But Who Is She? (Book) - 5/24/2005 8:54:22 PM
A wonderful and honest reflection on a truly beautfil person. Nothing is hidden but everything is emotive, personal and touching. I am so proud to know you Miss Maria and the biggest cuddle is in store for you when we finally meet. xxxx
But Who Is She? (Book) - 4/19/2005 3:18:10 AM
Congratulations on your new book. You have a gift of writing that touches something in all of us. Keep up the good work!
Dear Grandma (Short Story) - 6/5/2009 12:01:10 AM
This is a beautiful piece of writing. Reading it made me think about my own grandmother and brought a tear to my eye. It is quite difficult to cope with the loss of the people that mean a lot to us. Yet, their memories will be cherished for an eternity and will never die.
Big Guy (Short Story) - 9/13/2006 4:25:16 PM
Marie
Very well written, and full of interest and content
I can see why you have been published !
Kudos to you !
Peter
Big Guy (Short Story) - 9/13/2006 8:17:36 AM
Sweet story, very well done! :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D
Contented (Poetry) - 10/6/2012 6:26:14 AM
Contentment valued at its finest! If we all could appreciate what contentment feels like in these times! Very beautiful poem Maria. I love it! Thanks for the share. Blessings to you!
Debbie
Magic (Poetry) - 10/6/2012 6:13:24 AM
Ah, the magic of love fulfills the soul! Very Beautiful Maria! Blessings to you! :)
Debbie
Love Affair (Poetry) - 11/20/2007 9:11:10 PM
beautiful poetry
A Bed of Four-Leaf Covers (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 11:13:15 AM
This is a poem of deep emotion and passion-exceptional!!
Another Poem About Love (Poetry) - 9/4/2007 8:24:14 PM
Well done and they make no laws against love and kindness.
God Bless You and Your Loved Ones
The Christian Cop
A Moment Passed (Poetry) - 6/1/2007 7:07:47 AM
know the feelings here well
enjoyed this much
A Moment Passed (Poetry) - 5/29/2007 5:24:52 PM
An then you were forced to wake up to reality......Enjoyed.
Be safe,
Karen
A Fallen Poet (Poetry) - 3/27/2007 4:41:12 AM
Maria,
You definitely got the poet in you.
A Fallen Poet (Poetry) - 3/26/2007 10:20:36 PM
Awwwwww, so very sad. By the grace of God and the morning sunlight it will all return again. Well written, never give up!
Be safe,
Karen
A Fallen Poet (Poetry) - 3/26/2007 8:04:40 PM
Your view of a loss of thought and the power to write is a well displayed expression of poetry...and poet...
nice work.....Art Sun...
A Fallen Poet (Poetry) - 3/26/2007 6:49:22 PM
I enjoyed this poem.
Love Affair (Poetry) - 3/6/2007 11:51:26 AM
Lovely analogies, Maria; this is a sweet poem. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,
Regis
The Need to Feel Beautiful (Poetry) - 3/6/2007 11:49:51 AM
You portray the character of the individual (you?) very effectively in these verses, Maria. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis
A chill to cushion my fall... (Poetry) - 3/4/2007 11:49:42 AM
Your poetry gives on so m uch meaning that you have to recieve positive feedback from all that review. Thanks for sharing with me and many others here on the lovely Den.
The Need to Feel Beautiful (Poetry) - 2/26/2007 7:53:39 PM
yeah sounds like trult close
the latter part anyway
help her
nice share!!!
The Need to Feel Beautiful (Poetry) - 2/24/2007 11:40:59 AM
Maria
Very nice sentiments and emotions expressed succintly and concisely
You have a nice easy flowing style..:D
Trust yourself...First and Foremost..
God Bless
Peter
The Need to Feel Beautiful (Poetry) - 2/24/2007 6:26:02 AM
Maria,
These five lines say sooooo much. I think maybe we have to learn to trust ourselves, before we can learn to trust others. They say that practice makes perfect..so I'm still practicing myself.
Lisa
Love Affair (Poetry) - 2/22/2007 6:01:37 AM
Ow~~~nice
yeah AD have had their share here
steamy ones
really cool
Love Affair (Poetry) - 2/20/2007 7:02:54 AM
Soft flow of a poetess to nurture this creation for all readers to enjoy,Sensual write my friend,loved it,
Michael
Love Affair (Poetry) - 2/19/2007 8:50:55 PM
Your poem reflects well the expression of a love entwined within words of creations and whispers that place one within the bedded desires of a poetic romance....
nicely penned poetry.....enjoyed....Art Sun...
For a Time of Remembrance (Poetry) - 2/13/2007 5:49:47 AM
How bloody tragic and sad, may you soon find lasting peace...
For a Time of Remembrance (Poetry) - 2/12/2007 8:51:59 PM
Very moving testament to a daughters love.
A Fortune Cookie Reading (Poetry) - 1/25/2007 7:40:57 PM
Funny how fortunes are found within the simplicity of ...numbers...nice thought...
enjoyed.....Art Sun...
Two Months, Two Years (Poetry) - 1/25/2007 7:39:36 PM
Looking back through the memories one finds that at times one wishes for nothing to have changed...
sad, yet nice work.....Art Sun...
Two Months, Two Years (Poetry) - 10/16/2006 11:34:09 AM
Moving and profound. Thank you for sharing this.
Two Months, Two Years (Poetry) - 10/12/2006 1:45:30 AM
Can never turn the clock back, but one can and must rewind it..
A Moment (Poetry) - 9/14/2006 7:24:21 PM
Romantically engaging, Maria. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis
To the One Who Comforts Me (Poetry) - 9/14/2006 7:23:04 PM
Lovely thoughts; a gift to the one for whom they are meant. Thank you for sharing them, Maria. Love and peace,
Regis
Of Angels (Poetry) - 9/14/2006 7:21:55 PM
Beautiful sentiments to the recipient of such verses, Maria. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Sweet Dreams (Poetry) - 7/1/2006 6:08:17 PM
Very lovely!
A Moment (Poetry) - 6/2/2006 2:33:39 AM
Gentle, sorf and smooth, an adults lullaby
A Moment (Poetry) - 6/1/2006 7:37:12 AM
Maria
A sweet and romantic write...
You have undoubted literary talent...
Peter
Kiss My Neck (Poetry) - 11/22/2005 3:51:59 AM
Maria,
A kiss on the neck gives me the shivers. I'm getting goosebumps just thinking about it. Brief write yet very effective.
Kiss My Neck (Poetry) - 11/21/2005 5:30:56 PM
Ah ho. I used to believe this once upon a long ago.
Forgotten Lyrics (Poetry) - 9/8/2005 1:12:30 PM
You can feel the loneliness in this, yet that inter-connectedness that comes when souls meet in this life- and no, it seems we can never erase that in our hearts and minds-good poem.
To Every Lover (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 12:44:10 PM
Blimey. Very well said. I too never believed, but sure as hell do now. And it is, if not more than..
I'm the luckiest bloke on this planet. To be sure...
To Every Lover (Poetry) - 8/7/2005 3:36:32 PM
I am, thank you for this beautiful, loving poem, I cannot agree with you more:)
Secret Love Messages (Poetry) - 7/12/2005 7:20:31 AM
And I promise
For as long as I shall live
It will never stop spinning.
Just for you!
wonderful write...love n luck...BHUWAN!!!
Secret Love Messages (Poetry) - 7/7/2005 5:29:47 PM
Love is all! You express this theme most eloquently in your verses, Maria. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Secret Love Messages (Poetry) - 7/7/2005 1:05:30 PM
Your on top with this poem
A spinning Top
Secret Love Messages (Poetry) - 7/6/2005 3:39:29 AM
Maria,
It's always good to see a familiar face! and what a lovely one it is!
Your writing always inspired me, and your presence here was always warm and inviting. Welcome home!
Lisa
Hero-Like (Poetry) - 7/2/2005 5:44:55 PM
and is this nice looking young man Chris? nice tribute Maria
I Hate Myself (Poetry) - 7/1/2005 5:25:01 AM
Maria,
We definitely have to start with ourselves but never sell yourself short. We always have strengths which we don't see. Not to repeat Sandra but there are always others worst off than we are.
I Hate Myself (Poetry) - 7/1/2005 1:19:14 AM
I like what Sandra said, I think we all feel this way at one time or another, but I liked how you wrote this and captured that feeling so very well in this well written poem.
Reindeer
I Hate Myself (Poetry) - 6/30/2005 11:38:47 PM
I'm sorry you feel this way about your self, my dear, but you should know your Creator never made any mistakes on you, Maria. Everything is where its supposed to be. Illness - most us us have one illness, disability or another, but we should count the blessings that come our way and be thankful. The next person with the same disability maybe doesn't have the funds to even buy some bread; another doesn't have the love and support from family; the next doesn't have your kind of talent to keep her busy, smile and release some tension.
Being emotional is beautiful - it means you feel! Being a writer is beautiful - we learn a lot through you. You have so much to love and be thankful for! If you thought before you spoke you'd be careful and hold back what you are feeling. Silly but true.
God bless,
Sandie.
Cycle (Poetry) - 4/19/2005 3:15:37 AM
I embrace the cycle of love. Fantastic write. Thanks for sharing it.
Realizations (Poetry) - 4/19/2005 3:12:37 AM
There is maturity within each line. Thanks for sharing your gift with us.
Just Love (Poetry) - 8/2/2004 4:49:12 PM
love is a beautiful thing...i am happy you have found that out. i love this simplicity...its just....LOVE. no sugar coating, no pissing around it, it is just love.
very nice. :D
Missing A Kiss (Poetry) - 7/11/2004 6:09:10 AM
This is so romantic, just lovely poetry.
Missing A Kiss (Poetry) - 7/10/2004 11:39:29 AM
LOts of magic you have posted here. Kiss and when we need sometimes just the kiss is all our mind, soul, and heart really needs to bring us the warmth our body needs.
Very nice write
Tommy
Missing A Kiss (Poetry) - 7/9/2004 6:37:18 AM
a great feeling penned well.
Missing A Kiss (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 7:09:46 PM
A magical moment comes to life.
~ Sandie May Angel ~
Fantasy (Poetry) - 6/29/2004 5:48:04 PM
This is precious with a hint of excitment.
Forget Me Not (Poetry) - 6/7/2004 12:12:56 PM
Well expressed emotive and meaningul verses. Thank you, Maria. Love and peace to you. Regis
Forget Me Not (Poetry) - 5/22/2004 7:09:07 PM
Lots of truth and emotion in this warm tribute.
Forget Me Not (Poetry) - 5/19/2004 9:35:06 PM
emotive and intense ...
Forget Me Not (Poetry) - 5/19/2004 6:51:06 PM
This was very beautiful, lovely and deeply moving,
Reindeer
Forget Me Not (Poetry) - 5/19/2004 6:35:52 PM
a really great poem.
Violent echoing (Poetry) - 5/11/2004 6:29:59 PM
These echoes? Very mysterious. A storm? A neighbor involved in spousal abuse? Basketball players on a cement court?
Violent echoing (Poetry) - 5/11/2004 6:22:58 PM
So true Maria, this speaks volumes in so few lines. Well said.
Allen
Missing Out (Poetry) - 5/11/2004 4:56:59 PM
wonderful poem maria
Missing Out (Poetry) - 5/11/2004 4:20:38 PM
Love the form. You've made an old theme fresh. Excellent job.
Expressions (Poetry) - 4/3/2004 7:33:04 AM
expressed quite lucidly ...
Quiet nights like these (Poetry) - 3/25/2004 11:35:36 AM
I keep thinking of barefeet on hardwood in orange light after reading this. Very nice Maria.
Quiet nights like these (Poetry) - 3/24/2004 11:30:15 AM
Maria, very peaceful and romantic..quite a lovely write. Lisa
Quiet nights like these (Poetry) - 3/24/2004 6:49:59 AM
Well, now we know how you spell relief.
Quiet nights like these (Poetry) - 3/24/2004 1:29:08 AM
This has a peaceful feeling. Nicely done.
Quiet nights like these (Poetry) - 3/23/2004 9:52:43 PM
It all combines with the flow
Of succulent purity
With a touch of beauty
wonderful poem ...
Following Dreams (Poetry) - 3/18/2004 12:43:54 PM
very well done. well crafted.
Wandering Hands (Poetry) - 2/15/2004 4:14:56 PM
Sensually very lovely! Thank you for sharing this offering, Maria. Love and peace to you. Regis
Wandering Hands (Poetry) - 2/10/2004 4:42:30 AM
Well done, very passionate and sensually soft.
Wandering Hands (Poetry) - 2/8/2004 3:31:56 AM
Lot's of passion in this write! Very sultry and sexy. Excellently written Maria..Lisa
A Bed of Four-Leaf Covers (Poetry) - 2/7/2004 9:09:48 PM
A longing and heartfelt piece! Really good!
Wandering Hands (Poetry) - 2/7/2004 9:07:20 PM
Very nice writing! A vivid fantasy, good flow!
Wandering Hands (Poetry) - 2/7/2004 8:24:50 PM
This is so beautiful I love all of the stanzas romantic....
Wandering Hands (Poetry) - 2/7/2004 8:18:08 PM
Certainly a powerful write. Calve should be calf though.
Wandering Hands (Poetry) - 2/7/2004 8:04:33 PM
Count yer lucky stars, m'darlin'. There are people who can do all that with just their feet.
Okay, smart ass comment aside, I was impressed by the power of your passion. I read this and then saw your bio. You're only 16? Most poets that age may not have the guts to put so much strength in their work. That you can and do is a testament to the strength of your soul. Write on, my friend.
A Bed of Four-Leaf Covers (Poetry) - 12/31/2003 7:54:56 AM
I know this feeling. You said what I would like too. But can't. I'm not that brave. Good write. Lisa
A Bed of Four-Leaf Covers (Poetry) - 12/30/2003 11:11:42 PM
Nice to be young and in love. Nice to be old and in love. Nice to be in love. Best wishes and Happy New Year.
A Bed of Four-Leaf Covers (Poetry) - 12/30/2003 8:39:39 PM
Wonderfully stated...I really liked this piece....
Allen
You Are Beauty (Poetry) - 9/25/2003 9:56:17 AM
A lovely write...quite touching, and very much enjoyed Maria!
~Nikki~
You Are Beauty (Poetry) - 9/23/2003 11:13:00 PM
Touching work here.
You Are Beauty (Poetry) - 9/23/2003 6:42:29 PM
Fantastic write, and every enjoyable!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
You Are Beauty (Poetry) - 9/23/2003 6:41:24 PM
You are a very talented young woman. This is beautiful.
C.J.
What Would Happen? (Poetry) - 8/28/2003 8:13:03 AM
Excellent questions, all of them. And I know exactly who I want to share your words with. I love this poem, great job.
My Worst Fear of All (Poetry) - 8/28/2003 6:00:38 AM
Such a lovely poem, full of emotion.
My Worst Fear of All (Poetry) - 8/27/2003 9:30:46 PM
Very Nicely done Maria! Yes, our lives and the world around our lives are/is constantly changing..."savor each moment"!
~Nikki~
What Would Happen? (Poetry) - 8/27/2003 5:31:57 PM
Ok ok ok enough with this smokin sensual suspense...LOL...you definitely have my mind here now working! Love it!
~Nikki~
Something (Poetry) - 8/6/2003 10:15:10 AM
This is very good and I think that it makes a good song. The chorus is catchy with variation and there is a sense of mystery through the verses and the epiphany at the end. J.
It Never Happened (Poetry) - 7/29/2003 10:10:41 PM
Excellent write!!!
Wide Awake (Poetry) - 7/29/2003 6:28:34 PM
Keep pouring your heart out lady......I like it! Your soul is so old.
Thanks,
Emilie
It Never Happened (Poetry) - 7/29/2003 6:16:50 PM
A heart is bleeding! WOW....I am amazed at such a piece. It cries so hard. The depth is truly amazing. Denial...sometimes... we give better advice than what we take. It is just unfortunate that others don't have brains like us :) Excellent!
Thanks,
Emilie
Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/13/2003 9:45:42 AM
This is truly lovely.
~Chrissie
Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/13/2003 8:09:15 AM
This is beautifully sad in it's own right. Very good work.
Thanks,
Emilie
Wide Awake (Poetry) - 7/2/2003 6:15:59 PM
This reads like a song lyrics. Good write!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
An Unexpected Loss (Poetry) - 6/30/2003 9:46:45 AM
I can't believe we were so young. Wonderful memories you have.
An Unexpected Loss (Poetry) - 6/30/2003 9:43:36 AM
This is lovely work, beautiful reflections...gold star memories!
~Nikki~
Left (Poetry) - 6/27/2003 8:22:41 PM
You just wrote my biographical poem, and I'm sure I'm not the only one. I like the rhyme and the flow to it. Really good and really speaks with a loud whisper.
Warm Love
*-Brittany-*
These Tired Eyes (Poetry) - 6/23/2003 10:41:01 AM
Very Good Writing...now this was something I could feel, and know all about!
~Nikki~
These Tired Eyes (Poetry) - 6/23/2003 6:23:35 AM
Well penned and thought provoking.
These Tired Eyes (Poetry) - 6/22/2003 10:41:23 PM
Thoughtful work. I hope my eyes never get too tired.
Again (Poetry) - 6/22/2003 6:50:56 PM
pretty strong words here. i guess that is the only way that can really express how you feel. ha
These Tired Eyes (Poetry) - 6/22/2003 6:26:27 PM
My eyes are still active, but i guess i will fully understand this poem when i become older. If only my gramma could read this. Lovely writes
Did you leave me because I wouldn’t put out? (Poetry) - 6/18/2003 3:35:11 PM
powerful and courageous write you did here, maria; terrrific job! ((((HUGS)))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :)
Did you leave me because I wouldn’t put out? (Poetry) - 6/18/2003 3:33:19 PM
(((maria)))
if he did, he wasn't worth it
stay true to yourself, and be proud of what and who you are *i applaud your courage*
OUTSTANDING WRITE--well done
((((((HUGS))))))) and love,
karla. :)
*i'm proud of you...wish more kids felt like this*
Magnetic Poetry (Poetry) - 6/17/2003 9:24:02 PM
Very very nice...this I like. Did this really come from the use of Magnetic Poetry?
Friendship Clauses (Poetry) - 6/15/2003 6:19:59 PM
That means so much...speechless. Thank you :)
Friendship Clauses (Poetry) - 6/15/2003 4:57:49 AM
nice flow of images...
Friendship Clauses (Poetry) - 6/15/2003 2:06:15 AM
Good write...Thank u....BHUWAN
Magnetic Poetry (Poetry) - 6/14/2003 6:42:57 PM
Beautiful piece again.
Humiliate Me (Poetry) - 6/6/2003 9:16:04 AM
Wow...this moved me so this morning, very powerful and moving, I felt your pain in this excellently expressed poem,
Reindeer
Humiliate Me (Poetry) - 6/6/2003 7:48:25 AM
ditto with La Belle's comment...
Humiliate Me (Poetry) - 6/6/2003 5:38:20 AM
This is so powerful, painful and almost frantic in it's raw emotion. Good write.
00:00 (Poetry) - 4/17/2003 5:50:31 AM
Really nice...
00:00 (Poetry) - 4/16/2003 6:49:01 PM
Oh this one is good.
peggy
A Not Quite Simple Dream For Me (Poetry) - 4/14/2003 2:57:50 AM
I Salute You, Poet Maria Fiorille.
I have digested "A Not Quite Simple Dream". I read an inspiring composition.
Never rest Your pen; don't let Your quills dry.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
A Not Quite Simple Dream For Me (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 10:29:39 PM
If it weren't for fantasy, many women would be very disappointed. Keep seeing it the way you want it to be and it will happen. A tennant of goal setting. Bravo on a fine poem.
12:00 blinking (Poetry) - 4/9/2003 5:42:41 PM
"...Find your cure
to stop the bleeding..."
Amen. Get tired of hearing it. ROFL...
Well done...bravo!
Voiced (Poetry) - 4/7/2003 10:51:16 PM
you have an excellent way with words...
Voiced (Poetry) - 4/7/2003 7:04:06 PM
This is certainly a thought provoking work. Well done.
I lay here by candlelight (Poetry) - 3/31/2003 5:45:29 PM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh,
this one is making my eyes misty beautiful feelings.
Peg
I'm Broken (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 10:39:57 AM
Makes a good song.
I wish you well with it.
~E
I'm Broken (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 5:28:10 AM
Toughy write...heartfelt...sad but so realistic...take care...hope that you are fine...cheers..love n luck...BHUWAN
I'm Broken (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 4:32:01 AM
Maria, good write.
I'm Broken (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 3:58:36 AM
Heartfelt and sad write, emotions well-displayed.
May Lu $*_*$ a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
A fake tuxedo (Poetry) - 3/18/2003 5:45:37 AM
This is very visual excellent write,.
Peg
A fake tuxedo (Poetry) - 3/18/2003 3:23:39 AM
Marie, well done.
A fake tuxedo (Poetry) - 3/17/2003 7:51:24 PM
I really enjoyed this! Great visuals!
A fake tuxedo (Poetry) - 3/17/2003 6:49:23 PM
They are so admirable and adaptive. This poem is also quite admirable in its accurate description.
Amor
A fake tuxedo (Poetry) - 3/17/2003 6:43:53 PM
Funny, aren't they. I've only seen them behind glass in a zoo, but I'm told some species have feathers?
Good poem...you are observing.
~E
Nothing Fits For A Title (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 4:43:37 PM
Tomorrow is a new day go with the flow nice write touching
Nothing Fits For A Title (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 7:22:51 PM
So sorry I can't be there. If I was rich I'd fly over in a flash, but, alas....
One day.
Nothing Fits For A Title (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 11:18:11 AM
i'm thinking for a title "Now That It's Over" well done enjoyed
josie
Nothing Fits For A Title (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 10:55:50 AM
All the pain and angst of bluegrass.
Enjoyed it. [not the pain]
~E
Nothing Fits For A Title (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 7:40:33 AM
Maria, this a beautiful write
enjoyable reading
Eilliam
Nothing Fits For A Title (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 6:46:51 AM
I enjoy this write of yours...this is superbly written...BHUWAN
Nothing Fits For A Title (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 4:03:50 AM
This is a true soul's crying. I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing your emotions poetized with the ink of your heart's memories.
Enthusiasm and healthy Life.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
I need to retire for one night (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 4:02:02 AM
Maria, that should be our last words at night and our first in the morning. Who knows what lies ahead.
I Failed Myself (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 3:45:07 AM
Sounds like it will make a great song. Good job on this.
Amor
I Failed Myself (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 3:43:57 AM
Maria, loved your song.
I Failed Myself (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 2:54:41 AM
very deep and emotional write...BHUWAN
I Failed Myself (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 2:35:59 AM
Maria, I enjoyed this song/poem. bill
I Failed Myself (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 7:42:10 PM
Excellent .....really enjoyed reading this one..I like pain bled to words. ty, Dani
I Failed Myself (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 7:36:47 PM
when this is recorded, in the form of a song, im going to have to hear it. beautiful verses.
I Failed Myself (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 7:08:49 PM
Very emotional and well done.
peg
How You Don't Have to Be (Poetry) - 3/7/2003 5:42:28 PM
The hero song
http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewpoetry.asp?id=51556
Sense (Poetry) - 3/7/2003 9:19:50 AM
Maria, excellent words.
Hurt and Loss (Poetry) - 3/6/2003 6:47:38 PM
painfully well written. great write.
Hurt and Loss (Poetry) - 3/6/2003 2:41:23 PM
a dose of reality
well versed
Hurt and Loss (Poetry) - 3/6/2003 1:32:49 PM
Very heartfelt write Maria!
Sandie Angel :o)
Miss T (Poetry) - 2/26/2003 10:06:39 AM
One cannot forget certain actions, but not forgiving can sour oneself. Otherwise I can understand the emotion here.
Miss T (Poetry) - 2/26/2003 6:29:30 AM
wow...great write!!!
Miss T (Poetry) - 2/26/2003 3:56:47 AM
Excellent write!
Sandie Angel :o)
Miss T (Poetry) - 2/26/2003 3:48:41 AM
This one is excellent.
peg
You and Me (Poetry) - 2/26/2003 3:40:49 AM
Excellent flow in this one.
Peg
Straight-Edge Dudette (Poetry) - 2/7/2003 8:01:48 AM
Maria, very well done with excellent movement and pace. Bill Murray
Life Changes (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 10:54:29 PM
"Still I can't force my heart to cease to bleed..." Great line!
Viewpoint (Poetry) - 1/13/2003 7:12:53 PM
I get it.
Trying to conquer what has gone lost (Poetry) - 1/13/2003 7:11:27 PM
I liked this very much.
I appreciate that you choose your words very selectively and economically.
I see myself in this piece, both in style as well as content.
-James
Finally Back (Poetry) - 1/13/2003 7:01:18 PM
hello...this is wondeful write...cheers....love n luck...BHUWAN
