Words Won't Heal These Wounds Today (Poetry) - 2/4/2006 1:51:46 AM
You truly touche me with this offering Evan!!
Keep the faith !!
Love Tinka
Words Won't Heal These Wounds Today (Poetry) - 2/1/2006 8:40:22 PM
Sixteen years old and this wise? I was impressed before I read your bio, blown away after. Great insight, Evan. Thanks for sharing it.
Happy, Even After (Poetry) - 1/22/2006 10:43:16 AM
Well written.....alot to think about Evan!!
Love Tinka
Dreams, Sweet (Poetry) - 1/18/2006 9:49:00 AM
Well written!!
Love Tinka
Dreams, Sweet (Poetry) - 1/17/2006 11:51:56 PM
Good work. Life is the illusion. Insight comes to few, though I think you have it.
Best,
Elizabeth
Dreams, Sweet (Poetry) - 1/17/2006 7:26:20 PM
Thanks for sharing......
I Hold Your Heart, Today (Poetry) - 1/11/2006 4:37:32 AM
enjoyed this very much, self confidence is good,and determination when it comes to love.
I Hold Your Heart, Today (Poetry) - 1/5/2006 7:02:07 PM
I found a sweetness in this poem and well written.
It's Too Late (Poetry) - 12/18/2005 5:40:30 AM
Hope you get the answers you want to hear!!
It's never too late!!
Love Tinka
I Walk Alone Again (Poetry) - 10/29/2005 7:44:27 AM
We must always be open to love and never close our heart. We will get hurt, that is a given, but pain is part of living and if we don't take the chance we will never find the right love. Don't beat yourself up because you fell for someone who didn't share your dream, simply be proud and happy that you still are able to hold onto that dream and that you were able to experience those wonderful feelings even if they were unrequited. The thrill of the moment is always worth the pain that may follow. Take time to heal and go forward. She is out there somewhere, and if you have faith, you will find each other.
Take care,
Sherry
I Walk Alone Again (Poetry) - 10/29/2005 7:35:19 AM
Awwwwww Evan this is sad..we are onn the same "poetic" page again!!
Heartbreaking read!!
Love Tinka
Remember the Dance (Poetry) - 10/18/2005 11:15:28 AM
Sweet one.
I think she will say yes. (smiles)
On the Inside (Poetry) - 10/4/2005 12:16:27 AM
Emotional rollercoaster!!
Love Tinka
On the Inside (Poetry) - 10/3/2005 9:05:54 PM
very moving and emotionally succinct ...
On the Inside (Poetry) - 10/3/2005 6:40:05 PM
This was nice, Evan. I especially like that last line.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Tribute to Eileen Landis (Poetry) - 10/1/2005 1:49:03 AM
Most beautiful tribute Evan!!
Love Tinka
Tribute to Eileen Landis (Poetry) - 9/30/2005 6:09:37 PM
a most heartfelt and soulful tribute ...
Returning to Fire (Poetry) - 9/11/2005 4:24:12 AM
love constantly renews the fire in our hearts ... excellent poem ...
keep alive with positive vibes,
jude
Returning to Fire (Poetry) - 9/10/2005 4:59:21 PM
Stunning write with great descriptions!
Returning to Fire (Poetry) - 9/10/2005 1:28:36 PM
Deep and emotional!!
Love Tinka
My Love's List (Poetry) - 9/4/2005 5:58:26 PM
the only criticism i have is to condense it ... otherwise, it's a good poem ...
My Love's List (Poetry) - 8/30/2005 10:17:43 PM
as she leaned over and I asked her what's for breakfeast honey?,
she replied "Nut'in honey"
I liked it very much
Cheers
Alain
My Love's List (Poetry) - 8/30/2005 3:21:02 AM
Extremely lovely and passionate. Your talent in the field of romance is showing by itself. Wonderful poem.
Abdi-Noor
My Love's List (Poetry) - 8/29/2005 7:52:17 PM
this is very sweet and heartfelt...can't wait to see what you do with it ;) Take care. Hugs, Danielle
Broken Bones (Poetry) - 8/20/2005 7:06:17 AM
Poetic excellence through the lines of "Broken Bones" abounds;
and a philosophical thought is expressed masterfully.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Broken Bones (Poetry) - 8/14/2005 10:04:00 PM
Excellent Evan....this sorta makes you take a look at life and the ignorance of the human...to be broken in mind heart and soul...can make you die inside...even though you are still breathing!!
Take care!!
Love Tinka
College Life, College Strife (Poetry) - 6/30/2005 8:19:18 PM
well look at the bright side ... there's always summer break ...
College Life, College Strife (Poetry) - 6/29/2005 1:40:23 PM
Education can never be a bad thing!!
Enjoy while you can!!
Love Tinka
Theme of Dreams (Poetry) - 6/16/2005 5:37:19 AM
Nicely written Evan!!
Love Tinka
Theme of Dreams (Poetry) - 6/11/2005 7:26:44 AM
Ah, so very lovely, this is beautiful,
Reindeer
Time (Poetry) - 6/1/2005 10:16:28 AM
Very well written!!
Love Tinka
Time (Poetry) - 6/1/2005 5:01:36 AM
An emotionally well-delivered piece!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
Untitled (Poetry) - 5/15/2005 6:46:12 AM
Most interesting and thought provoking piece Evan!!
Love Tinka
Untitled (Poetry) - 5/14/2005 8:27:19 PM
"Untitled" is from a fountain of wise emotions, and is poetized
to strike the readers´imagination.
I have enjoyed the reading of this poem, "Untitled".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Untitled (Poetry) - 5/14/2005 7:36:27 PM
A very interesting thought-provoking write.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
Fighting This Sickness (Poetry) - 5/11/2005 9:49:02 AM
A composition bearing profound contents poetized with words from the lexicon of a growing soul; delivering an ontological and theleological poetic excellence.
"Fighting This Sickness" is a striking reading from a writing that brings Poetry its glowing and art.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Life Turning (Poetry) - 5/10/2005 3:28:43 AM
Very well expressed poetry Evan!!
Love Tinka
Life Turning (Poetry) - 5/9/2005 10:35:06 PM
Evan,
Riveting piece. You hold nothing back...and you shouldn't. Very well worded.
B
Rich with Rhyme and Ranting (Poetry) - 5/7/2005 12:39:22 PM
Thought-provoking and captivating, Evan. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis
Rich with Rhyme and Ranting (Poetry) - 5/7/2005 2:58:55 AM
This is very well done. Full of heart-felt thought.
M.Rose
Decadence in Us (Poetry) - 4/1/2005 9:49:39 AM
nicely written
Falling, Floating (Poetry) - 3/26/2005 9:40:47 AM
Beautiful......found my diary have you????
No but this is real...this is
Outstanding!!!!
To Love or Hate (Poetry) - 3/10/2005 8:15:46 PM
This is really beautiful and so well written.
Incredible (Poetry) - 3/9/2005 10:25:52 PM
Just remember the struggle,
For this is what love brings:
The hard things,
The dark kings,
The deep seating notion pulling at your heart strings.
Evan...its so nice to read your wonderful writes yet again....excellent!!!!
My Lines Aren't Mine (Poetry) - 3/4/2005 8:26:37 PM
interesting
we do until we do better
enjoyed this much!!
My Lines Aren't Mine (Poetry) - 3/2/2005 1:38:06 PM
This is great! Absolutely great! It touches one, deeply. Bravo!
My Lines Aren't Mine (Poetry) - 2/28/2005 5:46:29 PM
this is very good poetry...and I'm sure your words are your own, and that you take pride in what they have to say :)
My Lines Aren't Mine (Poetry) - 2/28/2005 5:33:54 PM
I agree with Sue on this one and it is indeed excellent.
My Lines Aren't Mine (Poetry) - 2/28/2005 4:39:10 PM
this is excellent, i really liked it and i'm sure the words are yours
To Lose (Poetry) - 2/27/2005 7:00:22 AM
Oh...that was so deep and painful, that last two lines, just so haunting and painful, it echos in my mind, outstanding.
Reindeer
To Lose (Poetry) - 2/26/2005 4:30:43 PM
painfully well written ...
To Lose (Poetry) - 2/23/2005 2:37:10 PM
Hi Evan..
This is painful for you, but I know you've heard it before.
It can get better.
Great write......
To Lose (Poetry) - 2/23/2005 1:26:26 AM
Well written emotions Evan!!life stinks bigtime!!
Love Tinka
To Lose (Poetry) - 2/22/2005 7:21:06 PM
Great expression.
To Lose (Poetry) - 2/22/2005 6:54:00 PM
Yes this is an excellent write and asks questions that I suppose we all must answer at some time or another.
To Lose (Poetry) - 2/22/2005 6:34:42 PM
excellent write, Evan, but very sad all the same...I could feel the pain of your loss in your words.
Freedom (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 5:36:54 AM
very thought-provoking with a great message in your
creative lines "egalitarianism"
and it'a a shame that sometimes most times we have to
go to war lives lost for such a wonderful right/notion
thanks for sharing!!!
Freedom (Poetry) - 2/2/2005 7:34:23 PM
you set my brain cells on fire with this poem ...
luv the first verse ...
Freedom (Poetry) - 2/2/2005 9:56:30 AM
Yip thought provoking write!!
Love Tinka
Blind Prophecy (Poetry) - 2/1/2005 6:23:31 PM
Very nice.
Rough Learning (Poetry) - 2/1/2005 3:37:29 PM
I think at your age (read your bio) you are still malleable enough that life will carve you into something far more than you are now. There is still much room for growing. Dynamic piece! :)
Freedom (Poetry) - 2/1/2005 3:27:47 PM
A most thought provoking poem about freedom and needs to be reread.
And What If She Loves Me? (Poetry) - 1/27/2005 5:32:44 AM
This is great writing. I'll multiply that by the fact that you're 16. Outstanding!
And What If She Loves Me? (Poetry) - 1/27/2005 5:22:27 AM
Nicely done. I enjoyed it very much.
M.Rose
Driving (Poetry) - 1/23/2005 8:37:35 PM
We always follow a light that we know of. Only we ourselves can see this light and know where we're heading...
Womderful write.
Sandie May Angel :o)
My Queen of Hearts (Poetry) - 1/19/2005 9:13:25 AM
very nice the flow....
and suggestion
enjoyed
My Queen of Hearts (Poetry) - 1/17/2005 9:58:32 PM
Excellent and heartfelt Evan!!
Love Tinka
My Queen of Hearts (Poetry) - 1/17/2005 9:06:22 PM
very nice ... enjoyed reading ...
My Queen of Hearts (Poetry) - 1/17/2005 4:53:06 PM
I like this and it was written very well.
My Queen of Hearts (Poetry) - 1/17/2005 4:52:51 PM
Wow, very powerfully written piece, Evan.
Rough Learning (Poetry) - 9/2/2004 8:59:48 AM
very thoughtful
The Good Kid (Poetry) - 9/2/2004 8:59:34 AM
well done
The Birth of a Tear (Poetry) - 8/30/2004 2:10:55 PM
Wonderful with a sad twinge os the hope we all hold dear. Your poetry gets better and better as your heart heals.
Susan
The Birth of a Tear (Poetry) - 8/28/2004 7:56:41 PM
life has many lessons ...
well penned ...
The Birth of a Tear (Poetry) - 8/28/2004 2:59:04 PM
"In the same way you choose to sit or stand, a boy becomes a man"
Great line, Evan.
The Birth of a Tear (Poetry) - 8/28/2004 1:28:53 PM
Most excellent piece Evan!!
Love Tinka
On My Knees We Cry (Poetry) - 8/26/2004 5:42:08 AM
Very well written Evan!!
Love Tinka
On My Knees We Cry (Poetry) - 8/25/2004 10:57:23 PM
What superb sentiments in this poem! Well done!There really is no longer death,Evan. Christ defeated it.God created a continuum without time, it is everlasting, we are all part of it, the difference is only in the "where" which realm will each of us go to!
Rough Learning (Poetry) - 7/19/2004 2:16:14 PM
THE TRUTH,i.e. Problem Is Most People Live to be 70,80+_
They Never LEARN To Overcome It Anything- Me, No,I Sure Hell Ain't HappyNor Satisfied But, I Have Learned To Make Best Of What Little I Have Got Left- Life Will Always Be A Struggle- You Just Have To Overcome It All! You Can Change & Still Be Same Person You Want To Be!
Credit For Write!
PS:JEALOUSLY,MONEY$$-GREED IS ALWAYS FOREFRONT OF MAN'S OWN FAILURE!
TRASK
Rough Learning (Poetry) - 7/19/2004 12:27:34 PM
Interesting write Evan!!
"They ask me, "Evan, will you ever change?"
And the truth is yes, but I'll always stay the same,"
no difference huh??
The Good Kid (Poetry) - 7/11/2004 4:00:38 AM
A poem to think about...read again and think again!!
Best wishes to you!!
Love Tinka
One Lover's Crusade (Poetry) - 7/2/2004 8:34:27 AM
hahaha
well do yo thang MR.
One Lover's Crusade (Poetry) - 7/1/2004 7:25:40 PM
Excellent rhythm in this, Evan. Enjoyed this.
We Have Something (Poetry) - 6/26/2004 8:17:55 AM
A very introspective write, Evan. A beautiful piece, thank you.
We Have Something (Poetry) - 6/25/2004 2:09:05 PM
This is very true Evan. When we believe something happens to our world and ine never knows when the dream will walk on in. I didn't...wasn't even looking...biding time and working and then POW!!! Just like in the comics...HE walked on into my life and I haven't had a smile this big since the day I was born. You are feeling better I take it and your poetry shows. Well done!
Susan
We Have Something (Poetry) - 6/25/2004 1:26:42 PM
Well written Evan!!
Love Tinka
Talk is Cheap (Poetry) - 6/11/2004 10:20:15 PM
well written!
Talk is Cheap (Poetry) - 6/10/2004 7:29:08 AM
agree with all here
love the cleverness here
good job!!
Talk is Cheap (Poetry) - 6/9/2004 8:08:01 AM
Yes Talk is cheap... but friendship free of charge!!
Love Tinka
Talk is Cheap (Poetry) - 6/7/2004 10:01:18 PM
Talk Is Cheap-You Got That Write/Right_
Excellent!
TRASK
To No One (Poetry) - 6/5/2004 12:08:45 PM
nicely written. very powerful.
Broken Pieces (Poetry) - 6/1/2004 10:56:32 AM
well written
Deja Vu Again (Poetry) - 5/31/2004 7:16:42 AM
powerful poem! excellent images ...
Deja Vu Again (Poetry) - 5/28/2004 4:43:00 AM
Outstanding work, speaks to the soul.
Deja Vu Again (Poetry) - 5/27/2004 9:34:07 PM
Hopefully you will find what you seek soon Evan!!
Fine..but dark write Methinks!!
Love Tinka
The Shrouded Villain-elle (Poetry) - 5/24/2004 9:40:21 PM
Sorry about the fingerslip and not leaving a comment...geeesh!!
I always enjoy your work...this one has power and many deep questions that will never be answered!!
Love Tinka :)n Yip it's me..lol!!
Simply Live (Poetry) - 5/20/2004 8:09:01 AM
Very powerful write!!!
Simply Live (Poetry) - 5/18/2004 6:14:43 AM
This is some very deep and thought provoking work Evan and written EXCELLENTly too I might add! You've given much brain food here for ponderment, thought. Oh I do love these that make you really and seriously think!
~Nikki~
Simply Live (Poetry) - 5/17/2004 11:30:20 AM
"Simply Live" marks its way leaving the message of togetherness. Those that don't intend to CREATE SLAVEYARDS will read, enjoy and comply to spread the feelings of Humanity.
I had an inspiring reading from this grandiloquent poetical writing
that strikes good sense and fraternity.
On this fifty-seventh day of Spring I Salute You, Sublime Poet!
Thank You for sharing the gifts of Your art.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Simply Live (Poetry) - 5/17/2004 10:46:36 AM
You are an idealist, and I respect that, I am too,
but sometimes we need to become realists!
"We will never halt the spread,
Until every word and soul is dead."
Did you mean to exclude the blood
that "they" made pour out over our land
on 9/11?
Simply Live (Poetry) - 5/17/2004 6:32:52 AM
Somehow, I don't think politicians will ever have the same mindset as we do. Powerful write, Evan. Thank you.
Simply Live (Poetry) - 5/17/2004 5:43:20 AM
Very deep write Evan!!
Keep the Faith buddy!!
Love Tinka
Simply Live (Poetry) - 5/17/2004 3:33:37 AM
Evan, God is love! Love is light and sunshine in our worlds. Hate is darkenness, and it is sometimes very hard to escape the darkness
in our lives. But no two are the same and no two people feel the same; so search for the light until you find it and truth till it is second nature to you and all this will pass away. Bill
It'll Never Let You Be (Poetry) - 5/15/2004 8:14:49 AM
Evan...very very powerful write!!!
It'll Never Let You Be (Poetry) - 5/15/2004 4:19:40 AM
Wow Strong and extremely powerful write Evan!!
Love Tinka
Blurring the Senses (Poetry) - 5/6/2004 11:02:52 PM
This is really thought provoking and well done Evan!
Blurring the Senses (Poetry) - 5/6/2004 8:43:35 PM
a very introspective exposé ...
Blurring the Senses (Poetry) - 5/6/2004 8:41:55 PM
Hope you find your anwers Evan!!
Love Tinka
Lies and Deception (Poetry) - 4/30/2004 5:48:33 PM
a very honest and revealing poem ...
Lies and Deception (Poetry) - 4/29/2004 9:10:00 AM
Evan....emotional gem.....BhuWAN!!!!
Lies and Deception (Poetry) - 4/28/2004 5:57:29 AM
A cry for freedom, take the leap. This poem is so emotive, always be you..
Lies and Deception (Poetry) - 4/27/2004 10:58:13 PM
Emotional poem Evan!!
Take care!!
Love Tinak
Lies and Deception (Poetry) - 4/27/2004 9:12:07 PM
Evan,
Much emotion from the heart and soul! Great poem.
Cynthia
Lies and Deception (Poetry) - 4/27/2004 7:50:29 PM
Beautifully written and so moving,
Reindeer
Broken Pieces (Poetry) - 4/23/2004 7:08:23 AM
A wise write, Evan.
(Oh, by the way? I did like The Wife. But, not every poem can be a hit. I had one that was posted here for months with ZERO reviews! Now THAT'S a Big yikes!) Keep writing!
Bad News.... (Poetry) - 4/23/2004 7:04:47 AM
So sorry to hear of your break(s). Perhaps this time will allow the muse to return; I know how very frustrating it can be when it is seemingly uncooperative. While your body heals, so will your muse. Rest! (and then, Return!) Hugs...
This Goes to the One(second edition) (Poetry) - 4/23/2004 6:56:06 AM
Both editions are a wonderful tribute to your sage.
"And maybe, just maybe one day
One heartbeat away
Truth may catch the blur of reason." <-- Great line.
Broken Pieces (Poetry) - 4/2/2004 9:22:13 PM
very creative ... i like this poem ...
Broken Pieces (Poetry) - 4/2/2004 7:19:56 AM
This is outstanding EVAN!
Broken Pieces (Poetry) - 4/2/2004 3:15:18 AM
Insightful piece Evan!!
Love Tinka
The Newest Sensation (Poetry) - 4/1/2004 2:21:54 PM
BRAVO Evan! Kudos!
A most stunning write!
Thanks for your review!
The Newest Sensation (Poetry) - 3/31/2004 10:15:54 AM
Well written Evan!!
Love Tinka
The Newest Sensation (Poetry) - 3/31/2004 5:49:25 AM
Excellent write. I agree with Robert.
The Newest Sensation (Poetry) - 3/30/2004 11:20:22 PM
This is well written EVAN!
lady Peg
The Newest Sensation (Poetry) - 3/30/2004 8:37:46 PM
in the media, the truth is seldom revealed or pursued ... it the blind sensation of the moment that excites the masses ...
Maybe This'll Help (Poetry) - 3/21/2004 9:32:02 AM
I like the progression in this - and I could read in your words that "you" were getting more drunk by the minute. I could feel this. Much wisdom in this piece, Evan. Thank you.
Maybe This'll Help (Poetry) - 3/20/2004 5:55:29 AM
Evan,
Booze will do that.
you capture the drunk well
and the emotions of it through
out this poem.
Peg
Maybe This'll Help (Poetry) - 3/20/2004 4:38:31 AM
Most interesting So!!
Love Tinka
Maybe This'll Help (Poetry) - 3/19/2004 8:51:44 PM
lay off the booze ...
Maybe This'll Help (Poetry) - 3/19/2004 8:06:02 PM
LOL..this is entertaining...
loved reading it..floria
Bad News.... (Poetry) - 3/15/2004 10:27:41 PM
If poetry is there; if it there or meant to be, you will find it in your heart. Your mind can only mold it into a poem. Hope you find it and refresh and come back stronger. Bill Murray
Bad News.... (Poetry) - 3/13/2004 1:49:04 PM
(((even)))
your body may be broke, but your muse hasn't abandoned you. trust me. when you least expect it, it will be back.
take a needed rest, don't force anything, and come back when you're able.
sorry to hear of your accident--hope you're feeling better real soon!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
are you pinned? i had pins in my left foot once, did all right 'til some lady stomped 'em *owww* hit the floor in a smooth out faint *cringe* still remember that one--and that was 20 years ago!
Bad News.... (Poetry) - 3/12/2004 11:27:51 PM
Evan, I hope you will reconsider, just keep writing your muse will return it never really leaves it is our attitude that causes change. You'll be in my thoughts and prayers, and I hope you will soon be well. Having broken my foot in five places I know what your going through;-) It takes time and patience. Keep writing!
Bad News.... (Poetry) - 3/12/2004 10:18:03 PM
Sorry to hear......take care and be back soon okay!!
Love Tinka
The Wife ~For the Challenge~ (Poetry) - 3/11/2004 4:25:39 PM
You ended this with a bang!....
LOL...great write evan...floria
Such Unending Pain (Poetry) - 3/8/2004 5:55:30 AM
This is an excellent poem Evan!!
Love Tinka
Such Unending Pain (Poetry) - 3/8/2004 3:31:28 AM
Well penned and beautifully emotive poetry.
Such Unending Pain (Poetry) - 3/7/2004 9:37:32 PM
The Queen who finds a feeble black knight is a fool, and she will realize it but, surely, far too late.
"I can do nothing,
But stand,
but stand, and fight" <--- wisdom young man, wisdom!
Excellent write!
Such Unending Pain (Poetry) - 3/7/2004 8:38:28 PM
the impulse to endure keeps us going ...
But, how does one fight without grounds to do so?
Well, how does one write in such heightened intellect,
With no wisdom at all.
a rhetorical question supreme ...
i see lots of wisdom here
