Halloween Charade (Short Story) - 7/21/2010 2:07:46 PM
Interesting concept, expression could be punched up with fewer "to be" verbs, i.e, "was" and more expressive action verbs, my thought. Your story though.
Breaking Face What Then of Horror? (Short Story) - 7/17/2010 4:39:09 PM
Excellent discription of what we experience as young children. Some of us have erased the scarey moments from our memory banks. It's obvious that you haven't. I enjoyed the read.
Donna
Thus, Autumn Dressed in Paris (Poetry) - 8/6/2010 3:49:50 AM
I wanted to be there! I read your bio, I doubt you are easily forgotten. Enjoyed the poem very much.
Wise Eyes (Poetry) - 7/19/2010 11:07:31 AM
Interesting, many more of poems like these to come I hope.
Wise Eyes (Poetry) - 7/18/2010 6:23:22 AM
Great writing dear man enjoyed very much..Hugsss
Wise Eyes (Poetry) - 7/17/2010 4:39:05 PM
Wonderful poem!
And I kept seeing that third eye too...the one that knows ~
Namaste,
Christine
