Caught in Fantacy (Short Story) - 6/14/2005 9:22:49 AM
other than the overusage of the word "as", it is still a very well done story! :) enjoyed~
Caught in Fantacy (Short Story) - 6/20/2003 4:06:50 PM
Too much use of the word 'AS'. The syntax of the story needs work. Content is enticing and could keep a reader if developed a little more.
The News (For my sister Darlene) (Poetry) - 11/20/2005 12:20:33 AM
My sister gave me "The News" as well. Don't fret too much. I believe things will come out well. Nice write.
Dan
A Childs Father (Poetry) - 6/17/2005 7:50:16 AM
This cuts deep it is hard to comment
May I just say this is a beautiful tribute
and leave the rest unsaid
A Childs Father (Poetry) - 6/14/2005 9:22:07 AM
beautiful write, sonja! thanks for sharing; very well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
50 Golden Years (Poetry) - 6/14/2005 4:15:30 AM
Beautiful write for your mom and dad! A poem well-worth to treasure.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
A Childs Father (Poetry) - 6/14/2005 4:14:27 AM
Sonja:
This was powerful emotions! Your children's father will always be with you all, he is your guardian angel now.
((((( Love and Hugs )))))
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel
A Childs Father (Poetry) - 6/14/2005 1:15:13 AM
Powerful hearttouching write, you spoke of your memories beautifully
God Bless
Michelle!
Pedals of Love (Poetry) - 9/29/2004 5:22:53 AM
A classic Sonja Lewis poem written with the simple creativeness and bring a refreshing breath of air to those of us who take pleasure in reading and exploring her talented work. My sincere compliments..*smile*
Best Wishes & Take Care,
Chuckie
My Last Tear (Poetry) - 9/29/2004 5:16:23 AM
The sorrows of life are sometimes difficult to face but there are those people around you who place your photograph closer to their hearts than you may realize....Your wonderful smile is a difficult thing to ever replace...*smile*
Take Care & Best Wishes,
Chuckie
50 Golden Years (Poetry) - 9/29/2004 5:04:12 AM
Wonderfully penned, Sonja. I'm sure you have blanketed their days with so much love!
Best Wishes & Take Care
Chuckie
50 Golden Years (Poetry) - 9/21/2004 9:52:31 AM
Wonderful tribute to your mom and dad! You are so blessed to have them both! (My aunt--my daddy's sister--and her husband celebrated their 50th anniversary last week. Daddy and maman, who live in Ohio, went down to Florida to celebrate Joyce and Ronnie's anniversary! They go back home to Ohio today sometime.) Well done; congrats to your parents!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Tears On My Pillow (Poetry) - 9/18/2004 5:02:19 AM
So emotionally written with expression..My sincere compliments on a fine work.
Best Wishes,
Chuckie
Tears On My Pillow (Poetry) - 4/5/2004 9:57:46 AM
Dear Sonja! Miss you! Where in the hell are you? Hugs Bill xo
Hot nights (Poetry) - 2/20/2004 11:06:44 PM
oh my...sensuality and eroticism wrapped up in a sensitive piece of work...splendid job, Sonja.
Pedals of Love (Poetry) - 2/20/2004 11:05:09 PM
very nice...composition is good but you may want to check the spelling of petal/pedal...I believe you want the former not the latter.
Tears On My Pillow (Poetry) - 1/5/2004 5:35:10 AM
Sweet and sorrow! Heartfelt write, Sonja!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Tears On My Pillow (Poetry) - 1/5/2004 3:35:00 AM
This is a touching write!
Tears On My Pillow (Poetry) - 1/5/2004 1:38:38 AM
The sweet release of tears. Thanks, sonja.
The Doll (Poetry) - 11/13/2003 3:29:30 AM
does she like buzz or woody, cute poem.....
Pedals of Love (Poetry) - 11/5/2003 9:45:55 AM
Most touching and soft writing, great emotive work!
~Nikki~
Pedals of Love (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 6:02:20 AM
Very tender and loving. Enjoyed. Lisa
Pedals of Love (Poetry) - 11/2/2003 11:39:14 PM
Very nice....
Silents (Poetry) - 9/4/2003 8:36:54 AM
Sonja........I thought this poem was
terrific.....I just reposted it on my site.
Go see:
Works well with the other part of my posting.
Bill
http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewpoetry.asp?id=77339
Silents (Poetry) - 6/21/2003 11:19:21 AM
Sonja this is VERY GOOD...I like it!!!!
~Nikki~
Tears Falling (Poetry) - 6/11/2003 11:26:11 AM
A great poem indeed!
A single golden band (Poetry) - 5/21/2003 9:46:13 AM
You have some beautiful thoughts, Sonja.
Tears Falling (Poetry) - 5/18/2003 2:17:38 PM
G'day to you!
I liked this actually. I enjoyed the sorrowness, but it left me more with the feeling of "Okay, I cried, now I'll get up and be strong and walk away even if I still remember." instead of the typical, "I'm crying. Still crying and won't stop." Liked it, was inspirational!
Lots of Love
*-x Brittany x-*
Tears Falling (Poetry) - 5/18/2003 11:56:25 AM
Good work.
[Last line, 'their' should be 'they're']
Tears Falling (Poetry) - 5/18/2003 9:49:59 AM
very touching poem, Sonja
Chrissie
Tears Falling (Poetry) - 5/18/2003 8:27:12 AM
Love hurts! I can tell.
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
Tears Falling (Poetry) - 5/18/2003 8:24:20 AM
Like what I read.
Tears Falling (Poetry) - 5/18/2003 8:17:29 AM
So beautifully sad, Lovely and so touching, I hear what you are saying here,
Reindeer
Tears Falling (Poetry) - 5/18/2003 5:51:36 AM
Oh Sonja. Wish I could help you dear. You are so sweet. God bless you Lady. Bill
Our Soldiers (Poetry) - 4/25/2003 4:38:23 PM
Very nice...I wish they could all come back...grieving the lost ones though....thanks for this..floria
Our Soldiers (Poetry) - 4/25/2003 11:11:51 AM
Nicely done. Check your spelling if you decide to publish.
Our Soldiers (Poetry) - 4/25/2003 9:41:00 AM
excellent tribute *applauding andy's review* to ALL of our coalition men and women...well done! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) *and thanks to great britain and all of the nations standing with the united states for their support to end the war against terror*
Our Soldiers (Poetry) - 4/25/2003 8:01:03 AM
Sonja, the content is so excellent. But honey please check the spelling and take time to correct some of the error. I enjoyed what you wrote and agree with you.
Love Bill
Our Soldiers (Poetry) - 4/25/2003 7:15:58 AM
And not forgetting our red white and blue soldiers, from britian, nice tribute..
My Last Tear (Poetry) - 4/5/2003 8:06:25 PM
Hi Sonja:
This is so sad! Hope it's just fictional! Wishing you well!
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
The feeling of a friend (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 10:19:54 PM
Sounds like you got a friend there that you can depend on good luck sonja
A single golden band (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 10:13:31 PM
aaaaaaayes lets all pray for the recover of that little golden ring, and for your happyness Sonja
The Old Man (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 10:08:33 PM
really good my day is coming for that day too
You (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 10:06:13 PM
Very sweet and and well said
You (Poetry) - 3/31/2003 4:35:07 PM
this is so tender.
excellent Peg
You (Poetry) - 3/31/2003 2:52:12 PM
I am happy that you're happy Sonja. Love Bill
You (Poetry) - 3/31/2003 2:04:06 PM
I love 'em short and sweet.
Well done, Sonja.
-James
You (Poetry) - 3/31/2003 11:49:08 AM
dont get any better than that
josie
The Old Man (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 5:17:54 AM
Lovely and touching write...
The Old Man (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 2:38:58 AM
Sonja,
Beautiful this one is.
Peg
The Old Man (Poetry) - 3/28/2003 10:06:29 PM
My, this is really good.
The Old Man (Poetry) - 3/28/2003 9:42:30 PM
Beautifully written, Sonja.
I fear that day.
-James
An Angel Over Me (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 9:11:19 AM
Sonja:
This is sooooo wonderfully-written!
Sandie Angel :o)
A single golden band (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 6:41:49 AM
Let's pray that things get better for you Sonja very soon. Hugs Bill
An Angel Over Me (Poetry) - 3/22/2003 10:23:08 PM
very nice write...
An Angel Over Me (Poetry) - 3/22/2003 7:50:26 PM
Baby this is beautiful..but change spelling of Angel! Bill love you and miss you xoxoxo
A single golden band (Poetry) - 3/22/2003 7:13:02 PM
Nicely worded and expressed.
I think you mean vows instead of 'vowels'.
Gives a totally different meaning.
Well done.
~E
A single golden band (Poetry) - 3/22/2003 7:11:14 PM
This was sad and heartfelt, Sonja! Hope the little golden band will send out its magic very soon.
Sandie Angel :o)
Hot nights (Poetry) - 3/18/2003 3:21:02 PM
SMOKING!!!!!
Tears of sadness (Poetry) - 3/17/2003 4:05:32 PM
Yes scars can last a life time my dear dont try to make every one happy, go by your own feelings,the other fish may be too deep in the water to pull out, so go by what you feel in your heart pray about it, God has all answers,Love ya
Wings that carry me (Poetry) - 3/17/2003 3:54:44 PM
Great writing the kind i like to read, i give you 100% AAA God sends Angels to look after us, keep up the good work,(-:)love ya,
A stepfather and a daughter (Poetry) - 3/17/2003 3:47:14 PM
Stick with your kids no matter what, If you do good then he will be the on to find himself going with out the greatest blessings God ever gave any one, hang in there, love ya
The Sting of Death (Poetry) - 3/17/2003 3:41:00 PM
Dont let hell take over your life it is the Davils job to try for your soul, but with the help of God you can pray your way out of Hell no one has to go to Hell, you can over come all with the help of God, love ya,
The Sting of Death (Poetry) - 3/17/2003 12:27:34 AM
Sonja, when things seem their darkest, then comes the light. Hold on and things will be all right. There is more than one right way in life and more that one wrong. Thread slowly takkng one step at a time and facing today as if this was the last day of your life, and tomorrow will take care of its self. Love Bill
Hot nights (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 2:25:07 PM
Sweet, sweet, sweet, Sonja. You journey took you to far off places till you found your Prince, and then watch out! You received so much and gave so much. Know you enjoyed it. Love Bill
The feeling of a friend (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 12:20:30 AM
Sonja, This is vewry nice, Tribute to Susan.
The feeling of a friend (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 12:05:58 AM
Your feellings come acrose as so real. you have someone to trust. That makes you lucky. Many of us have no one. First you are my friend and then nothing else matters to me. Love Bill
Wings that carry me (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 11:44:33 AM
I don't think that feather came from a pillow fight ...LOL....great write Sonja I admired it
Wings that carry me (Poetry) - 3/7/2003 10:02:12 PM
from within sleep much can be experienced...
Wings that carry me (Poetry) - 3/7/2003 8:04:42 PM
Nice....we all have angels...if we but believe. Well done.
~E
Wings that carry me (Poetry) - 3/7/2003 5:36:09 PM
Sonja,
This is so beautiful!!!!!!
stunning write.
Peg
Wings that carry me (Poetry) - 3/7/2003 5:16:15 PM
Beautiful Sonja. You wrote this with such a gentle touch. Thank you for listen to the song also dear. Love you Bill xoxoxo
My Life (Poetry) - 3/4/2003 2:25:19 AM
This is sad, but you will have lots of prays going up for you, dont stay till ti gets too bad God will make a way, and God bless you dear,
Hope (Poetry) - 3/4/2003 2:18:34 AM
100% excellent she gets an AAA plus on this one, God always hears the children give her a hug for me, love her work,
My Life (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 6:31:01 AM
Sonja, I didn't know and I am so sorry dear.
You have so much to offer someone. There has to be a better life for you ahead, and love waiting for you. Love Bill
My Life (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 3:35:32 AM
Sonja, Been there, It is a terrible feeling, It will get better, Thelma
My Life (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 2:29:24 AM
Very sad but very well expressed in the verses of excellencs.
Peg
My Life (Poetry) - 3/2/2003 10:44:06 PM
this is beautiful.. hopefully things will get better for u.. believe in urself, u will achieve anything u want.
qamar
My Life (Poetry) - 3/2/2003 10:06:55 PM
This is sad, but very well written. A good choice of words to convey your feelings.
~E
Time to leave (Poetry) - 3/1/2003 12:17:23 AM
Sonja that is very good writing lots of people suffer that dont have to glad you and your children don't have to suffer any more may God bless you always,
A Single Tear (Poetry) - 2/28/2003 12:07:44 PM
This made me cry a little.
A Brother (Poetry) - 2/28/2003 12:06:40 PM
Hi nice dear to write like this. A wonderful love shown for you brother and those that serve our country. Bill
Beth (Poetry) - 2/28/2003 12:04:59 PM
Yes she has grown up to be a friend. That is wonderful as you are. Love Bill
A Strong Man (Poetry) - 2/28/2003 12:03:34 PM
Wonderful love for your Dad, and fond memories sweet Lady. Bill
chills (Poetry) - 2/28/2003 12:01:50 PM
Baby, I am so hot that I am shivering! Welcome back, I missed you so! Bill
chills (Poetry) - 2/28/2003 7:28:29 AM
spelling, what poor spelling, YOU Spelled Me correctly with this write. I am all flustered and HOT.
chills (Poetry) - 2/28/2003 4:04:55 AM
Great write, good feelings!
Sandie Angel :o)
A Strong Man (Poetry) - 2/27/2003 11:07:12 PM
yeah love is all around...wonderful write....cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN
A Single Tear (Poetry) - 2/27/2003 9:16:08 PM
This is Great i love made me think of my mom wonderful reading dont never stop writing doing too good to ever stop,
Beth (Poetry) - 2/27/2003 9:10:01 PM
i love it filled my eyes too and my heart to know there is still much family love around today may God bless you in all that you do,
My teen daughter (Poetry) - 2/27/2003 9:01:39 PM
sorry i had not signed this onebut i love it
A Brother (Poetry) - 2/27/2003 8:57:40 PM
Thats great i had to dry my eyes to comment on this one keep praying for all our guys this is a great work you are doing
A Single Tear (Poetry) - 2/27/2003 11:09:01 AM
A very touching write, Sonja
Amor
A Single Tear (Poetry) - 2/27/2003 9:47:37 AM
Beautifully done.
~E
A Single Tear (Poetry) - 2/27/2003 9:43:27 AM
Heartfelt and sad. Chrissie
A Single Tear (Poetry) - 2/27/2003 9:13:27 AM
Sadly beautiful
Sierra's poem (Poetry) - 2/5/2003 1:01:06 PM
This is sweet we need more kids interested in poetry good mom to encourage her keep the good work Sierra
A Lover (Poetry) - 2/3/2003 9:55:01 PM
Baby my tongue is boiling hot and licking fresh and sweet. Gee, this is gigantic in proportion to what I have known. You are a wondeerfully hot and erotic vixen that carves a place in my heart and casts her sensual shadow all over my body. Keep it up. And I will keep it up. Bill
Sweat (Poetry) - 1/29/2003 6:54:41 AM
You go baby! This is mouth watering sex. Love it and you. Ride the white pony honey. Yahoo, here comes your cowboy! Bill
Sweat (Poetry) - 1/29/2003 5:35:43 AM
mmmmmmmm, ok
Sweat (Poetry) - 1/29/2003 12:26:42 AM
Sonja, Very erotic imagery. Bravura.
Joel
A Lover (Poetry) - 1/29/2003 12:14:00 AM
A fantasy in her mind of the upcoming love
and sexual acts she and her lover will
shortly consummate.
Complete Love (Poetry) - 1/26/2003 10:54:08 AM
Ah dearest, what beautiful seductive moments you describe. Love every word. I can feel the warmth for you flood my entire body.
How sweet to know of the joys you describe.
Bill
Time to leave (Poetry) - 1/22/2003 10:11:07 AM
Nice written
But does the pain ever end?
Time to leave (Poetry) - 1/22/2003 7:18:43 AM
Sonja...All the best for your new life...may god bless thee with all his glory...am glad that now you are happy...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN
Broken Hearted (Poetry) - 1/20/2003 9:02:42 PM
Very good dear. Our brainstorms all leave us. Bill Murray
Hope (Poetry) - 1/20/2003 9:01:01 PM
A very sweet poem to Heaven and they must always hear the children. Thank you.
Bill Murray
Hope (Poetry) - 1/20/2003 10:52:47 AM
thank you to both of you
nice thoughtful write
Love
Tinka
Hope (Poetry) - 1/19/2003 4:30:22 PM
This is wonderful(:
I have a seven year old child
Bless our little ones(:
Broken Hearted (Poetry) - 1/19/2003 6:06:09 AM
hahaha.....welcome to my world of no words...
Love
Tinka
Weeping Willow (Poetry) - 1/11/2003 2:11:50 PM
That is very heart touching!!!!
Blue eyed fish...
Weeping Willow (Poetry) - 1/11/2003 2:06:27 PM
beautiful! there was a huge weepin' willow in my backyard in ohio...how i used to sit under its umbrella of silvery green leaves...hidden from the world. :) (((HUGS))) and thanks for the memories! love, karla. :)
loneliness (Poetry) - 1/9/2003 12:57:19 AM
This is very touching and heartfelt!
What a special friend she must be to you and you to her.
Allen
Grandmas House (Poetry) - 1/8/2003 10:21:04 AM
Wonderful memories. Great poetry.
Grandmas House (Poetry) - 1/8/2003 9:01:44 AM
Wonderful reflections Sonja.
My teen daughter (Poetry) - 1/7/2003 10:59:43 AM
Sonja i really enjoyed your poem I just want you to send them to a publisher and get paid for them they are really good.
Anger (Poetry) - 1/7/2003 4:14:50 AM
yes...like peggy said....very very emotional stuff...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN
The life with children (Poetry) - 1/6/2003 12:28:11 PM
very true children is a gift from God keep up the good work,
Desire (Poetry) - 1/4/2003 10:45:14 PM
Very good write.
Desire (Poetry) - 1/4/2003 8:45:54 PM
"
Now we lay in loves glowing light,
we look at each other with gleem,.
Now that we discovered love,
lets go have breakfast my turtle dove.
A little humor never hurt any one"
So true good write.
peg
Desire (Poetry) - 1/4/2003 5:37:43 PM
Nice write, but why the different tenses? Sorry, I couldn't help but noticing there were both present and past tense in this poem, I was just wondering whether there was a special reason for using different tenses in one poem.
Sandie Angel :o)
Desire (Poetry) - 1/4/2003 4:35:44 PM
These words not just describe your inner feelings rather they took me in my Past. Great Write...
My children (Poetry) - 1/4/2003 6:08:14 AM
I did enjoy!!
Children are such a blessing!
Sally
My children (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 3:42:40 PM
Sweet write. So nice to someone who loves their children express such feeling.
