - 10/5/2010 7:30:56 PM
Goodness, something sure has you going, sorry it is but a dream... Be always safe, Karen

Hot Tingles (Poetry) - 10/5/2010 9:07:08 AM
I love the lightness and sexiness of this poem..Nicely done, it does raise the temperature a bit, I will admit.. Peace, love and light, Amber

Hot Tingles (Poetry) - 10/5/2010 7:07:38 AM
whoaaa... my sweet sweet man is on FIRE with passion...love this.... ya brought tingles all over me darlin..oh myyyyyyy...Hugss coming your way...(Sighhhh) Love Always, Chanti Lace xoxoxo

Hot Tingles (Poetry) - 10/5/2010 5:20:14 AM
Sexy indeed. God bless, Lew

Terrortory (Poetry) - 10/4/2010 9:28:58 AM
For sure sweet sweet man....it isn't the world darlin its the CREATURES in it......oh my ..did I say that..I certainly did..miss ya big time darlin..have a wonderful and safe day Ok and remember you are always in my thoughts..Hugsss Love Always, Chanti Lace xoxox

Versing it Good or Bad (Poetry) - 10/4/2010 7:13:16 AM
Oh how I love how you put words together sweet sweet man..as always wonderful writing from a wonderful man...keep smiling..Hugsss Love Always, Chanti Lace xoxoxo

Jump 4 Joy (Poetry) - 10/3/2010 7:44:29 AM
So very wise sweet sweet man..sorry I have been always on business etc.sure have missed you...keep smiling darlin OK...Hugss Love Always, Chanti Lace xoxoxo

Jump 4 Joy (Poetry) - 10/2/2010 11:44:26 AM
Words to live by, Gem. -gene.

Jump 4 Joy (Poetry) - 10/2/2010 10:17:14 AM
Lots of wisdom here and very cute. Of course it might be in a pigs eye Pork on the plate it's just the pigs fate This part provokes me to share this with you. My granddaughter said to her mother, "I'm sorry the pig had to die but I don't mind. I like bacon." LOL God bless, Lew

Jump 4 Joy (Poetry) - 10/2/2010 10:06:13 AM
You offer some good advice through your verses here, OPG; I appreciate your philosophical perspective. Love and peace, Regis

Versing it Good or Bad (Poetry) - 9/30/2010 7:55:52 PM
Logical advice wise to follow, with a sense of tranquility... Be always safe, Karen

Versing it Good or Bad (Poetry) - 9/30/2010 6:59:48 AM
Positive approach to writing. I like the "feel-good" of this piece. Peace, Dayvid

Versing it Good or Bad (Poetry) - 9/30/2010 5:55:57 AM
try to go with the happy and forget the sad I really like that part. God bless, Lew

Versing it Good or Bad (Poetry) - 9/30/2010 5:27:24 AM
Grady, Expresses a lot of emotion. Mary

Middleology (Poetry) - 9/29/2010 5:33:36 AM
TOO MUCH TRUTH FOR THIS EARLY IN THE MORNING. lol.

Top VIP (Poetry) - 9/29/2010 4:05:00 AM
lots to say here-well done

Top VIP (Poetry) - 9/28/2010 8:55:19 PM
Yep You Better Make Best What You Got Left--Soon That Will Be Gone To! TRASK...

Top VIP (Poetry) - 9/28/2010 8:43:08 PM
poignant read

Top VIP (Poetry) - 9/28/2010 8:12:04 PM
It is not always the one person, but the company kept... Be always safe, Karen

Top VIP (Poetry) - 9/28/2010 1:23:40 PM
Well done, Gem, and packed with good sense.

Top VIP (Poetry) - 9/28/2010 7:09:35 AM
OPG, nice write, well said... Cheers, Dan

Top VIP (Poetry) - 9/28/2010 6:20:28 AM
and I'm not really sure about president Obama's fate All I know is one man can't hardly clean up this corrupted United State Too many devils flowing from hells gate And that said it all. God bless, Lew

Powers that Be (Poetry) - 9/28/2010 3:31:08 AM
nicely done!

Powers that Be (Poetry) - 9/27/2010 2:37:24 PM
Very well written and point well taken. God bless, Lew

Man Traps (Poetry) - 9/27/2010 10:19:59 AM
Grady, you are such a great philosopher. We're all children inside, and that's how it shoud be. Hugs, Mary

Man Traps (Poetry) - 9/27/2010 8:01:31 AM
I like it. God bless, Lew

Poetic Hex Breaker (Poetry) - 9/25/2010 10:32:08 PM
Go Into Silence Then No Search For What To Write It Will Come To (Your Hand) You! TRASK...

Poetic Hex Breaker (Poetry) - 9/24/2010 2:42:23 PM
I am sure the writers of the Psalms were so inspired.

Poetic Hex Breaker (Poetry) - 9/24/2010 5:50:52 AM
I don't think you will ever have writer's block, words flow like a stream from your mind!

Word Dealers (Poetry) - 9/24/2010 5:50:03 AM
You have the words under your command Sir Gem!

Poetic Hex Breaker (Poetry) - 9/24/2010 5:16:51 AM
Oh it's not God who is yelling. I know the feeling, though. God bless, Lew

Word Dealers (Poetry) - 9/23/2010 5:22:34 AM
Grady, Nicely written as always with that special touch of humor you bring. Mary