Misery (Poetry) - 3/26/2013 7:41:52 AM
A creative personification of an emotion. Let's just hope it isn't true because it speaks of torment and loneliness.
Ron
Misery (Poetry) - 3/26/2013 3:56:12 AM
fight her off and let the other friends do you better still
budd
Anticipation (Poetry) - 5/20/2010 8:55:47 PM
You wrote a real gem with this poem, Rose. Written by true love.
This poem could have been rated PG where you would have gotten more exposure. Why don't you change it? It is really very good!
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
mere words (Poetry) - 5/17/2010 1:12:38 AM
Very good work, Rose
Midnight (Poetry) - 5/15/2010 7:19:39 PM
Don't ever let go of those hopes and dreams. Excellent expression.
mere words (Poetry) - 5/15/2010 1:12:38 PM
oh m' gosh...how neat to read to read something a little different....going to ck out more of your stuff...patmeddlin
mere words (Poetry) - 5/15/2010 12:50:05 PM
I agree with Amber, you have a freshness in your verse. Great job I look foward to your next writing.
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
mere words (Poetry) - 5/14/2010 7:06:48 PM
Rose,
Very nicely done! Your poem is a breath of fresh air!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
grass (Poetry) - 5/14/2010 1:42:01 AM
Short but sweet. Good job.
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
the voice (Poetry) - 5/13/2010 7:14:53 PM
We are our own worst enemy are we... Never listen to the negative side only the positive side...Nice poem, Rose
Peace, love and light,
Amber "V"
grass (Poetry) - 5/13/2010 4:49:45 PM
timeless simplicity.
love it, rose!
welcome to a/d,
cg
Greed (Poetry) - 5/10/2010 12:05:02 PM
all 5 of your postings are a combination of delightful-innovative and thought provoking...i really like you style... each one...especially greed and my favorite it sheeple. i see some individulistic thinking hear...which i find to be rare. keep going.
patmedlin
Sheeple (Poetry) - 5/10/2010 11:52:54 AM
oh m' goodness rose....i love this...how clever, insightful and right-on you are...ours are just different words saying the same thing...aren't they...except you painted a more visual picture...can't wait to read more of your stuff.
thanks for taking time to comment on blank faces
Greed (Poetry) - 5/1/2010 5:12:35 PM
a well written rendition of greed's effect upon mankind ... welcome to the den ...
Greed (Poetry) - 5/1/2010 1:55:41 PM
Well Rose if this is an example of your work and style, let me be one of the ones to first welcome you to the den and I look forward to reading more of you in the future.
Fee
