The Real Ghosts of Purgatory (Short Story) - 9/9/2016 6:05:29 AM
I'm sorry, in spite of the irony and angst of the situation in purgatory, I couldn't get into this story as well as I would've liked. It is well written though in spite of my difficulty or lack of concentration figure out which character was speaking.
I noticed two things: First, while it is probably correct because people use it all the time, I don't think that anyone is sleeping when they say that they are "sleeping with someone." And, I don't think you can dye hair to get it to be blonde; you bleach it.
Ron
