Run (Poetry) - 11/13/2008 1:37:21 AM
A great poem you have written,I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin
Run (Poetry) - 11/12/2008 8:33:49 PM
Ah, the infamous light at the end of the tunnel, how grand for you that you can see it. Now keep it in sight and smile...
Be always safe,
Karen
Losing Key (Poetry) - 2/25/2007 5:06:30 PM
I really love this one. I understand it completely. Now I have to pull myself back from the feeling this has pushed me into.
falling apart (Poetry) - 2/25/2007 5:04:26 PM
I feel it.
Rock Climber (Poetry) - 2/25/2007 5:03:33 PM
I know this has been posted for awhile, but I just found it and I like it. The quote is from i-ching something isn't it?
I understand about a hobby becoming a person's life, too. Most writers do. ;o)
See you later,
P.M. Terry Lamar
Rock Climber (Poetry) - 12/27/2006 9:01:25 AM
Nice write...and with so much that has gone on with the loss of the climbers makes it even more intense. Made me cringe as I read it envisioning the climb, I too like Jackie will just stay on solid ground, too much excitement for me! Great write, glad I stopped by.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Rock Climber (Poetry) - 12/27/2006 8:44:34 AM
Love the quote and how you've woven it through your poem. I could feel the enticement for the rock climber as I read this, Skye. But, to be honest, I prefer my tootsies grasping the level soil, grass, sand!
Micke
(BTW - glad you are posting again...keep 'em coming)
My Half Without (Poetry) - 11/14/2006 6:49:00 AM
Now, put yourself together, Sky...but not to tightly, for your 'without' and 'within' you will question, and find glorious answers! Imaginative poem!
Micke
(whose glad you commented on my Streets poem; made it easier for me to find you :o)
devastate (Poetry) - 11/14/2006 6:42:19 AM
true! One day we awaken with our "bubble" bursted, and we're saddened by our innocence now past. (My take on this :o)
Micke
Invador (Poetry) - 11/14/2006 6:36:13 AM
Ahhh...we have a great poet developing before our eyes! I like the metaphors you've used in this!!
Micke
My Half Without (Poetry) - 11/10/2006 7:32:33 PM
I can totally relate to the emotions and the meaning within your verses, Sky. Thank you for sharing them. Love and peace to you,
Regis
PS: Sorry I did not review sooner but... ...this is the first time I've "seen" you on here.
Invador (Poetry) - 12/31/2003 6:28:32 PM
well done! i like how you end this one ...
Invador (Poetry) - 12/29/2003 6:30:32 AM
a fab write. so well done.
Mildew (Poetry) - 12/10/2003 4:04:31 PM
i like this
I Fear (Poetry) - 8/3/2003 1:36:46 PM
Flat out funny!
Leland
I Fear (Poetry) - 8/3/2003 9:14:30 AM
Ha....LOL! He had to stand up to let it out, huh? Too funny...
In Spirit,
Bear
Mildew (Poetry) - 8/2/2003 11:11:28 PM
This is indeed interesting and I can relate..Well done! ~Z~
Mildew (Poetry) - 7/23/2003 11:48:12 AM
Intresting yes and for some reason I understand it...well crafted!!!!
~Nikki~
Mildew (Poetry) - 7/23/2003 5:55:53 AM
Interesting!
I Stay_Getting Old (Poetry) - 5/16/2003 1:10:52 PM
What visuals !!! I don't know whether to laugh or cry. Bravo. Well done.
devastate (Poetry) - 5/16/2003 5:42:46 AM
Erica said it best: "EXCELLENT!" Read this 3 times...going back for one more. This one should make you very proud of your talent.
Who I am Compared to Sylvia Plath's (Poetry) - 5/16/2003 5:41:04 AM
It sure does, same flow...great job with this one, dear.
For me, this is the the hook, the breath-stopper:
"...My dignity, my soul I throw
To the birds. Like stone,
She crosses through me
Like everything I knew-
Over. And over again, your
Aggressive nature
Consumes me..."
A treasure!
devastate (Poetry) - 4/30/2003 1:03:51 PM
Wonderful sense of...shattering, Amberly!
devastate (Poetry) - 4/30/2003 9:22:48 AM
Enjoyed this piece :)
--Karissa
devastate (Poetry) - 4/30/2003 5:32:26 AM
Excellent write...
Peg
devastate (Poetry) - 4/30/2003 4:55:31 AM
This is a twist both in style in words but the meaning came through loud and clear! EXCELLENT WRITE!!
To a Warrior (Poetry) - 3/28/2003 1:48:50 PM
Loved it! This poem makes a person really think because it says so much with so few words. . . it's like a strange flower blossoming in winter! Keep up the good work!
To a Warrior (Poetry) - 3/28/2003 1:34:09 PM
Well done.
To a Warrior (Poetry) - 3/28/2003 12:47:27 PM
(((powerful))) and thanks for sharing...home, what a wonderful place it is...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
To a Warrior (Poetry) - 3/28/2003 12:38:47 PM
Well Done!
Great write...
Allen
The Man who Smoked a Man (Poetry) - 3/5/2003 4:43:19 AM
Amberly, very powerful. You got me chocking on the smoke.
Bright-bright-Bright (Poetry) - 2/17/2003 1:45:13 AM
Amberly, emotional undone? Wild? Well where are you headed? Bill
Call it Trues? (Poetry) - 2/7/2003 10:07:13 AM
Amberly ... I sense a brilliant complexity in your work. Where does it come from. Bill MUrray
Call it Trues? (Poetry) - 2/7/2003 4:06:31 AM
Wonderful write!
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
On Valentine's Day... (Poetry) - 1/31/2003 1:55:48 AM
Amberly, what a beautiful, yet truthful look at the lives of so many during this Valentne's Day season. Not everyone is meant to spend the holiday with someone special and yet, we all still long to be. Great write and Keep up the good work.
Have a great day ~ Jill
silent (Poetry) - 12/26/2002 5:40:20 PM
amberly, darling you know i've been reading your poetry for such a long time and i still find it facinating the way you can make words such as in this poem make my body ache. powerful words, my sweet IP. never stop. you have improved in your works so much more, retaining the depth and also making them more coherent
silent (Poetry) - 12/26/2002 3:22:19 PM
Beautiful Amerbly! This is so good. I look forward to much more poetry from you!
Happy New Year!!
*-Brittany-*
silent (Poetry) - 12/26/2002 3:00:57 PM
Very good.
Boulders for shoulders, Soldier. (Poetry) - 12/23/2002 8:33:30 AM
And a strong one! Heart, mind and body strong. Give me some strength, Ok?
Let me walk on the wild side with your support. You can be the Captain and me the private. I don't care. Bill Murray
apathy is an unanswered science (Poetry) - 12/22/2002 7:18:54 PM
You are touching me in the right place. Keep it up. It is so good! Bill Murray
I will (Poetry) - 12/22/2002 6:39:55 PM
Haven't we met before? Just kidding, I wouldn't forget someone as precious as you.
Happy Holidays. ((hugs)) Bill Murray
My Half Without (Poetry) - 12/22/2002 6:30:00 PM
Sad and interesting.
JC xoxoxoxo
