Sri Ramakrishna Is The Master Tapasvin (Article) - 5/3/2006 1:34:22 PM
Enjoyed reading your work. We share some loves; Tagore, the Upanishads; wonder if you know the musician Krishna Das, I love his music, and enjoyed the documentary about his life I found came with a CD of his...your Brahman is my Tao, the Oneness of all things brought together with love...what an interesting life you have. Thanks for sharing! -AVM
The Golden Mouse and Magician and Clock (Poetry) - 4/28/2006 8:05:46 PM
Shivani, you filled this write with
wonder and rhythm and rhymes...
The result is a lovely piece of magic
that enchanted the eternal child within me.
Amy I. Ramdass
Kitty Kisses (Poetry) - 4/13/2006 10:19:43 AM
I am absolutely loving this!!!! I have 2 precious felines of my own, or do they have me?, Coco and Casper.
Susan
The Golden Mouse and Magician and Clock (Poetry) - 3/3/2006 9:32:10 PM
Enjoyed the imagination you have shown within this write, and yes the reality as well ;-)
The Faerie Dance (Poetry) - 1/22/2006 1:44:03 AM
in case one minute your out the next moment your in the land of faerie
for us mere humans in the way nice writing on shi saludos
Laments Of The Golden Mouse (Poetry) - 1/22/2006 1:38:02 AM
v intriguing writing, am so glad to have discovered your site saludos
Beloved Unicorn Queen (Poetry) - 5/25/2005 8:54:50 AM
(:D I love this lilting song to the Unicorn Queen!! Thank you so much, ShiVaNi.
Peace.
The Voyage (Poetry) - 2/27/2004 5:39:18 AM
Order thy way
with no cause for remorse
..there is much wisdom here..
Namaste..
Vesna .)
The Golden Mouse and Magician and Clock (Poetry) - 2/20/2004 10:30:04 PM
Created to elicit delightful thoughts. Well done. Thank you for this offering. Regis
The Golden Mouse and Magician and Clock (Poetry) - 2/20/2004 9:27:51 PM
Very playful piece that really grabbed me. Great poem. Well-crafted. Thanks for posting it.
The Golden Mouse and Magician and Clock (Poetry) - 2/20/2004 10:55:52 AM
..what a heart you have..what a mind..what a soul..bless you beautiful Being that you are!!
Vesna :)
The Golden Mouse and Magician and Clock (Poetry) - 2/20/2004 8:33:42 AM
Shivani..this was delightful...would be great in a childrens book.
creative and enjoyable write..floria
The Golden Mouse and Magician and Clock (Poetry) - 2/20/2004 7:04:30 AM
I really think a childrens book is in your future, Shivani, I know as a kid I would have loved reading this...Peace, Ed & rufuz
The Golden Mouse and Magician and Clock (Poetry) - 2/20/2004 2:24:18 AM
Delightful! I feel like a wide eyed child again, listening to tales of wonder. You weave a delightful spell, ShiVaNi! Thanks!
Laments Of The Golden Mouse (Poetry) - 2/19/2004 8:06:40 PM
Glad to hear the mouse and the magician found each other in the end, I hate painful endings, don't you? LOL! I see I am going to be saying this alot to you, Shivani, but this is so cute, so imaginative, I enjoyed the magician & the mouse's little time in the spotlight...Peace thru Writing...Ed & Rufuz
The Faerie Dance (Poetry) - 2/19/2004 7:09:21 PM
Thanks for the smiles!
Beloved Unicorn Queen (Poetry) - 2/19/2004 7:01:54 PM
I don't think you truly believe that the unicorn is a mythical/mystical creature, I see them living with you in the place you share with your cats...Gotta watch the herbs you're using, buddy...Peace thru Writing, Ed & Rufuz
The Faerie Dance (Poetry) - 2/19/2004 6:44:32 PM
You sure your not Irish? Oh I get it you changed your name to protect the "innocent babes", right?
Another fun one, that I love to read, anything with a bit of a fantastical swing, I love...Peace thru Writing, Ed & rufuz
Fragrant Swirl (Poetry) - 2/19/2004 6:22:26 PM
"Thinking themselves innocent as babes
End the reign of shadows laid"
These two lines are me, innocent and a babe...LOL!
Extremely descriptive imagery, Peace thru Words, Ed & Rufuz
Beloved Unicorn Queen (Poetry) - 2/19/2004 6:12:13 PM
Beautiful tribute to the unicorn!
Fragrant Swirl (Poetry) - 2/19/2004 6:00:28 PM
love the descriptions in this write!
Kitty Kisses (Poetry) - 2/18/2004 6:44:25 PM
this poem purrs with delightful imagery!
Merlin's Cave (Poetry) - 2/18/2004 2:41:48 PM
Ah, Shivani! This poems makes me feel that I am indeed in the presence of magical happenings! Yes, this is magically delightful!
Kitty Kisses (Poetry) - 2/18/2004 6:52:09 AM
Shivani....this left me with a warm feeling...loved it..floria
Kitty Kisses (Poetry) - 2/18/2004 6:20:58 AM
You have a very interesting flare with words and descriptions! I have enjoyed this write.
Merlin's Cave (Poetry) - 2/18/2004 6:18:33 AM
Enjoyed the fantasy write and the strong voice you are using.
Kitty Kisses (Poetry) - 2/18/2004 5:49:53 AM
A cute one and shows your eternal love of the kitties, still it has that fantastical style I have seen in each of your poems so far, keep it, it is you...Peace thru Writing, Ed & Rufuz
Merlin's Cave (Poetry) - 2/18/2004 5:43:50 AM
I can feel my love of fantasy cooking in my veins...I may not know all the words, but I know I enjoy reading about Merlins Cave...enjoyable and fun read, will pass it around to others, Peace thru Writing, Ed & Rufuz
Faerie Lure (Poetry) - 2/17/2004 1:17:20 AM
Knowledge will continue to flow in where a mind stays open to new possibiities. Wonderful write.
Faerie Lure (Poetry) - 2/16/2004 5:47:55 AM
Very sweet read. Love those fae folk. You do them honor! :)
The Voyage (Poetry) - 2/15/2004 6:24:37 PM
Well from me, the "Warlock of Weird", to you, the great "Celestial Merlyn", I think we have developed a bit of cosmic relationship here, enjoyed this one too, will hopefully get to see more in future...Peace thru Writing, Ed & Rufuz
Faerie Lure (Poetry) - 2/15/2004 6:20:46 PM
I finally got into your port to check out the Lure here of the Faerie, and most glad I did so, as it speaks of the little people I have heard so much about from a grandparent or uncle I believe when I was very young...
So this is what they are all about, putting enchanted clover in the mouth, sounds like it might be uncomfortable, but maybe it is as enchanting as that of certain "shrooms", one can only hope...
Excellent write and fun read, Shivani, thanks, Peace thru Writing, Ed & rufuz
The Voyage (Poetry) - 2/14/2004 7:02:07 PM
This is so nice to read... Excellent!
Faerie Lure (Poetry) - 2/14/2004 10:08:43 AM
Very, very nice! Utterly delightful! It sings! Thank you.
The Voyage (Poetry) - 2/14/2004 9:58:25 AM
Ah, such wonderful words of wisdom, my friend! I appreciate this poem. Welcome to the Den!
The Voyage (Poetry) - 2/14/2004 9:56:02 AM
Inspirational write, ShiVaNi. Excellent.
Best regards,
Leland
Faerie Lure (Poetry) - 2/14/2004 2:20:26 AM
Very enjoyable!
Faerie Lure (Poetry) - 2/14/2004 1:53:43 AM
Hello....I enjoyed this write of your very much....love n luck....BHUWAN
