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Recent Reviews for Valerie writerbump


Summer Barbecue (Poetry) - 9/22/2026 4:23:48 PM
Reads yummy and relaxed. Ron

Summer Barbecue (Poetry) - 9/22/2026 11:11:58 AM
I'm there with you, Valerie! Best Wishes, Carolyn

Winter Treasures (Poetry) - 1/28/2026 12:46:58 PM
I recall the inner peace I often felt and even warmth during a gentle snowfall. Knowing that no two snowflakes were exactly alike. One of nature's amazing feats of brilliance. And, like sparkling waters, the way that light reflects off of snow sometimes, during the time when the sun is low in the morning or in the evening and even at night with the moon, the reflection can be viewed like sparkling diamonds as your poem describes…wonderful! Ron

Blue Moon Bay (Poetry) - 9/28/2025 8:31:38 AM
How delightful! I believe that was blueberry ice cream. And you brought back memories of the cottage in northern Wisconsin. Where something was always on the barbecue grill and the evenings were magic with all of the wild birds flying by. I really miss those days that your poem brought back. Ron

Minnesota State Fair (Poetry) - 9/2/2025 8:35:21 AM
You took me there. Memories of going to the Center, Wisconsin State Fair for many years and even working there on the midway for two years making lots of money before starting school. My last experience was at a conference in Dallas where we were given lots of tickets to the Texas State Fair. It was a grand evening we spent there with reminders of my youth all around… Especially the inviting smells from all the food being prepared. Magical wherever you go. Ron

Anticipation (Poetry) - 7/22/2025 7:48:44 AM
Brought back memories of watching surfers, attempting to body surf, myself and a picnic on the beach. Ron

Summer Barbecue (Poetry) - 7/17/2024 6:25:14 AM
I want to be there right now,(I could even smell the kabobs.) Thank you for sharing your BBQ with me,I loved it.

Summer Barbecue (Poetry) - 7/14/2024 9:31:35 AM
You took me back, except for the fuchsia parasol. Thanks for the memory. Ron

High on Scents (Poetry) - 6/5/2024 3:19:13 PM
I love the smell of jasmine but miss my childhood smell of lilacs in the spring. Ron

High on Scents (Poetry) - 6/4/2024 2:32:07 PM
Spring is indeed in the air. The Lord, our God created it all. Thank you for the gentile reminder!

Winter Treasures (Poetry) - 1/11/2024 9:07:54 AM
We sometimes don't know the value of something until it is gone. Moonlight and sunlight on ice crystals can be stunning. Ron

Giving Thanks (Poetry) - 11/23/2023 10:14:45 AM
We've a lot to be thankful for and your poem shows the span of it. Ron

Giving Thanks (Poetry) - 11/22/2023 7:37:42 PM
Yes, we should count our blessings and thank God. HAPPY THANKSGIVING TO YOU AND EVERYONE ON AUTHORSDEN! Sandie

Fallbrook Hills (Poetry) - 10/17/2023 7:44:47 AM
The title says it all… Fall and Brook. Set in the hills. Nothing could be better this time of year. Ron

Lileth Fair (Poetry) - 9/12/2023 9:07:16 AM
You’ve caught a great musical outdoorsy hippie feel here… Nothing better…in the Summertime sharing Stories and of course the music,.. Great capture of atmosphere in this piece… Best wishes, Diana.. 🌿

Lileth Fair (Poetry) - 8/12/2023 11:12:49 AM
I wouldn't be welcome there, but that's okay. Your poem describing the experience beautifully. Ron

Lileth Fair (Poetry) - 8/10/2023 1:40:44 PM
It sounds like so much fun. Like the time when I went to an outdoor concert on the harbourfront with my daughter. This brought back so much memories. Sandie

Summer Celebration (Poetry) - 7/2/2023 8:29:34 AM
For many years I chased the will sunset to arrive before a firework show began wherever I was in this great nation. But in recent years, it has been much better to just stay at home, turn on the big screen, listen to the music and watch the spectacular show of fireworks on the TV rather than getting out under the "rockets red glare" anymore. Thanks for you I may may have many wonderful times of family and fun. Ron

Highway Surprise (Poetry) - 4/29/2023 9:55:53 AM
Would love to see that California superbloom. We experience the same thing here in Texas on a yearly basis, but this year they say it is one of the best after our recent drought and multiple storms this spring. But if you don't stop, get out of the car and get down among the bees, butterflies and occasional hummingbirds to really see what it's all about and smell their fragrance, you are missing out on much more than just a beautiful landscape passing by that will fade in a few days or weeks. I haven't heard anything about Death Valley, but I bet the wildflowers are exploding there again. Ron

Lent's Sacrifice (Poetry) - 4/11/2023 9:02:26 AM
That's a cute poem. We all have those little vices that we love that are hard to give up. I guess Lent is a good excuse to try. I've been fasting every other day to lose a little bit of tummy and because it's good for my health. But I'm tempted by some of my everyday snacks to sneak a little bit of them while fasting. I'm already seeing benefits after a couple of months. And feeling better, too. Ron

Glorious Blue Flower (Poetry) - 3/23/2023 7:59:18 AM
Love the rhyme and flow. A beautiful flower of a poem.

Glorious Blue Flower (Poetry) - 3/22/2023 9:43:04 AM
A revealing of flower beauty here Valerie, I really enjoyed your poem today,

Hope (Poetry) - 3/20/2023 2:28:05 PM
We find hope in many places, well penned, Valerie.

Hope (Poetry) - 2/18/2023 10:42:05 AM
Most churches post platitudes out front. You make me wonder what was posted. Hope? Ron

Winter (Marshall, MN) (Poetry) - 1/11/2023 9:01:58 AM
The essence of being snowbound. In some places in Minnesota and in the Dakotas, it's a long way to town or even the next farm or ranch. When snowed in, one has to wait until the roads are plowed and clear. Drifts can be as hard as concrete and hard to dig out of the way. We were snowbound in May of either my seventh or eighth year at my grandparents' truck farm in northwestern Wisconsin. Mom and grandpa had to crawl on top of 8 to 10 foot drifts on the road for 1/2 mile and then walk 1/2 mile on the highway that was blown clear by the wind to a little grocery store to get those essentials. The next day, late, a snowplow managed to clear the road by going through some farmers' fields. Our weekend was prolonged until Wednesday when my family was able to get in the car and escape for the hundred mile drive back home. Ron

Winter Treasures (Poetry) - 12/23/2022 12:29:58 PM
Yes, snowy or icy winter scenes are a delight. While trying to get somewhere stuck in an airport, or worse traveling on a road where you wind up in the ditch can be very stressful. I miss those frigid scenes, but I still have so many embedded in my memory that they are like a childhood Courier and Ives display for Christmas. Ron

Giving Thanks (Poetry) - 11/27/2022 3:30:04 AM
It is always so pleasing to read of someone’s appreciation and gratitude… Thank you Valerie… Diana…🍃

Giving Thanks (Poetry) - 11/24/2022 9:32:33 AM
Wonderful thoughts about appreciating what we have. Especially for those who believe that there is a god providing these good things and not just good people. Ron

Giving Thanks (Poetry) - 11/24/2022 1:32:58 AM
Thanks for your well-placed thanks, Valerie.

Giving Thanks (Poetry) - 11/23/2022 6:11:15 PM
beautiful tribute and a great reminder that there is so much to be thankful for.

Dearest Sheri (Poetry) - 11/14/2022 7:56:03 PM
what a lovely tribute to your friend. you are very blessed to have a friend for keeps. wonderful read.

Dearest Sheri (Poetry) - 11/13/2022 9:44:42 AM
Good friends are hard to find. Looks like she is a keeper for you. Ron

Dearest Sheri (Poetry) - 11/12/2022 6:08:19 PM
A good, loyal and true friend is a wonderful blessing to be treasured… A comforting hand held out when needed… You are lucky to have such a friend… Your words tell of someone who really cares… and someone who would really appreciate your grateful words… Diana…🍃

Dearest Sheri (Poetry) - 11/12/2022 3:38:54 PM
A friend to be treasured and a beautiful tribute, Valerie.

The Hunt (Poetry) - 10/20/2022 8:50:53 AM
I so enjoyed this visually colourful and endearing piece… Very heartwarming… (I once grew some Pumpkin seeds and although there were several of the most amazing apricot coloured flowers…hinting at a bountiful crop…only one Pumpkin grew…but they are absolutely fascinating to grow…little green tendrils clinging on where they can for balance… We really treasured the one that grew…it was carefully carved and we had a delicious Pumpkin soup, and the seeds were toasted in the oven! Happy Halloween ( in advance) Diana…🍃

The Hunt (Poetry) - 10/12/2022 3:49:07 PM
aww this is really sweet. we don'thave this tradition but your piece got me curious if there's actually a pumpkin yard and 3 pumpkins that inspired this piece, and how they look like after carving them.

The Hunt (Poetry) - 10/11/2022 8:58:19 AM
A fun reminder of days when most of us lived in rural America with the harvest at hand and always a couple of pumpkins we grew ourselves. But I'm stuck in the middle of suburbia where I can buy pumpkins at the local supermarket but have to drive at least 50 miles before I could find rural harvests and pumpkins growing in the fields. It's a shame we don't have Halloween in the city like we used to. Just a party at our community center so that the kids will not be bothered on the street or given poison in their treats. Ron

California Journey (Poetry) - 9/22/2022 9:00:58 AM
That is a big change. I'm not sure exactly where you're headed, but I did that many years ago when I was able to move easily with everything I had in my car. California winters can be dry and cool. Sweaters and wool clothing can come in handy. With water, you can grow anything in California. But it is very dry and brown compared to the Midwest. In time, you will probably love living there, because I sure did. Ron

La Playa (Poetry) - 7/3/2022 12:34:52 PM
The wonders of Mexico and so many beautiful beach communities. It is a treasure that Mexico has, along with the mariachi bands and low-priced good drinks and eats. Have apartheid in that magic, too. There is a rather large contingent of Americans heading south of the border to enjoy that lifestyle year-round in retirement. Ron

La Playa (Poetry) - 7/2/2022 3:50:18 PM
this sounded like so much fun. i enjoyed the course of imagery in your piece. my mouth watered picturing out the beef on a sword. i'm glad you had a wonderful time. thank you.

After the Storm (Poetry) - 5/22/2022 8:31:54 AM
I believe I understand the twist. In a stormy relationship, tears come quickly. But when the storm is over, they dry. A brief allegory. Ron

Glorious Blue Flower (Poetry) - 4/17/2022 9:40:27 AM
Oh, how I miss driving out an hour from Houston to view them every year. Painting hills and valleys in blue is such a magical way, drawing painters and photographers from all over to capture the most exquisite rural scene. And to be down low and close up amid bluebonnets and indian paintbrush with all the bees buzzing and butterflies floating all around. Pure spring magic, like your poem. https://ronhullauthor.com/streams/bluebonnets-4-2-14.mov Ron

Winter Treasures (Poetry) - 3/1/2022 3:36:49 PM
Moonlit snow…what could be more beautiful? Sun on snow also thrills me… Thank you for the reminder in this enchanting poem… Diana..🍃

Winter Treasures (Poetry) - 2/2/2022 12:51:27 PM
I love this poem, Valerie. So perfectly describes the beauty of snow. A treasure of a poem.

Winter Treasures (Poetry) - 1/23/2022 8:30:16 AM
Yes, I missed the sparkle of sunlight and moonlight through snow crystals. Gives magic to snow whiteness. But I don't miss the cold that accompanies snow. Ron

Winter Treasures (Poetry) - 1/20/2022 3:55:52 PM
this is beautiful Valerie. enjoyed

Advent (Poetry) - 1/11/2022 5:53:45 PM
What a wonderful way to celebrate.

Advent (Poetry) - 12/31/2021 5:58:58 PM
Beautiful memories linked to todays sweet joy Valerie, enjoyed your poem today, Happy New Year :)

Advent (Poetry) - 12/10/2021 11:05:27 AM
For children, part of the enchantment was the anticipation. Ron

Giving Thanks (Poetry) - 12/1/2021 3:34:59 PM
So very positive, And gratitude brings its own rewards… Diana…🌱

Giving Thanks (Poetry) - 12/1/2021 1:34:41 AM
Very well stated, Valerie. And we thank God for poets like you!

Giving Thanks (Poetry) - 11/25/2021 2:17:47 PM
I love your grateful heart and your list of essential things that make up our beautiful Country an life. Great write Valerie, Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family

Giving Thanks (Poetry) - 11/25/2021 2:08:50 PM
In your poem you have summed up all of your blessings. Nice reminding on this day of remembrance. Ron

Dearest Sheri (Poetry) - 11/20/2021 9:01:45 AM
A wonderful response to your friend Sheri's kind assistance. I've always loved bleeding hearts, but they don't grow in our subtropical neighborhood. However, we have a wonderful tropical plant that I haven't identified that drops clumps of red and white flower that look very much like bleeding hearts. I would send you a picture if I had your email address. Ron

Dearest Sheri (Poetry) - 11/19/2021 8:48:14 AM
We all need a special friend at times… Your words reflect your appreciation in such a beautiful way… Diana…🌺

Dearest Sheri (Poetry) - 11/19/2021 1:07:52 AM
Such a lovely and grateful tribute to a close friend. Quite nice. jeanne

Glorious Blue Flower (Poetry) - 11/18/2021 4:44:31 PM
I agree with the other Diana (we call each other the ‘other’ Diana) there is such gentleness in your writing. I think you would create some stunningly beautiful Haiku, with your talent for distilling images to the briefest form. Quite effective…..and memorable. ~~ djl

Fallbrook Hills (Poetry) - 11/18/2021 4:41:24 PM
Your style of writing I find quite appealing. I read a book I about ‘Seeing Writing’, where it is nearly like being there for the reader because the description is so clearly given. Yours are like that I find, and they are graceful because of this ability you have to write with the vividness that I see in your choice of words and line breaks. ~~ djl

Winter Treasures (Poetry) - 11/18/2021 4:33:30 PM
I like how delicately you write of this vision. The poem itself has a hush-ness to it, and appreciation. Lovely ~~ djl

Dearest Sheri (Poetry) - 11/18/2021 4:32:03 PM
Tender piece of writing, this. ~~ djl

Fallbrook Hills (Poetry) - 8/24/2021 8:58:34 AM
Yes, the interstate highway system took everyone away from the congestion of driving two lane highways through small town and other obstructions just to get there. But the result was that the countryside could be enjoyed all the more because once you got on those two lane roads off of the interstate, traffic was so light that one could lazily drive through the country and enjoy the sights you have shown us in this little poem. Much enjoyed. Ron

Anticipation (Poetry) - 8/7/2021 11:00:10 AM
A California ritual for some. Although it could be in Hawaii. Either way, what a wonderful way to spend a day. My only day body surfing at Santa Cruz reminded me how cold the water was. Every couple of attempts required me to get out of the 55° water onto the beach to warm up in the sun with the air temperature only at around 70°. Only caught one wave that whole day. Ron

Summer Celebration (Poetry) - 6/29/2021 7:27:19 AM
You have launched 4 July this year with a catchy fireworks display. Miss those days of carefree fire play. Ron

Spring Fever (Poetry) - 5/23/2021 8:34:52 AM
I feel the joy you express, the sense of stepping outdoors is heartwarming! Corrine Ardoin

Spring Fever (Poetry) - 5/20/2021 8:48:03 AM
I get a strange, lustful feeling that occupies my thoughts and makes me want to go out into the wildflowers naked and let the sun warmed my winter weary body. Reminds me of my wishful teenage years when spring fever was not accompanied by spring break. Ron

Hold On (Poetry) - 5/20/2021 1:18:36 AM
Yes...to hold on to whatever you believe in... and have faith in that belief... Aptly put...very relevant to our World situation at the moment! Diana...

October (Poetry) - 5/20/2021 1:15:46 AM
You create such wonderful atmospheres in few words... Hot tea and warm socks in bed... So comforting...! Diana...

Autumn (Poetry) - 5/20/2021 1:11:08 AM
Nature has got it just right with the timing of The seasons...by the time we have admired and appreciated the beauty and glory of each... The next one comes along thrilling us anew.. You created such a vivid scene, I was there too.. Diana...

Critical (Poetry) - 5/20/2021 1:07:42 AM
The danger is the criticism is often purely subjective, and can put people off without observing and assessing for themselves... I found myself doing just that yesterday in selecting some books and being influenced by some negative criticism... Diana...

Winter Treasures (Poetry) - 5/20/2021 1:02:27 AM
Beautiful! A wonderful childhood memory of Christmas Eve, Walking back from Midnight Mass, and being thrilled by the Moonlight sparkling on the snow... You have captured the feeling perfectly for me... Diana...

Highway Surprise (Poetry) - 5/20/2021 12:57:50 AM
I love this poem... It reminds me of seeing Yellow flowers on the railway Embankments whilst travelling by train to visit my Grandparents at the seaside...The sight of them was so uplifting... Diana...

Glorious Blue Flower (Poetry) - 5/20/2021 12:55:04 AM
Being from the UK, I had not heard of Bluebonnets... I have just looked them up...they are quite similar to our English Bluebells... I love blue flowers, and they are so pretty... Your gentle questioning words create the perfect backdrop for These glorious blue flowers... Diana...

Spring Fever (Poetry) - 5/20/2021 12:41:39 AM
Me too! You have created the perfect Spring day... Delightful...! Diana...

Glorious Blue Flower (Poetry) - 4/12/2021 8:27:08 AM
The bluebonnets may be especially beautiful this year because of the three day freeze and the amount of rain that has been falling in central Texas. We would make an annual pilgrimage to Brennan to see them every year when I still drove my vans. Here is a video that Beh took during our sojourn to Washington on the Brazos in 2015. https://ronhullauthor.com/streams/Wildflowers-4-9-15.m4v Ron

Highway Surprise (Poetry) - 3/28/2021 10:47:51 AM
Spring wildflowers are eternal. And tough little guys growing up through cracked asphalt. Regardless of what the flower was, we tended to call them all, buttercups. Ron

Valentine's Day (Poetry) - 2/14/2021 5:02:17 PM
It's a wonderful day and custom. Your presents are perfect to show love to a lady.

Valentine's Day (Poetry) - 2/13/2021 9:20:38 AM
I like the lingerie part. Makes me wonder though why we kill flowers by cutting them and eat too much sugary chocolate. But red in pink everywhere certainly does pick up the spirits at this time of the winter when spring is still a bit far off to contemplate. Ron

Critical (Poetry) - 2/5/2021 10:36:35 AM
Or, we could look at it another way. Critics often help people of creative nature to improve their work. But if the criticism is not constructive or helpful, the best thing that a sane person can do is simply ignore it. Ron

Light Filled New Year (Poetry) - 1/21/2021 9:44:54 AM
Certainly Christmas lights add to the gaiety of the new year. Since it is now January 21 what I'm getting to you in your poem, it is obvious that in spite of a few bad actors and sore losers, the year is starting off wonderfully But I certainly hope you have taken down all those lights. Having them still up and shining in Midsummer is certainly not the way to go. Ron

Light Filled New Year (Poetry) - 1/3/2021 7:02:49 AM
for those who can keep it, the joy will be there

Winter Treasures (Poetry) - 12/10/2020 9:35:34 AM
Yes, it is not only the beauty of temporary snow that shines back at us when we see it sparkling in the night, but the many benefits it brings far beyond. Ron

Autumn (Poetry) - 11/28/2020 11:35:24 AM
It must be an amazing sight when the sun is low and the light enhances all those colours.

October (Poetry) - 11/23/2020 5:59:06 PM
Thankfully as a Floridian, I'm exempt from what you are getting ready for. It sounds like you're well prepared. You've expressed it well. The lovely thing for anyone who experiences a harsh winter with bare trees and snow on the ground...spring is coming and the tender leaves will soon hang from the trees in a way that we can't appreciate as fully as you will.

October (Poetry) - 11/11/2020 9:14:24 AM
Yes, winter is not the fun used to be as we age. But we can have fun memories of ice-skating, snow shoveling, and skiing/sledding when we were young. Reminds me of September Song. Every time I hear it, I feel my age. Ron

The Hunt (Poetry) - 10/20/2020 1:41:47 PM
Ah, its a time to get creative, pumpkins big and small, all in the fun of it. Thank you for sharing your delightful poem, dear Valerie.

The Hunt (Poetry) - 10/12/2020 1:45:42 AM
That's great! Let the fun begin! Sandie

Bees Are Back in Town (Poetry) - 7/21/2020 12:46:27 PM
long may they live

Bees Are Back in Town (Poetry) - 7/19/2020 11:13:55 AM
A hopeful poem. Unfortunately, pesticides used in agriculture are probably to blame for much of their decline. But I just read that feral or wild bees are much more resilient to the kinds of ailments affecting domesticated bees. Probably because they get their nectar from the wild plants and trees rather than crops that are heavily covered with pesticides, supposedly to keep them healthy, creating the opposite as a result. Ron

Bees Are Back in Town (Poetry) - 7/18/2020 10:27:45 AM
At least in our area, the health of bees are still in danger. Leave the bees be.

Bees Are Back in Town (Poetry) - 7/18/2020 3:33:28 AM
Bees are so very important in our circle of life every day. Those critters buzz around, collect pollen, and go on their way. We've been focused on this virus crisis but this too shall pass. But when it comes to bees, we simply cannot live without them. Every bee's life truly matters, in our future as in our past... Thank you Valerie!

Father's Day Surprise (Poetry) - 6/23/2020 10:26:47 AM
This seems to be more about getting a good camera shot rather than your father. Perhaps it was your father behind the camera. Reminds me of some of the pictures of furtive animals that just wouldn't stay still as I tried to photograph them in Yellowstone. One huge antlered elk with a huge harem, scared me so, I only took the picture when he put his head down to graze. When the picture came out, all I got was is a distant rump between trees! Ron

Harbringers (Poetry) - 4/26/2020 7:50:34 AM
I would love to see tulips again, but I have not seen them here in the Houston area. Perhaps it's the soil, or perhaps it's the fact that we don't get freezing weather. I remember them popping up in a couple of places on my property in West Virginia, planted long ago by somebody who liked them as well as I did. That I left there after only three years. Tulips are certainly harbingers of spring. Ron

Hold On (Poetry) - 3/28/2020 8:56:19 AM
That bar now has imprints from tight grips. An uplifting poem. Thanks.

Hold On (Poetry) - 3/26/2020 11:10:43 AM
Many will have to hold on tight. I have been on a self-imposed quarantine (not related to the virus, but due to the difficulty of going out in the public with my paralysis and all that entails getting me ready and then getting me back home) since last October. I do get outside every day when there is sun and warmth. But not to meet other people. I am happy and contented alone except for my caregivers coming and going that keep me alive and happy. Ron

Hold On (Poetry) - 3/25/2020 4:39:58 AM
Well said my dear poet, from your lips to Gods ears. Have a precious day, Valeria. xo

Valentines (Poetry) - 2/11/2020 10:36:28 AM
Wish it wasn't so commercial. We should grow the flowers (we have booming roses in our front yard). Make the chocolate from scratch. Write the books you give. Make a homemade card with lines that you wrote, not something picked off the shelf that someone else wrote. Ron

Clean Slate (Poetry) - 1/9/2020 2:00:34 PM
Looks like a clear plan. Doable, too. Ron

Clean Slate (Poetry) - 1/6/2020 1:27:52 AM
Well said Valerie! Now all I need to do is select from over 800 poems which ones need to be booked! LOL Nicely done! JMD

Brrrrr (Poetry) - 10/16/2019 12:37:51 AM
I always look forward to winter and the cold winds that circulate down from the north and with it, hopefully, much snow, but little ice as I can only tolerate some of winters storms...-e-

Brrrrr (Poetry) - 10/13/2019 8:06:43 AM
I miss all that color and the smell of dried leaves. But I'm here in the southeast Texas sun, bundled up this morning with the furnace on because the first front of the fall came sliding through a couple of days ago, taking away our 90° afternoons, sigh. Ron

Brrrrr (Poetry) - 10/12/2019 5:33:39 PM
Florida is my home now. Never regretted this move only notice it's getting crowded down here lately. Nice poem. Stay warm!

Brrrrr (Poetry) - 10/12/2019 2:30:57 PM
I, for one, am NOT looking forward to winter. Nope!

Chalky Landscape (Poetry) - 8/18/2019 10:31:25 AM
I guess you had to learn to sit where the wind would not flow campfire ashes into your eyes. ;-) You brought back memories of my many days fishing and joining my parents at their cottage in the Wisconsin Northwoods. For those who have not tasted walleye or their pan fish smaller relatives, freshwater perch, I would like to tell them that it is one of the finest tasting fish in the world. And even better when caught fresh and fried in butter on a campfire in the morning for breakfast. Ron

Chalky Landscape (Poetry) - 8/14/2019 5:04:12 PM
wow. sounds like a ton of fun waiting for those fishes in the early morn. thank you for your poem.

Chalky Landscape (Poetry) - 8/14/2019 2:35:04 PM
You have captivated me with your picturesque poem Valerie, Beautiful memory penned xo

Chalky Landscape (Poetry) - 8/14/2019 6:36:45 AM
And good memories they are too Bump. We've had oodles of similar experiences here as well. We love the woods mountains and lakes, campfires, and fresh caught pan-roasted fish. Can't get much better than that. Thanks for sharing.

Tribute (Poetry) - 6/18/2019 12:50:03 AM
A wonderful poetic tribute to your dad. Blessings, John Michael

Tribute (Poetry) - 6/17/2019 12:15:01 PM
Touching . . . Very much so . . . Thank you for writing and posting this wonderful tribute to your father.

Tribute (Poetry) - 6/17/2019 10:49:38 AM
Beautiful tribute. pronto pups was a new one on me, I had never heard of them before, and had to look it up just to find out they're hot dogs on a stick.

Tribute (Poetry) - 6/17/2019 9:32:09 AM
A fine tribute to a wonderful father. Ron

Spring Fever (Poetry) - 4/28/2019 10:52:46 AM
You certainly described spring, but I look at "fever" in another way. Kind of the thing that makes one itch for that may be a bit crazy, but none the less desirable as well. Ron

Spring Fever (Poetry) - 4/27/2019 7:06:45 AM
As soon as I'm done here, I'm heading outside. The grass needs mowing again, and I'll revel in the scent of our lilacs, My favorite spring smell.

Spring Fever (Poetry) - 4/26/2019 4:56:26 PM
I'm with you all the way on this one, Valerie!

Hold On (Poetry) - 4/12/2019 4:35:18 PM
Thank you everyone for your reviews. I appreciate the feedback.

Hold On (Poetry) - 3/19/2019 9:05:48 AM
It's certainly no good if you fall off! Ron

Hold On (Poetry) - 3/18/2019 3:15:06 PM
ahhhh yes budd

Hold On (Poetry) - 3/18/2019 2:25:29 PM
Okay! This is a slam damn good'un!

Advent (Poetry) - 3/2/2019 12:53:38 PM
A beautiful memory of Advent.

Advent (Poetry) - 12/12/2018 11:47:50 AM
It's wonderful when parents give their children something wonderful to look forward to. It's an art that is hard to practice when life takes people so many different ways. Ron

October 31 (Poetry) - 10/19/2018 11:49:04 AM
A good way to get our kids off into becoming candy junkies. Ron

October 31 (Poetry) - 10/18/2018 8:29:31 AM
Bah! Humbug! Heh.Heh . . . Just kidding Valerie, in actuality your poem made my day, giving me the inspiration for the "trick or treaters!"

October 31 (Poetry) - 10/18/2018 7:47:38 AM
Makes me want to go trick or treating. Am I to old?

October 31 (Poetry) - 10/17/2018 9:25:23 PM
Great atmosphere for the occasion! Sandie

October 31 (Poetry) - 10/17/2018 3:36:39 PM
You are getting me into the spirit of things. Thank you for sharing.

Spring (Poetry) - 7/21/2018 5:01:41 PM
A poem that makes one glad to be alive

For the Wayfarer (Poetry) - 6/26/2018 3:07:01 PM
Lovely and uplifting! Thank you! Sandie

Spring (Poetry) - 5/23/2018 5:46:35 PM
It sounds like June is Bustin' Out All Over in your neck of the woods. I can't seem to get a blade of grass to grow. Maybe I planted the seeds upside down?

Spring (Poetry) - 5/22/2018 7:04:26 AM
spring break of a flower is well written in this poem. Thank you for refreshing my mind. Sandie

Spring (Poetry) - 5/21/2018 9:45:51 AM
A nice personification of a plant, perhaps, a flower. I recently read that almost all bloom in one way or another in order to reproduce. Ron

For the Wayfarer (Poetry) - 1/7/2018 5:45:18 PM
Very nice, cheerful writing! I feel blessed by your good wishes for all of us. Connie

For the Wayfarer (Poetry) - 1/7/2018 8:18:09 AM
Very inspiring for the troubled when they travel through life in need of inspiration. Incidentally, I'm working on a novel called, The Last Wayfarer. While he is dealing with the psychological effects of being alone, he is also traveling through the landscape of what used to be, the United States of America, but still is, North America. Ron

For the Wayfarer (Poetry) - 1/5/2018 7:27:15 AM
Beautiful and touching.

For the Wayfarer (Poetry) - 1/5/2018 3:34:19 AM
. . . and a very Happy New Years to you . . .

For the Wayfarer (Poetry) - 1/5/2018 3:00:25 AM
this is a hope for all

Giving Thanks (Poetry) - 11/23/2017 9:24:20 AM
We do have much to be thankful for, this day of Thanksgiving. Ron

Giving Thanks (Poetry) - 11/23/2017 2:23:37 AM
Very well said. Happy Thanksgiving!

Autumn (Poetry) - 11/2/2017 7:21:01 AM
very well said

Autumn (Poetry) - 11/1/2017 4:21:46 PM
Nicely expressed indeed. I can imagine a cool Fall day in Florida. That's imagination I can only get from poetic inspiration. Amen!

Autumn (Poetry) - 11/1/2017 8:24:16 AM
Much of the United States, in the temperate zone, experiences autumn. I remember autumn vividly from when I lived in those places. I miss it greatly every time I read a poem like this. Ron

Autumn (Poetry) - 11/1/2017 5:55:20 AM
Each season has its own beauty, and fall may be the best.

Autumn (Poetry) - 11/1/2017 1:24:04 AM
I love to read poems from a thankful heart, especially one who describes the beauty of fall in such a simple yet precious way. Have a blessed day dear Valerie, you got a beautiful name. God Bless

Minnesota State Fair (Poetry) - 9/3/2017 10:23:14 AM
State Fairs are lots of fun. I wrote a poem about my experience at the Texas State Fair a few years ago and posted it here. http://ronhullauthor.com/poems/statefair.htm Ron

Summer Barbecue (Poetry) - 6/24/2017 11:10:36 PM
Nice poetic take on Summertime. Delightful! Well done Valerie!

Summer Barbecue (Poetry) - 6/24/2017 8:50:31 AM
Certainly in a nutshell, you have summed summer up! Ron

Impressionist Spring (Poetry) - 4/8/2017 1:21:11 AM
Yes... I appreciate your words as I do Impressionist painting... Look forward to reading more from you... Best wishes, Diana....

Impressionist Spring (Poetry) - 3/30/2017 5:41:27 AM
Beautiful and refreshing. I can tell what part of the country you are from. Ron