Amazing Grace (Book) - 6/21/2013 5:45:30 AM
This book is unusual in that it tells of the life and times of Grace, the lead character, in an entertaining manner with great imagination. Having been born and raised in a rural sitting myself, I found it very easy to imagine myself in the same situations. The stories brought back memories of the days before our home had running water and reminded me of my mother’s joy the day Dad brought home her first wringer washing machine. Rather than a dry recital of dates and facts, you actually find yourself living the life. Bravo, BRAVO!
Life Happens (My Story) (Book) - 6/19/2012 11:26:52 PM
WOW I just loved this, it was just what I needed, truly
Thanks, adding to fav's
Kimberly
Life Happens (My Story) (Book) - 9/24/2011 4:58:53 PM
I chuckled all the way through. great humor, this will bring many a smile. Thanks. Albert megraw Author,,The struggle of the young inheritors.
Life Happens (My Story) (Book) - 9/23/2010 9:24:15 AM
Donna...I enjoyed your book from the moment I saw the title and cover to the last page. Your writing is so refreshing and fun to read. Congratulations on your first published book. I hope it falls into thousands of hands and that you continue to write for all our enjoyment.
Life Happens (My Story) (Book) - 9/6/2010 5:23:04 AM
CONGRATULATIONS On Your Publication DONNA!!!
All My Best Wishes To You With Your New Book
"Life Happens (My Story)"
Blessings & Continued Inspirations
Poetess Victoria L. McColley
Our Trip to Our Nation's Capitol (Washington D.C.) (Short Story) - 11/27/2017 2:11:53 AM
I enjoyed taking the tour with you. Most remarkable to me, is that you and your daughter continue to take your girls' weekends every now and then.
Our Trip to Our Nation's Capitol (Washington D.C.) (Short Story) - 11/25/2017 10:53:35 AM
I can't imagine seeing Washington DC in a weekend, but you sure did well and had quite an adventure that you have shared with us in a very interesting and entertaining way.
I have been to Washington DC several times, but did not see the FBI building or some of the other places you describe like the White House. The last time I drove in the city, it was a lot of detour traffic because Metrorail was being built. I found in my travels, that fellow travelers were often very helpful in navigating transportation, housing and sights to see. One of the most pleasant things about travel is the people you meet.
Ron
My First Experience With Alcohol (Short Story) - 2/2/2017 7:53:05 AM
That certainly was a memorable way to be initiated into the realm of drinking alcohol! While it seemed to be hilarious at the time, I think she could have been in great danger if unable to urinate. Being drunk actually probably helped her in that situation.
Yes, sloe gin was the drink of choice for young ladies in those days. I tasted it once and I think it was actually worse than Kool-Aid. You are lucky that all you got out of the experience was a headache and a laugh. You made the transition quite well--many don't.
Ron
My First Experience With Alcohol (Short Story) - 2/1/2017 4:26:15 PM
I confess to laughing through most of your story even though the woman's situation was humiliating to her. And, I'm not even drinking!
My First Experience With Alcohol (Short Story) - 2/1/2017 8:16:47 AM
Why bother with decorum when you're having so much fun, Donna?! I remember those early nights in my drinking career when drinking was fun, but not as starkly as those when it became a recurring nightmare. Thanks for the reminder of what a jerk I used to be seven years, four months, and four days ago. It's nice to leave those "blinding headaches" behind me, too!
Scott
My Granny (Short Story) - 8/29/2016 5:33:31 AM
Your paragraphs are fine with me. There is an extra line between, but that seems to be the case when certain changes are made to the text. Make those changes prior to pasting in and that should keep extra lines.
Your grandmother certainly had "character" honed from her many years of experience and her determination to rid herself of a husband that apparently abused her good nature. So many didn't. As for her life being hard alone, I think she had already been alone and burdened by taking care of this nasty old man that unfortunately, was your grandfather. A book about her life would be cherished by your family in the future.
The brassiere incident reminded me of the time my twin brother and I were at our uncle's farm. We were about eight years old. For some reason we burst into the upstairs small master bedroom with my cousins where my mother and grandmother were with my aunt.
There my aunt (about 40 years old) was standing by the closet clad only in white panties. My mother on one side and my grandmother on the other, fully clothed. My aunt, nonchalantly, continued chatting with my mother and grandmother while we told my mother what we were going to tell her and then left. It was so embarrassing because I had never seen my mother, even in a bra and then, only seen women in brassieres in Sears catalogues in the outhouse. ;-)
Ron
My Granny (Short Story) - 8/28/2016 11:43:14 PM
You've written a warm and loving tribute to your granny who certainly was a brave woman to divorce during a time it carried a stigma for women. Eccentricities aside, she set a fine example of standing up for her convictions and defining what an independent woman is.
My Grandfathers (Short Story) - 7/26/2016 4:58:25 AM
I really enjoyed reading about your grandfathers. I'm certain you have other stories about your grandmothers as well. I was worried that you were going to give your "bad" grandfather, Oscar, top billing, but I see that you finally got around to Ira and his accomplishments, both as a wonderful person and as an innovator in the community. It must've been quite interesting to have the Chief of Police as a grandfather.
I have fond memories of two great grand parents during my childhood years. My grandfathers were not as colorful as yours, but both were quite "beaten-down" by the Great Depression and as a result had grumpy dispositions at times. I recall my paternal grandfather's famous picture of him with his two magnificent draft horses that helped him start a farm in his later years after many years of working in factories and as a chauffeur/fireman. I don't know if my grandmother ever rode bareback on one of them, but as an avid reader, she was quite romantic and the mother of seven children. And, I had a great uncle who was Fire Chief of Sheboygan, Wisconsin. He gave up and died at 98 after seven bouts with pneumonia from, his third wife told me, "a kind of black lung from eating smoke all those years."
Ron
My Grandfathers (Short Story) - 7/25/2016 11:55:28 AM
If we don't write down our childhood experiences and impressions, generations to come will miss out. May your detailed account of two completely different grandfathers who made a lasting impression, inspire spirited discussions amongst your family as well as a quest to seek more information about other relatives.
Frances & Jeanne, Hurricanes of 2004 (Short Story) - 6/20/2016 5:38:13 AM
It's a good thing that your mother was there to warn you of the pending possibility. Otherwise, you may have been caught unaware like so many are who haven't experienced long periods of power outage. She did the wise thing by insisting that you get supplies.
While we can't prepare for everything, it sure helps to think ahead and have some supplies around. It is interesting that you might not have been able to get emergency assistance if your mother had been there to establish permanent residency.
The biggest problem we have around here, the Houston area, is panic. While officials carefully order evacuations, there are those that, through irrational fear, evacuate at the worst time.
Ron
Frances & Jeanne, Hurricanes of 2004 (Short Story) - 6/19/2016 11:31:58 PM
I know Michiganders are tough, but it appears that your early foul weather ordeals in Florida wizened you beyond measure.
Happy Birthday Valentine (Short Story) - 5/31/2016 4:51:49 AM
The skeptic in me tells me that there is someone behind this amazing event. It may be a friend or a family member. It may be a trick or a prank. It may be well-meaning or it may be not.
However, if it's merely fiction, then the writer can write whatever he or she wants as long as the reader will believe.
Ron
Happy Birthday Valentine (Short Story) - 5/30/2016 11:57:04 PM
At a loss for words, I can only echo your sentiments about an occurrence such as this being labeled an "amazing experience."
Brain Surgery for a Headache? (Short Story) - 5/16/2014 1:43:57 AM
Incredible story; very well penned!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn.
Brain Surgery for a Headache? (Short Story) - 5/6/2014 10:26:59 AM
Heather was very lucky. That long wait in the emergency room could have killed her. All the more reason that everyone should have health insurance, regardless of how healthy they think they are. They are only playing Russian roulette with their lives. I don't understand why she was so reluctant to cooperate with the doctors and nurses. Was it because she was a nurse, or just her personality?
I fell once and fractured my eye orbit and sinus. My headache was excruciating, so I gathered up my parents who were visiting and we rushed to the emergency room. I had insurance and the emergency room was near empty. Still I waited over five hours before they took me in and gave me a CT scan. I never got anything for the headache and it, fortunately, went away by morning. Last year when I had pneumonia and almost died because it required lung surgery, the emergency room took me in right away. I have a Medicare Advantage insurance but was at the wrong hospital on a weekend. I never saw a single bill.
Ron
Brain Surgery for a Headache? (Short Story) - 5/3/2014 9:17:20 AM
Wonderful writing. Emotions come through to me as I read it. I drive an ambulance and see people everyday like this. To me, this was REAL. Minor typos (two or three), but the content-Excellent! Bless you and your family! 4 stars
My Granny (Short Story) - 5/2/2014 11:12:47 AM
Enjoyed reading about your granny. Back in the day old people didn't take to, or understand as the world became modernized around them. My grandmother comes to mind. She lived in a log house deep in the woods of Arkansas with my grandfather and I doubt she traveled over forty miles from that place her whole life. Hah! She had a brother who left and moved to Tulsa, Oklahoma. My grandmother printed out a postcard to send to him. My aunt took it from her to mail it for her and she asked why she didn't put his address on the card. All she had on it was her brother's name and Tulsa, Oklahoma. Grandmother looked at my aunt like she was crazy and said, "Don't know his address." My aunt said, "Well, Momma, he'll never get this with just his name on it." Grandmother snorted and said, "Hells bells, somebody up there will see him and give it to him." She was something else, and could pick an eagle out of a tree with a .22 rifle as good as any man.
The Stolen Car (Short Story) - 11/24/2012 9:41:04 AM
Funny turn of events toward the end. That proves there's only 6 degrees of separation. Best to you, Donna.
The Stolen Car (Short Story) - 10/3/2012 2:28:01 AM
Thats fantastic, it really is a small world. Your story reminds me of something that happened when I was a kid about 11 years old. During the summer hols we went to a park nearby on many occasions and each time we went there was a little mini car parked which hadn't moved. After a couple of weeks my brother and I decided to investigate. The doors were not locked and we had a look to see if there were any clues as to the owner. There were some letters with name and address on and we finally persuaded my dad to drive to this address which was nearby. When we knocked on the door an elderly gentleman answered and we asked him if he knew anything about the car. He was overjoyed it was his car that had been stolen some weeks before and the police had been unable to find it even though it was parked in a nearby park. He gave me and my brother a £50 reward for finding his car. God bless. Baz
The Stolen Car (Short Story) - 9/19/2012 6:52:21 PM
Amazing story, Donna. What coincidence plays in our lives. I'm glad your daughter and husband found their car intact. He must have been a very superior sort of thief not to steal the $20 note. cheers
The Stolen Car (Short Story) - 8/28/2012 1:03:11 PM
Excellent story, Donna; well done~!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
The Stolen Car (Short Story) - 8/28/2012 3:56:22 AM
Wow! Quite a story, Donna...
Anna
The Stolen Car (Short Story) - 8/28/2012 2:27:04 AM
Delightful and I laughted in places at the use of your words that cunjered up some past funny times. I always enjoy your work keep turning them out. Warm Wishies, Albert
To Switch or Not To Switch, That is the Question (Short Story) - 7/28/2012 11:38:10 AM
Nicely done and accurately portrayed, but very concisely. In actuality, since I lived through this with you, I know that it was much more involved than you make it sound. I know how many different technicians we had here at the house and strangely, there was only one time that we had the same guy who had been here before. You'd think that once they start a project like that, they'd have the same guy return, but no.... too simple.... each time you go through the whole damn thing again and just about the time you get him up to speed on your problem, he discovers that it's not something that comes under his area of expertise... WHAT A FIASCO!!!!
A Taste of Honey (Poetry) - 2/8/2017 10:47:24 AM
nice graphic, nice sentiment
Never Stop writing!!
m
When Writing Goes Missing (Poetry) - 2/8/2017 10:46:49 AM
know the feeling! you capture the situation well
Never Stop writing!!
m
When Writing Goes Missing (Poetry) - 1/5/2017 9:55:02 AM
Yes, indeed, we've come along way from the #2 pencil.
Thank God for that!
When Writing Goes Missing (Poetry) - 1/3/2017 11:05:04 AM
I KNOW THE FEELING. MY HARD DRIVE DIED AND I LOST A NOVEL MANUSCRIPT== BIG BAD NEWS- I'M AN EX MARINE BUT I STILL DIDN'T KNOW THE RIGHT WORDS TO USE!!
When Writing Goes Missing (Poetry) - 1/3/2017 9:31:59 AM
Yes, Donna, that's all you can do.
Always,
Deborah
When Writing Goes Missing (Poetry) - 1/2/2017 2:16:40 PM
I also have a special love for the old fashioned pencil and paper.
I really enjoyed your sentimental poem, x
When Writing Goes Missing (Poetry) - 1/2/2017 10:07:04 AM
I understand if we work or do our work in the cloud it is automatically saved. Some computers actually save a restore file when the computer goes down. Strangely, sometimes, this stored file is in the trash.
I have a backup drive with Apple Macintosh Time Machine. It saves everything on my computer every 15 minutes or so. So if I have a power glitch, I can go click on that file and go back to 15 minutes before the power outage occurred and recover what I was typing. Often not in its entirety, but enough to make it worthwhile.
Ron
When Writing Goes Missing (Poetry) - 1/1/2017 2:22:25 PM
Get you some flash drives and save all you work on them.
When Writing Goes Missing (Poetry) - 1/1/2017 10:35:34 AM
A very cute and well written piece I think we can all relate to. To error is human. to really screw things up, you need a computer. Ahh...technology.
Michael D.
Baby Dinosaurs (Poetry) - 12/15/2016 7:40:46 PM
love the tenderness expressed , enjoyable read
Baby Dinosaurs (Poetry) - 11/14/2016 11:51:36 AM
Learning is most powerful at that very curious and questioning age and carries throughout life. Many adults make the mistake of finding those questions just cute and brushing them off instead of answering those questions as correctly as possible or even looking them up to make sure that the answers are right.
By entering all those questions promptly and correctly, the child who gets those answers will have one up on all other children who do not. That child will go to school with knowledge that will make them ahead of others all the way to and through adulthood.
If you don't know why the sky is blue. You need to find out so you can tell your children the answer so they don't have to wait in the eighth grade science teacher to learn.
Ron
The sky is blue because the white light from the sun is refracted by the atmosphere to favor the wavelength of blue as opposed to other colors like red, green or yellow. Water is blue because it reflects the sky like a mirror. Geckos are reptiles and are related to the ancient dinosaurs (and birds).
Ron
Baby Dinosaurs (Poetry) - 11/12/2016 10:55:26 AM
Such a lovely bit of nostalgia, much enjoyed, Donna.
Baby Dinosaurs (Poetry) - 11/12/2016 9:34:50 AM
An excellent write. If we could only keep that sense of wonder that children have.
Baby Dinosaurs (Poetry) - 11/12/2016 9:13:58 AM
Hah! Yeah, you're quite right about the questioning young ones, filling their brains with wonder and delight . . . Eh . . . Along comes the teenage years where they try to instruct their parent on how things truly are, and how very wrong the parents thoughts of the world are.
The Amazing Turn Signal (Poetry) - 10/29/2016 7:07:41 AM
Besides, it gives you something to do with your hands other than texting!
The Amazing Turn Signal (Poetry) - 10/4/2016 5:53:08 AM
Your lesson poem is most telling. I recall we were taught to use hand signals for turns in high school driver's education. Can you imagine rolling the window down at 20 below zero and sticking your arm out to make a turn? We did it.
Florida has an inordinate amount of elderly people. Most of the elderly continue to drive until they become a hazard. My mother had an accident after over 30 years of accident free driving. And then, she was stopped on a highway for driving too slow. Finally, she left the door open on her car while backing out of the garage, catching it, and realized she needed to stop driving.
Many older people have hearing problems like me and find they leave the signal light on like my father often did. Since my hands are paralyzed and in the tri-pins for gas and brake on the left hand and steering on the right, I cannot operate turn signals except with my voice. Above 40 mph, road noise makes my voice system fail to understand my commands for, "right," or, "left." So, I have to carefully and gradually change lanes and be sure to be in the right lane for making turns. I get honked at a lot by very fast and inpatient drivers, but I don't post any hazard because it is up to the driver behind to have control of their vehicle and not run into the vehicle in front of them. It's a rule of the road.
Ron
The Amazing Turn Signal (Poetry) - 10/4/2016 5:51:55 AM
It's great using that signal,
so I know what you'll do,
but after making your turn,
turn it off so it's not confusing my view.
Michael D.
The Amazing Turn Signal (Poetry) - 10/3/2016 10:01:25 AM
Yep, my exact feelings also, Donna. You must be wary of drivers at all times. I live in south Louisiana, and I feel that we share "having the Worst Drivers" distinction.
The Amazing Turn Signal (Poetry) - 10/3/2016 9:08:51 AM
DONNA, I AM 71 AND DON'T DRIVE...NEVER HAVE BUT YOUR SHARING REALLY MADE ME CHUCKLE. ARE THEY REALLY THAT BAD WHILE DRIVING? SHOWS YOU HOW MUCH I KNOW, I THOUGHT THAT A DRIVER COULD GET PENALIZED FOR NOT GIVING A TURN SIGNAL...I GUESS THAT ONLY WORKS IF IT CAUSES AN ACCIDENT. THIS REMINDER SHOULD BE ON A BILLBOARD, I MEAN YOUR TITLE WRITTEN IN HUGE RED LETTERS... FOLLOWED BY THE CAPTION; USE IT!!! IT MIGHT WORK(SMILE). THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
A Taste of Honey (Poetry) - 12/27/2013 4:47:50 PM
That's one great poem from a beautiful drawing that is frozen in time. You just never know when a taste might come visit again. You just never know...
Have a Happy New Year!
John Michael
A Taste of Honey (Poetry) - 12/27/2013 12:36:11 PM
This one so touched my heart. And the drawing is so well done and beautiful, showing love and the moonlight on the dock… I can almost see myself there on a summer night. I hope she was drawing you and your best friend from what she had seen the night before.
Ron
A Taste of Honey (Poetry) - 12/27/2013 11:30:23 AM
First loves are, so it has been said, and so it has been with me, first loves are never to be forgotten... Your poem says it so sweetly, Donna... Happy New Year to you.
Mark
A Taste of Honey (Poetry) - 12/27/2013 8:07:14 AM
No, your words are fitting and powerful connection to the drawing. I love both equally.
A Taste of Honey (Poetry) - 12/27/2013 7:42:36 AM
What a treasure it is. I can see why you have kept it all these years. Your poem is filled with the feeling of love you had all those years ago and remains today. Love it! Thanks for sharing. I wonder if she has done anything with her art since 67.
A Taste of Honey (Poetry) - 12/27/2013 7:02:04 AM
such momentos are more treasured than gold
budd
Why Does He Love Her (Poetry) - 7/5/2013 2:46:43 PM
What a way to send a message to someone that has become complacent in a relationship! You have written a beautiful poem of enlightenment for that special someone to wake up before its too late..
Wonderful Donna!
Teresa
Why Does He Love Her (Poetry) - 7/1/2013 11:12:40 AM
Like this poem very much. Thought provoking but unfortunately, probably more so to women than men.
Why Does He Love Her (Poetry) - 2/10/2013 7:26:52 PM
Yes, what is he waiting for? The ambivalence of men is sometimes a heavy price to pay. But this here is a happy ending, right? :)
Axilea
HOW TO TELL MY CHILDREN OF MY NEW LOVE (Poetry) - 1/23/2013 2:45:25 PM
Oh how beautiful Donna and so encouraging too...One day when I find this find, I hope explaining to my children this beatiful story will soften their hearts as well!
Thank you for sharing this!!
Teresa
High School Graduation (Poetry) - 1/8/2013 6:31:26 AM
My Mom told me a long time ago when I was in highschool, don't wish away your years, time flies after you graduate!
What a great read!
Teresa
GRIEF (Poetry) - 9/2/2012 3:27:59 AM
I've been there many times, and this expresses that unfortunate experience very well. The ending is hopeful, and comforting to anyone passing through that place though! Very good poem, Donna.
Zach
CHAZ (Poetry) - 8/30/2012 8:12:18 AM
Very well told tale!
Enjoyed very much.
~Z.B.McClure 'Zach'
BEER (Poetry) - 8/30/2012 7:49:11 AM
Great poem, Love your imagination, which I can understand & connect with.. ~ Danny ~
My Military Men (Poetry) - 8/8/2012 7:16:12 AM
A serious reminder written in experience and dedication. Your imagery is a reminder of our freedom today and why we are privileged to write of things such as this without being censured..
Thank you Donna
God bless,
Sandy
High School Graduation (Poetry) - 7/29/2012 2:52:49 PM
Donna, what a fantastic tribute indeed!
Why Does He Love Her (Poetry) - 7/7/2012 10:26:23 AM
I love this poem Donna, I hope many men and women who love each other read this and tell and show that someone they love just how much they mean to them. God bless. Baz
My Military Men (Poetry) - 6/8/2012 7:56:06 PM
You make some valid points in your tribute through your verse here, Donna. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
High School Graduation (Poetry) - 6/4/2012 4:03:55 PM
Donna...what a nice keepsake poem for her and sentiments that ring so true for this beautiful young women. I hope her graduation party was a hit and a day she will never forget along with your poem written with love for her.
My Military Men (Poetry) - 6/2/2012 9:07:49 AM
I was married to a man who served for 29 years in hopes of retirement and a good life. Sadly Agent Orange took him away from me. Why I wrote A picture on the Pillow.
Thank you for this lovely tribute
Love and Light
Lily
OUR VALENTINE BABY GIRL (Poetry) - 5/31/2012 3:41:09 AM
Nice poem about your daughter. I too was born on Valentine's Day. And, so was my husband. ~Valerie~
CRUISING WITH A SMILE (Poetry) - 5/31/2012 3:30:00 AM
My husband and I have toss around the idea of taking a cruise. I will keep this poem in mind, if we go on one. Fun read. : )
BEER (Poetry) - 5/31/2012 3:18:32 AM
This has to be the best beer poem ever written. ~Valerie~
ALONE (Poetry) - 5/31/2012 3:07:46 AM
Loving tribute that is so gripping and sad. Your courage to move on and enjoy the next chapter in your life is inspiring. God bless.
~Valerie~
High School Graduation (Poetry) - 5/30/2012 2:56:34 AM
A wonderful and sage tribute Donna.
High School Graduation (Poetry) - 5/29/2012 7:58:06 AM
Sounds like this one is for real young woman. And she's very fortunate to receive such a beautiful poem on her big day.
Ron
High School Graduation (Poetry) - 5/29/2012 4:52:07 AM
Aw! What a lovely tribute for the graduate! Nicely done, Donna...
Anna
High School Graduation (Poetry) - 5/29/2012 3:01:47 AM
Very Nice inspiration for the one who is graduating. God Bless You!
John Michael
High School Graduation (Poetry) - 5/28/2012 8:44:23 PM
Very inspiring words for the young woman. I am confused regarding your relationship but whatever, having you in her corner will be a great asset.
Mark
High School Graduation (Poetry) - 5/28/2012 11:35:46 AM
Donna,
they grow up so fast, very good write she will like it.
Budd
High School Graduation (Poetry) - 5/28/2012 9:11:18 AM
She'll get a kick out of this, thanks sweetie. Dick
Have We Forgotten (Poetry) - 5/28/2012 8:19:34 AM
YOU ARE RIGHT! THE OLDER GENERATION SHOULD BE THE EXAMPLE SETTERS, INSTEAD MANY OF US...WERE, AND STILL ARE...TERRIBLE GUIDES. THANKS FOR THIS WELL DONE REMINDER. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Have We Forgotten (Poetry) - 5/28/2012 7:50:10 AM
A good lesson we should all remind ourselves about. When and work, my mind deep in some task to accomplish, I was often told that I didn't say “hello,” in passing or thank you when someone did something for me that I thought was rather routine.
Today, everyone is multitasking and human communication is broken down to the daily agenda and the cell phone. I was taught not to interrupt anyone on the phone. However, to wait for someone to get off the cell phone before you talk to them can present a very difficult problem. Don't you think?
Ron
Have We Forgotten (Poetry) - 5/28/2012 5:56:42 AM
I'd love to have been in line behind you. I'd have urged you to challenge her. "I'm sorry, but I'm in a hurry too. If you don't have time to go through the line properly, come back later. Now, either get your ass to the back of the line or put up your dukes.
I know you're too sweet to do that, but the more we allow these types of things to happen without challenging them, the worse it gets.... Perhaps screaming at the top of your lungs for security would have at least embarrassed her, but not without a certain amount of embarrassment coming your way too.
Of course, these comments come to you from a guy who wouldn't have said shit, if he'd had a mouth full.... You took the same course I probably would have taken. Put up with it, then rush home and write about it.
Nicely written, however. Dick
Have We Forgotten (Poetry) - 5/28/2012 5:52:07 AM
I hear you, Donna! People, for the most part, are just not pleasant to be around anymore...everyone's in such a rush they don't have time to be nice. Nicely done! (Personally, I'd rather be around animals most of the time)
Anna
Have We Forgotten (Poetry) - 5/27/2012 4:03:40 PM
Hey Donna,
Great poem! Now let's if YOU and I turn his old world around!
THE PLEASE PEOPLE POEM
"Please" is what you say
when things are not gong your way.
Holding a door is what you do
so you don't slam the person behind you.
"Thank you" is how you express
your gratitude for kindness.
A hug is a gentle way.
to "love" someone
when you just don't know what to say.
Amen!
copyright 2012, John Michael Domino
P.S. Send this to 100 folks and see if they don't get a stroke!
Amen
Have We Forgotten (Poetry) - 5/27/2012 2:04:19 PM
Very good and, sadly, so true poem (at least for today's generation), Donna. I'm amazed at the bad manners of the elderly lady. If she were in a hurry, what would have been so terrible to ask if she might "please" jump in line before you... This lady is an exception because I cannot believe that the people of our generation are so ill mannered. Personally, seeing as you do not really know me, I am 100% a "Please" a "thank you" and a "I'll get that door for you" kind of person.
Mark
Why Does He Love Her (Poetry) - 5/23/2012 8:57:30 AM
a question many men often shy away from...not because he doesn't love her but because...he does. thanks for share
asa
Why Does He Love Her (Poetry) - 5/6/2012 10:35:49 PM
faith and trust have a role to play herein...
blessings,
carolyn
Why Does He Love Her (Poetry) - 5/5/2012 8:16:25 AM
I so enjoyed this poem... Most of us women (and men too) have these questions, and probably know the answers, but when we are feeling vulnerable. they sometimes can get out of proportion in our heads. Regular good communication, and still acting as if love was new and fresh occasionally can help alot...
Best wishes, Diana..
Why Does He Love Her (Poetry) - 4/28/2012 9:57:52 AM
As long as there is communication...we all know the answers. But in the dark everyone stumbles looking for the lightswitch.
Why Does He Love Her (Poetry) - 4/26/2012 5:21:40 PM
I love this poem...And the answer is...Yes he does and Yes he should, but my guess is being a man he thinks she already knows.
Why Does He Love Her (Poetry) - 4/25/2012 3:23:00 AM
Communication is the key here, and the same can be said about him. Very very nice Donna all very straight forward questions. I like it.
Love and Light
Why Does He Love Her (Poetry) - 4/24/2012 9:32:31 AM
An old conundrum, well presented. We males find it hard to express our love, especially when it's expected and doesn't come.
Ron
Why Does He Love Her (Poetry) - 4/23/2012 12:49:36 PM
Women. Are good.
Men. Are not.
Why Does He Love Her (Poetry) - 4/23/2012 12:12:16 PM
An interesting and well thought out poem and as I read my mind couldn't help but thinking it could apply to either partner in a realationship. That being said I think if love is true it is always present even if sometimes we get absent minded and just need a gentle nudge now and then. Good write.
Why Does He Love Her (Poetry) - 4/23/2012 10:47:41 AM
So many questions that need to be answered in every romance! One shouldn't have to wonder if....nicely done, Donna! Enjoyed your style...
Anna
Merry Christmas 2011 (Poetry) - 4/16/2012 9:19:36 PM
Excellent poem and beautiful news all at once.
Merry Christmas 2011 (Poetry) - 4/14/2012 4:54:11 PM
That is quite a poem. May all your days be that enjoyable. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you
Merry Christmas 2011 (Poetry) - 3/28/2012 5:42:48 PM
What a lovely bright story of two lives well lived and with still many joys ahead.
POETICALLY CORRECT (Poetry) - 3/22/2012 8:10:28 AM
I was rifling through your listings and the title of this leapt out and grabbed me.
poetically correct or not, this tells a story from the soul and no-one can do more than that.
Merry Christmas 2011 (Poetry) - 2/27/2012 4:48:51 AM
Delightful news and a delightful, uplifting poem. Many congratulations! ~Elizabeth
Merry Christmas 2011 (Poetry) - 2/13/2012 8:01:22 AM
A delightfully written image of happiness where the house guest are you and hubby; isn't it funny how our pets allow us such leeway...;-)
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 2/6/2012 6:02:15 AM
love it! here in sunny so cal we seek shade where ever it can be had!
always use a sun shield & crack those windows!
you have an inspiring syle of expression, donna, and bring a merry
sun into one's day!
be well,
carolyn
My Military Men (Poetry) - 2/6/2012 5:57:44 AM
thank you for posting this very important reminder, donna! i come from
a family with a long record of men going off to war-beginning with the
revolutionary war right down to present day- i've two precious young
nephews serving in afghanistan at this moment.
bless you,
carolyn
MUSIC STARTS MY DAY (Poetry) - 2/6/2012 5:54:42 AM
much wisdom herein, donna! and you say it in such a bright, cheering
fashion; well done! being a life-long lover of music, i only recently
began to learn to play an instrument & enjoy that even more.
peace & blessings,
carolyn
Merry Christmas 2011 (Poetry) - 1/31/2012 9:17:48 PM
Sweet sentiments well-shared, Donna. Love and best wishes to both of you,
Regis
Merry Christmas 2011 (Poetry) - 1/22/2012 1:45:02 PM
I love your poem. It is like a Christmas newsletter in poem form. I hope you sent it to all your loved ones.
Sara
Merry Christmas 2011 (Poetry) - 12/21/2011 10:39:04 PM
A FINE WORK...FOR BY REFLECTING ON THOSE THINGS IN YOUR LIFE THAT MAKES YOU SO THANKFUL FOR 'CHRISTMAS'...ONE IS LED TO ALSO REFLECT ON THE BLESSINGS IN THEIR LIFE. AND I AM THANKFUL FOR THE MOST ENJOYED AND WIDELY CELEBRATED BIRTHDAY IN THE WORLD THAT CONNECTS ALL OF US IN 'HIS' LOVE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BY THE WAY...A GREAT PHOTO! LOVE, CONTINUED BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Merry Christmas 2011 (Poetry) - 12/21/2011 12:21:44 PM
Merry Christmas to you and Richard and your families. Wishing you both many more smiles in 2012 without a single tear in the mix.
Merry Christmas 2011 (Poetry) - 12/19/2011 1:31:49 PM
enjoyed this overview. congrats to both of you. happy holidays ... richard
Merry Christmas 2011 (Poetry) - 12/17/2011 9:29:13 AM
Many happy strands woven into this Christmas greeting!
Merry Christmas to you and yours,
Christine
Merry Christmas 2011 (Poetry) - 12/16/2011 9:37:13 AM
It's wonderful to know your life is going well...and you have expressed that with a lovely flair! Merry Christmas to you and yours too Donna!
Hugs,
Anna
Merry Christmas 2011 (Poetry) - 12/16/2011 5:41:11 AM
Nicely said, Sweetie. This pretty much covers all the bases. MERRY CHRISTMAS to you as well. Dick
Merry Christmas 2011 (Poetry) - 12/15/2011 11:52:49 PM
A wonderful creative poem - a tribute to your family.
Wishing you all the BEST!
Pray for your happiness!
Have a Merry CHRISTmas and the BEST New Year ever!
John Michael Domino
Merry Christmas 2011 (Poetry) - 12/15/2011 10:31:10 PM
Lovely poem.
And a merry Christmas and happy New Year to you, too.
Mark
CHAZ (Poetry) - 12/12/2011 9:00:08 AM
Cute poem. Fun to read. The love of a dog is hard to beat.
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 12/12/2011 8:56:09 AM
A lesson that's really useful in Florida! Enjoyable read. Blessings.
FAT CALORIES (Poetry) - 11/20/2011 9:59:38 PM
I count calories until I run out of fingers. By then they're stuck in the pie. Patrick
FAT CALORIES (Poetry) - 11/16/2011 6:01:39 PM
I like the capitalization in your title that shouts at you, but be careful to not use it too much in titles for some, it takes away from the talent I see in your words that are, let us say delicious.
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 11/14/2011 12:16:42 PM
~*Donna*~ Amazing how simple
pleasures bring so much happiness..
so, thanks for your words of wisdom.
Lady Vivian
also thanks you for visiting my site
and leaving such a nice comment.
MATCH.COM (Poetry) - 11/10/2011 3:01:05 AM
Well I am happy for you and I wish you both the best
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 11/7/2011 3:58:37 PM
Delightfully shared and appreciated from this end, Donna. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 11/6/2011 1:35:49 PM
I've enjoyed this well composed piece very much,
when I park in the sun, the whole inside of the car is hot
"super hot"........then Again, I must be doing something wrong.....
Love & Peace be with you
William
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 10/30/2011 11:40:06 PM
Thanks for the advice Danna, Lovely poem,
Thank you for sharing.
Regards, Steve
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 10/27/2011 9:45:20 AM
"Park Your Butt" 'So your steering wheel won't get hot.' It's a lesson indeed, Doona. Thanks!
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 10/24/2011 4:44:47 PM
Great wisdom from your Precious Mother, Dear Donna!!
She lives on through your heart and poem..
Thank you dearly for sharing........ our lives are enlivened and enriched as a consequence.. we'll be thinking about you and your Mum when parking the advised way for very good reason!
With Love and Deep Gratitude,
Suzie xox :-D
My Military Men (Poetry) - 10/16/2011 5:09:30 PM
Super Donna! Loved the poem about the military. Spent 24 yrs. in the USAF. Many fond memories but the BEST is yet to come! Amen!
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 10/16/2011 5:07:12 PM
Hey Donna - great write! I will not forget this one! BTW I live in Fla too. It's the BEST place to be, that is for me! Amen
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 10/14/2011 6:01:57 AM
Hah! Love it! This is so cute and clever. Good advice for all. I'll remember it! ~Hugs, Elizabeth
FAT CALORIES (Poetry) - 10/1/2011 3:06:36 AM
What an interesting way to look at it! If they aren't FAT calories...they must be SKILLY calories! Too funny!
Casey
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 9/28/2011 10:06:32 AM
Donna,
Loved it! And in Arizona, we have to do the same thing. Wonderful play on words.
Mary
GRIEF (Poetry) - 9/27/2011 3:01:46 PM
Having recently lost my father, I understand this well. Sadly, everyone will go through this grief and will come to understand it first-hand, the loss of someone you love hurts to the very core and nothing can change it. But there is hope when there is caring. Emotional piece. ~Best, Elizabeth
GRIEF (Poetry) - 9/27/2011 4:58:01 AM
Donna,
AMEN to this preceptive poem. Most of us have been there, I have many times. God has always got me through all my trials, Donna.
Many blessings,
~Linda
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 9/27/2011 4:55:17 AM
Donna,
Enjoy this! Brought me back to memories of my Mom. I lost her years ago but the missing never stops.
Many blessings,
~Linda
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 9/17/2011 9:23:21 AM
Gotta love it.
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 9/11/2011 1:20:41 PM
This is a cute poem. Gave me a bit of a chuckle. May God bless you every day of your life.
Daniel
GRIEF (Poetry) - 9/2/2011 6:31:43 AM
Beautiful Donna, The halls of grief are long and made of the hardest stone. Unknownto he who is the griever, as is a great wound, 'tis the place from where our healing starts.
GRIEF (Poetry) - 8/31/2011 4:22:48 PM
Makes me sad and want to share your grief. Just remember that when we feel most alone, that's when we realize that we are never alone, hard as it is to feel.
Chip Bergeron
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 8/26/2011 6:24:56 PM
I like your mom's lesson better than my mom's. If mine said park your butt it was her polite version of sit your a** down.
Janna
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 8/23/2011 8:27:51 PM
Cute Donna, sure gave me a chuckle and a lesson I will need to remember...
Be always safe,
Karen
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 8/22/2011 4:29:40 AM
Giggle....very wise woman, your Mother! Cute story, Donna!
Anna
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 8/21/2011 7:39:48 AM
I knew your mom. Funny she never mentioned this to me. I'm thinking she liked your butt better than mine, could that be?...
This one is definitely a keeper, like it, nicely done. Dick
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 8/20/2011 4:39:01 PM
Uh huh..........it's wicked hot, and if you have pladtic seasts, your butt sticks to them. No fun!!~!
ChIP Bergrton
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 8/20/2011 3:39:37 PM
Love this...guess my Mom didn't tell me cause she never drove...lol..Sue
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 8/20/2011 2:35:23 PM
Good advice from dear old mom, especially on these hot summer days! Well done, Donna!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 8/20/2011 10:46:11 AM
Your Mom gave good, sound advice. Thanks for the reminder.
Connie
PARK YOUR BUTT (Poetry) - 8/20/2011 6:55:57 AM
I love this! I laughed too...great poem
GRIEF (Poetry) - 8/19/2011 9:10:12 AM
Such an amazing poem, with words so true, It sure is a lonely road, was the anniversary of my boyfriends death this week, I am not in contact with his family or anyone who knew him to grieve with. Have felt unbearably alone. Your story gives me a glimpse of hope though, thank you for writing such a sensitive poem. God bless. Baz
LISTENING TO YOU SLEEP (Poetry) - 8/18/2011 7:07:50 PM
What a beautiful tribute to your sweetheart. I can relate.
Janna
GREEN BOLOGNA (Poetry) - 8/18/2011 6:55:13 PM
What a cute little ditty and how nice to remember your sister with such humor.
Janna
GRIEF (Poetry) - 8/18/2011 5:09:36 PM
ONLY ONE WHO HAS PERSONALLY EXPERIENCED IT, COULD DO JUSTICE TO THE DESCRIPTION OF THIS VERY HARD STATE. BUT THANK GOD, YOUR LAST TWO LINES GIVES ONE A HOPE OF THE AGES...FOR JUST AROUND THE BEND, THERE IS LIGHT! SUPERBLY DONE! THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
GRIEF (Poetry) - 8/17/2011 4:00:25 PM
The elements of grief so very eloquently captured in your words, Donna.....only one who has grieved can truly understand...Very well done!
Anna
GRIEF (Poetry) - 8/17/2011 11:15:43 AM
Well versed with the deep pain that we all experience and in many cases how it changes our lives and perspective forever...
Be always safe,
Karen
GRIEF (Poetry) - 8/17/2011 9:42:35 AM
Nicely done & well said.
Grief most definitely is a lonely road, but good friends help to lessen the burden.
Thank you for always being there. Dick
GRIEF (Poetry) - 8/17/2011 2:49:51 AM
Grief is a Lonely Road - how so very true. And coming out of it, is always a blessing.
GRIEF (Poetry) - 8/16/2011 1:41:07 PM
Grief is a lonely road but I always took comfort in the fact that if the death made me so sad then I must have loved and been loved by them very much.
fee
GRIEF (Poetry) - 8/16/2011 9:36:37 AM
Beautiful words my friend!
Hugs and Blessings
GRIEF (Poetry) - 8/16/2011 9:32:54 AM
Yep. There is always a light, you just have to search for it, hold back and wait for it, or make a light of your own. However you choose the light will always be there for you.
Nice poem. Excellent wordplay.
LISTENING TO YOU SLEEP (Poetry) - 8/12/2011 10:11:00 AM
Wow such a beautiful poem, Been listening to the song by ronan keating "if tommorow never comes" with the lines that he watches her sleeping so moving, my boyfriend said he could watch me sleeping for hours, it really touched me but was kind of odd to think of someone watching you when you are not aware. God bless. Baz
DON'T (Poetry) - 8/12/2011 10:05:05 AM
Now there is some good advice, great poem and so so true, its hard to stand by your own desisions sometimes, thanks for inspiring me to do so. God bless. Baz
MY RAINBOW (Poetry) - 8/12/2011 10:00:54 AM
I loved this poem, it really moved me and stirred in me a little hope. I love rainbows and the rainbow was a symbol of my love to steve (my rainbow) who died recently. Thank you for writing and sharing such a beautiful poem. God bless. Baz
My Military Men (Poetry) - 7/30/2011 4:05:55 PM
It's so hard for wives and children who see their men go off to war. And not only men, women too. How much better the world would be without war. Good poem Donna. Thank you for reading my poem.
DON'T (Poetry) - 7/27/2011 4:13:12 PM
The moral of these words
is to trust your own decisions.
Turn a blind eye and deaf ear
to potential criticisms.
I appreciate the philosophy and advice that you have shared through your verses, Donna. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
CRUISING WITH A SMILE (Poetry) - 7/9/2011 8:09:11 PM
heheeeee...its so hilarious, enjoyed it..very beautifully expressed...my sweetie's my teenage son and my teenage daughter eats off his head by her chirpiness..lol :)good wishes.neerja
MUSIC STARTS MY DAY (Poetry) - 7/9/2011 7:59:27 PM
beautiful, very nice...loved it, enjoyed the poem and totally agree.. :)neerja
MY RAINBOW (Poetry) - 6/27/2011 10:35:53 AM
I like the way you've taken God's rainbow and made it personal. This is a WONDERFUL poem of hope and perseverance, Donna. The Lord has been good to you.
~Z.B.McClure
My Military Men (Poetry) - 6/27/2011 10:30:52 AM
A very powerful, heart moving poetic tribute that seems to march before us with a majestic cadence of its own. I was a military man, and I salute your dad and husband's noble service. You remind us of those who remain back at the home front. Very fitting indeed.
~Z.B.McClure
FAT CALORIES (Poetry) - 6/21/2011 9:56:02 AM
This dieting thing seems to be on almost everyone's mind. I enjoyed your poem about it. Made me smile.
My Military Men (Poetry) - 6/19/2011 6:02:01 AM
A beautiful tribute to our servicemen and your husband and father. May God bless you every day of your life.
Daniel
ALONE (Poetry) - 6/13/2011 11:24:08 AM
Donna, This is so beautifully penned! Excellent description of pain and how life goes on despite it all! Blessings...Frances
DEAR SANTA (Poetry) - 6/8/2011 2:20:21 PM
Awwww, I hope you gave your guy a copy of this touching poem. It's just right. Well done, Donna.
Hugs,
CJ
FAT CALORIES (Poetry) - 6/8/2011 2:18:03 PM
OMG, this is adorable, Donna! (I love how your mind works, girl)
Hugs,
CJ
My Military Men (Poetry) - 6/2/2011 9:04:00 AM
Well written indeed sweet lady...Hugsss
DON'T (Poetry) - 6/1/2011 2:27:17 PM
The moral...so excellently said, Donna!
The contraction "Don't" broken down is "do not" which
can be considered 50/50 "do" or "not"...to each his own.
Lady Vivian
My Military Men (Poetry) - 6/1/2011 7:57:53 AM
What a wonderful tribute to the military men in your life! Thank you for pointing out the people who are left behind at home; as a former military wife, I know first hand how difficult it is to carry on while dad is gone, putting on a brave front while mom has her fears for the future. Your poem touched my heart and made me smile... a great feat for a poet to accomplish! Joy L. Hale
DON'T (Poetry) - 5/20/2011 1:17:59 PM
Great advice, Donna. I struck out on my own also, but unfortunately my way was the highway and trouble loomed. Thanks for the read of my short story, "The Operation." Yes, the ending wasn't quite . . . er . . . normal.
CRUISING WITH A SMILE (Poetry) - 5/16/2011 9:47:56 AM
Hahaha! We just got back from a Western Caribbean cruise aboard Allure of the Seas with a group of 40 fellow Canadians, and many of them also "hid" booze in their luggage. We figured that since we're not the type to drink all day anyway (we had a couple of drinks each day)...it wasn't worth the worry to sneak booze onboard. Many of them did, and they didn't get caught either.But some of them got caught on other cruises and had to do the "walk of shame"...giggle.....
Anna
FAT CALORIES (Poetry) - 5/16/2011 9:44:21 AM
Giggle.....don't diet....try Zumba! I absolutely LOVE it! And you burn 600 to 800 calories per hour. Lively latin music, latin dancing....it's awesome! Diet schmiet!!! giggle
Anna
DON'T (Poetry) - 5/16/2011 9:42:08 AM
Truth! I think family and friends only have our best interests in mind, but they sometimes forget we "do" have our own minds. Enjoyed this, Donna!
Anna
MUSIC STARTS MY DAY (Poetry) - 5/16/2011 9:39:35 AM
I do exactly the same thing, Donna. Ever since I was a child I awakened every morning with a different song in my head that I proceeded to sing throughout the day! I can't explain it! But ... giggle....my grown-up daughter recently admitted to me that now she does the same thing...genetics? Music is life, love and laughter for me....Loved this uplifting poem! Just found out about you in one of Richard's poetry comments. Glad I did!
Anna
DON'T (Poetry) - 5/5/2011 7:12:47 PM
A gal's gotta do what a gal's gotta do regardless of what anyone says.
Chip Bergeron
DON'T (Poetry) - 5/4/2011 4:17:52 PM
The moral is wise to say the least.
DON'T (Poetry) - 4/30/2011 11:02:26 AM
Think you probably forgot some don’ts between the "...Don't sign up for internet dating..." one and the "...Don't move in with that A--hole." one, but then again, who's counting?
Enjoyed this one, Sweetie. Thanks Dick
DON'T (Poetry) - 4/29/2011 2:25:36 PM
Yes, I think life is about making decisions on our own, we can listen and hear what others think but basically we must make our own choices for better or worst. You go girl...
fee
DON'T (Poetry) - 4/29/2011 7:51:54 AM
You should always make your own adult decisions. If you are in GOD's grace only good will come from it. Excellent writing, Donna.
Namaste
Tony
DON'T (Poetry) - 4/29/2011 6:43:17 AM
Donna, two things come to mind that could be true. One, the first words children hear is "No"...I've thought what a strange concept to start a child's thinking with a negative word. Two, as we age we discover that the reason we've reached where we are in life is because we go through a constant process of starting over, making "Life" a real adventure. You have provided wise thinking in your words.
Cheers,
Dan
DON'T (Poetry) - 4/29/2011 6:29:35 AM
nice write. Morgan
DON'T (Poetry) - 4/29/2011 6:14:18 AM
DITTO .... very well said sweet lady...stay safe and well..Hugsss
MUSIC STARTS MY DAY (Poetry) - 4/23/2011 3:41:03 AM
Music does make the day brighter ;0)
MUSIC STARTS MY DAY (Poetry) - 4/22/2011 4:12:16 PM
Donna - Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem - music definitely heals one's heart of pain.
God Bless You,
Deborah
MUSIC STARTS MY DAY (Poetry) - 4/22/2011 2:16:23 PM
Wonderfully uplifting write Donna, well done.\fee
MUSIC STARTS MY DAY (Poetry) - 4/22/2011 1:23:04 PM
...and here all this time, I thought that was me making your toes tap, now I'm getting curious about all that moaning.... er, humming....
Nicely done girl. Thanks Dick
MUSIC STARTS MY DAY (Poetry) - 4/22/2011 11:08:01 AM
I love music, and I love singing....I will often times catch myself inattentively crroning a ditty from long ago I thought I had forgotten. Unfortunately, some of my friends always suggest I sing "tenor...." ten or twelve miles away! I ingorew them...
Chip Bergeron
MUSIC STARTS MY DAY (Poetry) - 4/22/2011 10:42:02 AM
Music you enjoy is indeed one of life's pleasures. Thanks for sharing.
Namaste
Tony
MUSIC STARTS MY DAY (Poetry) - 4/22/2011 9:46:04 AM
Super! Music is essential!
Blessings,
Christine
MUSIC STARTS MY DAY (Poetry) - 4/22/2011 8:44:23 AM
So true, Donna. Music can be very therapeutic. Thanks for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Regis
SHE WAS HIS GIRL (Poetry) - 4/16/2011 4:47:54 AM
Read like a wonderful song....beautiful indeed.
fee
SHE WAS HIS GIRL (Poetry) - 4/15/2011 12:39:33 PM
Heartfelt and poignant.
Namaste
Tony
CHAZ (Poetry) - 4/15/2011 7:11:02 AM
Talk about a "DOGS LIFE" - Would that we all could have this much love flowing our way, but then again, I'd probably get in trouble if every time my "master" left me alone I slipped over to the neighbor lady. Good one girl.
Thanks Dick
SHE WAS HIS GIRL (Poetry) - 4/15/2011 7:03:38 AM
Sweet lady, this is a truly fantastic write. I agree with Chip, the memories you've shared with this and earlier postings speak to the healing you have managed to accomplish and the sweetness of those memories. Nicely done.
Thanks Dick
SHE WAS HIS GIRL (Poetry) - 4/15/2011 6:09:56 AM
A heart touching American love story Donna.
SHE WAS HIS GIRL (Poetry) - 4/14/2011 5:42:21 PM
Tears cannot wash away these loving lines, Donna, and
he'll forever be your guy. -gene.
SHE WAS HIS GIRL (Poetry) - 4/14/2011 4:03:44 PM
Wow! Great story of love! May the memories always guide you.
Peace,
Dayvid
SHE WAS HIS GIRL (Poetry) - 4/14/2011 9:18:24 AM
Unfortunately, that's all too familiar a story. I wish it didn't have to be so. At leasst there will be memories to go with the tears. The sorriest person is thenone who has tears but no memories to sweeten them.
Chip Bergeron
FAT CALORIES (Poetry) - 3/26/2011 10:41:23 AM
I enjoyed this humerous little poem....M
CHAZ (Poetry) - 3/26/2011 10:36:37 AM
I really enjoyed the poem about Chaz. Animals need love and affection if ony for a short time...Its good you are there to help...M
CHAZ (Poetry) - 3/24/2011 10:19:33 AM
Dogs love company but are ever faithful to their owners. Great poem on this subject/
George
CHAZ (Poetry) - 3/19/2011 9:52:43 AM
You have become his adopted mommy." HE adopted you...
Chip Bergeron
CHAZ (Poetry) - 3/18/2011 6:09:20 PM
What a beutiful pup and your words are so endearing. Yup, they are loyal and the best is when they put their head on your lap in the evening, sooooo relaxing...
Be always safe,
Karen
CHAZ (Poetry) - 3/18/2011 5:33:06 PM
great poem! I have a dog in my neighborhood like that.....Morgan
CHAZ (Poetry) - 3/17/2011 2:08:51 PM
I love dogs and understand exactly what you are saying. Mine is named Zoe.
CHAZ (Poetry) - 3/17/2011 10:44:21 AM
Cute poem. It is hard for me to call a dog an animal but, they are not humans although they have more personality than some humans and they are almost always cute and so hard to resist cuddling. Great poem.
GREEN BOLOGNA (Poetry) - 3/5/2011 5:20:04 PM
I am not a big poetry fan, but I liked that.
FAT CALORIES (Poetry) - 2/26/2011 12:58:28 AM
A piece that we all understand! We women become experts very quickly..I've counted calories since I was eighteen years old...Loved it!
Best wishes, Diana..
FAT CALORIES (Poetry) - 2/15/2011 6:26:12 AM
Great writing ,,enjoyed..Hugss
FAT CALORIES (Poetry) - 2/12/2011 4:28:30 PM
Well, you certainly have a knack at discerning the calorie facts. No one can deny that you ate 40 skinny calories. Keep up the good work!
Connie
FAT CALORIES (Poetry) - 2/12/2011 12:27:33 PM
Donna,
Cute poem. I'm sure we've all broken our New Year's resolutions to lose weight by now. Me too! Take care.
Mary
FAT CALORIES (Poetry) - 2/12/2011 10:20:05 AM
What a great concept, maybe you'll be on Oprah's next week, please remember us little people...(smiling)
Cheers,
Dan
FAT CALORIES (Poetry) - 2/11/2011 5:43:40 PM
Smart thinking, Donna. Thank you for sharing this delightful and unique perspective. Love and best wishes,
Regis
FAT CALORIES (Poetry) - 2/11/2011 3:55:47 PM
that's everyday math that works for me :) ~ Morgan
FAT CALORIES (Poetry) - 2/11/2011 3:42:48 PM
Can't argue with that logic, do that every day and in a week you're up to 280 skinny calories. NOW YOU'RE TALKING!!!! THH
Dick
FAT CALORIES (Poetry) - 2/11/2011 3:37:19 PM
You know I think the fat in calories is all a scam! There is no proof of anyone die because of fat in calories. JMHO.
Namaste
GREEN BOLOGNA (Poetry) - 2/9/2011 10:47:02 AM
I actually ate green bologna once. But I was in my twenties and should have known better. I didn't need the soap to achieve the same result. Duh. Patrick
GREEN BOLOGNA (Poetry) - 2/9/2011 8:38:32 AM
Nicely written, sweet lady. I happen to know that she was your only sibling and, even after all these years, how much you still miss her. Being skilled enough to put those thoughts on paper would seem to help. So too, does the fact that you have two loving kids who maintain contact on a daily basis. (your daughter for seemingly hours every day.) You've a lot to be thankful for. (and so do I) Thanks for sharing your life with me. Dick
GREEN BOLOGNA (Poetry) - 2/8/2011 10:15:43 AM
Donna,
That was so funny...yet so sorrowful at the end. I wasn't logged in, but had to tell you what I thought of this fantastic family tale. I still have tears in my eyes from the ending.
Mary
GREEN BOLOGNA (Poetry) - 2/8/2011 10:09:36 AM
It is so unfair to lose a sibling younger than you. I miss my sisters too but for a different reason. It seems Anita was your pride and joy sister, a pain, a sweetheart, someone to talk to, someone to play with. Take the good memories and run with them, and just laugh be happy because that is what she would want you to be. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister, Barbie
GREEN BOLOGNA (Poetry) - 2/8/2011 4:44:57 AM
Oh my ...like chip said I was also only child..sure was missing something..wonderful writing sweet lady..Hugss
CRUISING WITH A SMILE (Poetry) - 2/6/2011 7:31:54 PM
o.k! I snuck a soda bottle into the movies ...........ruined my entire bag and everything in it. (my life isn't as exciting). Morgan
GREEN BOLOGNA (Poetry) - 2/4/2011 11:41:52 AM
I was an only child....I know i missed something....
God bless,
Chip Bergeron
