Quality Time (Poetry) - 1/24/2018 11:59:00 AM
Great poem with a wonderful, thought provoking message!
Thank you for sharing it with us here in The Den!
Barbara J. Henry
My Sanctuary (Poetry) - 12/1/2017 11:46:05 AM
Great write, Marlene! So inviting!
Thank you for sharing with us here in The Den, and continued success.
Barbara J. Henry
From A Distance ( REVISED) (Poetry) - 2/28/2004 12:59:30 AM
you've done a superb job in making this a truly wonderful poem!
From A Distance ( REVISED) (Poetry) - 2/27/2004 9:37:20 PM
I'd fall gently toward your [shirt]
Change shirt to "heart" so that you don't repeat the same word in the same verse.
This is darling. Loved it.
Elizabaeth
From A Distance ( REVISED) (Poetry) - 2/25/2004 8:51:50 PM
Marlene this is utterly enchanting! I love the premise of the snowflake and what you did with it. Very beautifully and romantically written!
From A Distance ( REVISED) (Poetry) - 2/25/2004 10:58:07 AM
Nice job, Marlene! Warm and loving write. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace. Regis
From A Distance ( REVISED) (Poetry) - 2/25/2004 7:59:11 AM
Marlene, this is romantically beautiful and the ending
is awesome. 'in a melting heart embrace' Wow! I love that.
You Complete Me (Poetry) - 2/19/2004 9:55:32 PM
We've already stood the test
of time & distance and passed.
I am so happy to be one with you.
No matter how near or far
Very romantic write!!!!
You Complete Me (Poetry) - 2/18/2004 9:51:31 AM
Very beautiful! So romantic!
You Complete Me (Poetry) - 2/17/2004 5:27:19 AM
Exquisite poetry!
You Complete Me (Poetry) - 2/16/2004 11:40:31 PM
Lovely sentiments and feelings. Inspiring and warm-feeling write.
Cheers
Alain
You Complete Me (Poetry) - 2/14/2004 6:50:45 PM
Marlene this is os beautiful special one
and so fitting for today!!!!!!
From A Distance (Poetry) - 2/12/2004 4:39:45 AM
A very unique and beautiful description of love from a distance.
From A Distance (Poetry) - 2/11/2004 10:03:06 PM
The second stanza is perfect, what a great image of the person in the doorway. I like the idea of this one.
From A Distance (Poetry) - 2/10/2004 6:45:49 AM
And what a gorgeous snow flake it would be. Watching it fall towards a very warm heart. To imagine such a sight is the majesty of this superb romantic piece. Outstanding write!
Peace and Love
Tony
From A Distance (Poetry) - 2/9/2004 10:11:59 PM
Marlene this is so beautiful......
excellent ending....
OH the ending....
HUGS Peg
From A Distance (Poetry) - 2/9/2004 7:19:30 PM
Beautifully written though a bit sad...
From A Distance (Poetry) - 2/9/2004 7:17:42 PM
well written but has such a fatalistic conclusion ... melt his heart instead ...
From A Distance (Poetry) - 2/9/2004 6:31:14 PM
tender and beautiufl Mar, ty al
From A Distance (Poetry) - 2/9/2004 5:41:50 PM
This was excellent! very powerful images, loved this one!
Reindeer
There is a person that needs LOVE to shine in you (Poetry) - 2/5/2004 4:40:16 PM
Love Is a Myth,i.e. Compassion Few If Any Have Is What You Wrote About-
HUMANITY Better Hurry Up N Get It Too Late Now!
TRASK
There is a person that needs LOVE to shine in you (Poetry) - 2/5/2004 1:29:42 PM
While the message is much needed and a grim reminder of the need for compassion, the poem itself warmth the heart.
Well done, Marlene!
Gina
Winter Is Special (Poetry) - 2/5/2004 1:17:14 PM
BRILLIANT evocative imagery..
There is a person that needs LOVE to shine in you (Poetry) - 2/5/2004 1:11:06 PM
Probably I am reading you for the first time..but reading this made me repent what quality of art I have missed..I am fortunate to read this brilliant poem...GREAT work..Marlene!
Winter Is Special (Poetry) - 2/5/2004 7:08:57 AM
Very beautiful Marlene!
Winter Is Special (Poetry) - 2/4/2004 8:35:02 PM
winter can certainly have its wonderful moments ... well done!
Winter Is Special (Poetry) - 2/4/2004 7:09:34 PM
wonderful metaphor, beautiful poem Marlene!
Winter Is Special (Poetry) - 2/4/2004 6:22:02 PM
Drifting love... well put!
On Cold Dark Winter Nights (Poetry) - 1/30/2004 4:46:54 AM
So well done and emotive. Enjoyed reading this so much.
On Cold Dark Winter Nights (Poetry) - 1/28/2004 10:33:08 AM
Marlen,
This is beautiful.....
"The aches are there inside and out.
They say time heals all.
She tries believing that true til
the moon falls from the sky.
She knows the love stays with her.
Forever & always it does. ---- < <---.
So cry and let those dripping tears
wash away in time."
OH OH!!!!!
Lady peg
On Cold Dark Winter Nights (Poetry) - 1/28/2004 5:59:56 AM
This poem brings light to us all. Thanks for sharing it, Marlene!
On Cold Dark Winter Nights (Poetry) - 1/28/2004 2:26:33 AM
"On Cold Dark Winter Nights"... romantic stanzas entwined in the lines of wise words...
Thank You for being a bricklayer in the building of the tower of Grace and wonders.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
On Cold Dark Winter Nights (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 9:01:51 PM
Wondreful poetry, Marlene! Hope your feeling better;-)
On Cold Dark Winter Nights (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 8:37:14 PM
Enjoyed, a very good inspirational piece. cheers G
On Cold Dark Winter Nights (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 7:12:37 PM
'Let it warm you deep inside
on cold dark winter nights.'
Beautiful and haunting. Hope
you're doing ok?
On Cold Dark Winter Nights (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 7:03:22 PM
Aude Lang Syne
always is bitter sweet
nice write,
thanks,
d.
So Often (Poetry) - 1/23/2004 1:04:09 PM
You make some very good points in this poetic offering, Marlene. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis
So Often (Poetry) - 1/22/2004 5:56:44 PM
This is so true Marlene and so sad...I just spoke to a friend who has such problems and cannot get help ....sad poem..floria
So Often (Poetry) - 1/22/2004 12:02:47 AM
So heartfelt i agree with Bhuwan this is excellent..
HUGS
Peg
So Often (Poetry) - 1/21/2004 9:29:57 PM
Heartfelt write....sad but very very realistic write...love n luck...BHUWAN
So Often (Poetry) - 1/21/2004 5:59:44 AM
This is a sad and brutal reality. Often it's because one government or country is trying to out do another, regardless of the cost.
peace and happiness
So Often (Poetry) - 1/20/2004 6:24:27 PM
a deep and tender look Marlene and governments just doing too many favors, ty al
So Often (Poetry) - 1/20/2004 4:41:31 PM
A sad lament that has been going on for centuries,
but will soon come to an end, as promised in Rev.
21:3-5. "The former things will have passed away."
Silence Drifts (Poetry) - 1/11/2004 3:21:05 AM
Lovely verse!
Peace
Tony
Silence Drifts (Poetry) - 1/9/2004 10:18:33 PM
Gentle beauty of a write...hopefully the love will come, if we can but wait it out...
Silence Drifts (Poetry) - 1/9/2004 7:22:32 AM
a beautiful poem. nicely done.
Silence Drifts (Poetry) - 1/9/2004 5:02:33 AM
Marlene, this IS BEAUTIFUL. Lovely imagery and an oh so gentle exhortation!
Silence Drifts (Poetry) - 1/9/2004 4:57:46 AM
"Silence Drifts" talks with the voice of the wise tongue and delivers a sage message entwined in its elegant composition dressed with the lexicon of wisdom.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Silence Drifts (Poetry) - 1/9/2004 3:32:37 AM
Love cures all Marlene! Beautiful piece!
Silence Drifts (Poetry) - 1/8/2004 9:11:01 PM
Wonderful work Marlene, especially the third stanza it rocks
peace
Silence Drifts (Poetry) - 1/8/2004 8:23:15 PM
very pretty Mar, and contained such tender and fragile elements, ty al
Happy New Year (Poetry) - 1/5/2004 10:58:38 AM
Happy New Years Marlene! Wonderful sentiments.
Happy New Year (Poetry) - 1/3/2004 5:44:43 PM
What a beautiful festive write!
Happy New Year
~Nikki~
Happy New Year (Poetry) - 1/3/2004 12:34:12 PM
'Everything happens for a reason
I shall no longer question why."
These are wise words and I wish I could follow the implicit advice. Thank you for this offering, Marlene. Love and peace, Regis.
Happy New Year (Poetry) - 1/3/2004 12:15:05 AM
"So raise your glass and toast with me
to be happy with what you have."
I like the sound of this
peace and best wishes for 2004
Happy New Year (Poetry) - 1/2/2004 8:58:53 AM
a happy 2004 to you, too, marlene; may 2004 be your best year EVER! (((HUGS))) and much love, your tx., friend, karen lynn. :D wonderful and heartfelt write!
Happy New Year (Poetry) - 1/1/2004 12:50:21 PM
Happy New Year to you, too, Marlene! Hope it's a grand one for you.
Dance Me To The Stars (Poetry) - 12/16/2003 10:42:53 AM
I love the romance in your work. Absolutely beautiful. You are such a warm poet.
I especially loved this:
"Lift me to the stars my love.
Let me touch the moon with you."
Excellent work... you take my breath.
Thank You,
Emilie
Quality Time (Poetry) - 12/16/2003 10:41:02 AM
This needs to be posted everywhere... grocery stores, malls, ---this would be a great billboard--like the "GOD" ones ... These words ate a treasure and PLEASURE to find and read! I appreciate this. This is like a little holiday book that belongs on the coffee table. Everyone needs to read this. Wonderful conversation starters.
Thank You,
Emilie
...Did I say this was excellent?...
Soulful Smile (Poetry) - 12/16/2003 10:38:33 AM
These thoughts alone are wonderful... the way you weaved them is sheer perfection. Mmmmmmmmmmmmm love is SUCH a wonderful thing.
Beautiful work. What a writer!
Thank You,
Emilie
Soulful Smile (Poetry) - 12/14/2003 8:33:38 PM
"You are new strings on my broken guitar." There are days when I could use new strings. Thank you for sharing this offering, Marlene. Love and peace, Regis.
Quality Time (Poetry) - 12/4/2003 7:44:56 PM
Write on :)!
:)Sandy
Quality Time (Poetry) - 12/2/2003 10:41:47 PM
A beautiful poem!
From You To Me (Poetry) - 11/27/2003 1:49:38 AM
wow...i enjoyed this gem of a write!!!
From You To Me (Poetry) - 11/27/2003 1:07:17 AM
very nice, heartfelt write...
From You To Me (Poetry) - 11/25/2003 12:24:02 PM
lovely!
From You To Me (Poetry) - 11/25/2003 9:08:21 AM
Romantic and touching!
The Little I had (Poetry) - 11/24/2003 9:00:47 PM
You are a very blessed writer and that is all you will ever need! Truly inspiring! :)Smiles.
From You To Me (Poetry) - 11/24/2003 8:58:50 PM
Wow! This is truly beautiful. It brought tears to my eyes. Amazing choice of words.
From You To Me (Poetry) - 11/24/2003 8:23:15 PM
This is wonderful and so heartfelt...I loved this piece.
Allen
From You To Me (Poetry) - 11/24/2003 8:19:40 PM
A most touching expression of love that goes to the depth of the soul. Thank you for sharing this offering, Marlene. Love and peace, Regis.
The Little I had (Poetry) - 11/21/2003 3:25:57 PM
Much wisdom and truth expressed in lovely poetic form. Thank you. Regis
The Little I had (Poetry) - 11/21/2003 3:06:42 PM
Beautiful and so wise, this was outstanding,
Reindeer
The Little I had (Poetry) - 11/21/2003 8:14:49 AM
Indeed it did make you strong and compassionate, lovely write.
The Little I had (Poetry) - 11/21/2003 7:11:57 AM
Much wisdom and I've never known a happy
rich man. Funny how that works.
The Little I had (Poetry) - 11/21/2003 12:29:01 AM
there's nothing wrong with getting our poetic hands a little dirty...
enjoyed reading...
The Little I had (Poetry) - 11/19/2003 11:39:49 PM
great message!
The Little I had (Poetry) - 11/19/2003 7:08:49 PM
a well written poem.
The Little I had (Poetry) - 11/19/2003 6:15:35 PM
Little often leads to Big results. Enjoyed your poem very much.
Dance Me To The Stars (Poetry) - 11/19/2003 5:38:58 AM
A real beauty! This poem will "Dance Me To The Stars"
Just outstanding! ;)
Dance Me To The Stars (Poetry) - 11/17/2003 8:44:57 PM
An enjoyable, soothing poem. Thank you for this offering. Regis
Dance Me To The Stars (Poetry) - 11/17/2003 5:32:28 AM
wow....fantastic composition....thanks for sharing....love n luck....BHUWAN
Dance Me To The Stars (Poetry) - 11/16/2003 7:22:23 PM
Beautiful verses so tender and flowing.
I drift off with you in my heart (Poetry) - 11/7/2003 4:28:57 AM
Oh this is so beautiful.
Wish I could go back to bed now.
Thanks for sharing this.
John
The Spell Of Love (Poetry) - 11/1/2003 10:52:48 AM
This is an impressive poem Marlene, a wonderful Halloween write spiked with romance. Does this spell come in a bottle?
peace
The Spell Of Love (Poetry) - 11/1/2003 8:14:34 AM
This was so lovely, very beautiful!
Reindeer
The Spell Of Love (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 10:27:42 PM
Excellent messages in verse!!!
The Spell Of Love (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 5:36:00 PM
Excellent message and imagery.
The Spell Of Love (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 11:50:57 AM
Superb in all its glory, a great read at anytime, well done indeed, take care...Mark xx
My heart is the ticking time clock (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 11:48:44 AM
Marlene this was just absolutely great ! fresh and soo romantic too, al
The Spell Of Love (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 7:10:51 AM
Marlene, a wonterful trance.
The Spell Of Love (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 6:54:42 AM
Marlene, this is a great write, really really good images and symbols, al
The Spell Of Love (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 6:03:08 AM
Great write Marlene...This is one
of the best Halloween poems I've read.
EXCELLENT!!!
~~Linda~~
The Spell Of Love (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 5:51:20 AM
Enjoyed this romantic Halloween write very much.
The Spell Of Love (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 5:49:23 AM
Aahhh,,,the spell of love! Nothing as potent as the magic behind the moment. Great write Marlene. Lisa
My heart is the ticking time clock (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 7:11:30 PM
Your words are very stunning. I love the metaphoric value of the heart and clock. Beautiful.
Thank you,
Teresa Emilie
My heart is the ticking time clock (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 5:43:23 PM
Beautiful expression....yes ticking ticking away....loved this one Marlene...floria
Wash your blues away (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 11:07:57 AM
{{{{Marlene}}}}
A truly tender, precious and touching piece, Excellantly done!
~Nikki~
Wash your blues away (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 11:03:33 AM
Oh this one touched me so.
So much pain and compassion excellent.
peg
Wash your blues away (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 9:10:02 AM
This is a special piece. Very compassionate
and loving. Such a beautiful impression!
It's touched me. ;)
Wash your blues away (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 9:07:50 AM
I think this said it all to suffering souls, al
Wash your blues away (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 7:53:45 AM
this sings like a spirt of a song,,, lovely
Wash your blues away (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 5:26:41 AM
beautiful & comforting
good write
john+
Wash your blues away (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 5:21:19 AM
Beautiful, full of compassion.
The Castle (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 10:44:03 PM
Awww!! This was great!!
Love Tinka
The Castle (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 10:33:21 PM
yeah....excellent!!!!
The Castle (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 9:36:23 PM
Halloween treat your poetry is.
The Castle (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 4:00:10 PM
THIS is quite the festive piece! I enjoyed it :) Perfect timing to post!
Thanks,
Teresa Emilie
I'll be the seasonal breeze (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 1:49:15 PM
amen to this, to good friends and lovers present and past. a wistful write, but one that i can really relate to. nice work, poet!
The Castle (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 1:48:27 PM
LOL..had me going for a minute...loved it, loved it! a fitting tribute to the best time of year!
The Castle (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 12:54:51 PM
Neat!
TRASK
The Castle (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 12:14:13 PM
Halloween has inspired me as well. Thank you for sharing.
The Castle (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 11:45:04 AM
Marlene,,,this is just an awesome write! Considering the fact that I've spent the biggest part of the last two weeks constructing a haunted house! Thanks for the chills! Lisa
The Castle (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 10:27:55 AM
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha Marlene this was FANTASTIC!!!!
An absolutely awesome Halloweenie ride, and a trick or treaty Boo to you! :O)
~Nikki~
He resides (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 6:25:53 AM
It's so beautiful! A gem Marlene!
He resides (Poetry) - 10/28/2003 7:17:08 PM
"He's the straw spinning into gold." luv this...
He resides (Poetry) - 10/28/2003 5:31:34 PM
Hi Mar, I so liked the tenderness spoken of the lady, adn the whole idea of straw spun to gold, well I guess that can happen to, I've heard it has , Al
Use The Gifts (Poetry) - 10/26/2003 3:30:14 PM
Very inspiring dear... Thanks for the post...
Use The Gifts (Poetry) - 10/26/2003 1:43:21 AM
well done!
Use The Gifts (Poetry) - 10/26/2003 12:28:32 AM
Wonderful write Marlene....BHUWAN
Use The Gifts (Poetry) - 10/25/2003 8:52:29 PM
Marlene, Marlene, Marlene......I looove finding your name! I loved this:
"I keep holding their souls close.
Knowing that still they are watching me"---I believe we all get our little signs.
Bless your heart....
Thank You,
Teresa Emilie
psssst....thank you for the congrats...I'm um, still a bit shocked... I still can't believe that!
Use The Gifts (Poetry) - 10/25/2003 8:40:22 PM
This is so inspiring Marlene...just what I needed...lovely lovely write....floria
The wind just blew and blew (Poetry) - 10/24/2003 8:26:30 AM
Marlene,
I like what I see here... You've done a very nice job in the "tingle" department... ;)
The wind just blew and blew (Poetry) - 10/23/2003 8:58:38 AM
This was intense, beautiful and frightening!
Reindeer
The wind just blew and blew (Poetry) - 10/20/2003 10:01:06 AM
After Isabel this sounded familiar, well done, great imagery.
The wind just blew and blew (Poetry) - 10/18/2003 11:41:47 AM
Marlene allot of great drama in this one, could feel everyone having such a touch time, Al
I'll be the seasonal breeze (Poetry) - 10/12/2003 9:55:47 PM
Oh my to be able to live on a frozen ice pan; now that's love.
You've penned the breeze of love nicely. peace
I'll be the seasonal breeze (Poetry) - 10/12/2003 7:11:46 PM
A gentle, touching, sensitive offering in verse. Thank you.
I'll be the seasonal breeze (Poetry) - 10/12/2003 4:25:55 PM
This was so lovely, beautiful to read this evening,
Reindeer
I'll be the seasonal breeze (Poetry) - 10/12/2003 4:16:40 PM
oh Eileen this is so soft and lovely, a rare treat
Do you know how much I love you (Poetry) - 10/9/2003 10:57:05 PM
Yet loving is living & living is breathing
Each day I know I must.
Living my life fully until I fall becoming dust.
Marlene.....excellent write from you....enjoyed this very much.....love n luck.....BHUWAN
Do you know how much I love you (Poetry) - 10/9/2003 7:28:43 PM
These simple words ...the title pulled me in. I love those words :) What woman doesn't? Magic in your verse. Such a powerful one. This is an author I've missed reading! Life is love and love is life--faith..the good Lord/creator is everything! Life is nothing without it... aaahhhh, love! Excellent words! Makes me want to stop and smell the roses a bit longer!
Thank You,
Teresa Emilie
Do you know how much I love you (Poetry) - 10/9/2003 7:28:37 PM
Marlene, what a wonder full this write is.... I especially like the last line... I wonder if this is how most people feel when in love...
stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear
The Angel & The Glass (Poetry) - 9/30/2003 5:54:11 PM
Excellant powerful penning Marlene! The twist at the end, yes I 100% agree...BRILLIANT!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
The Angel & The Glass (Poetry) - 9/30/2003 4:21:24 PM
the fall of success powerfully portrayed...
The Angel & The Glass (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 8:03:25 AM
Marlene...this was powerful...floria
The Angel & The Glass (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 7:41:05 AM
Stunning piece! Profound and Unique!
The Angel & The Glass (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 4:07:23 AM
Marlene, well you woke me up! This is just an outstanding piece of work. This is one of those that once wasn't enough, so I went back for a second helping. Loved the images this produced. Lisa
The Angel & The Glass (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 2:23:37 AM
WHOA! Got to read this again. Sent my brain spinning it did! Amazing work!
The Angel & The Glass (Poetry) - 9/28/2003 10:12:05 PM
enjoyed readin this, it's certainly unique Marlene, right down to the ending, I'm at a lost for words.
The Angel & The Glass (Poetry) - 9/28/2003 8:37:30 PM
Loved the ending! Nice twist! Brilliant!
The Angel & The Glass (Poetry) - 9/28/2003 8:09:00 PM
Hi Marlene I really liked the ending allot, Al
The Angel & The Glass (Poetry) - 9/28/2003 7:47:12 PM
Very insightful poem of that lawyer.
Taylor
Look in the calm waters (Poetry) - 9/26/2003 7:15:26 AM
So lovely, beautiful and moving, I loved this poem,
Reindeer
