Turtle Island (Book) - 5/4/2003 9:18:28 AM
With an intriguing and attention-grabbing opening like this, I can't wait to read the whole book. Moody, atmospheric, attention to detail and a potentially suspenseful premise - what else could you ask for?
Turtle Island (Book) - 5/3/2003 1:57:01 PM
First, let me say this: Oooooooh!
I love this kind of story! You put the reader inside Leroy's life with such ease, and the intriguing plot beckons like a lover's sultry glance. Can't wait to read this!
Turtle Island (Book) - 5/1/2003 7:33:03 PM
You have a scary way with words. This book is to be read with the lights on. Sounds incredible. Congratulations. Now I have to go and make sure my doors are locked.
Jackie
Turtle Island (Book) - 5/1/2003 6:11:56 PM
Suspense/Thriller: Unremarkable storytelling! Sounds as chilling as the Bone Collector and as intruiging as the Truman Show... what a combination.
If made into a movie...
WHO WOULD WANT TO SEE IT? Fans of this talented author or of other thrillers of course!
A cunning serial killer obviously has an extremely bad attitude, with a taste for virtual reality.
With the atmosphere of a cat-and-mouse game, providing clues, essentially challenging police.
It boasts of interesting ideas. Such as the fascinating element of how an investigator or an investigation can empower a mass murderer.
Well done!!
Turtle Island (Book) - 5/1/2003 2:57:10 PM
Sounds like my kind of book! You've penned a gripping intro to this story and my appetite has been wetted. Your writing style is fast-paced, and descriptive enough to give the reader a good sense of your characters right from the start. I'm looking forward to reading more...
Turtle Island (Book) - 5/1/2003 10:24:49 AM
Darren,
I read "Mourning Sun" before viewing this piece and as I said on my review there, this will be a winner!!
Turtle Island (Book) - 4/30/2003 9:09:54 AM
With Mr. Law's vision, scrutiny to detail, and scrupulous use of language, this small introduction promises to be but the foyer to a mansion of mystery and adventure.
Turtle Island (Book) - 4/29/2003 10:34:05 AM
You got style, sexual choice, atmosphere, time and POV in the same first sentence. A Dick Frances touch. Very professional.
Turtle Island (Book) - 4/29/2003 9:18:17 AM
Wow! An amazing tease of an introduction for all of us! Such a mystery to only tempt the reader into turning to the next page. A must read for all those intrigued by suspense and seduction.
Turtle Island (Book) - 4/28/2003 9:24:04 AM
Sounds like a web of deception, entertwined with a depth of sensual sex undergoing a great murder mystery. Great.
Joyce Rapier
Turtle Island (Book) - 4/15/2003 1:30:46 PM
Riveting plotline...looks like a winner!
Turtle Island (Book) - 4/14/2003 9:06:08 AM
Darren, Sounds like a winner! Full of suspense and intrigue. Very well written, sounds like a must read book. "A peaceful haven, now turned to fear, a body washed ashore up the river." This is exciting and sounds like it is full of intrigue! Best to you, Darren, with your new upcoming book...Val
Mourning Sun (Short Story) - 5/1/2003 10:13:44 AM
Excellent read, the ideas flowed,the images were brilliant -- if this is the style that you are utilizing for "Turtle Island", it will be a winner!
Mourning Sun (Short Story) - 4/15/2003 11:10:41 AM
excellent write, darren! :)
Mourning Sun (Short Story) - 4/14/2003 5:24:24 PM
So odd to get a sense of poignancy from a horror story. A tribute to the author's ability to reveal all of the character's essence. Great writing!
Mourning Sun (Short Story) - 4/14/2003 3:45:20 PM
Excellent piece of writing, Darren. Spare, energetic, dialogue scintillates, leading the reader on, suggesting, merely suggesting the payoff. Well done. Give us more.
