Shadows and Meadows of the Past (Book) - 3/18/2018 8:27:16 PM
This is my first book and Anthology. The men and woman who have put in the time to make this book happen are who makes life what it is. They represent the unsung influences in society. This book is more than a publication. It is a piece of history and a symbol to represent life, love, and death.
Shadows and Meadows of the Past (Book) - 3/15/2018 4:27:10 AM
Congratulations, John. A few quotes from some of the pieces would give the reader idea of what's inside.
Ron
Shadows and Meadows of the Past (Book) - 3/15/2018 2:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your involvement with this project and wishing for its success.
Unguarded Moment (Short Story) - 5/20/2011 9:39:11 AM
Tremendous, John, tremendous. You amaze me with your depth of feeling and your ability to express it in your writing. (Clapping) BRAVO, my friend, BRAVO.
Hugs to you,
CJ
Unguarded Moment (Short Story) - 3/23/2011 5:34:11 AM
A beautiful love story. And the ending was beyond perfect. What shall I call you? YOURS! Heavenly.
Donna
Unguarded Moment (Short Story) - 3/17/2011 3:57:48 PM
Nicely done, John. I applaud you the ending.
Nightmare (Short Story) - 1/18/2011 7:00:58 AM
This gripped me and held me until, in the end I let out the breath I didn't know I'd been holding onto. The depth of empathy and insight here is surely from a deep connection with Light/Love.
Nightmare (Short Story) - 12/22/2009 12:35:30 PM
wow... if we could only use the other 90% of our brain, what might we see... what might we know...?
Return of a Stranger (Short Story) - 10/31/2009 6:28:03 AM
For some reason it reminds me of my brother, he lived in Boston. When he died in 2007 my Mom and I were there. When people in his building and a local store found out he died they said such wonderful things about him and some didn't even know his name. Now I will be able to think of him, that people cared when he no longer walked by. Thank you John
Nightmare (Short Story) - 10/31/2009 6:21:58 AM
John, that was amazing. When I first started to read, I thought oh no, not another attack. You made it into something amazing. I have always had a hard time with religion and as I get older I've learned that I am comfortable with my beliefs, not necessarily someone else interpretation of God's way. I really enjoyed it.
Return of a Stranger (Short Story) - 10/24/2009 2:56:19 PM
Very good story to share indeed. Perhaps you'll have a chance to really get to know him now. Enjoyed, LadyJ
Nightmare (Short Story) - 7/15/2006 5:25:27 PM
Great message- I haven't ever seen a Christian arguement that is prochoice. Last time I checked, abortion was NOT addressed in the bible specifically, and like so many issues is all about interpretation. It was refreshing to see a different interpretation.
Nightmare (Short Story) - 12/13/2005 11:15:22 AM
Ah yes John , God as they concieve Him to be but not my God .Forgive them Lord for they know not what they do.Great message to all. Luke
Nightmare (Short Story) - 3/14/2005 4:46:20 AM
John, 'Judge not, lest ye be judged' I do my best to live by those words. This world would be a much better place if all would try it. Only God and myself, has to be aware of what I hold within..and even then my own opinions are not His.
A very powerful message you've penned here John. Thank you for sharing it.
Lisa
Nightmare (Short Story) - 10/12/2003 8:01:49 AM
John: Obviously you being in the healthcare profession has given you great compassion. This has been a wonderful thing for me to read on a Sunday morning when I probably should be at church. This has given me some new insights into abortion; this is what true Christianity is all about.
Return of a Stranger (Short Story) - 8/7/2003 2:21:28 PM
This is a good story and it has reminded me of a something similar with a 'man-of-the-road' that took place with my husband and I some years back, I think I am going to have to write it up! Jackie <> <
Nightmare (Short Story) - 8/7/2003 2:16:01 PM
A question we should all ask ourselves, "What would Jesus do in this situation" Certainly something to make all of us think twiceabout making judgements. Jackie <> <
Nightmare (Short Story) - 5/15/2003 6:28:23 AM
Excellent insight into God's
point of view on this delicate
topic. This write speaks volumes.
I will read it again..
~~Linda~~
Nightmare (Short Story) - 4/4/2003 8:54:24 PM
John,
Wow...a very difficult subject you tackled here and a very good job you have done with it. You've brought about a different view point and taken the opinions and objects of the two sides into a new light.
What an excellent write....bravo!!!
Dee
Return of a Stranger (Short Story) - 3/9/2003 12:44:32 PM
im anopther who looks forward more to your stories this was so entertainingly upliftring and yet funny nice job on this
Return of a Stranger (Short Story) - 3/8/2003 8:41:25 PM
This is wonderful!!!
I'm looking forward to more stories!!!
Yes Dear (Poetry) - 4/6/2026 2:50:41 PM
Rather nice, John! Enjoyed this one! Alohas, -K2
Yes Dear (Poetry) - 8/26/2024 8:05:51 AM
No one probes the subject of love quite the way you do--raw, honestly, and always with a lesson learned.
Yes Dear (Poetry) - 8/13/2024 8:45:32 AM
Beautifully penned as always, John.
Yes Dear (Poetry) - 8/12/2024 11:29:11 AM
You got me wondering a bit whether it was. Perhaps just a dream?
Ron
Sacred Questions (Poetry) - 8/8/2024 4:13:59 PM
Well written, John.
May it bring you peace.
Ed
Sacred Questions (Poetry) - 8/8/2024 11:39:40 AM
Yes, there have been martyred down through the centuries, but they are few compared to the rulers that used and continue to use the powers for their benefit. Not a single one of them ever wishing to live like a martyr. Rather, lying that coming to him and them would make followers more comfortable and wealthy. Among the good people following are many hypocrites. Mostly in the churches and governments.
Ron
Act (Poetry) - 8/2/2024 6:28:56 AM
John, so poignant and beautiful as usual.
Act (Poetry) - 7/29/2024 2:16:10 PM
People often have a love they can't act upon. Your poem illustrates it very well.
Ron
Sweet Neighbor (Poetry) - 1/27/2024 12:13:37 PM
Nice poem. Now that I'm retired, I find myself watching my neighbors out the window and seeing them heading to work, to shopping or to a street festival. Heading out early, coming home late. They are rarely around during the day.
Sweet Neighbor (Poetry) - 1/23/2024 8:33:26 AM
Your neighbor sounds like someone you can count on. More than just a neighbor, a really good friend.
Only I don't know why watching him/her mowing the lawn would cause a yawn. Except to get a rhyming word. ;-)
There's nothing sweeter than the smell of new mown grass.
Ron
Sweet Neighbor (Poetry) - 1/23/2024 6:08:37 AM
I agree John. The AuthorsDen family is a great bunch. Well, there are a couple of assholes. But isn't there always?
Goodbyes (Poetry) - 10/18/2023 9:09:20 AM
So beautifully told. Glad I discovered this by accident today.
I have never lost anyone so close for it to touch me deeply, yet. And I hope it never happens.
Ron
Goodbyes (Poetry) - 10/14/2023 7:48:28 AM
If beauty is one part simplicity and one part elegance, you have written a masterpiece for your loved one.
Goodbyes (Poetry) - 10/13/2023 12:26:59 PM
An interesting and insightful probe into goodbyes. Very touching and something we all experience but need a poet like you to put it into words we can relate to.
All (Poetry) - 10/1/2023 3:13:39 PM
Lovely, you write the most wonderful poetry, John.
All (Poetry) - 10/1/2023 9:18:34 AM
I always find your poems wonderful to read and this one is exquisite. All everyone would want in a life, simply put.
Kudos,
Ron
All (Poetry) - 9/30/2023 8:57:03 AM
Blessed rhythm and rhyme with a message well worth reading.
30 Years Ago (Poetry) - 8/23/2023 10:54:26 AM
Certainly very hopeful beginning, like all marriages seem to be. But I was hoping for a better conclusion than a divorce. It was sad to see that happen. And, it is usually the woman that makes the decision to part.
I also went through a divorce about 40 years ago from a very short marriage of about 3 years. And, by coincidence, my partner and I, still unmarried have been together for 30 years and will probably until one of us is gone.
Ron
Wouldn't Hurt (Poetry) - 5/1/2023 11:35:06 AM
A beautiful as your poetry always is, John. I know a man who loved a woman secretly for many years, now they are married. Never give up hope where love is concerned.
Wouldn't Hurt (Poetry) - 4/19/2023 2:55:32 PM
So true. It wouldn't hurt to share a kiss...or a lifetime. You notched another one on the tree of life.
Wouldn't Hurt (Poetry) - 4/16/2023 9:11:17 AM
I hope it wasn't a dream, but a reunion after many years. And the tears were a bonus.
I really love the intensity and honesty that this poem shows me. I see that Elizabet (h on the end purposely removed the way she likes to call herself) has picked up on my penchant for commenting on all poems. Isn't that nice and considerate?
Ron
Wouldn't Hurt (Poetry) - 4/15/2023 4:27:50 PM
Dreams like this come true, believe me. Beautifully written.
Bait And Switch (Poetry) - 3/20/2023 2:20:35 PM
That line we never cross is about the most sorrowful thing to contemplate. Gorgeous poetry, as always, David.
Affair (Poetry) - 2/11/2023 5:03:53 AM
The pain is tangible in this. Sorry you had to live through this. At least a great poem came out of it.
Advantage- Her (Poetry) - 2/11/2023 5:00:25 AM
Very nice!
Across The Miles (Poetry) - 2/11/2023 4:55:59 AM
Nice rythm in this, fastpaced, yet a feeling of longing so strong it conjures up the feeling of time moving to slow. Well done! And why can’t it be?
Sometime (Poetry) - 2/10/2023 2:17:08 PM
This is it, you’re making me cry. Perhaps missing all the cues, or thinking they couldn’t possibly be for her. Be bold and tell her. What beautiful poetry you write. It goes straight to my heart.
Bait And Switch (Poetry) - 2/9/2023 1:18:50 PM
Pow! Right in the gut! That's where your words and story hit me. That's fine wiritng, John!!
Love ya!
Jane
Bait And Switch (Poetry) - 2/9/2023 11:08:43 AM
I don't know if this happened to you or you were just being kind, it's happened to me more than once and therefore seems, unkind. And what a poignant way to express it, in beautiful verse. Like you wrote, so many of us have endured it, for better or worse.
Ron
For Sail (Poetry) - 2/9/2023 1:46:19 AM
I surrender 😉 so beautiful. How can i not? I love it.
Bait And Switch (Poetry) - 2/8/2023 8:10:13 PM
Your story told through your verses seems very "familiar" to me. I live it every day. I am sure it also rings true for many others as well. Love and peace to you, John,
Regis (Reg) 🙏
Bait And Switch (Poetry) - 2/8/2023 4:25:50 PM
Can feel the pain in this one and relate to it on so many levels...especially liked the last line,
Fee
Bait And Switch (Poetry) - 2/8/2023 10:43:30 AM
I can relate to this, that’s what my last poem was about. And for all you know she could be out there, confused and longing to find out if this fire and tenderness she feels at the same time is real. Because How could it be anything else? I say you should muster up the courage to ask. Otherwise you’re going to bring it into every relationship you have.
For Sail (Poetry) - 12/18/2022 9:57:38 AM
Never underestimate the possibilities of a determined soul. You've got it.
For Sail (Poetry) - 12/18/2022 9:06:05 AM
John, I know how it feels to throw the past behind me and follow my dream until it comes true. Never give up on your dreams. This is a beautiful pen, as your poetry always is.
For Sail (Poetry) - 12/17/2022 12:10:20 PM
I love the analogy to carefree sailing that this really and poem brings us to.
As I read your poems, not only are they beautifully rhymed and structured, they are filled with so much truth and wisdom. I have to rate you as one of the best poets, if not the best, poet here on AD. You are a great communicator that I love to read.
Ron
For Sail (Poetry) - 12/17/2022 7:56:39 AM
A beautifully measured and delivered love poem.
Across The Miles (Poetry) - 12/11/2022 3:07:46 PM
John, this is not only a brilliant poem, it's a poem from the soul of one who has know love's yearning. Just beautiful, touched me deeply. I love your poetry.
Across The Miles (Poetry) - 12/3/2022 9:44:33 AM
What a great poem! Brought back feelings of all those times I drove so far only to be disappointed when she didn't show up or wouldn't have me in her life anymore and I just drove like a blind man oblivious to lights passing in the night like you described so well.
Kudos, poet!
Ron
Across The Miles (Poetry) - 12/3/2022 8:42:19 AM
Good rhythms and rhymes, compelling substance.
Across The Miles (Poetry) - 12/2/2022 7:41:31 PM
Great poem with a super ending--Smiles across the miles.
Merry Christmas! Ed
Across The Miles (Poetry) - 12/2/2022 5:14:38 PM
Great longings and yearnings are expressed in this poem for the one you love. This has been a good read. I love reading expressive poetry!
Sandie
Where? (Poetry) - 7/17/2022 9:14:50 AM
Change is inevitable and can be so good. Well penned as always, John.
Where? (Poetry) - 7/8/2022 10:57:16 AM
My thoughts wandered with every stanza. You raised some profound questions with this poem.
Ron
Where? (Poetry) - 7/7/2022 12:30:56 PM
I believe audrine has nailed it. I'm also not certain about the subject of your heartaches. This lost love seems to be different from those in your past writings. She has apparently stolen your heart and took it with her. Who is this woman that I (we) need to stay away from? And just what and why did she grip it and rip it? (Sorry about the non-poetic side of me that asks tough questions).
Where? (Poetry) - 7/6/2022 8:31:13 PM
it seems to me that this piece is still seeking for something more but as to what and where it is, maybe a leap of faith can show. much enjoyed, thank you.
Where? (Poetry) - 7/6/2022 7:31:26 PM
If it is any consolation, I could have written those sentiments, John. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Regis. 🙏🌳🌷🎵🌲
Beyond (Poetry) - 4/19/2022 12:47:03 AM
Absolutely beautiful poem…
A work of art…
Diana…🍃
Beyond (Poetry) - 4/16/2022 11:37:14 AM
I have always loved your poetry, John. This is rich in rhyme and in soul expression. Beautiful.
Beyond (Poetry) - 4/13/2022 9:48:28 AM
Yes, poets always go back to where their memory of wonderful things is written down in the hope of rekindling that feeling.
Ron
Beyond (Poetry) - 4/13/2022 8:25:18 AM
A finely measured poem with poetic meter, rhythm and rhyme. I like the way your meaning is understated, not blared out like a trumpet.
Love the lines: "We poets chase the mystery, through thunder and the rain." Exactly, I know I do.
Beyond (Poetry) - 4/12/2022 5:30:31 PM
Very spiritual and moving/ I read your words forward and backward and got the same impression. There is no timeline imposed on love.
Beyond (Poetry) - 4/12/2022 12:45:47 PM
I love this, John... the theme, the flow, and the emotions awakened by your words. Thank you for sharing. Love, peace, and blessings to you,
Regis. 🙏🍁🌳🌲
Always Been (Poetry) - 4/3/2022 12:28:51 PM
"What comes from the heart touches the heart.". Your words are a perfect example of trying to keep it together while one is moving on. A very wise woman would have told you this, "Make a gratitude list.". She sure told me when I would get depressed thinking about the mistakes I made in the past. It works, my friend.
Love ya!
Jane
Always Been (Poetry) - 4/1/2022 10:18:22 PM
Very sweet sentiments!
Sandie
Always Been (Poetry) - 3/27/2022 10:38:05 AM
Sounds like my partner. She has a big heart with me and it so deep that I will never leave her mind. A beautiful poem with lots of depth to it. Always enjoy your lovely poetry.
Ron
Always Been (Poetry) - 3/26/2022 6:16:03 PM
It looks like you and I were singing from the same melancholy
source. Truth be told, my dentist uses the expression "in a perfect world" a lot. I'll tell her after she reads my ditty. Then I send her over to read yours. I'm trying to be helpful, John. =smiles=
Always Been (Poetry) - 3/26/2022 1:06:28 PM
Tender sentiments of love beautifully expressed.
Always Been (Poetry) - 3/26/2022 11:03:44 AM
And I can completely relate and empathize with such thoughts and emotions. Love and peace to you, John,
Regis. 🙏🌳🌲🌼🍁
Sometime (Poetry) - 2/28/2022 5:45:13 AM
Wistful and illuminating words
we would do well to contemplate
before it’s too late…
Diana…🍃
Sometime (Poetry) - 2/20/2022 10:56:38 AM
This one is like, "I'll see you sometime…" And then we never do, never make the call. Miss the opportunity. Reminding us when we say things like, "Let's have lunch sometime."
Missed opportunities for greater intimacy.
Ron
Sometime (Poetry) - 2/19/2022 3:20:49 PM
Wow! This came from a deep and caring place.
I've often said "get rid of the adjectives and adverbs"
and what you have left is poetry. You have just written
a poem for the ages. summa cum laude.
It's You (Poetry) - 2/2/2022 4:08:30 PM
Blessed just to read your poetry, John. This is so lovely.
It's You (Poetry) - 1/16/2022 12:13:50 PM
Whoever "you" is, I hope they can receive this wonderful, lyrical poem that could easily be a song if someone put music to it.
Ron
It's You (Poetry) - 1/11/2022 7:15:11 PM
What a sweet tribute John. Truly lovely.
It's You (Poetry) - 1/9/2022 11:02:31 AM
I'm so glad you've found love. It's the most beautiful thing!
Sandie
It's You (Poetry) - 1/9/2022 5:47:05 AM
Sounds like your love life has taken a turn for the better.
Onward and upward!
It's You (Poetry) - 1/8/2022 8:58:46 AM
To have love, to have known love, to still seek love is the value of the heart...you seem to have captured the first.
If You Were There (Poetry) - 1/4/2022 1:11:14 PM
Absolutely beautiful, John. Perfect in flow and rhyme, lovely in message.
If You Were There (Poetry) - 1/2/2022 10:39:56 AM
There is something about being in Nature, especially in Snow,
that crystallises with perfect clarity our thoughts and feelings…
What a beautiful poem John…for even though there is sadness,
there is such beauty in your expression, that your words soar above
this…and the overall impression is of a heightened sense of calm and
peaceful questioning…
Wonderful work!
My best wishes for The New Year…
Diana…🍃
If You Were There (Poetry) - 1/1/2022 11:30:45 AM
Your beautiful rhymes never cease to amaze me. Whether or not this is just artistry or real thoughts about a lost love, makes no difference. The poem is universal and inspiring if even in a rather negative way.
Ron
If You Were There (Poetry) - 12/31/2021 6:02:13 PM
Enduring love the most precious kind, and then there are the
memories left behind. Nicely penned dear John, Happy New Years
brave on :)
If You Were There (Poetry) - 12/31/2021 3:00:24 PM
Great expression of longing in this one.
Sande
If You Were There (Poetry) - 12/30/2021 2:59:08 PM
Very romantic and melodic, and full of longing. I especially like this line: “Hearts where hopeless wishes cling.” Neat way to write that concept. ~~ djl
If You Were There (Poetry) - 12/30/2021 9:54:52 AM
Places to make love: Clover fields, Ferris Wheels, tunnels of love, soft feathery beds, a drive to the mountains, a swim in the ocean. You asked!
If You Were There (Poetry) - 12/30/2021 8:34:09 AM
Very evocative, John. It immediately brings to mind similar long walks I once took through the frosty, snow-draped woods of a North Dakota winterscape, flanking the Souris River. While I wasn't at that time reflecting on matters of the heart, I was certainly in a soulful enough state of mind, with every nerve and fiber of my body caught up in the sharp fragrance of the pines (and strangely enough, also of creosote) and the biting sting of the 20-below temperature. I wasn't 'there' where you were in this reminiscence, certainly, but I was THERE in those northern woods and it was both an electric and melancholy experience that stays with me some 56 years later. Contrary to what Gertrude Stein so famously remarked about Oakland (California), and in reference to North Dakota winters, there IS a THERE, there... Thanks for being such an expressive poetic catalyst!
Heart Dispute (Poetry) - 12/1/2021 3:42:25 PM
So perfectly and wistfully expressed…
Yet some of these ‘special moments’
linger in the heart forever more…
Diana…🍃
Heart Dispute (Poetry) - 12/1/2021 12:56:39 AM
The romantic has spoken
and I listened to a soul that
longs for love. There is a sadness in all
your renderings. And it fits well.
Heart Dispute (Poetry) - 11/28/2021 5:25:12 AM
John, so beautiful as always. Your poetry always makes me feel and that is the essence of real poetry to me. Lovely pen.
Heart Dispute (Poetry) - 11/25/2021 1:40:54 PM
You have beautifully described what happened and how your heart betrayed you. I have had that feeling, myself.
Ron
One Last Time (Poetry) - 8/29/2021 11:02:40 AM
Simply stunningly beautiful words John…
The last but one verse really got my heart…
so moving…
Diana..🌿
One Last Time (Poetry) - 8/21/2021 9:21:47 AM
A great honor to the remembrance of your father. I can't say the same for my father although he was always there for me and when I was younger, was closer.
So easy to read and understand.
Ron
One Last Time (Poetry) - 8/21/2021 8:02:23 AM
Simply beautifully rendered. I had a similar experience with my own father that I will never forget, and yes, I did write about it.
One Last Time (Poetry) - 8/20/2021 5:59:09 PM
Beautiful poem, John. You brought tearsto my eyes
One Last Time (Poetry) - 8/20/2021 5:50:31 PM
A poem of great longings. Emotions are well expressed.
Sandie
Solitude (Poetry) - 8/15/2021 8:49:50 AM
I sense the loss of a partner or friend. Someone that you could be comfortable with, but is now gone leaving you only with your own thoughts and no one to bounce them off of. In the last stanza the idea of, "Let it go for good, somehow," seems to bring closure to the solitude and the ability to get out into the fray again.
Ron
Solitude (Poetry) - 8/15/2021 1:19:35 AM
The Universe always needs Love…and love in YOUR Heart helps
to keep the world a kind and loving place as we are all connected…
We can give love away in the smallest ways that can make a big
impact on others…a smile at a stranger…a word with someone
who has no one else to speak to…a kind gesture of giving…
However, I do understand what you say…perhaps just a different
perception would help…
A heartfelt poem that touches the soul…
Best wishes,
Diana…🍀
Solitude (Poetry) - 8/14/2021 2:26:09 PM
Nicely stated and anyone who has a broken heart can definately relate.
fee
Solitude (Poetry) - 8/14/2021 11:32:15 AM
I admire your poetic structure here and your resolution to put a REAL 'pome' together properly, John. It's always great to read rhyming poems that not only rhyme, but that are mechanically well-constructed! As for love, well...love is a fleeting aspect of our lives and while a few find it, most do not (they only think they do), so rest assured you're not the least (sic) of the Mohicans in that regard! I myself spent most of my life convinced that my personal 'completion' as a fulfilled person rested (nay, DEPENDED) entirely upon 'finding' that 'right one'. It took me many years to put that adolescent yearning aside and embrace the fact that in a world in which each of us is a solitary, self-complete (for good or bad) entity, we are actually born 'complete' and it's just a matter of discovering that ineluctable fact out for ourselves. And now, excuse me but I need to go pig out on some hygienically EXECRABLE 'comfort food', LoL (part of my own search for perfect 'completion', naturally)! Aloha, -K2
It's You (Poetry) - 8/2/2021 9:48:30 AM
Your love poetry is the best. In this case reaching out to someone and expressing much you care. Simply beautiful.
Ron
It's You (Poetry) - 8/2/2021 4:57:02 AM
Well done, when we experience that kind of love it is ours forever...
Fee
It's You (Poetry) - 8/1/2021 10:39:37 PM
John, one thing you are not is emotionless, you show yours quite clearly herein, a calming write...-e-
It's You (Poetry) - 8/1/2021 9:51:42 AM
John! I love this poem. It has true emotion interlaced with visions and love. Beautiful!!!
Love ya!
Jane
Soul Mates (Poetry) - 7/31/2021 2:18:22 PM
Stunning words that made it all the more real. The way you made it rhyme so effortlessly and yet get to the very point of a never-ending and dedicated love.
Kudos!
Ron
Soul Mates (Poetry) - 7/27/2021 2:13:07 PM
You hit this one out of the ballpark, John while the bases
were loaded. The angels are dancing, and the backup singers are
all in tune. How could it be any better?
What Am I? (Poetry) - 7/20/2021 8:18:21 PM
People want and expect too much. All we need is a helping hand, a touch.
What Am I? (Poetry) - 7/20/2021 8:29:09 AM
Your love poems are the best. But between your yeses, the dos (nose, knows?) some of the best rhyming I've seen here.
Ron
What Am I? (Poetry) - 7/20/2021 6:29:21 AM
A mellow rhythm that conveys an insightful, meaningful message. Well done, John
What Am I? (Poetry) - 7/20/2021 2:17:23 AM
Your words strike an authenticity about just being
human in our relationships…we listen, we care, we struggle, but the
gift is in learning, living and understanding…
sometimes however, just being trusted is all we require…
“Looking for miracles? Just take my hand.”
A unique and perfect last line…
A great poem…
Diana…🍃
What Am I? (Poetry) - 7/19/2021 3:14:57 PM
Love, hearts and being human is rarely simple and straight forward. Personalities, situations and so many other factors play into relationships...things the heart sometimes cannot comprehend. Well said John.
Fee
No Idea (Poetry) - 7/17/2021 8:23:49 PM
I have an idea, a complete picture after reading such a well done piece. Even being understood though, could never take away the heartfelt pain expressed here.
No Idea (Poetry) - 7/17/2021 7:49:07 AM
You made me feel your pain with this very honest and clear poem of loss. I don't know if she left you or she died, but either way it's sad when someone we love so much is gone.
I think the hyphens (-) at the end of some words could be removed. But I don't understand is a very clear rendition otherwise, "We darkened doors of heaven…"
Ron
No Idea (Poetry) - 7/16/2021 8:58:40 AM
One-sided love never ends well, as you relate so well here in this elergaic poem.
No Idea (Poetry) - 7/16/2021 1:05:19 AM
A heart rending cry from the soul…
Somehow we find our way back,
But bear the scars etched deep in our hearts
forever…
Diana…
No Idea (Poetry) - 7/15/2021 9:25:05 PM
Oh, John! This is gut-wrenching and filled with great longings!
Sandie
No Idea (Poetry) - 7/15/2021 5:24:21 PM
Well expressed emotions of how a broken heart gropes to find a way to go even if it will never heal. Well done,
Fee
No Idea (Poetry) - 7/15/2021 3:55:12 PM
A heartfelt question as to why relationships confound and confuse right when we think we've got them figured out!
No Idea (Poetry) - 7/15/2021 3:22:06 PM
Eloquent and poignant, John. You've managed to cobble together quite a paean to the elegant simplicity and comfort of 'that' person who is all we need to complement our lives, but whom the fates have been moved to take out of ours. Nicely done! -K2
Prayer (Poetry) - 7/12/2021 9:34:32 AM
I don't pray, because I shouldn't be asking for something for myself or others. The proof is in the doing. And like your prayer ends, we all have our journey we travel and its best that we make amends before we leave this life.
However, for some people, prayer produces endorphins in the brain that make one feel better, usually about a bad situation that seems out of control except by a higher order that has to be believed in order for it to work in the prayers' behalf. Once again, I reject that concept. There are plenty of endorphins in doing the right thing. Praying and then doing nothing, is akin to doing nothing.
Ron
I Was Here (Poetry) - 7/11/2021 3:20:40 PM
John, of all people...........YOU! ......who loves the beauty of nature and the gentle rabbit........the streams and woods! Blessed be.
Love ya!
Jane
Prayer (Poetry) - 7/11/2021 2:36:13 PM
There are no words to tell you how much I enjoyed the deep thoughts that went into this poem! Marvelous, John!!
Love ya!
Jane
Out There (Poetry) - 7/11/2021 8:50:03 AM
John, how deeply you feel, how perfectly you write.
I Was Here (Poetry) - 7/11/2021 8:09:52 AM
John, I know about a black hole no amount of sacrifice can fill. This poem touched the deepest part of me. So sorry for her and for you.
I Was Here (Poetry) - 7/10/2021 6:18:18 PM
An engaging poem and "story," John. Love can be difficult and often painful and soul-wrenching. Love and peace,
Regis. 🌳🍁🙏
I Was Here (Poetry) - 7/10/2021 6:05:31 PM
Rather poignant, John. I rather enjoyed reading this as much as reading between the lines.
I Was Here (Poetry) - 7/10/2021 5:00:50 PM
John: You've got to learn how to just throw caution to the wind,
jump in, and stir things up. It works about 80 percent of the
time. And those are pretty good odds. Look at me--completely
worn to a frazzle. But with a permanent smile.
You (Poetry) - 4/26/2021 10:09:50 AM
A stunningly beautiful poem...
Diana...
You (Poetry) - 2/23/2021 9:04:49 PM
Wonderful poetry, beautifully crafted.
You (Poetry) - 2/22/2021 10:35:53 AM
Not only your beautiful rhyming, but your message in this poem is so understandable, lovely and direct that I find myself in awe of what you have written.
Ron
You (Poetry) - 2/21/2021 6:49:57 AM
John this deeply affected me. So beautiful, so wise. It's a gorgeous poem filled with love and meaning. I especially felt this part,
Love is what is Heaven
Not some place, or some reward
Not winning at the game of life
Not bowing to the Lord.
I feel that if we don't bow to the Lord our life will be wasted and if we do bow to him, every part of our life will be significant.
You (Poetry) - 2/20/2021 3:40:23 PM
Well done. Fee
Somewhere In Time (Poetry) - 2/15/2021 8:41:12 AM
John, I love your poetry and this is no exception. Wonderfully penned.
Somewhere In Time (Poetry) - 1/31/2021 9:30:57 AM
For those of us who have good memories, is important for us to write down what we remember. For part of the chronicle of the twentieth century will not be all of the major news stories, but what ordinary people were doing during their lives. All of this information useful when future historians look back at that century and label it good or bad.
From your poem, I would say that you are remembering the good times. I'm the same way. I find that much of my youth innocent, but aware of bad things around me that didn't affect me for various reasons that I'm grateful for. In the meantime those wonderful memories are busy being chronicled by me, so if nothing else, my future relatives can look back and see exactly how I lived, loved, prospered and declined.
Ron
Somewhere In Time (Poetry) - 1/31/2021 7:32:42 AM
And dreams don't die the way we do - they only sometimes sleep." So well said, my inspired poet.
Somewhere In Time (Poetry) - 1/30/2021 8:50:15 PM
John: This poem soars into a realm and mood I've never known, and it takes me to places I've never visited before. The Poetry of Love eludes so many of us because we haven't the capacity to speak its language, to know how to navigate its waters, and to reach out and touch its soul. You have done all that and more with daring, grace, and style. Now I'm speechless.
Out There (Poetry) - 7/23/2020 11:17:01 PM
Nostalgia is a difficult subject for any genre and for most poets to tap. You've done a wonderful job of bundling it up into a masterful rendering. So well done!
Out There (Poetry) - 7/23/2020 11:28:27 AM
A fine poem. Enjoyed thoroughly. You should post more often.
Out There (Poetry) - 7/22/2020 8:03:26 PM
Beautiful and touching. Thanks for sharing.
Past (Poetry) - 6/25/2020 7:10:04 AM
''...a heart must bleed to heal'' -------EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Past (Poetry) - 6/16/2020 10:56:03 AM
You have struck at the essence of good poetry. Touch your reader with your pain so clearly that it is felt in the deepest recesses of the reader's thoughts. Kudos.
Ron
Past (Poetry) - 6/16/2020 7:28:08 AM
Your words tell of the pain of a loved ones "leaving" and the pain it can impress on the heart. So many feel this same pain. Believe me. Your last line in this heartfelt poem sums it up! Peace and healing to you, my friend!!
Love ya!
Jane
Past (Poetry) - 6/14/2020 8:04:43 AM
This is pure heartfelt, down to the bare essence, good. Very few writers can capture love, and sorrow, and the will to go on as you do. This is your lane, John, and you know capture it better than anyone I know. I don't wish you more heartache, just the inspiration to keep on keeping on. Thanks, Ed.
Past (Poetry) - 6/13/2020 10:32:44 PM
Memories of past loves do heal slowly, if ever. A sad, melancholy feel to this poem.
All Those Miles (Poetry) - 8/31/2019 8:08:45 AM
This is a fabulous write, John! I enjoy your pictures allowing us to get closer to nature and life itself. Write on, hon!
Love ya!
Jane
All Those Miles (Poetry) - 6/17/2019 7:31:09 AM
I was in on the ground floor of space age navigation back in 1969 when I lugged the atomic clock to various spots around the world. But even I did not see GPS coming so soon when satelites could pinpoint and track us to within a few feet no matter where we travelled or how fast. Mine even warned me of a deer crossing the highway several miles ahead. And the price is ridiculously low. But I digress. From Las Vegas to Kalamazoo and beyond, those "eyes in the sky" track us and either help us to our destination, or they help put us in jail with no defense. They probably could find you somewhere down lover's lane. How intrusive is that? Great write!
All Those Miles (Poetry) - 6/16/2019 1:18:44 PM
Enjoyed taking this trek with you if not in reality then in my mind & I wish I truly could be there by your side, but I would have to stop too many times to rest as I am getting old and my legs would give out too much...-e-
All Those Miles (Poetry) - 6/16/2019 9:26:29 AM
What a tribute to a wanderer and his wandering. It's as if you encompassed the whole process in a single poem of great insight. Wonderful to read and even more wonderful to experience.
Ron
All Those Miles (Poetry) - 6/16/2019 9:26:11 AM
Beautiful and lyrical! Thanks for sharing.
Waste (Poetry) - 4/20/2019 9:48:17 AM
The choice is ours- to wade a lake of tears-
Or take a chance in spite of all the fears.
Meaningful and soul-stirring words, John. Love and peace to you,
Regis.
Waste (Poetry) - 4/19/2019 9:31:58 AM
Thank you for bringing out the obvious that so many don't seem to see. The wealth gap in the United States needs to be closed so that all people can enjoy the fruits of their labor.
Ron
Waste (Poetry) - 4/19/2019 9:18:42 AM
Very heartfelt and touching write. The only thing we have to fear is fear itself.
Waste (Poetry) - 4/18/2019 10:22:01 PM
a mournful poem with a hopeful of the true nature of many people's realities, with an uplifting ending of how we can face our realities. Excellent.
Waste (Poetry) - 4/18/2019 8:42:29 PM
Your words are so very heart felt, John! It is a struggle. It's all fun and games in the beginning! Then life happens. I really got into this poem!
Love ya!
Jane
Imaginary Friend (Poetry) - 4/13/2019 9:35:19 PM
My secret id understands me better than anyone in the world. I understand. 'Love this, John!
Love ya!
Jane
Imaginary Friend (Poetry) - 4/8/2019 12:10:07 AM
I wonder if your imaginary friend is someone you lost, but you still feel beside you at times.
Imaginary Friend (Poetry) - 3/24/2019 1:34:18 PM
I never had an imaginary friend.
budd
Imaginary Friend (Poetry) - 3/23/2019 9:45:55 PM
Wonderful poem of the imaginary childhood that even in adulthood doesn't seem all that imaginary. Whimsical.
Imaginary Friend (Poetry) - 3/23/2019 12:43:32 PM
I thought that imaginary friends were the realm of childhood. But then, don't we approach childhood again at the end of our days?
I was reminded again of other dimensions that may be operating right alongside ours. Thereby you may be hearing someone that is right in the same space you are, but one dimension away.
Ron
Imaginary Friend (Poetry) - 3/23/2019 10:42:23 AM
I'm a devout non-believer, John, but that doesn't mean I'm not a spiritual person. Despite my skepticism, I very much enjoyed this poem of yours. I think you've summed most of it up perfectly here, since I've long maintained that the most beautiful cathedral in all the wide world is the world itself! For me, being in nature's embrace is like worshipping the spirit of whatever created this vast and unknowable experience we call life. Since I was brought up a good little Anglican, I can get away with this seeming contradiction, despite my avowed agnosticism, LoL. Good work!
Playground (Poetry) - 3/19/2019 9:01:26 AM
This is amazing! And to think it was 1984, the year that George Orwell predicted that big brother would take over. At that year, my street was filled with children playing. The only playground they had because developments like mine did not provide playgrounds, just swimming pools and tennis courts.
Today, the parents of children are afraid to let them play in the street like that. People with children have moved away from this neighborhood if they can. It's a shame. The neighborhood is now very mixed culturally and much better than it was in 1984, even though those young people who moved in here then and couldn't afford the houses and left quickly or had their homes foreclosed.
It's a strange world where we conjure up hate where there isn't any. In spite of the Internet and all of the wonderful movies and TV shows bringing us together, people look at the news and think what is happening is happening to them… When it is not.
Ron
Ray (Poetry) - 3/18/2019 5:59:35 PM
Beautiful words for Ray. Now I have a tune stuck in my mind.
Playground (Poetry) - 3/18/2019 3:13:05 PM
John I agree with you completely. I think though that more recent events have allowed those who do not understand this to be more openly showing their hate than only a short time ago.
budd
Playground (Poetry) - 3/18/2019 12:42:37 PM
You, my poetical wonder with words should, I feel that you are blessed to have this fantastic piece back within your possessions after thse years. It means even more today than it did in the year of George “O.”
Prayer (Poetry) - 3/2/2019 7:03:24 AM
John this is such a beautiful and heart touching poem. I truly love your poetry. Chase your purpose and your joy.
Prayer (Poetry) - 12/20/2018 2:30:01 PM
I hate to be a mood killer, John
but sometimes a good romp in the hay
fixes a lot of issues. (Don't quote me).
Prayer (Poetry) - 11/24/2018 11:52:33 AM
So much of sin is really normal behavior made simple by the church. Release that had much burden will fall from the people of the earth tied to religion.
Ron
Ray (Poetry) - 8/19/2018 11:05:20 AM
Hats off to Ray Charles. This tribute is beautiful, John!!
Love ya!
Jane
Ray (Poetry) - 7/29/2018 10:01:27 PM
None of us that live in NJ can claim to have any crazy friends though those same friends may claim that we are the crazy ones...and I for one would not disagree...good to see you writing...-e-
Ray (Poetry) - 7/28/2018 1:31:04 PM
Ray was all of that. When I saw his movie biography I was shocked to learn that he was a lifelong heroin user. But I guess that's what it took for him to live that life, mostly on the road away from his wife and children, going into parts of town that never understood blindness and worse, blackness. He was even gracious enough to finally return to Georgia and forgive them by singing that refrain before the Georgia assembly, making it the state song.
Coincidentally, I've been turning on singer/songwriters on the computer every evening to play their greatest hits for my partner when she comes home, working in the kitchen. Last night, I played the greatest hits of Ray Charles on YouTube.
I really regret that year I didn't go to the Houston Rodeo when Ray closed the show on the last Sunday. It would've been wonderful to see the man at work in the flesh.
Ron
Ray (Poetry) - 7/28/2018 10:52:17 AM
For the life of me I cannot remember a song that Ray had sung, but I remember many songs from Nat Kong Cole because I often heard my dad played his songs.
Sandie
Ray (Poetry) - 7/28/2018 8:44:52 AM
Great tribute to a great innovator and singer.
Ray (Poetry) - 7/28/2018 8:42:46 AM
Although not a huge fan of Ray Charles, the man was a Genius, and Now it's time for me to Hit The Road Jack.
Ray (Poetry) - 7/28/2018 8:35:19 AM
Yep. You got that 100% right, John. And there is one other name I would like add to that . . . Johnny Ray . . .
Millions (Poetry) - 7/21/2018 1:17:15 PM
So lovely, John. I enjoy your work always.
Whispers from Heaven (Poetry) - 7/15/2018 9:57:37 PM
Enjoyed the fresh phrases and the melodic dance this one has. Enjoyed!
- ZACH
Millions (Poetry) - 5/7/2018 8:21:52 PM
I believe we hold a little of heaven in our eyes, in our expressions.
Millions (Poetry) - 4/29/2018 7:50:52 AM
So very personal and reminds me of the way that my partner treats me--so unselfishly and loving.
Ron
Millions (Poetry) - 4/28/2018 9:07:16 AM
There is so much truth in this poem that I can relate to! Beautifully expressed, John!
Love ya!
Jane
Millions (Poetry) - 4/27/2018 8:15:55 AM
A beautiful declaration of love and faith.
Sandie
Millions (Poetry) - 4/26/2018 8:06:35 PM
a classic approach to an insightful, lyrical poem on the subject of love. Excellent.
No Idea (Poetry) - 3/2/2018 1:15:04 PM
Lovely, delving right in and telling the page all. Whether true or fictitious, much enjoyed!
Blessings, Christine
No Idea (Poetry) - 1/26/2018 5:33:54 PM
It's like you must go through the 6 (?) steps of grieving. Your pain is real. Write about it. Get it out just as you have done with this poem.
Love ya!
Jane
No Idea (Poetry) - 1/26/2018 8:11:26 AM
Like the poem before this one, breakup and heartache are very common theme for we, most human, people. This poem seems to stem from a long relationship that ended very badly.
Let me guess. Man sweeps a woman off her feet, takes her away from her chosen life profession and makes her his wife. As the breadwinner, man provides money for his woman and relegates all those untidy little tasks to her, while he reserves major decisions and recreation for himself. After a long period and a gradual alienation, the woman realizes she isn't getting her share of the bargain and quits. Man is lost without someone being his household slave and keeping his appearance up. So he writes a poem about his anguish. She is in the streets with other women, shouting, "Me, too!"
Sorry John, but I got carried away. Your poem may not be about what I wrote it all. But I have no sympathy for men who use women and then complain when the women leave them.
Ron
No Idea (Poetry) - 1/25/2018 11:06:14 AM
Such heart wrenching feelings the end of a relationship can inflict. You express it so well. But love comes along again when we least expect it to come near, things happen for a reason, and the true love you seek is definitely out there somewhere, waiting patiently, you'll know it when it appears.
No Idea (Poetry) - 1/24/2018 11:01:57 PM
Touching poetic words spoken here. Only love can break a heart, only love can mend it again. Amen!
Thanks (Poetry) - 1/24/2018 4:32:28 PM
I've just read several poems. This is the first one that really spoke to me. The deep love you spoke of tells a story of tender faithfulness that transcends all the hurdles of time and age. If only every woman could hear and share such sentiments with her man!
Connie
Thanks (Poetry) - 1/23/2018 8:41:04 PM
These are the words that all women want to hear.
Thanks (Poetry) - 1/23/2018 6:30:00 AM
So touching and far out beautiful, John!!
Love ya!
Jane
Thanks (Poetry) - 1/21/2018 1:56:36 PM
THIS is absolutely beautiful, John
Thanks (Poetry) - 1/21/2018 9:06:35 AM
So very poignant and sweet. Whoever it is written for will love it immensely for the honesty and beauty that it portrays. Wish I could write poetry like this.
Ron
Thanks (Poetry) - 1/21/2018 7:48:09 AM
beautifully said
Thanks (Poetry) - 1/21/2018 2:51:35 AM
This would make a great (romantic) song. Lovely sentiments poetically expressed.
Thanks (Poetry) - 1/21/2018 12:24:12 AM
Simply beautiful poetry John. Well done!
Whatever (Poetry) - 1/4/2018 2:09:50 PM
We are water indeed, we feel everything, still having said that, accumulated water can be quiet strong and resistant, I enjoyed your poem today John
Whatever (Poetry) - 1/3/2018 10:08:02 PM
Whatever we go through in our lifetimes, the most important thing is to hold true to ourselves. Let the lies and troubles wash right through us as we soldier on.
Whatever (Poetry) - 1/3/2018 4:33:39 AM
deep thoughts to ponder
Whatever (Poetry) - 1/1/2018 9:38:40 PM
Happy 2018 John or whatever! Well done!
Whatever (Poetry) - 12/31/2017 7:24:08 AM
What a great summary of life and how to hold a lot of its disappointments at bay. Being true to yourself often requires being a shield, a buffer against the tide of refuse that life throws at us. But as you have so well penned, it cannot inundate the love that we refuse to give away on the cheap. So well said!
Whatever (Poetry) - 12/30/2017 12:25:03 PM
Some really amazing thoughts that you have buried in this poem for us to dig up and admire.
Ron
Whatever (Poetry) - 12/30/2017 5:07:31 AM
An amazing piece. I guess it's not a poem, but it sure feels like one. A moment, a feeling captured, leaving us with a question calling for an answer. Fitting at year's end.
Whispers from Heaven (Poetry) - 12/24/2017 4:50:27 PM
Holidays force us to remember whom we have loved and lost. May their memories bring you some comfort.
Whispers from Heaven (Poetry) - 12/17/2017 1:42:05 PM
a love lost in a time gone by
