Day and Night (Poetry) - 12/5/2012 12:29:35 AM
Thus it is, thus it always weill be...
Chip Bergeron
Day and Night (Poetry) - 11/17/2012 8:18:19 AM
join the crowd ...
Day and Night (Poetry) - 11/16/2012 11:52:44 AM
With each generation we honor our children more. I often wonder by spoiling them that we may be doing them a disservice.
Ron
A Real Friend (Poetry) - 11/11/2012 5:57:53 PM
Been there a time or two myself. Sometimes you just want6 to be the one ho treats.
Chip Bergeron
A Real Friend (Poetry) - 11/11/2012 10:23:32 AM
I'm glad you got permission. She must be a good friend. A loner needs a good friend.
Ron
Last Breath (Poetry) - 11/6/2012 7:18:36 AM
And if we all could say those same words, David, what
a beautiful world we would leave behind. Many thanks,
New Baby (Poetry) - 11/4/2012 12:29:05 PM
nature doesn't know, it just does it job. but the creator of nature and its products enfuses one with the love and everything else that the new life will need. thanks
asa
New Baby (Poetry) - 11/4/2012 9:22:38 AM
Nature doesn't know, but the parents sure do.
Ron
Machine Life (Poetry) - 10/14/2012 7:34:47 AM
I wrote a (badly written but nicely illustrated) monograph on the subject in 1973. Of coarse the most interesting aspect of this theme has been the Terminator series of movies. DNA and gene are probably quite common in the universe, as are binary logic systems. However, DNA and the gene are quite adaptive, whereas I'm not sure that binary systems are adaptive even though seem to have developed self improving machinery.
Like your poem, I think our future will be greatly enhanced by very very intelligent machinery working in our behalf. Most of all, we will abandon our primitive fears about defying gods and all those other myths and forge ahead, making humans truly intelligent and much less belligerent.
Ron
Dreams of Home (Poetry) - 10/13/2012 11:10:05 AM
A unique poem imposing earthly values on outer space. It appears that jealousy exists in more places than in our neighborhood.
Ron
In The Asylum (Poetry) - 9/27/2012 12:51:23 PM
That kind of thing will bring on that kind of thing.
Ron
The Convention (Poetry) - 9/24/2012 9:04:20 AM
Would that be called an unconventional convention? That must've been a very bad dream. Did you get the idea from my story, Serial?
Ron
Alone in the Dark (Poetry) - 9/23/2012 1:00:43 PM
I hope this poem is just an expression of your poetic license and has not happened to you in reality for it is just too sad to imagine. I am sending happiness and blessings your way.
Joy L. Hale
On The Moon (Poetry) - 9/23/2012 10:13:07 AM
Like Star Trek and Star Wars, an earthly soap opera and sitcom carried out on the media as though it were outer space.
Ron
On The Moon (Poetry) - 9/21/2012 2:39:48 PM
whether on the moon or on earth...it pays to 'never'...miss the boat!
thanks.
asa
Dear John (Poetry) - 9/20/2012 12:54:26 PM
All too often this is how it ends, perhaps the pressure overwhelms the heart but for whatever reason, we cán't help but think about three little ones missing Mommy.
fee
An Old Couple (Poetry) - 9/21/2010 8:26:55 PM
Well, it seems they got their wish, huh?
Be always safe,
Karen
An Old Couple (Poetry) - 9/21/2010 6:19:44 PM
Talk about going out with a bang!
This last hurrah, David, is frightening and all too real nowadays.
John
An Old Couple (Poetry) - 9/21/2010 5:55:44 PM
My, my my.............
Chip Bergeron
The Scream (Poetry) - 8/31/2010 2:47:08 PM
Oh my.....
The Scream (Poetry) - 8/31/2010 4:04:54 AM
A bit disturbing. . .this well written scream.
The Queen (Poetry) - 8/29/2010 4:41:11 AM
Imaginative and unique. Good job.
Donna
The Queen (Poetry) - 8/28/2010 2:25:22 PM
Like these cards.
The Queen (Poetry) - 8/28/2010 4:42:25 AM
EXCELLENT! THE UNIQUE PRESENTATION OF A CARD GAME...TURNS INTO A BEAUTIFUL WIN...ALL THE WAY AROUND. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS PRESENTATIONS
Tiger Tells (Poetry) - 8/27/2010 6:59:40 PM
What is a "sava"?
Tiger Tells (Poetry) - 8/27/2010 2:22:24 PM
Nice to read a poem from this perspective!
Namaste,
Christine
Alone in the Dark (Poetry) - 8/9/2010 5:08:15 AM
Stabs like a knife to the heart.
Alone in the Dark (Poetry) - 8/7/2010 6:21:03 AM
powerfully emotive ...
Alone in the Dark (Poetry) - 8/7/2010 6:15:57 AM
David,
This is so sad, and a commentary on how the economy can destroy people's lives. But more than that, I can feel your deep pain at losing your loved ones. This brought a tear to my eye. I'm sorry for your loss.
Mary
Alone in the Dark (Poetry) - 8/7/2010 4:17:59 AM
heart pierceing piece...write write write
Alone in the Dark (Poetry) - 8/7/2010 1:42:26 AM
So direct and honest, David.
Take good care.
John
Alone in the Dark (Poetry) - 8/6/2010 10:02:47 PM
Haunting and sad. Great writing though. I'm sure the minutes seem like hours. Transform the pain into words. Magical things will happen. Don't listen to your head too much. I've been through this myself. Absent the trains.
Alone in the Dark (Poetry) - 8/6/2010 8:50:45 PM
a sad poem, David. I hope it didn't happen to you. Laurel
Tiger (Poetry) - 7/20/2010 3:11:44 AM
A fascinating piece, David.
Tiger (Poetry) - 7/19/2010 2:16:08 AM
NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Tiger (Poetry) - 7/18/2010 6:25:25 AM
Great writing..Hugss
Tiger (Poetry) - 7/17/2010 4:26:47 PM
This is stunning ~ full of so many emotions and such intensity ~
Blessings,
Christine
Last Breath (Poetry) - 6/3/2010 3:56:59 AM
Well composed short piece, David
Last Breath (Poetry) - 6/2/2010 11:22:40 AM
Well written.
Last Breath (Poetry) - 6/2/2010 10:43:25 AM
David,
Short, sweet and to the point. Wonderfully written.
Mary
