Take A Walk In My Shoes (Book) - 5/8/2012 10:14:56 PM
I'll need to read it after reading your bio. Your life is similar to one of my uncles who went out there (minuss the drugs and jail)but he found it difficult to adjust to a new life.
Take A Walk In My Shoes (Book) - 10/4/2010 9:58:36 AM
I just discovered this book. It has the warm voice of wisdom, and you are so extravagantly generous with that wisdom in your poetry.
Wonderful what you have done with your bitter lemons turning them into a rare, sweet soul drink, straw into gold.
Blessings,
Christine
Take A Walk In My Shoes (Book) - 8/23/2010 3:09:57 PM
This writing says, forgive, forget, and lets become better together. Letting go of the madness focused on imperfections, then moving on to a better life is far more sensible than stirring the mess. Your writing expresses the intention of great acts, and complete recovery. Good luck with your book, Mr. Maclellan. Enjoy creating, always.
Take A Walk In My Shoes (Book) - 8/22/2010 10:57:11 AM
intriguing cover, premise of the works sounds compelling
Take A Walk In My Shoes (Book) - 8/19/2010 11:12:09 AM
Congratulations, David. I appreciate and respect the honest and forthcoming tone of your book. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Take A Walk In My Shoes (Book) - 8/19/2010 10:38:34 AM
CONGRATULATIONS Author/Poet David Maclellan!!: on
your publication of "Take A Walk In My Shoes"
I really like your book cover & the leather shoes!!
May Your Sales Be Outreaching Globally
& May Your Heart Prosper Too!!
All My Best Wishes To You Den Brother
Vickie
Take A Walk In My Shoes (Book) - 8/19/2010 7:08:30 AM
David, your book sounds like an amazing journey. I want to wish you much success and prosperity..
To me, your story is very intriguing and inspiring.
Let me know how all is going and as soon as I am able I will purchase and read this fine edition of your hard work and open soul.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
Take A Walk In My Shoes (Book) - 8/19/2010 4:00:42 AM
Finally it all works! Congratulations, this is really a wonderful achievement - I am very proud of you!
When we were kids in the 60s (Poetry) - 7/9/2012 11:24:13 AM
WOW, DAVID...THIS IS EXCELLENT. PHRASES, RHYTHM, RHYME BLEND SO SMOOTHLY AND PRODUCE VIVIDLY CLEAR IMAGERY IN A WORK THAT SOLIDLY SUPPORTS ITS THEME. GREAT MEAL! THANKS. I AM GOING TO KEEP THIS ONE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
When we were kids in the 60s (Poetry) - 7/17/2011 3:29:38 AM
Yes, the good old days! This charming rhyme holds warmth and nostalgia as well as a touch of old fashioned humor.
Against the flow (Poetry) - 7/17/2011 3:27:45 AM
Gentle thoughts of a rebel mind, this is one you want to read over several times. Nice one.
I'll Let Her Go (Poetry) - 7/17/2011 3:26:04 AM
Heart-wrenching and poignant, an emotion-packed write!
Hang in there (Poetry) - 4/23/2011 10:47:57 AM
Great poem, absoloutly loved the line, wake up from your nightmare and begin your dream. God bless. Baz
Against the flow (Poetry) - 2/24/2011 5:26:07 AM
i do like the cold if i've a warm wrap! ;-)
yes, best to be ever mindful of the continuous battering one
takes in the form of modern-day mind control. to be on auto-pilot is to be brain dead and doomed...
well scribed, david.
Sorry (Poetry) - 2/24/2011 5:20:06 AM
the ring of heartfelt truth.
well done,
carolyn
A Fateful Decision (Poetry) - 1/28/2011 9:22:07 PM
Your poem sounds rather mournful, David!
More fortunately for me, I stayed with and still love my bride of 44 years. what is saddest of all is that one of us must pass before the other.
rege
Ribald Limericks (Poetry) - 1/11/2011 2:56:35 PM
This is great stuff you are the best sweet man..take care OK..Hugsss
Ribald Limericks (Poetry) - 11/3/2010 8:59:43 PM
Rude Schmood, no apologies please
Fun stuff
There once was a man named Maclellan
Who said that he once was a felon
But no one here minds
The way history unwinds
He may be the next poetic Magellan
Patrick
Against the flow (Poetry) - 10/30/2010 9:55:32 PM
Thought-inciting verses that remind me of George Orwell's predictions, David. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Ribald Limericks (Poetry) - 10/25/2010 6:07:46 AM
these are really funny David
I can testify that dogs eating
rotten smelly things really do
exhaust a horrendous evidences!
Rotten Toads & Snake Skins
Vickie
Ribald Limericks (Poetry) - 10/25/2010 3:01:48 AM
LOVE your sense of humor, David! Allistare had me grinning the hardest!
Sorry (Poetry) - 10/24/2010 4:25:16 PM
Harsh, real, honest and thus very compelling, David. Love, peace, and healing to you,
Regis
Ribald Limericks (Poetry) - 10/24/2010 10:10:01 AM
Well David, as you know, I love limericks. However, and I know limericks are often meant to be "ribald," I do not have your "moxie" and thus mine are rather "mild." Thanks for the laughs. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Ribald Limericks (Poetry) - 10/24/2010 10:07:28 AM
David,
this is freakin hilarious!!! I loved the last stanza. Toooooo Funny!
Good to see you back in the den. Missed you much.
I love this humorous side of you!
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Ribald Limericks (Poetry) - 10/24/2010 5:43:27 AM
Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha! Rolling around laughing, David!!! These are hilarious!!!! My favourite was the last one! giggle
Anna
Against the flow (Poetry) - 10/24/2010 1:15:14 AM
Nice David,
The cold is a place that comforts the free thinker,
It dwells so very far from the hell of conformity
Sorry (Poetry) - 10/19/2010 9:28:09 AM
IN THIS LIFE...WE ALL DO 'THINGS' THAT ARE NOT RIGHT AND THAT WE LIVE TO REGRET AND WE ALL MAKE WRONG DECISIONS BUT THE BOTTOM LINE IS...WE ARE HUMAN AND VERY IMPERFECT. THE ONLY THING WE CAN DO TO MAKE AMENDS IS TO SAY, I'M SORRY...AS YOU HAVE DONE. A PUBLIC APOLOGY SHOULD MEAN A LOT BUT STILL... SOME WILL FORGIVE, SOME WON'T, HOWEVER THERE IS NOTHING MORE YOU CAN DO ABOUT IT. SO NOW...MOVE ON AND STOP BEATING UP ON YOURSELF. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Sorry (Poetry) - 10/18/2010 2:04:15 PM
Brother you can write!
-Paul
Sorry (Poetry) - 10/14/2010 2:04:32 PM
Remember 'Ma' is only your Ma in THIS life..move on David..enough is enough!
Your soul is profound in its beauty don't burden it with such trivia..it really is that ya know...TRIVIA!!!!
Superb work..bravo!
Blessings dear One..
Vesna
Sorry (Poetry) - 10/7/2010 7:38:31 PM
Keep chipping away. Your "mistakes" are not your children's mistakes and at some point the light may go on. Good luck my friend. Patrick
Sorry (Poetry) - 10/7/2010 1:38:30 AM
Excellent poem and layout, David
Sorry (Poetry) - 10/6/2010 3:56:34 AM
We are all at a loss when we cannot find forgiveness
and also the treasure of acceptances within our life circles...
We all have some sort of issue too dear den brother...
Love's Bounty & Balms
Vickie
Sorry (Poetry) - 10/5/2010 3:25:01 PM
David, You shouldn't be sorry because you did the right thing! That is the past and you deserve to move on to better days!! Love, and peace to you always! ~Chessly
Sorry (Poetry) - 10/5/2010 3:30:25 AM
you beat yourself up too much my friend. we all make mistakes, i imagine yours are not greater than any other man's. you can only take your own responsibility not that of another. you are an honest soul and an effective poet.
Sorry (Poetry) - 10/5/2010 3:13:46 AM
I chose love over lies,
I chose a future over futility
They sound like good choices to me.
Sorry (Poetry) - 10/4/2010 11:59:20 PM
Sad, painful and honest...but, you David are here...this is now...past, although it's there as a reminder to learn and grow from...is simply that....past.
Sorry (Poetry) - 10/4/2010 8:18:55 PM
This tears at the heart and soul. You are sorry, and that is really big. Honesty and humility is written all over this poignant outpouring of your heart. Live for today, embrace tomorrow.
You are on the right path, keep on stepping forward one step at a time.
My healing energy your way,
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
Sorry (Poetry) - 10/4/2010 3:27:55 PM
family dynamics are challenging, especially with hopes and expectations of what should be or could be. to write I chose love over lies, in a poem that flows is beautiful. That's a family keepsake. ~Morgan
Sorry (Poetry) - 10/4/2010 3:07:15 PM
David,
Frank and honest expression of what is deeply personal and highly charged.
Your strong confessional and questioning are admirable.
John
Sorry (Poetry) - 10/4/2010 10:04:21 AM
A gem ~
Well now is now, and you are on the right path now with much wisdom gained, so you ought to be considered heroic. "Ma chose my mistake over me" is so sad. The fact that you are sorry is enough to express the beauty in your soul.
Christine
Sorry (Poetry) - 10/4/2010 9:45:02 AM
Oh my so much pain...please stay safe and well dear man..Hugss
A Fateful Decision (Poetry) - 10/1/2010 10:12:24 AM
Deeply honest, real, and very compelling are your verses and what they express, David. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Regis
Long Bay (Poetry) - 9/25/2010 3:12:17 PM
EXCELLENT MOANFUL EXPRESSION OF 'MANACLED' SUFFERING. SO WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING, DAVID. LOVE, BLESSINGS * FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
A Fateful Decision (Poetry) - 9/18/2010 4:11:05 AM
regret is such a deep penetrating wound
your emotion pours from its cup...
my heart feels your sorrowing grief
May Love's Balm & Forgiveness Find You
Heal You & Embrace You
Vickie
Alzheimer's (Poetry) - 9/16/2010 3:57:04 PM
Now, this is lovely, my friend. I have seen him/her and I know exactly what you are saying about all of this. Great way to give the understanding--I believe you have completely wrapped Alzheimer's into a comfortable and true expressive package. Great one, David. This is very lovely!
A Fateful Decision (Poetry) - 9/16/2010 3:36:03 PM
Well, it shows here that you have been putting it all on the line, and giving it a real approach.
The Eyes Have It (Poetry) - 9/14/2010 2:12:00 PM
TOTALLY CAPTURED....SOUNDS BEAUTIFUL...I HOPE IT IS. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
A Fateful Decision (Poetry) - 9/14/2010 2:09:43 PM
I HEAR YOU DAVID. BEING HUMAN, WE MAKE MISTAKES, SOME WORSE THAN OTHERS AND...IF FOR SOME REASON, THEY CANNOT BE MENDED...WE MOVE ON...HAVING GAINED THE WISDOM TO NEVER MAKE THE SAME MISTAKE AGAIN. GOD BLESS YOU AND THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE, JOYCE*HIS INSPIRATIONS
A Fateful Decision (Poetry) - 9/14/2010 9:11:39 AM
I will not preach to you, or tell you how to pick yourself up. I can't tell you how to instantly ease this suffering or pretend that I, or anyone else has it "All together". No one can tell you how to fix your heart or your life, the best we can do as fellow humans is say "Yes, I understand and I care." What I can do is tell you I can feel your pain and I'm so sorry you are suffering. And I can tell you that the low places are what forge our metal and shape our character. Hold on to who you have become and in doing so you will find who you are eventually meant to be. A fine and honest poem, deeply touching David.
A Fateful Decision (Poetry) - 9/12/2010 9:47:07 PM
It takes only a spark to start a fire and lessons have a way of coming full circle. Patrick
A Fateful Decision (Poetry) - 9/12/2010 5:13:58 PM
This is powerful and heartfelt David and I admire your honesty in this excellent poem! Thank you for sharing and for caring. May the Lord bring healing and restoration as you move forward in faith!
Blessings,
Margaret
P.S. Good to meet you David and welcome to AD!!!
Against the flow (Poetry) - 9/11/2010 7:23:28 AM
Not sure about the subtle anymore. And since the grass isn't any greener on the other side it may be time to take down that fence. I actually like the cold but your chair is inviting. Patrick
A Fateful Decision (Poetry) - 9/10/2010 5:29:07 PM
a man becomes old when he dwells on his regrets rather that strive toward newer dreams ...
A Fateful Decision (Poetry) - 9/10/2010 2:15:26 PM
I feel the pain in your words, so true, I think we would all love to turn the pages back, if only we could~
A Fateful Decision (Poetry) - 9/10/2010 7:31:02 AM
David ..dear one..
..we've all been there..I dare to wager that almost every member, on this site alone,has been in writhing pain because of the 'daemons' that berate the unsuspecting 'ego' in us all..
You opened your soul..indeed you shine.. :)))
thank you for the profound trip into your Being.
Blessings
Vesna
A Fateful Decision (Poetry) - 9/10/2010 12:15:53 AM
Sometimes, it's the way life seems to go, isn't it? But I also think that those "mistakes" aren't really mistakes....they're part of the "walk"...part of what helps us grow and learn. As for looking back....not good to go there, in my opinion...unless it's to learn from a past "mistake." Otherwise, what purpose does it serve?...none...we can't change any of it! Powerful and honest....beautiful work, David.
A Fateful Decision (Poetry) - 9/9/2010 3:40:05 PM
The sheer power and honesty of this confessional unnerves, David, in the best possible way; not only does it challenge me to think about my own deeds but it draws my admiration for its truth.
John
A Fateful Decision (Poetry) - 9/9/2010 10:32:28 AM
You have made me cry with the intense feelings of your lost love.
I have loved someone that I had hurt very badly, but that was when I was young and niave. Now I certainly would have done things differently. Live and learn I guess. Your poem hit me.
Ciao,
Ragno
A Fateful Decision (Poetry) - 9/9/2010 10:10:47 AM
This is such a brilliant poem, so powerful to read.
David, here's how I look at it ~ those mistakes we make, those stones to stumble on as we walk our path, I believe are just simply "the way".
Ever,
Christine
A Fateful Decision (Poetry) - 9/9/2010 7:52:05 AM
And that's the way life goes sometimes. WE don't realize what we have until it slips away! Beautifully penned, David! Very touching poety!
Anna
A Fateful Decision (Poetry) - 9/9/2010 7:08:40 AM
David, Look we all make mistakes, and some of us take longer to grow up and see what is really in front of us. Me, I finally saw that my marriage was the reason I was so unhappy...I am free now, and I am so glad to have my life back..I am now the person I always was inside.. You will get through this. I wish you lived closer I would give you a great big hug and some human warmth.
Don't lament, you cannot change anything, and personally, one should never go backwards, so march on strong warrior you will be stronger for it all..
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
A Fateful Decision (Poetry) - 9/9/2010 6:47:55 AM
Oh my... so much sadness within these lines dear man..stay safe and well..hugsss
A Fateful Decision (Poetry) - 9/9/2010 5:50:20 AM
If only I could, if only she would, turn back the page
We all have our terrible regrets in life, and this piece is a powerfully sad one.
Against the flow (Poetry) - 9/8/2010 4:59:01 PM
It is cool to be out in the cold... a great write
Against the flow (Poetry) - 9/7/2010 11:17:49 PM
Powerful and insightful!
Against the flow (Poetry) - 9/7/2010 9:23:53 PM
Oh yes..Big Brother is watching !!!
THAT has been apparent for years..there's much to be said for the 'world conspiracy'..I even hold workshops prompting people to wake up and become 'aware' of the reality of the game..
Great piece..am saving it..thank you David..so glad you are here :)))
Blessings,
Vesna :)
Against the flow (Poetry) - 9/7/2010 8:11:02 PM
I'll sit with you any day, anywhere, any time, David.
This is a powerful indictment of spin and sham and hypocrisy and we need a new revolution of thought and true individuality.
In admiration,
John
Against the flow (Poetry) - 9/7/2010 12:36:09 PM
Welcome aboard, my friend, I've been waiting for you. (out here in the cold, that is) Nice! Very Nice..... Thanks Dick
Against the flow (Poetry) - 9/7/2010 11:24:45 AM
Wonderful writing dear man..Hugsss
From a grateful grandson (Poetry) - 9/7/2010 11:06:48 AM
A TOUCHING TRIBUTE FROM A VERY UNIQUE POINT OF VIEW. DONE WELL AND SO ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Against the flow (Poetry) - 9/7/2010 11:03:22 AM
ONE CAN'T ALWAYS BE WARM AND COMFORTABLE...SOMETIMES ONE HAS TO GO AGAINST THE FLOW AND TAKE A STAND...OUT IN THE COLD. WELL DONE, DAVID, ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Against the flow (Poetry) - 9/7/2010 7:54:34 AM
You nailed it, David! Insightful poetry! Well done...
Anna
Against the flow (Poetry) - 9/7/2010 7:49:44 AM
what a neat piece of work from the very first line...a thinking person's poem. since i'm a 'goer against the flow-er kind of person...i especially like the last 2 lines and am out there w/ you in the cold...a wise place to be david. this is a keeper
Against the flow (Poetry) - 9/7/2010 6:41:10 AM
Wonderful, and yes, I'll sit with you, and I'll bring a warm pot of tea, too!
We must each one march to our own drumbeat, however out of step.
Blessings,
Christine
Long Bay (Poetry) - 9/7/2010 5:57:12 AM
this poetic express has so much soul David!
I can nearly feel the chill on the cell walls
and the bars...
I found keys to an emotion prison
Sharing Them With You...
Vickie
Against the flow (Poetry) - 9/7/2010 5:54:31 AM
as I always say
Dare To Be Different!!!
"Against the flow" is an awesome
acclaim to being within the individuality of self
and never having the want nor desire to be a carbon copy
Warmed In The Chill Of You!!
Vickie
Long Bay (Poetry) - 9/6/2010 12:18:53 PM
Devastating!!
Too good a job, man. Too good a job.
Still. . .it is impossible not to take pleasure in a well-conceived
and -constructed poem such as this.
Thank you so much for sharing it.
Always, and Then,
Phyllis
Come in from the cold (Poetry) - 8/29/2010 10:44:07 AM
My, my, this writing's soul lives very much in you, and for you. I see this one as having a life of its own, David. It is very eloquent, but the raw story still survives the eloquence; it reads very well, but maintains the true nature of the events. If I were to speak of good balance, in a writing, for me, this would be a wonderful example. Thanks for sharing your real-life views, David. Very nice expression in this writing.
Long Bay (Poetry) - 8/29/2010 10:30:33 AM
Wow, this one is deeply involved, and gets the attention. It puts me right inside those walls--hoping to get away, too. I think the spacing of the paragraphs is a bit irritating, but may have also caused a certain amount of ease and focus; at any rate, this writing shows that you are sincere and willing to finish your works debts. It shows your commitment to God, too. I am sure He heard you.
The enigma of solitude (Poetry) - 8/29/2010 10:23:27 AM
A very sensible and sensuous writing. A maker of the tears of times passed, and a well baked aroma to savor for the rest to come. This one carries into dream with the real world firmly attached and equally beautiful. Nice work, David.
Mirrors and razors (Poetry) - 8/29/2010 10:14:54 AM
You brought a lot of understanding to everyone's attention who reads this. The parts addressing being caged and controlled by the dealer, the drug, and all of the circumstances, are an honest rendering. I have been around a lot of this, and I have noticed that what you say is absolutely true. Thanks for sharing this, David. Well expressed reality, this one is.
From a grateful grandson (Poetry) - 8/28/2010 6:37:33 PM
Very sweet, moving, and meaningful, David. Thank you for sharing this fine write of gratefulness and respect. Love and peace,
Regis
Inevitable (Poetry) - 8/27/2010 7:51:28 PM
A love that causes the bareness of the well protected heart; one that, with all its simpleness, forces complications to become translucent. So, love it is, then; a battle against the lack of knowledge of good things and people--trustworthy people, begins. Building a good trust with her was certainly heroic. Nice piece, and good decision to be part of her life.
From a grateful grandson (Poetry) - 8/26/2010 4:19:34 PM
Very nice. I guess I am in a crying mood or something, because this is the second writing that has made me feel like that today. This one is just so precious to read. It is most certainly a lovely thank you, and a happy birthday blessing. Thanks, David.
From a grateful grandson (Poetry) - 8/25/2010 6:05:59 PM
Beautiful and heartwarming sentiments...
Be always safe,
Karen
From a grateful grandson (Poetry) - 8/25/2010 5:40:37 PM
Just glorious, David, and from the heart.
John
From a grateful grandson (Poetry) - 8/25/2010 12:16:06 PM
This is so warm, such a kind touch in this poem ~
Blessings,
Christine
From a grateful grandson (Poetry) - 8/25/2010 11:37:17 AM
A beautiful write David for your grandmother and mum!
From a grateful grandson (Poetry) - 8/25/2010 10:31:02 AM
Very unique and special, and perhaps eternal, David. Patrick
From a grateful grandson (Poetry) - 8/25/2010 9:45:32 AM
David,
It's rare that a child thanks their grandparents for bringining them their parents. This is so refreshing. Happy Birthday to your Mom.
Mary
From a grateful grandson (Poetry) - 8/25/2010 8:37:25 AM
Tis definately a keeper. I bet Grandma and Mum are both smiling. Both thumbs up, David. Thanks Dick
From a grateful grandson (Poetry) - 8/25/2010 7:15:06 AM
David, Your grandson has inherited his grandfather's talent for writing words that touch a person's heart strings...This is so full of innocent love and hope...Please tell him that he is an amazing young man and writer for me...I believe he should continue to write and work out his feelings in this way...
Thank you for sharing and warming my heart.
Peace, love and light,
Amber
From a grateful grandson (Poetry) - 8/25/2010 7:05:51 AM
this is so very beautiful David
the closing made my eyes tear...
I am grateful too...
Love & Memories
Vickie
From a grateful grandson (Poetry) - 8/25/2010 6:13:24 AM
BEAUTIFUL, David. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
From a grateful grandson (Poetry) - 8/25/2010 6:04:29 AM
What a lovely tribute to your Mom, David! Unique way of wishing her a happy birthday....very much enjoyed this!
Anna
The crimson bottlebrush (Poetry) - 8/25/2010 2:14:25 AM
David, it's wonderful when we notice the small things in life and how beautiful they are...I often wish that I had been this way thirty years ago...but you know what? Better late than never as they say!
The fire is mine (Poetry) - 8/22/2010 5:59:03 PM
THE BEAUTY OF, '....AND WE KNOW THAT ALL THINGS WORK TOGETHER FOR GOOD...' IS DISPLAYED HERE ROYALLY. WELL DONE, DAVID. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Dark Angel (Poetry) - 8/22/2010 2:19:24 PM
I am having a time trying to clarify whether you wrote for the female angel and yourself, alternately; or just for yourself or her, until the ending when it seems clear that only one is speaking. Aside from my not understanding completely, this writing seems very ethereal and spiritually zealous; I feel the desires are not earthly, anymore, and they are menacing because it has not happened that the two of you are ever together long enough to communicate fully. An elusive and re-occurring divide that taunts you whenever. I hope you find the one who gives this aura and presence, and that you will love each other in never ending bliss.
Thoughts from inside (Poetry) - 8/22/2010 1:51:44 PM
I can only imagine what it is like once a person loses his or her freedom; after accepting the fact, I am sure that creativity could go absolutely nuts. Thoughts become too abundant, along with time. I am glad you've come out of incarceration and have your freedom; also, that you don't mind sharing your stories of those times with us. This writing indicates strong unyielding will, and hope. Those are two things that I am always happy with and even obsessed with. Thank you, David.
Unspoken truths are just lies under construction (Poetry) - 8/22/2010 12:32:55 PM
This message is one that I was attempting to address in my poem "Suffering's Daylight". You made a very strict and undeniable present on the subject of being judgmental (prejudice), and active in both. I believe that lies are also born from the fear of being misjudged, and wrongly punished--a catch 22, if you please, but this does not justify the lie. We all must catch ourselves and judge ourselves more harshly; as you mentioned "even if it was only you" who knew that you were telling a lie--someone knew, and it is inescapable. With anything wrongfully done, it is most essential that a person maintain his or her sincere repent, and honestly need for forgiveness and better guidance or enhancement. This writing is like staring at the tip of a dagger that says "tell the truth, or die". Great presentation of thought and directness.
The crimson bottlebrush (Poetry) - 8/21/2010 8:38:10 AM
We have those here as well. I kind of like them but they are not wild and are commonly planted in more drought friendly yards. Patrick
The crimson bottlebrush (Poetry) - 8/18/2010 4:38:15 PM
eloquent, descriptive and inspired ...
The crimson bottlebrush (Poetry) - 8/17/2010 6:58:30 PM
A nice push to the sensation of our existence and the many values of our surroundings, David.
I have noticed that I don't see certain things like I used to; but that has to be because I have not looked with the same eyes that I once had; those things are still there, but I have not been there with them. Thanks, David. I think I will look more carefully around, and re-discover the simple beauties of living.
The crimson bottlebrush (Poetry) - 8/16/2010 4:21:04 PM
You're in touch with what really matters, David, and that's what counts. I love this.
John
The Melting Pot of Multi-culture (Poetry) - 8/16/2010 11:01:13 AM
I really appreciate your way of expressing racism.Nice..well written poem...
The crimson bottlebrush (Poetry) - 8/15/2010 3:18:07 PM
Very beautiful poetry.....I do love the way you write, David.
A big fan,
Anna
The crimson bottlebrush (Poetry) - 8/14/2010 6:00:09 PM
YES, IT'S JUST THOSE 'LITTLE THINGS' THAT REMIND'S ONE OF GOD'S AWESOME LOVE FOR US ALL. THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS WELL DONE WORK...GOD BLESS AND LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
The crimson bottlebrush (Poetry) - 8/14/2010 5:45:26 PM
This is so beautiful and I it makes me so very happy that I can read out of this poem that you are so much more in peace with yourself and the world. I wish you that all of your days will be filled with the small, uplifting things that happen all the time around us, be it in nature or with the people around us. Love Sabine.
The crimson bottlebrush (Poetry) - 8/14/2010 4:22:53 PM
The best part of this poem for me, is that you are finally seeing nature's beauty..That is the Universe giving back to you, embrace Mother Earth's beauty and always remember that there really is no time to squander any longer..Breathe David, and take in the healing energy that I am sending you, now go and forgive yourself and live...
Much peace, love and healing light,
Amber
The crimson bottlebrush (Poetry) - 8/14/2010 8:51:18 AM
I agree with you, Dave, it seems when we are young, when we could see the best, we didn't see what was right in front of our eyes, we ignored the beauty of Gods Nature...what a waste for us...ed
The crimson bottlebrush (Poetry) - 8/14/2010 7:41:32 AM
This is lovely David!
I love the peace & serenity of nature
and all the critters...even the coyotes yapping
Your words perfume in "The crimson bottlebrush"
Blossoms Perfume
Vickie
The crimson bottlebrush (Poetry) - 8/14/2010 6:05:17 AM
Nice! Very uplifting and a pleasant read. Thanks Dick
The crimson bottlebrush (Poetry) - 8/14/2010 5:52:35 AM
I absolutely love this ~
Both the message and the feel of the b's as you choose your words and sounds!
Joy,
Christine
When we were kids in the 60s (Poetry) - 8/14/2010 5:21:30 AM
A great poem, David. I wonder sometimes how many kids today make their own fun instead of having it handed to them by their parents. Terry
Unspoken truths are just lies under construction (Poetry) - 8/13/2010 9:51:09 AM
You tell the truth, David; and I appreciate the insightful perspective that you have shared via your verses here. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Unspoken truths are just lies under construction (Poetry) - 8/11/2010 8:17:57 AM
David, you have spoken so many truths about lies..We all do it even if we don't intend on it. By not saying something (omission) that is a lie..so now what if everyone always told the truth? There would be very many sad people, because in order to not hurt people sometimes a white lie helps someone..for instance, when your (girlfriend/wife) asks you if she looks good in what ever outfit she has on, and you think she doesn't, are you really going to tell her the truth and hurt her feelings??????? that's what I mean..sometimes a white lie saves face for the other person..lying for oneself to get by, well that's another story..that's deception and unacceptable..
Wow you got me going on this one..I always knew when my children were lying, sometimes not my ex husband obviously because he is an ex now..lol
Good work here, you got the den worked up..lol
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Unspoken truths are just lies under construction (Poetry) - 8/11/2010 7:41:47 AM
The title says it all!! I could actually see that in one of those 100 Thoughts About Wisdom books or Quotable Quotes. Something to that effect. Nice work.
Unspoken truths are just lies under construction (Poetry) - 8/11/2010 5:48:40 AM
This is a great poem indeed!
Supple and possessing so much wonderful humility and wisdom!!!~
Peace and Blessings,
Christine
Unspoken truths are just lies under construction (Poetry) - 8/11/2010 5:32:31 AM
what an impressive piece of work...i didn't have to feel around for a rythm...you just pulled me right along to the end where i gently slid off 'the first stone' with a plonck
wonderful...one of my favorites david...pat
Thoughts from inside (Poetry) - 8/11/2010 5:25:14 AM
We all have need of his healing. Heart touching, good to have it behind you.
Unspoken truths are just lies under construction (Poetry) - 8/11/2010 5:10:18 AM
Anyone who says they never lie is a liar! Anyone who claims not to be a sinner is the worst culprit of all. Well penned and truly thought provoking.
Unspoken truths are just lies under construction (Poetry) - 8/11/2010 4:40:54 AM
David,
I like the gradual shift that takes place as the poem progresses; for me, it becomes more meaningful and spiritual with each stanza, and ends wonderfully.
John
Unspoken truths are just lies under construction (Poetry) - 8/11/2010 3:56:29 AM
ummm...no one i suppose intends to tell a lie....maybe to save oneself one gets into the impulse .. Nice thoughtful write. Good wishes David
Unspoken truths are just lies under construction (Poetry) - 8/11/2010 3:50:03 AM
I Love This David! It is hard for some to look into ones own
mirror but it is great to do so! I still remember my very first lie!
I remember it because it made me feel so incredibly awful.
Lies are masterful trickery to steal from another the values
of worth that the deceived deserve in their life...which is honesty.
It is a horrible truth to feel when someone has lived a lie-
when in fact they thought it was the truth...
I collect those stones
Vickie
Thoughts from inside (Poetry) - 8/10/2010 8:07:38 AM
Very deep, meaningful write, David. You are putting the past right where it belongs.....in the past! Great job!
Anna
02.06.95 R.I.P Father (Poetry) - 8/9/2010 10:25:34 AM
Barebones naked pain in lines of loss -- undone. My big, strong Daddy passed away two years ago. I was not at home when it happened, living out of state. Never got the chance to say goodbye, except in words -- this one leaves me totally shattered. So sorry for your loss --
Karla. *teasr*
Possum, Tom and Bluey (Poetry) - 8/9/2010 10:23:50 AM
Having never been to Oz, you bring it to vivid life in these lines -- well done, David.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Dark Angel (Poetry) - 8/7/2010 4:38:29 PM
passionate feelings come to life in this gem,David!
splendid,poem abd art ...etw
Thoughts from inside (Poetry) - 8/7/2010 4:34:25 PM
Very deep, meaningful poetry, David!
Thank you for sharing it with us...etw
When we were kids in the 60s (Poetry) - 8/7/2010 7:59:18 AM
God that sounds like fun! We'd go out and dam up the creek but it never stood long, but in winter when the current slowed it made for one heck of an ice rink. Patrick
Thoughts from inside (Poetry) - 8/6/2010 9:49:35 AM
Heal me Lord from wounds of past
Give me strength that I may last
In healthy flesh, mind and soul
‘Till I’m called no longer,
On their roll
Such a meaningful prayer born of harsh and real experience; thank you for sharing, David. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Thoughts from inside (Poetry) - 8/5/2010 11:18:57 PM
A time in your life that truly touched your soul. It is only up and forward from here, interesting piece...
Be always safe,
Karen
Thoughts from inside (Poetry) - 8/5/2010 2:30:34 PM
YOU ARE CALLING ON THE RIGHT ONE FOR STRENGHT AND YOU ARE USING THE EXPERIENCES OF THAT TIME TO BRING FORTH WORKS THAT TOUCH AND SPEAK...TO THE HEART FOR UNDERSTANDING. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Thoughts from inside (Poetry) - 8/5/2010 1:27:24 PM
great personal verse David, like your approach, cheers
Thoughts from inside (Poetry) - 8/5/2010 8:44:16 AM
David,
Within this poem, I could feel an uplifting of spirit..You my dear friend, have paid your dues..You must forgive yourself and let all pain live in the past..That is where it all belongs..forgiveness of past inequities, loving oneself, and embracing all that you have at this moment...That is all that matters..You must feel the magic of that love and live each moment that you have left with life full of love, peace, and lightness of being..You deserve this and never forget it..
Much peace, love and light
Amber
Thoughts from inside (Poetry) - 8/5/2010 6:31:24 AM
Whether literal or figurative...powerful writing. Often times forgiving ourselves is the difficult thing, isn't it?
Thoughts from inside (Poetry) - 8/5/2010 6:18:25 AM
This is so very heartfelt~
If this is autobiographical, I hope that whatever marred you is over and that as a perservering traveler you have been embraced.
Blessings,
Christine
Burning Bridges (Poetry) - 8/5/2010 5:19:52 AM
The only thing you can do is say sorry for your mistakes. You did that and the wall should come tumbling down. You tried desperately to heal the dream and that is all you can do my friend. We all have to forgive before the pain goes away...Very heartfelt write! Take care, and god bless! ~Chessly
Thoughts from inside (Poetry) - 8/5/2010 5:18:51 AM
David,
A great poem of love lost. Sometimes it takes a long time. Great analogy.
Mary
Thoughts from inside (Poetry) - 8/5/2010 4:53:26 AM
With faith in your heart you will always pull through your darkest days! The healing might take alittle longer when there is alot inside. A knife wound is easier than the pain of love. Seven years of social death would be difficult for anyone! Hope the wounds of the past are healed soon, and you are no longer on their roll!! Very heartfelt write! Take care, and god bless you always! ~Chessly
Thoughts from inside (Poetry) - 8/5/2010 4:02:22 AM
deep afflictions
deep harrows
our emotional turmoils
we all can relate to this David
as some prison cells and walls
do not have bars
Freedom and Liberation
Vickie
Dark Angel (Poetry) - 8/2/2010 11:30:12 AM
Yes, I belive you truly do. Such a beautiful, emotive poem.
When we were kids in the 60s (Poetry) - 8/2/2010 11:24:56 AM
we made dolls from corn cob silk
and drank cocoa made from fresh milk
made snow sleds from old store signs
braved the big hill and had grand times
constructed stick castles in the wood
listened to Grampa's stories when we could
in doll clothes finery we dressed our cats
at twilight threw dirt clods at barn bats
we swung on a rope tied to an oak tree
Mama would have had a heart attack to see
The way we flew over that deep ravine
you'd think we were dying the way we'd scream
Sometimes in summertime we'd sneak
and skinny dip like heathens in the creek
it was a good time to grow up in
remembered now by old women and men.
LOVE your poem David, it inspired me!!
Dark Angel (Poetry) - 8/2/2010 5:26:52 AM
I have the power over now, but not past strife
And I really hope you do find an angel, in your life
Dark Angel (Poetry) - 8/2/2010 3:24:18 AM
I hope you will....very well composed
Dark Angel (Poetry) - 8/1/2010 10:25:48 AM
David, I too, search for him, the man that I know is out there somewhere. I can feel his energy all the time...One day hopefully soon the Universe will bring him to me...
Lovely poem that I can relate to.
Peace and love and light
Amber
Dark Angel (Poetry) - 8/1/2010 6:05:18 AM
This is a wonderful ethereal poem, and yes, love is timeless and never too late!
Blessings,
Christine
Dark Angel (Poetry) - 8/1/2010 4:11:40 AM
Stunning from a heart that feels, lucky girl to find you!
Dark Angel (Poetry) - 8/1/2010 4:07:18 AM
poignant write
Dark Angel (Poetry) - 8/1/2010 3:08:08 AM
Beautifully written. Anticipation flows from line to line.
Peace,
Dayvid
Dark Angel (Poetry) - 8/1/2010 2:24:06 AM
"Damaged lives and twisted fate" our paths
our journey...our travels...our experiences
we are all the same I think despite geological
locations...your words take me to imagine the
"what if's"...and what if she emerged?
I have my what if's too...it would be wonderful
despite the "damaged lives and twisted fate"
Gratefully and Patiently Traveling
Vickie
Dark Angel (Poetry) - 8/1/2010 12:08:11 AM
David, this is so lovely and filled with longing...and I think she will appear, perhaps when you least expect her to.
The Nightmare (Poetry) - 7/31/2010 3:59:35 PM
It hurts to read these lines of pain.
So sorry.
Connie
The Dream (Poetry) - 7/31/2010 3:56:53 PM
Thoroughly beautiful expression of love.
Connie
Possum, Tom and Bluey (Poetry) - 7/31/2010 3:48:52 PM
I am SO GLAD your possum escaped safely to his tree. Possums are one of my favorite animals. One crossed our driveway once with ten babies clinging to her back. I actually got about a minute on video-camera.
Notice I'm choosing your lighter poems to read, building up to one of the serious ones.
Connie
When we were kids in the 60s (Poetry) - 7/31/2010 3:44:52 PM
A charming tale, David! How resourceful you were! We waded in the creek by our house and crossed it on stones; it was way too small to sail a canoe, but we cherished it anyway.
Connie
Decomposing (Poetry) - 7/31/2010 3:20:49 PM
Deep poem and soul~
Wow!
Blessings,
Christine
Decomposing (Poetry) - 7/31/2010 1:31:59 PM
The signal rest and the ineluctable dissolve into spirit only--leaving behind the affectable matter that records worthless physical pain. A beautiful, undeniable rest--perhaps a sensational negative, but not the negative in itself. A new beginning as the soul picks up and moves on. Grapple onto your freedom when it comes, and share a parting smile.
Cocaine (Poetry) - 7/31/2010 1:07:20 PM
Good to be in freedom to express those troubles. I have to agree that crack is a very evil and addictive drug; I was never addicted, but I have seen so many people who are addicted that I have come to know them very well. They truly have an adjusted belief system, due to their use of crack and its effects. I am sure that you have much more to express regarding the experience and that you have many more foreful expressions to sacrifice to its details. Great writing, and glad that you have pulled yourself above this evil. Keep rising, friend!
The Eyes Have It (Poetry) - 7/31/2010 12:45:29 PM
The rawness of passion's truth. The need to simply indulge the desire and not have weird consequences attached; a love to completeness and ending. Great show of spirited passion, yet, so, with a rawness that feeds a clear understanding.
Decomposing (Poetry) - 7/29/2010 5:42:56 PM
Dave you are the reencarnation of E Hemingway.
-tsét'soyé ndo³kah ba'cho
Paul
Decomposing (Poetry) - 7/29/2010 5:22:47 PM
I have an inexplicable sense of failure, for the loss of this unknown path
Even more unsettling is the sense of relief.
I find your words particularly thought-inciting, David. I appreciate the philosophy that you have shared via your verses here. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Decomposing (Poetry) - 7/28/2010 5:31:52 PM
Great truth in Decomposing, David...the flesh has to rot away before we can find our soul. This poem reminds me of the Hermit tarot card. To withdraw from the company of men and live a life of seclusion and hardship is necessary to find your new skin. It only comes with quiet and solitude. With lantern in hand, seek and ye shall find, David...Light to you...Blessed Be.
Love,
Sage
Decomposing (Poetry) - 7/28/2010 1:36:46 PM
It is such a surrender isn't it?
In some sense anyway...
giving up parts of ourself
so the core part of ourself we smothered
can emerge...and grow & experience life...
temptations are hard to resist...unless
it burned us deeply...I like easier...
but as you say..."it will be the hardest of all"
New Clothes & New Shoes
for New Dances...Vickie
Decomposing (Poetry) - 7/28/2010 7:15:03 AM
David,
Sometimes those unknown paths were never meant to travel..Don't regret anything, you are doing exactly what you are destined to be doing..If that path comes into vision again at a later time, then, that is the time to pursue it...Breathe and know you are where you are suppose to be at this very moment in time...
Your poem speaks to me, and we all feel this way at some point in our life.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
Decomposing (Poetry) - 7/28/2010 5:40:00 AM
Well written!
Decomposing (Poetry) - 7/28/2010 4:52:11 AM
Failure and relief - how cleverly you align the notions, but the poem is more than clever, it goes well beyond clever and has a resonance I can easily identify with; it speaks to me.
I like this so much, David.
John
Decomposing (Poetry) - 7/28/2010 3:47:05 AM
Nicely done, my friend! Wise and deep.....
Anna
Decomposing (Poetry) - 7/28/2010 3:07:58 AM
It may be a difficult path...but in the end, the one that means most. Wise and honest.
Decomposing (Poetry) - 7/28/2010 2:30:07 AM
Deeply thoughtful.
The Eyes Have It (Poetry) - 7/27/2010 11:37:58 PM
Very well achieved, David
The Eyes Have It (Poetry) - 7/27/2010 7:37:27 PM
Just. plain. great.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The Melting Pot of Multi-culture (Poetry) - 7/27/2010 4:08:04 PM
In this are some very definite and necessary issues to consider, as life goes on. One of the issues is color: how does anyone feel so proud of their color that they entertain a hate of any other color of people; when, they, just as the others, never chose who, or what they would be in this life. I could have been them, and they could have been me--we had no choice or decision to fabricate this/our life; it was given to us. Venting ... but, thanks for an eye opener, David. We need it. This is very thoughtful and very well written.
The Eyes Have It (Poetry) - 7/24/2010 9:01:10 AM
The eyes have it and tell all! You write knowing it.... thank you for sharing... =)
In Spirit,
Bear
The Eyes Have It (Poetry) - 7/24/2010 8:56:56 AM
David, I've been traveling for a spell and just now beginning to catch up. Your last 4 posts are absolutely outstanding. I've been reading your work for a while, but you've really hooked me now. Thanks Dick
The Eyes Have It (Poetry) - 7/23/2010 6:03:02 PM
Rich and compelling as dark chocolate, David, and with the touch of its bittersweet sensuality and its power.
John
The Eyes Have It (Poetry) - 7/23/2010 5:27:08 PM
I am not sure if you realize...but this is really seductive
the allurements of passion inside these lines are fire David.
laying scattered at someones feet &
not being able to see enough of them!
The lines are desire & passions all the way...
also: "Don't hurt me, marry me, bury me" WOW!!
Realizations Gifting Bow
Vickie
The Eyes Have It (Poetry) - 7/23/2010 8:59:59 AM
David,
What a very romantic poem for the woman who is the inspiration for it.
Mary
The Eyes Have It (Poetry) - 7/23/2010 8:44:22 AM
She is but a fool to let you go...but David trying to force something only stagnates it..Just manifest it, and let it go, let the Universe handle the outcome..it will be what it is suppose to be..You are a beautiful soul, don't ever forget it..
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
The Eyes Have It (Poetry) - 7/23/2010 6:51:12 AM
This interesting poem gives that "special person" a look at your inner soul. It also leaves you vulnerable.........! A lucky lady to be cared for this much.
The Eyes Have It (Poetry) - 7/23/2010 5:53:34 AM
David, this is so beautiful and pain filled...it's as though the reader can see into your soul.
The Eyes Have It (Poetry) - 7/23/2010 5:31:42 AM
a very impressive poem of abandonment to the power of attraction. much enjoyed.
The Eyes Have It (Poetry) - 7/23/2010 5:09:54 AM
What woman could resist a proposal like that? How romantic and blunt I might add....giggle.....loved it, David!
Anna
The Eyes Have It (Poetry) - 7/23/2010 5:05:05 AM
I love your poem --
This is brazen and intense, dark and beautiful ~
Blessings,
Christine
Cocaine (Poetry) - 7/21/2010 1:25:19 AM
Powerful, powerful writing, David...your last four words proclaiming it all...
The Nightmare (Poetry) - 7/20/2010 3:27:55 PM
The depth of emotion and raw anquish is stunningly felt within this poet's chosen words...
I am left with a sadness after reading your poem, David.
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Cocaine (Poetry) - 7/20/2010 3:24:55 PM
There are many addictions, and there are many cures...The key is to find the a reason behind the addiction and the cure will be there in the clarity of that realization..
This is a very powerful poem, reaching for forgiveness and redemption..
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Cocaine (Poetry) - 7/20/2010 2:55:06 PM
this brings tears to my eyes David
especially the closing lines...
"The smoke has gone,
I'm here, its me!"
and it is as though silence is the echoic messenger
listening...its so utterly sad and empty to feel it...
a very emotional statement & yes those wicked drugs
them monkey weights...
May Love Find Peace & Forgiving Furrows
Vickie
The Nightmare (Poetry) - 7/20/2010 1:38:22 PM
This is what I am talking about. Poetry that hits the core and at its best.
Cocaine (Poetry) - 7/20/2010 11:35:50 AM
Very powerful write, David! I cannot imagine how it feel to have such a horrible addiction. My brother died of an overdose when he was only 38 years old....too young to die...but a lifetime of drugs, etc. took him away....
Anna
Beautiful pain (Poetry) - 7/19/2010 7:02:09 AM
Pain can be a reminder that we are alive and can actually still "feel". Your poem is beautiful..I can feel your beautiful pain..
Peace,love and light,
Amber "V"
The Nightmare (Poetry) - 7/19/2010 4:58:52 AM
Another gem, David!
Anna
The Dream (Poetry) - 7/19/2010 4:57:47 AM
Loved this! Great phrasing, David...especially "Her completeness in my absence. My absence of completeness without her"...beautiful!
Anna
The Nightmare (Poetry) - 7/18/2010 6:09:08 AM
Well written indeed..enjoyed..Hugss
The Nightmare (Poetry) - 7/18/2010 2:39:32 AM
David, you say so much here, and there are so many meaningful verses, ...but this one,"The price wrought is not mine alone But the anguish bought is mine to own," says so very much, and I can feel its depth.
The Dream (Poetry) - 7/18/2010 2:36:25 AM
Beautifully written, David.
The Dream (Poetry) - 7/17/2010 12:36:14 PM
This is beautiful David
the love is dovotely avowing
in any misgivings of the "failings"
your closing phrases are really gripping!!
it really makes us want to value our life circle
& claim & own our responsibility to enrich it
least thats how I feel right now...
I ponder...wondering...
what are those four thorns...hummmm
Vickie
