I Dont Want To Be A Millionaire (Short Story) - 9/21/2007 11:59:30 AM
"I could have snatched the sun from the sky." Your imagery is exquisite. It is wonderfuly full of truth and extraordinary altogether.
I Dont Want To Be A Millionaire (Short Story) - 6/6/2004 6:43:31 PM
A nice reminder to be thankful for what we have, not matter how small, in life. Well written.
I Dont Want To Be A Millionaire (Short Story) - 3/8/2004 12:52:03 PM
This story caught in my throat and heart. Well crafted and emotive. As someone else has already commented, this is almost a poem and has that kind of power.
I Dont Want To Be A Millionaire (Short Story) - 2/21/2004 9:20:01 PM
What a sad story. I hope this is fiction.
Beautifully written.
Joan
I Dont Want To Be A Millionaire (Short Story) - 1/31/2004 5:59:52 AM
Dancing on the edge of knives expresses the essence of this story. You've captured the pathos perfectly and in a few, well chosen, sentences evoked the meaning of life. Thank you for sharing this, it is poetry in paragraphs.
Carol
I Dont Want To Be A Millionaire (Short Story) - 10/29/2003 11:08:54 PM
yes, cutting to the heart and soul my friend. Such a tragic incident would make one turn sour to certain other things in life. Take care, G
I Dont Want To Be A Millionaire (Short Story) - 6/27/2003 1:02:25 PM
Powerful, wisdom filled , intense write that leaves the reader on edge with wonder that is this fiction or true..If it is true, my friend, I send prayers of healing for you...Stay forever walking in light..
Peace,
Dove
I Dont Want To Be A Millionaire (Short Story) - 6/22/2003 8:19:46 PM
Enjoy reading your story. The most important things in life are not visible before our eyes, A. Exupery once said. Keep writing, and wish you great the best on your publishing!
I Dont Want To Be A Millionaire (Short Story) - 3/24/2003 6:48:50 AM
What a sad story! If it's only a story - congratulations. If it is YOUR life story then it's tragic and I amd sorry. Either way, having God in your heart will be beneficial. Denise.
I Dont Want To Be A Millionaire (Short Story) - 2/16/2003 10:24:07 AM
Bhuwan this is so sad...I know that feeling...the day the doctor told me my little girl did not make it.....Oh!! God there are no pain as bad as that.....
Enjoyed your story but crying out now
Love
Tinka
I Dont Want To Be A Millionaire (Short Story) - 2/11/2003 4:12:35 PM
What a sad story but so true to life. Things happen in this life that no one can explain but we have to learn to live with them.
Excellent job!
Debbie :)
I Dont Want To Be A Millionaire (Short Story) - 2/7/2003 9:15:48 AM
so sad, bhuwan! am pleased to know you are branching out to doing short stories; this is a very good start! can't wait to read more of your stories! love, your friend in america, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Safa Tempo: Poems New and Selected (Article) - 7/25/2011 8:48:14 AM
I'm rarely in the Den,however infrequent I'm always inspired by your writing, your sentiment, and your planetary goals. Peace, Love, and Blessings Bhuwan carry on and keep that flame glowing. Your friend Mikii
World Bank, Poverty, Aid, NGOs, and Development Paradox in Nepal (Article) - 4/18/2010 7:42:55 AM
Dear Bhuwan to be saddened by man's inhumanity, greed and corruption is not enough, however, speaking for myself i feel extremely helpless whenever the issue of addressing these ills comes to the forefront. The courage of you and a few others to educate us is priceless and in my moments of discomfort I'm ashamed when thinking of the less fortunates of the world. All I'm able to offer is my prayers and the sharing of this information with the youth who may be able to make a difference. May you conitnue to be a catalyst for change in Nepal and the world. Mikii
A Fusion of Capitalism and Socialism Could Solve America's Misery (Article) - 8/2/2009 2:49:05 PM
I have arrived at your same perspective, would love to exchange comments. Here are excerpts from the article I am writing about the prospects of a third political party gaining traction in the US:
So this surfaces the question: What sociopolitical Problem does our age face that a third party might bring into focus and attempt to fix?
From any perspective, the leading candidate has to be a breaking of the gridlock between capitalism and socialism. It is everywhere pathetically evident that unregulated socialism is as detrimental to sustainable, equitable, and peaceful society as is unregulated capitalism. Yet socialism's adherents – in the US these have their identity as Progressives – have never put in place the intellectual framework for dynamically incorporating the feedback from the clearly evident strengths of capitalism; i.e. the fiscal strength and social benefit that emerges from rights to property, wealth opportunity, and innovation.
What if a fusion of Great Ideas has not yet occurred within the nation's value system, and the two parties are effectively one dinosaur without the sense that it is on the verge of becoming extinct?
The dominant Great Idea is that unregulated capitalism is bad for peoples' economic rights, especially for the middle class and the poor. Call this “socialism” for short.
The emerging Great Idea that has not yet fused in Progressive dogma – which in truth represents the well-intentioned thoughts of fair-minded and freedom-loving individuals anywhere you go – is that unregulated socialism is bad for the fiscal sustainability of the Economic Rights of Man. Call this “neo-capitalism” for short.
The Economic Rights of Man must be as consciously wrought as the original Rights of Man were. They cannot be gradually slipped into practice by un-scrutinized education, journalistic propagandizing, or judicial rulings and bureaucratic regulations. The ultimate fusion of the socialist Great Idea with the neo-capitalist Great Idea is this: That the Economic Rights of Man will be debated with the consideration due their formal incorporation into the Constitution of the United States. Only with that level of legitimacy can the two camps – the socialist and the capitalist – act on the moral principle that they have a mutual responsibility for sustainable results.
A Fusion of Capitalism and Socialism Could Solve America's Misery (Article) - 4/29/2009 4:19:31 PM
Interesting thought, but socialism strangles capitalism. When the capitalists and the wealth they create are gone, there is nothing left to share in, except misery.
World Bank: Time to ponder over its fallacies. (Article) - 8/4/2008 12:27:28 PM
You are making a wonderful and important diagnosis. Who represents the interests of the southern hemisphere and of the poor and the underdog in the World Bank decision-making and vision? If in their own country the poor and underprivileged are excluded from political dynamics and from the process of decision making! Ways and means for more just and fair representation on a national and international scale have to be explored by all people of goodwill
South Asia: Haven of Child Labor (Article) - 2/13/2007 7:46:04 PM
this is a good article. child labor is sad but true. It's going to exist as long as we don't deal with the poverty situation. The external reasons for this to begin should be dealt first then we can start thinking about dealing with the child labouring itself and how to prevent it.
South Asia: Haven of Child Labor (Article) - 1/8/2007 8:48:07 PM
I read your article with utter sadness. Yet the pen is mighter than any sword. Continue your writing and I believe it will be a great tool for change.
www.iabolish.com
Who Am I ? (Article) - 2/11/2005 2:51:01 AM
well done
South Asia: Haven of Child Labor (Article) - 6/4/2004 1:55:15 PM
so sad to see kids working when they should be enjoying their childhood years; but what choice do they have, really? excellent and informative article; thanks for sharing, bhuwan!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :(
South Asia: Haven of Child Labor (Article) - 6/4/2004 3:45:52 AM
WONDERFUL article, Bhuwan! Yes south east asia is a heaven for child labour...India, Nepal, Bangladesh, and other countries of this region don't have/don't enforce their labor laws strictly...Funds are going to gutter, such is the case in India...that ministers are more concerned to increase their salaries, before getting to office-->check UP assembly <
Govt is lacking imagination and correct people to utilise the funds...
Govt can help poor families, helping to cover their education and educate their parents...Not only imagination it lacks the initiative...Some NGOs are working in this area to aid the poor...and alleviate their condition...
Debashish
Conflict Between Aids And Sex (Article) - 8/14/2003 4:08:31 PM
Excellent flow of useful non-judgemental information reflecting genuine compassion and concern for the happiness and the wellbeing of fellow humans. I am sure your approach can help many people suffering with misinformation and too inhibited to ask.
Well done.
Tarek Ali Hassan
Conflict Between Aids And Sex (Article) - 8/14/2003 3:54:26 AM
Bhuwan,
I thought I was fairly informed about AIDS, but there were quite a few things in this article that I wasn't aware of. Thanks so much for sharing.
Tami
Conflict Between Aids And Sex (Article) - 8/14/2003 3:27:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this Bhuwan...its save and filed!!
Love Tinka
Who Am I ? (Article) - 3/15/2003 11:48:54 PM
So true one should take the time to learn and know self !
Who Am I ? (Article) - 3/6/2003 4:07:07 AM
I couldn't agree more....It is impossible to expand in body and mind if you don't understand the capsule. Excellent write.
Future (Poetry) - 5/28/2020 11:18:50 AM
I believe we were made to overindulge when something we needed was at hand. The harsh reality was that there would come a time when we didn't have it, and overindulging or adding fat would carry us through the lean times. Modern technology has now allowed us relax and take more than we need… Even more than we want, sometimes. You are so right that we need to go back where it was more essential that we not spoil our nest for our children and beyond.
Thee ferns will thrive long after us
Ron
Future (Poetry) - 5/27/2020 4:38:49 PM
We are at the brink of destroying and losing everything that we have worked hard and invented for all these years. I hope some sense will come to our world leaders, otherwise, we probably will go back in time and maybe forced to start everything all over again.
Sandie
Future (Poetry) - 5/26/2020 11:59:57 AM
Points well-made, Bhuwan; these are unsettling times for sure... ...and things have been getting worse for some time now. Love and peace to you,
Regis. 🌲🌳🌴🍂🍁
I love to whisper (Poetry) - 5/24/2020 9:17:36 AM
I rarely whisper my own poems to myself. But I often think of other, great poems and poetic phrases that reach my ears like daydreams whispered. Sans the beer cans. I don't drink beer and rarely drink anymore wine either enhance or calm my emotions.
Your poem is unique and interesting to read.
Ron
I love to whisper (Poetry) - 5/23/2020 9:44:42 AM
A meaningful poem the theme of which I can relate. Good to see you posting, Bhuwan. Love and peace,
Regis. 🍁
I love to whisper (Poetry) - 5/23/2020 12:52:00 AM
Sometimes, having some serene thoughts and moments to ourselves may not be a bad thing.
Great to see you here, Bhuwan! Hope all is well with you!
Sandie
Come (Poetry) - 4/10/2020 4:11:53 AM
Bhuwan: "Watch the tides making the wind visable" speaks volumes. Reading this fine piece brings to mind many of the things I have written. As far as the makeshift bridge bridge, it seems to me that one had best make sure that none of the planks are rotten!
Best,
Drugstore Cowboy
Come (Poetry) - 3/13/2019 2:55:57 PM
Such a beautiful pen, Bhuwan. Your poetry is always lovely and a pleasure to read.
Come (Poetry) - 2/21/2019 9:14:56 AM
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Come (Poetry) - 12/20/2018 11:54:58 PM
Hi Bhuwan:
So happy to see you back in AD again. Welcome back!
Sandie
Come (Poetry) - 12/20/2018 12:03:55 PM
Your poem briefly, but colorfully describes the daily ambience of Kathmandu.
In 1977/78, during my trip around the world, I planned to visit Kathmandu, but time and money ran out and I was only able to visit with friends for four days in Dhaka, Bangladesh. But about 1986, my younger brother trekked to the base camp of Everest and met Peter Hillary on a nearby peak. This past spring, my niece and nephew, daughter and son of my other younger brother, both engineers, visited Kathmandu and trekked to the Everest base camp as well.
Ron
Stop the rape (Poetry) - 9/26/2018 12:07:13 PM
This is a very moving poem, which is needed in these times. I like the descriptions you've used, because they make something that could be very abstract for some, a reality that is VERY real, and emotionally present. I FELT the meaning of this poem.
Also, I like how it does not lump the entire Male Sex all together, but truthfully points out that some men hurt woman in this terrible manner.
I hate rape, but as a Christian, and follower of Jesus Christ, do not see vengeance and getting even as the answer, but RATHER there must be a path to forgiveness AND restitution. God bless you.
a fellow human & poet, Zach
Forsaken Village (Poetry) - 7/6/2017 7:21:47 AM
Shattered dream for some looking for a moment to relax thinking of the good old days of times gone by, but in modern times are unable to survive, I at times find myself searching my past of which I need not ever return, for some the good old days were sometimes nightmares..... this poem is utterly amazing great write Bhutan always enjoy reading your remarkable work.......peace be with you
William
Forsaken Village (Poetry) - 6/28/2017 6:15:58 AM
Your poem transcends history by covering what happens when outsiders come to conquer. Today it's climate change that I understand, India is taking on boldly with innovative ideas.
Ron
Forsaken Village (Poetry) - 6/28/2017 3:37:21 AM
Progress means different things to different. For those settled in one place for many years it mans itt can mean disaster.
Forsaken Village (Poetry) - 6/27/2017 6:08:05 PM
A meaningful and moving account through your verses, Bhuwan. I can relate as I was forced to move away from a beloved place because of so- called "development." Love and peace,
Regis
Where are you now? (Poetry) - 6/16/2017 7:10:45 AM
So intriguing to read. Great wording and brings forth the emotion of having lost something that was so engaging at the time, but slipped away.
Keep posting these… Thoroughly enjoyable.
Ron
Where are you now? (Poetry) - 6/15/2017 11:59:53 AM
Sounds like something I might have written years ago. Yep! Where are they now? Nice work.
Kavre (Poetry) - 6/14/2017 11:33:19 PM
Thank you Kay P Devenish....you are always welcome....thanks.
Kavre (Poetry) - 4/25/2017 2:31:22 AM
A very vivid and awesome poem.(It made me want to go there)
Best wishes always
from
Kay
Kavre (Poetry) - 4/24/2017 7:32:33 AM
So beautiful in its imagery and simplicity. A sense of longing for what is rapidly changing with modernization… And perhaps, an earthquake or two.
Ron
Kavre (Poetry) - 4/23/2017 7:17:13 PM
Poignant and meaningful verses that awaken thought. Thank you for sharing, Bhuwan. Love and peace to you.
Regis
A child in its mother's womb (Poetry) - 12/21/2014 9:35:26 PM
Wonderful poem, and one that honors the Creator who designs every single baby inside the womb in His image!! May your poem touch many hearts with compassion!
Zach McClure
Stop the rape (Poetry) - 4/1/2014 4:44:06 PM
any man found guilty of raping a woman
should be hung on the spot
waste not years of prison time with appeals, just to be put to sleep
at the end......
Peace be with you Bhuwan
William
Metamorphosis (Poetry) - 4/1/2014 4:34:50 PM
a kiss is not just a kiss
a kiss can spark magic
Peace be with you
William
Fate (Poetry) - 4/1/2014 4:32:32 PM
always your words are outstanding
your poetry is art
Peace be with you
William
Favor (Poetry) - 4/1/2014 4:15:55 PM
fantastically composed and yes sensuous too
haven't seen your great poetic work for quite a while
Peace be with you
William
a poet (Poetry) - 7/19/2013 5:03:18 AM
and how about, Bhuwan
a poem is vision and revision
a river till it's ended
and then it is the sea
i enjoyed reading you again
take the best care
john
a poet (Poetry) - 7/8/2013 6:21:28 AM
Indeed, he is. He can also move mountains and topple regimes. For a poet is more than his words and his dreams.
Great thought!
Ron
a poet (Poetry) - 7/8/2013 5:05:00 AM
Bhuwan,
So glad to have you back in the den! You are right, poets can write such vivid imagery you feel you are there. EXCELLENT!
Many blessings,
Linda+
a poet (Poetry) - 7/8/2013 2:02:40 AM
and a poet you are Bhuwan
a pleasure to read your wisdom again
Peace be with you
William
Favor (Poetry) - 7/5/2013 7:38:03 AM
Sensual; love the images that are awakened by your words. Thank you for sharing, Bhuwan. Love and peace to you,
Regis
He heard the music (Poetry) - 1/29/2013 2:44:47 AM
Exquisitely composed, and poetically expressed... "He heard the music" is a poetic flower from the Poet's ontological garden, suffusing scent of submlimity.
Healthy blissful creative life, Poet!
In respect and appreciation,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
He heard the music (Poetry) - 1/21/2013 2:17:03 PM
A vivid portrayal and very poignant, dear Bhuwan. As in life, so is he in death - a joy to be with and delighted in by the gods. Your lines touch my heart:
He heard the music
and followed it
all the way
to the Heaven
... the gentle pause and pace of this is both engaging and respectful.
He’d moved in
up the street from us
and is looking at us
through the windows
of his soul.
Again, the space gives such a moving account of his removal and transition between physical and heavenly states. So beautiful!
I'm so happy to see you here again. I hope things are well with you and with those you love and care for. Kate xx
He heard the music (Poetry) - 1/19/2013 5:30:10 AM
You handle this passing with calm and dignity
and a wry sense of humour; i like your approach
and take, Bhuwan;
it's good to read you again, it's been a while,
too long really
take the best care
john
He heard the music (Poetry) - 1/18/2013 12:57:35 PM
A beautiful way to remember a loved one.
Ron
He heard the music (Poetry) - 1/17/2013 3:55:04 PM
An excellent piece Bhuwan
most enjoyable reading
Peace be with you
William
A shirt on the hanger (Poetry) - 7/16/2012 7:36:13 AM
beautiful mind-floating words...so nice....psmedlin
Darkness (Poetry) - 3/28/2012 12:36:03 AM
Substance to reflect upon Bhuwan. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Darkness (Poetry) - 3/27/2012 10:56:42 AM
A pleasure to be reading your great work again
Peace be with you
William
Darkness (Poetry) - 3/25/2012 12:10:16 AM
LIGHT SHINES ITS BRIGHTEST IN DARKNESS. THUS, HOW APPRECIATED THE DARKNESS SHOULD BE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Darkness (Poetry) - 12/12/2011 6:11:29 AM
Beautiful as always Bhuwan as I continue to bow to your pen..Have missed you. Peace, love, and blessings...Mikii
Darkness (Poetry) - 12/12/2011 5:30:56 AM
Nice thoughts about darkness. For if it was not for darkness we could not distinguih the difference from light. Amen!
Darkness (Poetry) - 12/12/2011 5:22:57 AM
Very lovely and touching poetry, Bhuwan...Thank you for these inspiring words.
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Darkness (Poetry) - 12/12/2011 4:22:13 AM
Well written, Bhuwan
A thorn is as beautiful as the rose (Poetry) - 5/31/2011 8:50:09 AM
An interesting perspective, Bhuwan. One can even get a splinter from sliding down a rainbow ... we must take the good with the bad. All are lessons on this human journey to awareness.
Robert
Faded roses (Poetry) - 1/11/2011 4:12:04 AM
Wonderful writing...stay safe and well..Hugssss
Faded roses (Poetry) - 1/9/2011 4:36:37 PM
What a miracle life is, Bhuwan, that we can enjoy such things as roses and mountain mists. The dark side of humanity is kept at bay when we remember all this beauty! kenny
Faded roses (Poetry) - 1/9/2011 9:36:20 AM
Love the way this poem takes us from the particular and poignant of "dying love" to the wide panorama of that Kathmandu fog, Bhuwan. How clearly we can see from this that it is, perhaps, the inner landscape that always superimposes its countenance on the wider scope of our external horizons. So lovely to see you here again and I pray that all goes well for you and those you love these days. May 2011 bring you blessings in abundance. Love always, Kate xx
Faded roses (Poetry) - 1/9/2011 5:35:12 AM
Excellent work.
Faded roses (Poetry) - 1/8/2011 1:15:58 PM
Always you grace us with your outstanding poetry
Peace Be with you
William
Faded roses (Poetry) - 1/8/2011 1:13:19 AM
A gentle sting in the tail here, Bhuwan, a sense of loss and mild despair and perhaps a longing for another way, another time.
Good to see you back.
John
Faded roses (Poetry) - 1/7/2011 11:23:19 AM
Vividly metaphorical and symbolic; your verses awaken the senses and the mind, Bhuwan. Love and peace to you, friend.
Regis
A thorn is as beautiful as the rose (Poetry) - 7/1/2010 3:29:01 AM
The thorn is very underappreciated. What a spectacular subject. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem defending the merits of thorns.
Manhattan Love (Poetry) - 6/9/2010 1:01:49 AM
Excellent composition, Bhuwan
Manhattan Love (Poetry) - 6/8/2010 6:28:18 PM
Hey Bhuwan, It is great reading you again. I spent a lot of years in Manhattan and found a lot of love there. This writing was well described and extremely well crafted.
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
Manhattan Love (Poetry) - 6/8/2010 5:30:31 PM
Such powerful expression, Bhuwan; passionately engaging. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you my friend,
Regis
Manhattan Love (Poetry) - 6/8/2010 5:27:10 PM
Gorgeously succinct, Bhuwan.
Glad to see you back after a few months; have missed your elegant words.
John
Untitled (Poetry) - 2/16/2010 4:54:34 AM
? in perfection with your style
I must catch up with your artistic work
Peace be with you
William
Grief (Poetry) - 2/16/2010 4:48:54 AM
This is an awesome write My Friend
I haven't been reading your brilliant work of late
I must say, I was the one at lost....
Peace be with you
William
Blurred (Poetry) - 2/16/2010 4:44:07 AM
As always my friend
Wisdom dwells in your poetry
Peace be with you
William
Grief (Poetry) - 2/9/2010 6:26:13 PM
hard to imagine all the deep pockets of chaos that find worldly expression in these times, bhuwan. the people of haiti deserve far better than what they have received. thank you for this graphically moving write, poet.
carolyn
Grief (Poetry) - 1/20/2010 2:26:47 PM
Bhuwan, your poem evokes pictures and emotions...compassion can barely embrace the reality of the catastrophe.
Good to know you're here.
Gina
Grief (Poetry) - 1/19/2010 3:30:20 PM
Bhuwan,
Good to see you back, and back with a sensitive, heartfelt beautifully imaged poem that reaches out to anyone with a heart.
John
Grief (Poetry) - 1/19/2010 11:04:41 AM
It's so very tragic. My prayers and thoughts
go out to them. Thanks for sharing this and
hopefully those who can help... will!
Grief (Poetry) - 1/19/2010 10:05:20 AM
If there's a Heaven, it should come with a better invitation.
If there's a Hell...no need to ask- there is.
John
Grief (Poetry) - 1/19/2010 7:08:36 AM
So sad, and so tragic, and I hope and pray that they all can find some help and comfort.
Untitled (Poetry) - 1/4/2010 2:12:45 PM
Hmmmm, one does wonder :) Cool poem.
Untitled (Poetry) - 1/3/2010 2:55:21 PM
Yes, perspective is everything and all things are relative. I like the sensitive and enquiring nature of this write, Bhuwan, and especially the keen eyes of observation which desire to be a part of all things. Night walking is a special and a privileged time - especially when in the company of nature and moonshadows! Love the sparseness which makes me want to hold my breath. Hoping for all things good for you in this coming year... hoping always for hope at the very least! I always hope you are well. xx Thank you, too, for your wonderful support and commendation of my work. One day a book will come, I'm sure of it! :)) xx
Untitled (Poetry) - 1/3/2010 5:58:53 AM
Unique title to a poem.Great work.take care and Happy New Year
Climate Metamorphosis (Poetry) - 12/26/2009 11:36:20 AM
excellent write My friend
Good to be reading your thoughts again Bhuwan
Merry Christmas and
Blessing to you and your family for the coming New Year
William
Climate Metamorphosis (Poetry) - 12/26/2009 10:11:01 AM
Your verses point to an awakening, Bhuwan. Thank you, my friend. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Traits of our emotion (Poetry) - 12/26/2009 9:58:14 AM
and emotions so beautiful
lovely cultivations
emotionality of love...
Peace & Blessings
Vickie
Fate (Poetry) - 12/26/2009 9:56:08 AM
Bhuwan...this is so beautiful
growing bounties
Vickie
Climate Metamorphosis (Poetry) - 12/26/2009 6:52:11 AM
I, too, believe something is going on, both up above and down below, but I fear neither is very good for mankind.
Climate Metamorphosis (Poetry) - 12/26/2009 5:00:04 AM
Hi Bhuwan...great write...yesss certain changes are going on for good...keep your hopes high....good wishes....neerja
Hunger (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 10:57:08 PM
I like this one too. Interesting -- embarkation of hope. What else? It jarred me, but when there is no lower place to go, hope is what is left. Thank you, and interested in any insights on my own. Glad to have found you.
A thorn is as beautiful as the rose (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 10:37:24 PM
I like this very much. Is this your artwork? It's gorgeous -- like a thorn, one might say.
Metamorphosis (Poetry) - 11/8/2009 7:50:49 PM
Lively, and beautiful! 'Our kisses as a picture never grow old,'
Rejuvenating lines! Keep it up!
Fate (Poetry) - 10/28/2009 2:12:10 AM
I love this, Bhuwan. As usual you used minimal words to express eternal and far reaching thoughts.
Bobbi
Fate (Poetry) - 10/25/2009 3:48:11 PM
Bhuwan,
Love the contrast between the first two airy lines and the second pair which for me despite their glory, too, have an enigamtic undertone.
John
Fate (Poetry) - 10/25/2009 1:16:56 PM
Sounds like they were head-over-heels, in that case, Bhuwan! Love the lightness of touch and emotion in this picturesque cameo. TY Kate xx
Metamorphosis (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 9:34:50 PM
Bhuwan, Kisses are such an intimate part of a love relationship. Kisses spark metamorphosis on so many levels.
Very lovely poetry. Thank you for sharing your beauty.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Metamorphosis (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 3:33:21 PM
Bhuwan,
Love your attitude and perspective in this and the style is marvellous. Yes!
John
Metamorphosis (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 2:36:25 AM
yes, Bhuwan, always new and always "of the moment" which induces them, like a picture is, as you say. Their metamorphosis comes by relaying their unspoken energies into mind, body, soul synapses: their power is a consummation of unarticulated feeling and a conception of new direction. They channel, charge and release as many moods and feelings as the human spirit is capable of. But mainly, they are traffickers of two hearts that meet in head-on collision... Could spend all day on this one! :)) Your writing is always a delight and always full of surprising insights and expressions. Rejuvenating, yes! Bless you, Bhuwan xx
Metamorphosis (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 2:24:08 AM
Beautiful poem,take care
Traits of our emotion (Poetry) - 8/10/2009 8:13:37 PM
Precisely Philosophical writing and a very immaculate articulation of human behavior..
Traits of our emotion (Poetry) - 8/2/2009 1:09:38 AM
emotions shouldn't be bottled up...its better they flow...in either way.
nice write.
best wishes, neerja
Traits of our emotion (Poetry) - 7/30/2009 2:13:55 AM
wise, profound and full of lovely emotions.
Tarek
Traits of our emotion (Poetry) - 7/24/2009 2:55:46 AM
A well written piece,excellent work,take care
EDWIN
Traits of our emotion (Poetry) - 7/23/2009 5:26:15 PM
Bhuwan,
Lovely take here, I like where you go with this, and indeed to break is so much easier and quicker than to construct.
John
Traits of our emotion (Poetry) - 7/23/2009 3:57:13 PM
excellent piece Bhuwan
Peace be with you
Saty inspired
william
Stop the rape (Poetry) - 7/8/2009 9:45:44 AM
Wonderful powerful succinct poem. A "reality sandwitch" sadly rings true.
What is man?? The answer to this difficult question will vary so widely between many groups of men and many groups of women. This conceptual and rearing fog together with a society that has learnt to practise extreme violence "politely and in a civil way" can bring out the monster from the being whose raison d'etre in an evolutionary biological sense, has been the ability to survive, love and multiply without violence!
All my love and admiration,
Tarek
Stop the rape (Poetry) - 7/2/2009 4:20:10 PM
WELL WRITTEN. BEING BORN WITH THE MALE SEX ORGANS DOES NOT A 'MAN' MAKE. CHARACTER AND CONVICTIONS SUCH AS YOURS IS WHAT MAKES A 'MAN'.
TRUE 'MEN' DO NOT RAPE WOMEN. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS WORK FILLED WITH THE PHRASES AND IMAGERY THAT SUPPORT YOUR THEME WELL. GOD BLESS YOU AND THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE
Stop the rape (Poetry) - 6/30/2009 9:41:01 PM
Rape is brute force perpetrated against the helpless by weak souls who loathe themselves, thereby they don't value life. Empty shells...
Lin
Stop the rape (Poetry) - 6/30/2009 3:40:39 PM
Bhuwan,
Thank you for this strong, brave poem. Rape is ugly, violent, cruel and an assault on intimacy, sexuality, romance and love...to be condemned and punished each and every time if possible. Again, thank you, you speak for so many of us.
John
Stop the rape (Poetry) - 6/30/2009 12:12:17 PM
This is not a man's way: It is the way of a coward.
Stop the rape (Poetry) - 6/30/2009 9:50:10 AM
What is it that makes
a man rape, a woman,
God, if it is a man’s way
of asserting himself and his superiority
then I am ashamed of being a man.
It is not your way nor is it mine, Bhuwan. My father once told me that a man should never strike a woman; not even with a flower. Thank you for sharing this meaningful write, my friend. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Stop the rape (Poetry) - 6/30/2009 4:30:03 AM
God, if it is a man’s way
of asserting himself and his superiority
then I am ashamed of being a man.
As we all should be.
Could you please reveal me the recipe of your lips? (Poetry) - 6/8/2009 5:16:09 AM
Bhuwan, This is a very romantic and love induced poem. I am so glad to be able to read your work again! Keep them coming. Very good writing here..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Could you please reveal me the recipe of your lips? (Poetry) - 6/7/2009 7:33:33 PM
This is a fine ode, Bhuwan; and yes, lips with the right person behind them are absolutely an exquisite gift. Thank you for sharing, my friend. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Emotions (Poetry) - 6/2/2009 10:04:34 AM
Once again your imagery emphasizes the effectiveness of the verses. Thank you, Bhuwan. Love and peace,
Regis
The contrived flavors of the humanity (Poetry) - 6/2/2009 10:02:43 AM
There is effective imagery and symbolism in this poem. Thank you for sharing it, Bhuwan. Love and peace,
Regis
Those drunken lips (Poetry) - 6/2/2009 10:00:36 AM
This is beautifully expressive, Bhuwan. Love and peace,
Regis
Hunger (Poetry) - 6/2/2009 9:59:25 AM
A strong, apt, and timely expression, Bhuwan. Love and peace,
Regis
What a time we had (Poetry) - 6/1/2009 9:15:30 AM
You have recalled and shared the moments very effectively through your words here, Bhuwan. Love and peace to you,
Regis
What a time we had (Poetry) - 5/31/2009 10:22:52 PM
Good to see youBhuwan,and read your
splendid poem so wonderfully romantic!
Eileen
What a time we had (Poetry) - 5/31/2009 9:27:39 PM
Outstanding as always Bhuwan
peace be with you
William
What a time we had (Poetry) - 5/31/2009 8:47:26 PM
Bhuwan,
Just gorgeous!
John
What a time we had (Poetry) - 5/31/2009 8:46:12 PM
How beautifully romantic...
Be always safe,
Karen
Hunger (Poetry) - 5/27/2009 9:08:22 PM
powerful imagery reinforces the statement of this poem ...
Hunger (Poetry) - 5/26/2009 11:29:03 PM
We can never know, nor understand, their suffering. News bites in a television's drone-the third world's a universe away from most. Our stomachs are bloated from over-eating, consuming everything in our path. They are consumed by being born. Where death is a welcome respite-this is a testament to our apathy. Fine write, Bhuwan...
Lin
Hunger (Poetry) - 5/25/2009 8:52:44 PM
Such a atrocity to mankind when so many must endure such suffering needlessly. Godspeed....
Be always safe,
Karen
Hunger (Poetry) - 5/25/2009 3:35:15 PM
Bhuwan,
Stark, real images in this powerful, moving and challenging work.
John
Hunger (Poetry) - 5/25/2009 10:08:52 AM
Deep and strong poem,very well written,take care
EDWIN
Those drunken lips (Poetry) - 5/3/2009 4:19:13 AM
Beautiful and romantic!!! Well-done, Bhuwan!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
Those drunken lips (Poetry) - 5/2/2009 1:43:03 PM
Beautiful and wonderful poem,take care
Edwin
Those drunken lips (Poetry) - 5/1/2009 1:03:11 PM
soft and dewy, bejewelled as the celestial crown of love bestowed on the Beloved by her lover. Your words of desire and admiration are always hallowed, Bhuwan. Beautiful poetry as always. Such depth and perspective. Kate xx
Those drunken lips (Poetry) - 4/29/2009 3:56:38 PM
Bhuwan,
Romance and intimacy elevated, placed among the stars, the rightful place.
John
Those drunken lips (Poetry) - 4/29/2009 1:50:57 PM
An inspirational wonder....
Be always safe,
Karen
A Beautiful Tomorrow Will Dawn (Poetry) - 4/28/2009 10:05:07 AM
Bhuwan,
'A Beautiful Tomorrow Will Dawn' is filled with optimism and hope.
It is very powerful and effective.
Much success
Barbara Henry
The contrived flavors of the humanity (Poetry) - 4/27/2009 2:28:14 PM
And from all your excitement I bet you tasted the flavors well...
Be always safe,
Karen
Emotions (Poetry) - 4/26/2009 8:33:49 AM
Excellent poem,take care
Edwin
Emotions (Poetry) - 4/24/2009 8:21:43 PM
sacred knowledge is moved through the air ,,,
Emotions (Poetry) - 4/23/2009 1:21:57 PM
Such strong emotions rise to the surface shedding light....
Be always safe,
Karen
Emotions (Poetry) - 4/22/2009 7:16:20 PM
Wild and passion filled emotions fill the senses.
Carmen
Emotions (Poetry) - 4/22/2009 6:03:59 PM
Well done
In Christs Love
Michelle~
O’ spring, O’my darling. (Poetry) - 4/17/2009 1:33:08 PM
Haven't read you in quite some time. This is such a lovely poem
Her eyes (Poetry) - 4/8/2009 6:04:20 PM
A very beautiful poem, Bhuwan!
We are often told not to put women on a pedestal in these hard-boiled times, i.e. no let-your-hair-hang-down Sally poems, but you've shown Beauty is still the domain of poetry writers.
Her eyes (Poetry) - 4/8/2009 3:22:54 AM
Great poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin
Her eyes (Poetry) - 4/6/2009 3:13:05 PM
A part of the world I have not been priviledged to visit, yet through your words of beauty and serenity I can see so much. God bless...
Be always safe,
Karen
Kiss the world (Poetry) - 3/26/2009 12:02:13 AM
Sweet and lovely theme expressed with love and affection, Bhuwan!
Kiss the world (Poetry) - 3/25/2009 11:05:41 PM
Outstanding, Bhuwan. This is a keeper for me. With your permission I will send it to friends.
Were are you from, I know you told me once but it has slipped my mind.
Bobbi
Kiss the world (Poetry) - 3/25/2009 9:26:21 PM
short, but so sweet.
O’ spring, O’my darling. (Poetry) - 3/25/2009 5:51:45 PM
A most seasonal and apt ode to spring, Bhuwan. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
Kiss the world (Poetry) - 3/25/2009 5:50:33 PM
These are sweet sentiments, my friend. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Kiss the world (Poetry) - 3/25/2009 5:18:58 PM
Dear Bhuwan, Very nice and to the point. My mom, who did not go to school, used to tell me: "Smile to life and life will smile at you". Love Emile
Organic Love (Poetry) - 3/25/2009 8:01:21 AM
Simple, beautiful, real. Like John, I was drawn by the title and am happy to have experienced this lovely piece.
O’ spring, O’my darling. (Poetry) - 3/25/2009 7:59:07 AM
Beautiful, uplifting poem - warmly evocative of renewal.
O’ spring, O’my darling. (Poetry) - 3/25/2009 5:33:25 AM
Hi Bhuwan, You're writing has always been so full of emotion... and just keeps getting better.... you passionate one, you....
In Spirit,
Bear
O’ spring, O’my darling. (Poetry) - 3/25/2009 12:14:00 AM
A beautiful welcome to Spring. Love the flow of your poem
O’ spring, O’my darling. (Poetry) - 3/24/2009 5:20:12 PM
This is beautiful!Great poem Bhuwan.
With Love,
Cindy
O’ spring, O’my darling. (Poetry) - 3/24/2009 4:51:29 PM
Bhuwan,
Romance reminiscent of Donne and Herbert, a communion with Nature as woman and being, I love where you go with this.
John
Helambhu, my darling, where are you? (Poetry) - 3/18/2009 5:55:31 PM
Oh how the beauty in your words capture the breathless emotions...
Be always safe,
Karen
Organic Love (Poetry) - 3/15/2009 3:02:04 AM
Great poem,take care
Edwin
Life, O' my life (Poetry) - 3/15/2009 3:00:58 AM
Beautiful poem,take care
Edwin
Life, O' my life (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 5:05:42 PM
I love this love poem Bhuwan.Your words are truely gifts for the heart and soul. Beautifully written!
With Love,
Cindy
Life, O' my life (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 4:58:56 PM
A lovely poem of love, Bhuwan. Thank you for sharing it my friend. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Life, O' my life (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 4:57:37 PM
Bhuwan,
A love poem to the gift of life itself.
John
Organic Love (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 1:30:35 PM
Romance that breathes luxurious life....
Be always safe,
Karen
Organic Love (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 4:19:59 AM
Lovely writing
Organic Love (Poetry) - 3/11/2009 6:10:51 PM
So beautiful!
Organic Love (Poetry) - 3/11/2009 4:39:58 PM
Bhuwan,
A unique sustained metaphor; I was attracted by the title and I'm so glad I read this great poem, thank you.
John
The house (Poetry) - 3/9/2009 1:37:21 AM
I enjoy reading this poem,very beautiful,take care
Edwin
The house (Poetry) - 3/8/2009 5:42:02 PM
Beautiful writing...stay safe and well...Hugsssssss
The house (Poetry) - 3/7/2009 7:35:57 PM
Bhuwan this is beautiful, I could feel the love you have for these two old people and the wisdom you learned from them.
Bobbi
The house (Poetry) - 3/6/2009 9:52:40 PM
This is the House Beautiful, Bhuwan, full of love and warmth.
The house (Poetry) - 3/5/2009 6:07:18 PM
Hello Bhuwan,
I like the beautiful simplicity of this poem, it speaks the truth so naturally.
Cynthia
The house (Poetry) - 3/5/2009 5:58:04 PM
A deeply symbolic and meaningful poem Bhuwan. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Tailor master called “Love.” (Poetry) - 3/4/2009 11:27:01 PM
Unique and wondrous masterful design permeated with love!
Eileen
A Victim of the Bust (Poetry) - 2/19/2009 4:07:21 PM
And every day it just gets a little more worse, doesn't it? Will we ever see the light of day again, I wonder....
Be always safe,
Karen
A Victim of the Bust (Poetry) - 2/19/2009 4:32:46 AM
VERY SAD AND VERY NICE POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
A Victim of the Bust (Poetry) - 2/18/2009 10:22:11 PM
An expressive and well thought out poem,take care
Edwin
Justice = Just Ice (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 1:48:54 PM
a salutary tale, Bhuwan. They say that "the Law is an Ass", but what's more appalling is that it often treats those it seeks to serve like one, too. This ruling needs an ice axe to pick away at its obvious flaws... the truth can all too clearly be seen beneath and will quickly be revealed. A very good allegory. Love, Kate xx
Justice = Just Ice (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 2:57:07 AM
Great work,take care
Edwin
Natural aroma of the bareness (Poetry) - 1/29/2009 12:52:32 PM
Wonderfully expressive, Bhuwan. Love and peace to you,
Regis
A wind rose from the womb of the Lake Fewa (Poetry) - 1/29/2009 12:51:21 PM
A lovely offering all around, Bhuwan. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Natural aroma of the bareness (Poetry) - 1/18/2009 7:15:13 PM
Rabrindranath Tagore couldn't have put it better, Bhuwan. The fire of your passion will keep your lady warm and translucent.
Fossil Memories (Poetry) - 1/8/2009 9:24:10 AM
How well you define the remains of love
losing its passion!Superb poem Bhuwan!
Love,
Eileen
Fossil Memories (Poetry) - 1/7/2009 9:21:22 PM
outstanding and romantic write Bhuwan
Thankd for sharing
most enjoyable reading
peace be with you
William
Fossil Memories (Poetry) - 1/7/2009 2:16:50 PM
What a write, Bhuwan! So timely and yet ageless! Amazing concepts here which my mind would struggle to be able to express - yet you have captured the intangible with very sensual and tactile imagery and metaphor. Astounding, and astounded, this leaves me breathless. Deep and yet elusive. I struggle to find words to match your poetic prowess. My love and greetings to you as always. So good to see you here! Stay safe and well, love Kate xx
Fossil Memories (Poetry) - 1/6/2009 6:09:32 PM
The power of true love beginning within, making its lacey appearance and returning, going full circle so one can always remember, just beautiful....
Be always safe,
Karen
Sea of changes (Poetry) - 1/6/2009 7:20:02 AM
Causes one to pause and think about possibilities be they squashed or be they encouraged. Good poem, I like it.
Blessings J'nia
Fossil Memories (Poetry) - 1/6/2009 4:02:58 AM
Good, sound imagery, Bhuwan. My favorite part, is the lips melting on your cheeks. I like the ending too. --Charlie
