A New Page (Short Story) - 3/8/2026 4:09:22 AM
Jenny needs to start a clean page in life, and hit the delete button on Craig. She needs to follow the dictates of her heart. A story pulsating with realism.
A Mother’s Hell (Short Story) - 6/10/2025 2:57:59 PM
Oh my Chanti this is terrible, what this poor mother and her children had to endure. It hurt me to read all of it.
Rose
A Mother’s Hell (Short Story) - 5/16/2025 8:18:08 AM
Chilling and disgraceful! Your last paragraph speaks volumes.
ed
Wild Kids (Short Story) - 2/22/2021 4:01:10 AM
It's curiosity, adventure, and living life that make us who we are. That and having a big heart, a kind and caring personality, and large doses of understanding and love. Treat others that way and others love you back. Gotta love Chanti!
Wild Kids (Short Story) - 2/22/2021 1:51:28 AM
Interesting write Chanti and definately conjures up vivid images of what your childhood and chance to experience such interesting and vibrant cultures. Fee
Wild Kids (Short Story) - 2/21/2021 8:47:48 PM
A delightful story, Chanti; and all the more enjoyable knowing it is born of true experience. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Regis. 🌺😊🍁
Imprints (Short Story) - 8/5/2018 2:44:15 AM
Like you, I can vividly recall the many minute details of jarring memories.
A vivid and sacred imprint...
Imprints (Short Story) - 8/4/2018 10:32:43 AM
You certainly know how to describe very vividly whatever scene you're in. You certainly do it with all of your senses. I am so driven by the story sometimes, I forget how it was when I was there at all of those sights, sounds and smells blended into a perfect venue that only I was able to see, wishing I had someone like your companion "crunching" steps on the trail just ahead of me, contemplating the small of his back. Not in the way you would, I'm a hetero male. ;-)
Ron
Imprints (Short Story) - 8/4/2018 1:40:26 AM
Chanti: Nice story, well told. I'm sure I'll remember more than just the part about you running nude across the landscape. Maybe not. :=)
Ed
A New Page (Short Story) - 7/3/2010 2:39:31 PM
I have had writer's block many times, but not under these circumstances though. If I had a fiancče? like in this story, his clothes and everything he owned would be out on the lawn. And if he owned the house, he would find me gone. No note, no phone call, no nothing. I have dated many jerks in my life, so this kind of rings close to home for me. Thank you sharing Chanti.
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister Barbie
Home Intruder (Short Story) - 12/9/2009 11:31:28 AM
This is so South Africa, security and all. Still a great place to live in and...to trespass boldly where no man dares elsewhere!
Home Intruder (Short Story) - 10/1/2009 7:08:11 AM
~Chanti, We're ALL human aren't we? Great read!
Deborah
The Tokoloshe (Short Story) - 10/1/2009 7:03:01 AM
~Chanti, Black/White and Gray---Love your writing.
Deborah
The Yard (Short Story) - 5/9/2009 2:26:40 AM
The title grabbed my attention Chanti and your gift of prose inspires me to read on - you are especially talented. God Bless, Darby :)
A New Page (Short Story) - 5/2/2009 5:07:19 AM
"a clean page", the birth place of creativity -- you've done this detached writing very well Chanti -- writing totally detached requires a blank page as well as opening up a totally new set of perspectives on everything you write about -- very difficult to successfully accomplish from my perspective -- after all of the years, I have collected baggage just as everyone does that is extremely difficult to simply jettison and write without it creeping into my work -- your youth has the advantage there -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael
A New Page (Short Story) - 5/1/2009 8:32:08 PM
It's nice to see You flex your creative muscle; feels good don't it?
To breath life into a fiction character can really get the juices flowing again and Jenny has a lot more in common with you than you realize. We all unconsciously build our characters out of our own life experiences until we become masters at fiction.
I never knew you had Mexican resturants down there!
A New Page (Short Story) - 4/30/2009 8:37:45 PM
We are constantly faced with life-changing choices and most of the time, we do not realize it. I like this very much, Chanti. Love and best wishes,
Regis
A New Page (Short Story) - 4/30/2009 7:00:10 AM
Well Chanti I see this as being the beginning of some great reading, so I hope you keep feeding us. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie hugs, Rose
A New Page (Short Story) - 4/29/2009 9:15:22 AM
Now there is a story line that will touch a cord with many writers, both male and female. It is a great way to start any new chapter in a life that is just not where the mind would like it to be. Reality is a hard thing to face when the imagination can churn out such beauty. Lady J
A New Page (Short Story) - 4/29/2009 7:51:59 AM
I like the story concept, Chanti, and you write it with great skill.
My only reservation is Jenny's passive (perhaps too passive) relationship with Craig. Having said that, I like the way the story develops and. particularly, the end of it--which may well lead Jenny
to click the delete button on Craig. -gene.
A New Page (Short Story) - 4/29/2009 6:50:01 AM
Sometimes, the thing that keeps us from venturing down a new path is accepting that we chose the wrong path in the first place. My delete button is well-worn, unfortunately, I haven't had the courage to empty lifes recycle bin...
but I'm getting there.
A New Page (Short Story) - 4/29/2009 2:07:52 AM
Great write Chanti and haven't we all hovered over that delete button a time or two.
hugs
Fee
Finding my Father (Short Story) - 4/8/2009 6:42:04 AM
"You are your father's daughter" - Oh Chanti, that story really got to me. My own father was a brilliant man, and he left when my brother and I were very little. The truth be told my mother turfed him out because frankly he was not as good at being a husband as he was at being a dad.
I did briefly re-connect with him by letter, and he said those words to me "You are your father's daughter" and they made me proud. My mother said those words too. Many times. When she said them, however, they were not meant as a compliment.
My father died before I could see him again.
I read your article several times, it is beautifully written and I know your dad is proud of you.
Nkosi Bayeti (a Zulu short story) (Short Story) - 4/7/2009 2:18:51 PM
I love this, Chanti, and admire your compelling narrative skill.
You are indeed a most talented writer. -gene.
I am now trying to complete my collection of stories (the Captain
Jack series) which my son pressured me to develop as a novel. I am
now up to chapter 25 and near (I hope) to the end. Since it is largely driven by dialogue you can see why I admire your narrative skill. -gene
Mucky Duck (Short Story) - 3/22/2009 10:39:54 AM
Indeed it did bring a smile but also warmed the heart. I'm glad to know that Mucky finally "fit in". The story of Mucky reminded me of the time my dad brought home two ducklings the same day my Mom brought home my baby brother. What a racket! Thanks for the story AND the memory! Mary Lou
Free Speech Or Die (Article) - 6/14/2025 9:51:04 AM
I'm with you. Hatred has no place in free speech because it belittles. Why I cringe every time I hear Donald Trump lay flattering praise on someone with a hate word.
The whole Republican agenda has me libertarian, leaning left. I can't stand republicans who can't stand up to authoritarianism. Democrats do.
On the other hand, my partner and I often share a secret code in case someone is hearing where I will say, "I hate you!" When I really mean the opposite.
When we start banning books are redacting them we are very close to 451°, the title of a novel and the temperature of burning paper in books.
Ron
Free Speech Or Die (Article) - 5/29/2025 9:44:19 AM
Extremely well written. I'll bet you are a blast at parties. However, tread lightly, my dearest Chanti, you may unknowingly be slipping down the slope that you detest with this well-structured rant.
"I do NOT love the seething, venomous tirades I’ve been reading of late. It pains me that so many fall into berating, belittling, and tossing labels like it’s some clever game."
Just a thought.
Free Speech Or Die (Article) - 5/28/2025 3:15:23 PM
I'm 100 % with you!
Ed
Speakers Gym (Article) - 3/20/2019 8:45:35 AM
Yes, I hope your new venture works out well for you. Projects like this require personal promotion and charismatic leadership. I do not have those characteristics so never achieved any renown for my public speaking.
However, I have to credit two college speech courses for learning the basics and overcoming my genetic fear (agoraphobia runs in the family) of going before large groups. And, nothing like teaching classes to help one become a good speaker.
Ron
Speakers Gym (Article) - 3/20/2019 12:16:38 AM
Congratulations on your new position with Aurelian Partners. I'm sure you will be a smashing good asset to their team. BTW don't sell us Toastmasters short. After 30 years you will never hear me say ah, ah, um, um...ya'know?
Speeches are Stories (Article) - 5/1/2018 3:35:36 PM
Thanks for letting me know. The link is: https://gocaptivating.com/1244-2/
Speeches are Stories (Article) - 5/1/2018 8:22:36 AM
Unfortunately, I couldn't open the link to read any more. But I certainly agree with you.
As a student, I hated boring lectures. So, as a professor, I learned to use humor and storytelling to enhance my presentation of the difficult concepts and intuition required to solve engineering problems.
It seems like whenever I get in conversation with others, I start storytelling right away. And, fortunately, people love it when I do.
Ron
Speeches are Stories (Article) - 4/30/2018 9:24:01 PM
I agree with you completely especially in the motivational part of your introduction to answer the question "What's in it for me?" (radio station WIFM). Also, in your closing "tell 'em something so startling it leaves 'em gasping for more." The late Carl Sagan was not only a brilliant scientist, he was a gifted speaker who could hold my attention from beginning to end--every time. As an old Toastmaster I am instantly on the alert to cringe at those distracting "ums" and "ahs" that annoy me to no end. Drop them and you are half-way home to becoming a good speaker. Well put, Chanti. I've now watched a couple of your informative videos, and you get high marks. You practice what you teach. Ed
Get Over Yourself (Article) - 4/18/2018 1:12:10 PM
Good message that is needed in this world. I was very shy growing up, because I could only see other people's strengths but not their struggles, while I could see all my own flaws and few of my strengths. I figured everyone else could see my flaws, until the Lord pointed out to me one day in high school, that I had some wrong thinking. He enabled me to do things, such as standing before crowds and teaching and speaking, that I never would have done apart from Him. It is so true though, we are our biggest obstacle. May the Lord use your abilities and understanding to help many people struggling with this, to be enabled. Great message Chanti.
Zach
Get Over Yourself (Article) - 4/8/2018 1:21:56 AM
Well said
Never Stop Writing!
m
Get Over Yourself (Article) - 4/6/2018 1:52:08 PM
Keep the great posts coming, Chanti. I am definitely a huge fan.
Ed
Get Over Yourself (Article) - 4/6/2018 4:48:04 AM
I was very shy and self-conscious when attempting public speaking even though I had a good sense of personal worth. It was just the idea of getting up in front of a lot of people that bothered me. Something that ran in the family because my sister and my niece both had Agoura phobia that prevented them from even functioning for a while.
I found in my case after taking speech classes in college that all I needed was a prop. Generally, a few notes to get me started on whatever I was speaking about and then once I got started the fear I had of not being understood went away.
Ron
The Power of Stories to Sell (Article) - 4/4/2018 3:51:14 PM
I agree with you 100 percent, Chanti. Even a poem needs an intro, a body, and a close--wrapped around a story. The story can be as simple as "life is good," or "nobody likes a liar," or "It's OK to be a little goofy." Some say it differently: All speech is persuasion. Even good critics say "What's the point?" Everybody wants to hear, discern, or discover the underlying story. The creator of 60 Minutes (can't remember his name) always sent his reporters out with the (mandatory) advice: "Don't come back until you can tell me a story!"
Why can't people keep their word? (Article) - 11/15/2017 8:56:13 PM
AMEN! Over the last few years during my recovery period, I was becoming less and less reliable. I'm working very hard to try and change that. It's important that people know they can rely on us to keep our word. And to care enough to follow through on their promises. Well done. I think this piece should be a blog post on the Captivating website.
7 Secrets to Engage an Audience (Article) - 3/7/2015 2:20:36 AM
This is a good read and point refreshing article.
Stay well and keep writing
Eddy
Know where to Tap (Article) - 3/6/2015 3:24:01 PM
I don't think that education is not as important as experience but I don't think education can take the place of experience. If I must choose between a recent graduate and a person who has years of experience and a successful track record, it's a no brainer who I will choose. The story illustrates that experience is valuable. The factory owner looked at the situation in a superficial manner and didn't see the value of two taps of the hammer. If he had weighed this against the value of production, I'm sure that he would not have questioned the bill. As I said, this is a story that demonstrates the value of experience. I think it made the point well. :)
Know where to Tap (Article) - 3/3/2015 11:22:16 AM
You are saying education is not as important as experience...I believe you have to put the two together. The factory owner just
wanted his machine fixed and didn't communicate well to the tech.
and therefore paid the price.
Always,
Deborah
Know where to Tap (Article) - 3/3/2015 2:33:52 AM
Timely and pertinent. Maybe good advice for psychologists as well.
Do you suffer from Imposters Syndrome? (Article) - 2/6/2015 12:39:29 PM
"What they think of me is their business. What I think of me is mine."
Brilliant and very uplifting!
Help your Child become a Confident Communicator PART I (Article) - 2/2/2015 8:01:14 AM
Agreed. Give positive reinforcement and help them understand that "shyness" is not a disease and, to some degree, it can be compensated for, if not eliminated.
Public Speaking Training for Kids In Los Angeles (Article) - 1/15/2015 10:29:04 AM
Social skills are being lost for sure.
Growing up I found that high school was the place where I learned most of my social skills, but I had a background where we didn't have the electronic distractions kids do today. It is truly sad.
Thanks Chanti.
Walt
Do you suffer from Imposters Syndrome? (Article) - 1/7/2015 5:21:26 PM
Good to see you back, Chanti. This article is well-placed and timely here on the den. I've always admired your business savvy. It's always a pleasure to read all of your writing across the Internet. I love reading about your speaking platforms. You're one of the most beautiful people on the inside and out. I enjoyed this. Happy New Year!
Sage
Do you suffer from Imposters Syndrome? (Article) - 1/7/2015 8:03:16 AM
Chanti, I have never had my own business but, I do know those that do work hard and some do for the wrong reasons like you did in the beginning.
Yes, we have to love ourselves first in order to care and love others.
It took me years to be able to do that. . .
I think one's environment has much to do whether one succeeds in this
life. I never knew what I wanted to do and neither did my sisters. . .we were never encouraged.
Always,
Deborah
Do you suffer from Imposters Syndrome? (Article) - 1/7/2015 7:31:44 AM
I've always known what a imposter was, but never knew there was a syndrome that is seemingly, the opposite. I've known that there are people that don't value their own abilities, mostly because they were told by teachers, parents or peers that they weren't very good at whatever it was they were doing. If they succeed in doing it, it goes against the advice they've always received. It takes a strong personality to overcome rejection like being unable to get a first book published.
As a former professor of business administration and management, I find that business success, particularly for the first business, is a rare event, and, in spite of your disclaimer, can often be attributed to luck, because most people don't have what it takes to start and run a business without a lot of help. That said, I have to commend you for your success.
As for people who inspire other people with their rhetoric, especially when they hold seminars and tell their various ways of succeeding in all areas of life, I find that most are imposters taking peoples' money without offering any useful information except a reflection of their own success. "Do as I say and you will be like me."
Ron
Sharing thoughts (Article) - 2/17/2011 7:11:57 AM
05 swimming against the tide or striving to achieve something which is otherwise not possible is just waste of time.best way for living is by hugging the circumstances you got and use your brains to drink the nector of happiness to fullest extent till the circumstance gives way to new circumstance,go on like that and you will be satisfied without harming mind and heart.
Thaw (Poetry) - 4/19/2026 1:52:47 PM
Flawless. Wordsmithing at its best. Charming. Wistful. Oozing with talent, depth, respect for language. life, and love.
Painting Pain (Poetry) - 4/13/2026 6:45:33 PM
It would be nice to see the actual painting. You have described it very well.
Painting Pain (Poetry) - 4/13/2026 11:43:47 AM
Chanti: There is a song, c. 1980, that begins, “In this world of ordinary people, extra-ordinary people, I’m glad there is you …” The message lingers long after the song ends. In this eloquently crafted merger of prose, poetry, and soul-searching honesty, you have crafted an unforgettable narrative that lingers from your skill with words, your honest emotions, and a message that is reminiscent of a prayer. Your extraordinary poem carried me to places I did not know existed. --Ed
Painting Pain (Poetry) - 4/13/2026 9:22:32 AM
A well written allegory comparing emotional pain to an oil painting. Immortalized by works like Starry, Starry Night and Scream. Artist's attempt at a natural view that turns into revealing deep emotional pain from vivid strokes pigment.
Ron
Painting Pain (Poetry) - 4/13/2026 7:39:27 AM
A unique and creative piece of poetic prose that (IMO) sheds some insight into the writers personal life, encourages emotional literacy, and inspires resilience. Well done. rlc
Conquering Fear (Poetry) - 5/22/2025 8:02:33 AM
Wow Chanti great words you shared with us. There are a lot of people in the world with fears. I have recently started to write on AD and hope to read more of your work.
Your friend Rose Rideout
Close (Poetry) - 10/3/2021 8:55:33 AM
Another way of putting it, would be Close, But No Cigar. I've also heard that the only place that "close" counts is in horseshoes.
Done in clearly understandable language. I appreciate that.
Ron
Close (Poetry) - 10/3/2021 6:27:24 AM
Beautiful. I don't know how you could have said it better, Chanti.
Ed
Close (Poetry) - 10/2/2021 2:57:54 AM
So good to read one of your poems again,especially one that hits so close to the heart of all of us who have lost someone special in our lifes...well done Chanti.
Fee
Love Came Calling (Poetry) - 9/30/2021 1:31:03 AM
not true... it DID mirror that...still
Love Me Gently (Poetry) - 11/23/2020 6:14:05 PM
As always, gently yet lovingly expressed. So beautiful.
Love Me Gently (Poetry) - 10/25/2020 2:55:23 PM
I think anything born of gentility is bound to bloom with sweet purpose. I lovely message dear Chanti. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with me this evening.
Love Me Gently (Poetry) - 10/10/2020 11:30:49 AM
Your message is very clear about how a woman wants to be loved. It is unfortunate that so many men don't understand. I hope that someday, I will.
Ron
Love Me Gently (Poetry) - 10/6/2020 2:39:16 AM
Beautiful sentiment, so uniguely-written!
Sandie
Kill Me (Poetry) - 11/3/2019 2:43:44 PM
The truth hurts.
Sucked Out (Poetry) - 10/28/2019 9:26:28 AM
Beautiful.
Sucked Out (Poetry) - 10/28/2019 2:54:14 AM
Quite powerful Chanti. And, I'm always willing to lend an ear, if ever you are in need of someone to bounce things off of, poetically or otherwise. May your ship be rebuilt and may fair winds carry you to the places and the things that you desire most. -- Jeff
Kill Me (Poetry) - 9/7/2019 10:39:26 AM
Your verses are intense and soul-reaching, deep and expressive; and I can relate. Thank you for sharing, Chanti. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Regis. 🌷
Kill Me (Poetry) - 9/6/2019 5:22:43 PM
Chanti, this is so painfully beautiful and beautifully painful. I so easily relate to this, since a dear friend cut me out of her life 2 years before she left this realm. But then, about a year before her departure, she vehemently reconciled and apologized for what she had done. In that reconciliation, we grew as close or closer than we ever had been. I wish you the same blessings.
Lost (Poetry) - 7/6/2019 4:24:22 AM
A change in perspective does not mean a change in daring,
nor does it lessen the lessons of life. Honesty rings thru
every line of your hearfelt poem. Those of us who have also
lived it know about its truth, its agony, and its ecstasy. I'm tempted to quote the final line of a Houseman poem about giving your heart away: "For I am two and twenty, and Oh, 'tis true 'tis true."
But I won't. Beautiful poem, Chanti.
Grateful (Poetry) - 6/10/2019 5:37:22 PM
Beautiful! Your verses susurate into my mind evoking and awakening memories, emotions, and many thoughts... ...an engaging kaleidoscopic offering of lovely poetry. Thank you for sharing, Chanti. Love, peace, and best wishes,
Regis.
p.s. The image that you have chosen to complement your verses certainly caught me by surprise as, some time ago, a photographer requested that I do that very same pose extending my hand above my wonderful view of the mighty Fraser River from Chilliwack Mountain here.
Grateful (Poetry) - 6/8/2019 9:37:40 AM
That's quite an impressive list of things to be
grateful about, Chanti. I enjoy the same list, but I'm
grateful for those few writers who remind me of them.
Accolades from Ed.
She is beautiful (Poetry) - 2/18/2019 9:42:28 AM
It appears that she is struggling with identity and I wouldn't venture to say what the cause is. But, if you are counseling her, I think that it would be best if it comes out sooner rather than later. Perhaps all it would take would be for her to have help going to a prom so she wouldn't feel so insecure about her looks. My sister's granddaughter dressed up for her prom as a woman, but she has since, upon graduation declared herself lesbian and is living with her girlfriend.
Ron
What Are you Worth? (Poetry) - 2/18/2019 4:10:02 AM
So true, or as that worldly philosopher, Anonymous, put it: "The richest person is not the one who has the most, but the one who needs the least."
She is beautiful (Poetry) - 2/16/2019 12:31:08 PM
Short, but eloquent in its statement of an unhappy truth we face today in America (and anywhere American capitalism extends), thanks to the unstoppable steamroller that is capitalistic-materialist commercial marketing. Personally, I agree completely that far too many young women who are struggling with this dilemma are self-deluded into thinking that their problem is one of gender dysphoria. The same is true, however, for many young men have the same doubts (false in a preponderance of cases, I feel) about their masculinity, and feel the same sort of toxic dissatisfaction over their own sense of gender identity for similar reasons. Aside from the socialising commercialism that overwhelms us in our daily lives (whose only concern is to SELL products and make profits, after all, despite any greater consequences), we can also thank the rampant social media plague that allows teen peers to dictate terms of compliance to a sort of immature peer review (influenced by marketing forces and pressures they are subject to). Anyone who feels we don't live in a VERY sick society, therefore, is, in my considered opinion, unwilling to face the facts that we MUST contend with each and every day. As respected jurist Joe Genshlea states the problem (if I may be permitted to loosely recall his words), "In today's America, deference to ignorance has become rampant and pandemic. Belief has been substituted for fact and reasoning in all public and private dialogues to the point where it is no longer certain whether or not factual reality still exists in the common frame of reference." There are a great many young women who suffer from this gender dysphoria syndrome you single out here and your prosaic observation sums it all up quite perfectly. True 'beauty' will always be in the eyes of the (enlightened, not ignorant) beholder, if only we can be strong enough to accept ourselves fully as perfect and complete in our original form.
She is beautiful (Poetry) - 2/16/2019 9:09:10 AM
I'm sure her beauty still shows in one way or another.
What Are you Worth? (Poetry) - 2/16/2019 12:15:58 AM
So wise, Chanti. So true. Guilty as charged am I but your verses steer me (and our readers) in the right direction. Blessing of love, peace, and all good to you.
Régis
Roots (Poetry) - 2/12/2019 11:32:30 AM
Another forlorn longing poem. Something broke the connection that probably was tenuous at best and now is haunting day and night until something shatters the morose… Perhaps a new love?
Ron
Roots (Poetry) - 2/11/2019 2:50:54 PM
many feel this pain and or the pain of the reality
budd
Roots (Poetry) - 2/10/2019 10:43:04 PM
A universal fear that many suffer from. Nicely rendered with feeling.
Your Time is Come (Poetry) - 1/30/2019 9:42:30 AM
This was an awesome well penned piece
Thank you for sharing
Love and peace be with you
William
Your Time is Come (Poetry) - 1/30/2019 12:30:52 AM
I am certain you've found a peaceful plateau on which to relax a bit and to find comfort from your past. Good going! But there is no lasting respite from life's challenges. [I'm a few days older than you, and Oh, 'tis true,'tis true!] I've also found a good source of comfort in Wendi Friesen, a lady hypnotist with a soothing voice and a positive message. A Google search will produce her website with one or more of her hypnotic messages. I haven't examined them for subliminal messages. All I know is that I feel a whole lot better after listening to them. And the price is right--nada! Keep writing, posting, and pushin' on. Ed
Your Time is Come (Poetry) - 1/29/2019 9:24:02 PM
Rather nice, Chanti. Evocative and compelling in the write, but also comforting in affirming the essential human condition that embraces all of us, translated via your own footsteps along the pathway. I love that shared vision of standing as a mature person on the cliff, gazing off to the ocean's horizon with new purpose, awareness and...dare I say it?...hopes?. There is excellence here, in both the construct and the translation from words into emotive feeling...never an easy thing to do, not matter what one's street creds are. What a pleasure it is to 'discover' you here on Authors' Den. A hui hou, K2
Time To Part (Poetry) - 1/25/2019 4:52:09 PM
My experience has ever been that love is at least fickle, at best an illusion. Love predicates attachment, something that is a sure-fire prelude to some sort of final Gotterdammerung act of tragic desperation. IMO, the best we can do is strive to NOT attach to anything on two legs that is halfway attractive, since too much attachment brings the certainty of romantic 'wiggle-room', a status no human state of intense affection may ever survive (nor has it ever). Lovely Chanti Chianti deserves better, methinks. The poem is expressive, but never give up the ship!
PS: While I was in the Middle east, I had a wonderful friend from Capetown who opened my eyes to your fellow countryman's book 'Disgrace' (JM Coetze)and to his other books, as well. South Africa is an amazing place, despite all the sad elements of its struggle to thrive equally under the sun with other nations. A hui hou, K2
Spoken in Silence (Poetry) - 1/25/2019 9:05:52 AM
Most intriguing. A regular Schrödinger's cat of a paradox, but one that is likely familiar to all of us. You've selected and separated out the singularity of the human spirit in this piece that one would have to be totally insensate to not appreciate. Brief, succinct, targeted with the precision of a bowman. I like it. -K2
My All (Poetry) - 7/25/2018 7:02:02 AM
A lucky man, indeed! Beautifully wrought, as always Chanti! The spark is evident.
My All (Poetry) - 7/24/2018 11:21:56 PM
Nicely penned, Chanti. It also sounds as if
you've made a great love connection. My your days ahead
be joyous and fulfilling.
Ed
I See Again (Poetry) - 4/6/2018 11:27:03 PM
I am so happy for your restored sight, and for your restored faith in yourself, and in your positive outlook on life. I am sure you are a treasure for those who know you. You are an inspiration for those of us who have not (yet) had the pleasure of meeting you.
Ed
Hidden (Poetry) - 3/29/2018 4:10:54 AM
I am reminded of these wise words from Sylvia Plath's "Initiation": "So many people were shut up tight inside themselves like boxes, yet they would open up, unfolding quite wonderfully, if only you were interested in them."
Hidden (Poetry) - 3/28/2018 9:11:41 AM
What others think about what you write probably has little to do with your personal quest for purpose and meaning. Writing to fulfill a need is its own reward. Don't fall into the trap of trying to please your readers. If 10 different people infer 10 different meanings, you might want to reconsider your choice of words. But that's all. Never try to please all of them, or even any of them. Please yourself, and move on. I'm also convinced that there is not one religion that can impart a believable thought about purpose and meaning. I came to the position a few years ago that we are all on a long trek of becoming our best selves through living, and doing, and failing, and learning, and doing a little better. And after 10 or 20,000 incarnations, we get to see where we are and where we were, and thus get a better idea of where we are all heading. The leap of faith comes in accepting the great similarities in near-death-experiences, and how greatly changed nearly all are who experienced them. Virtually all report great love, and caring, and understanding in an afterlife that has no judgements, no punishments, no hell, and none of the BS put forth by preachers, clergy, and similar snake oil sales people. Check out afterlife101.com. I know you are way too smart to be sold a bill of goods. Good luck.
Hidden (Poetry) - 3/27/2018 1:03:40 PM
Wonderful depth and a bit of shrouded darkness. Your voice does have meaning and purpose, never forget that. I have just passed one of the darkest moments of my existence, and I know it was more than a test; it was a testament to the events which brought me to that moment. There is emptiness now, and what feels like never-ending pain and yet, the fullness and magnitude of what came before the loss completely overshadow all else. Do I question my reason for existing? Yes, I think we all do; it's human nature. So much to say, but it cannot all be said here. Clearly, your writing, your voice, as always, is eloquent and has found a definite ear... with me, and your other voices as well have found the same. Thank you for your offering. Somehow, maybe we can find our voices and their purpose again.
An Instrumental Life (Poetry) - 3/13/2018 3:37:58 AM
We see things so differently in retrospect. Of all of your poems, I believe this is my favorite.
Full Circle (Poetry) - 12/17/2017 6:31:33 PM
Such a meaningful poem that makes me read your verses again... ...I really do think I "get it." I have always felt it easy to understand your messages. I always have loved/love your writing. Sending you best wishes with love and blessings,
Régis
The Heart Bleeds (Poetry) - 10/31/2017 7:15:48 PM
How our words can wound. And a testimony to how they can heal as well. Your writing never ceases to amaze me. So much is said with so few words.
At the Root of Creation (Poetry) - 10/31/2017 2:56:51 AM
Betrayal rips at trust, the cohesion of the human condition.
You seem to have a lot more resilience than most of us.
I certainly agree that we must get up and get on. Well done!
Dashed (Poetry) - 10/29/2017 8:54:30 AM
I love the hope at the ending of your poem, Chanti. Love (romance) that goes wrong is very painful, particularly if it is born of betrayal. Thank you for sharing. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Régis
At the Root of Creation (Poetry) - 10/29/2017 8:52:28 AM
Deeply meaningful and symbolic, Chanti. I can relate to what you express through your verses here, I have been there. Thank you for sharing. Love, peace, and best wishes,
Régis
Dashed (Poetry) - 10/28/2017 7:30:34 PM
The ending sums it up nicely...
"I know...
that what was stripped
had to go.
What is left
is so much more..."
Words that strike deep. And it's disappointing that something hoped-for has proven to be the very crux of one's pain. And yet, the learning and the growing in the aftermath -- those things make us all the wiser.
-- Jeff
Chantiesms (Poetry) - 7/20/2017 12:13:05 PM
Your snippets of life move gracefully along, drawing me in, charming me, wooing me, ending with the softest touch. And your epilogue about living out of a suitcase closes the deal. She's just like me! So well done.
Laid bare (Poetry) - 7/20/2017 12:04:05 PM
I sorted your poems by category, then selected one from romance. I speared a delicate morsel. It is thoughtful, caring, and sealed with a final line that this reader will not forget. Gasps...
Love Credo (Poetry) - 7/20/2017 11:55:27 AM
Very well written, Chanti, and punctuated your poem with a stunning finish. Memorable!
In the End (Poetry) - 5/27/2017 4:15:10 PM
God's plan for us often involves tears. Having faith and letting go are two very difficult lessons to learn. But you have. Your writing says you have. Emotional, painful and a glimpse of the glowing sun as it peeps above the horizon. Wonderful!
Love Came Calling (Poetry) - 5/27/2017 4:07:36 PM
As always, in just a few short words you have given us a glimpse into your heart. So beautiful...much love to you.
Full Circle (Poetry) - 5/25/2017 11:25:58 AM
The past shapes the future.
Dashed (Poetry) - 3/12/2017 8:24:44 AM
Golden.
~W~
Full Circle (Poetry) - 3/12/2017 8:22:51 AM
I think we all go through periods when we wonder,
What is my path, my destiny?
Sometimes when we quit searching the answers
are in plain sight. Funny how that happens :-)
Walt
Dashed (Poetry) - 3/11/2017 11:20:47 PM
Whether it be the man or the woman who is abusive, their anger is deep-seated...anger management or psychological help. But most will not seek it and therefore are the one's who lose.
Always,
Deborah
Full Circle (Poetry) - 3/11/2017 11:10:13 PM
Everything comes full circle and Chanti, whatever passions you are trying to ignite again I hope you succeed. Just remember you aren't the person you were in the past and even in the present we change from day to day...
Always,
Deborah
Dashed (Poetry) - 3/11/2017 8:00:01 PM
Letting go is freedom. A beautiful reminder, with visuals and imagery that tear at the heart and bring a smile to the reader.
Break the Chains (Poetry) - 6/6/2016 7:25:12 AM
Chantal, God has always been within me since I let him into my heart when I was nine years old and when I did that the brightest of light came through my bedroom window, that did not hurt my eyes and then it was gone...
Always,
Deborah
Break the Chains (Poetry) - 6/2/2016 11:23:05 AM
Thanks for those encouraging words, shaped by this wonderful poem.
Best, :)
D
Break the Chains (Poetry) - 6/1/2016 3:40:38 PM
Most spiritually uplifting, Chanti. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
I was a Rock (Poetry) - 11/25/2015 7:06:13 AM
Chantal, A test of time...going through the changes of life
and learning to feel comfortable in your own skin. Words and
metaphors make this worth reading.
Always,
Deborah
I was a Rock (Poetry) - 11/25/2015 4:39:45 AM
An outstand metaphorical example of time and tide.
All things must pass but energy or matter is never lost,
only transformed into something more beautiful or useful.
Walt
I was a Rock (Poetry) - 11/24/2015 8:55:38 PM
Chanti, I love the theme of intertwined causality! Wish I could fully echo your eloquently-written sentiment. Also love the depiction of how "destructive forces" can actually lead a person to become stronger and more... "together." [that which doesn't kill us makes us stronger]. My own darkness simply will not allow any light at the moment, but I bask vicariously in the light that is shed by your writing -- I thank you for that! -- Jeff
I was a Rock (Poetry) - 11/24/2015 6:16:41 PM
Incredible...
Growth (Poetry) - 11/24/2015 1:30:21 PM
Yes; also a little like "the calm before the storm." Your poem is succinctly effective and meaningful, Chanti. Love and best wishes,
Regis
I was a Rock (Poetry) - 11/24/2015 1:28:55 PM
I love the symbolic and metaphorical tone of this meaningful write, Chanti. It seems to me that it is also honestly personal. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Love Came Calling (Poetry) - 5/19/2015 10:12:52 AM
Thanks for your review Deborah. Just to clarify: When I said I knew how to love, I was talking about the action of love (rather than the feeling of love). I have no doubt that I was in love with my ex but the reality of the relationship did not mirror the fantasy that was the dream. In that, your comment is absolutely spot on. I do know that a relationship is hard work and I put in everything I had to save my marriage but it always takes two and two need to be willing to work it out. To me the lesson is now in letting go. "Love came Calling" is ultimately not about romantic love at all, its about being able to receive love...and that is something I'm still learning. :)
Love Came Calling (Poetry) - 5/19/2015 4:32:52 AM
You say you knew how to love, I am guessing your
concept of love was like a fairy tale and you now
are realizing love is a serious commitment.
Always,
Deborah(Vaineo)
Growth (Poetry) - 5/12/2015 5:22:34 PM
Deepest pain passes more slowly. "Bottoming out" is sometimes a necessary part of catharsis. I always am intrigued by the intricacy of your messages. You seem to find the light; and I am happy that certain pains have passed... for you. Also, some of us cannot see that the object of our love often ends up being the source of our pain. It's a difficult lesson to learn, especially when love blinds us to so many things. "New growth begins;" that is such a wonderful thought. -- Jeff
Love Came Calling (Poetry) - 5/12/2015 6:24:02 AM
I think this applies to many, Chanti; your verses certainly resonate very well with me. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Love Came Calling (Poetry) - 5/12/2015 1:38:42 AM
A universal theme, to which many of us can relate. You've placed your personal experience into a succinct and honest offering. Thank you for sharing your heart. -- Jeff
In the End (Poetry) - 3/7/2015 2:46:24 AM
A very emotionally scripted with vivid verbal imagery. A stirring piece with portions relating to many loss situations. I enjoyed experiencing this poem.
Stay well and keep writing
Eddy
In the End (Poetry) - 10/29/2014 9:40:18 AM
Your verses give me much to reflect upon Chanti; and they also awaken my emotions because I can relate to what your express through them. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 3/10/2012 1:09:55 PM
Enjoyed this. The last stanza is great. :-)
Tom
No Longer Young (Poetry) - 3/10/2010 11:36:53 AM
The silent wailing will always be there unfortunatley for far too many...it's disturbing but so very true.
Blessings my friend, Holly
No Longer Young (Poetry) - 1/18/2010 9:04:07 AM
The eyes of these children haunt me at times. Your words do them justice. J'nia
Come to me... (Poetry) - 10/1/2009 7:14:55 AM
~Chanti, That is exactly how poetry should be looked at(just what you
said).
Deborah
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/27/2009 5:06:29 AM
~Chanti, How very true and well put
Always,
Deborah
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/24/2009 1:59:58 PM
Fantabulous and I agree. My fav line is"Your life is a diet
That you deny you are on" there are a lot of ways to read this. Enjoyed! xoxoxo
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/23/2009 11:17:25 PM
OH YES DEAR SISTER! This is a beautiful write and even though it is light, it gives a serious message for all of us. We not only need to keep ourselves beautiful but we need to have a beautiful spirit too and care about the things that go way beyond youth. Like love, caring, nurturing, protecting, doing everyday mundane jobs like doing the laundry, getting the groceries, taking our children to school, going to our children's school functions, smiling when your kindergartener brings home an abstract drawing, and you put it under a magnet on the fridge, like taking the time to enjoy the laughter of your children playing without a care in the backyard, going out of your way to make someone's days a little better and brighter than it would have otherwise been. I could go on and on and on. But I will stop here. I'm sorry if I was rambling but this poem can make a person do that. Thank you for sharing Chanti. This is a very beautiful and all too true piece.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/18/2009 9:22:43 AM
Not many age gracefully, makes for a lot of fake people. Steve
The Cradle of Shape (Poetry) - 7/16/2009 6:40:44 PM
simplicity with a dash of absract, love the painting. Wonderful blending of visual and eroticly emotional expressions. Fasntastic!
Ed
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/3/2009 7:30:18 AM
You make your point gently, humorously and without invective. This is so much more effective than harsh diatribe. Hurrah for you!
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/2/2009 9:29:33 AM
Look good by all means and take care of yourself
Just focus on the things that never grow old
that don’t fade away and can never be sold
On kindness, compassion, integrity and truth
These are the things that last way beyond youth.
Most apt and timely advice, Chanti. I could not agree more with the theme of this poem. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/2/2009 6:36:44 AM
WOW! THIS IS AN PRIME EXPRESSION OF POETIC ARTISTRY. ALL THE ELEMENTS THAT ARE POURED INTO PRODUCING AN EXCELLENT POEM ARE FOUND HEREIN. ENJOYED. THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU. JOYCE
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/2/2009 1:40:13 AM
A wsieful poem,great and excellent written piece,I enjoy it,take care
EDWIN
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/1/2009 8:57:38 PM
Well penned, but you're making no friends at Revlon, Avon, Etc, Etc.
Good for you. And good for all the males out here who really can tell the difference. And appreciate the real deal. Patrick
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/1/2009 5:36:46 PM
this smacks of truth and I applaud the wake up call to many -- the kind, compassionate soul, heart of loving thoughts, there is where beauty lies -- peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/1/2009 5:08:37 PM
Wonderful concluding stanza. It's so much easier for males.
Stay well and keep writing
Ed
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/1/2009 4:15:13 PM
Sage invice that we all need to stop and listen with our hearts to.
hugs
Fee
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/1/2009 3:45:43 PM
Easy for you to say...You have it all...:)and yes I DO like your new nails...;) Now I have to run or I'll be late for my apointment...I just wish this Botox would last a bit longer!!! See you for dinner...Sushi maybe??? ;)
Your Bear
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/1/2009 2:36:57 PM
Clever, insightful, and honest, Chanti.
You don't leave your manufactured woman
much to feel good about--at least, not for long.
I admire and envy your talent to rhyme.
-gene.
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/1/2009 2:30:26 PM
Thank you Chanti as I often say look past the $ signs and see what true beauty is. Anyone can pay for it but they can't buy the true beauty that each carry on the inside. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie hugs, Rose
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/1/2009 1:51:41 PM
Well said; I couldn't agree more.
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/1/2009 12:48:24 PM
Aging naturally IS aging gracefully. I'll take natural breasts over fake ones any day of the week, even if she has to tuck them into her front pockets. Give me crows feet over a plastic, pulled back face, let the gray hair find its own way through and bless me with "being you."
Surface Beautiful (Poetry) - 7/1/2009 12:47:31 PM
You have captured todays modern woman and in the last paragraph you have summed up what really counts. Bravo
Dying Dragon (Poetry) - 6/17/2009 1:26:01 PM
Written as only you can write Chanti, love Holly
Dying Dragon (Poetry) - 6/3/2009 8:10:41 AM
The memory of an event came to mind, can't hide from it. It knows my history, laidbare, i can only throw contours of time and space around me as seperation. A haunting from the past- until i share, it can never live in my world now. Great writing and best regards.
Dying Dragon (Poetry) - 5/22/2009 5:50:27 PM
Like Jon said these metaphors can have many possibilities. A house fire, because when she woke up she said she smelled smoke. For me these metaphors are like I was 12 years old my mother thrust the sword of fear into my heaving breast and tried to destroy me, only to have me wake up years later and fight off what she did through my poems and stories.
This is written very well and with emotion and deep feelings. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
Come to me... (Poetry) - 5/22/2009 5:12:10 PM
Many assumed this poem was about love and passion but it was actually a call for 'inspiration'. Some people would say I was calling for my muse. Creativity is a gift but I also feel that it is an ability to tap into something outside of oneself. I could ascribe a spiritual slant to this but it may get a bit complicated. Poetry is often best left to personal interpretation. Each takes from it what they will.
Dying Dragon (Poetry) - 5/8/2009 6:29:30 PM
a metaphor of many possibilities Chanti -- the dragon is resurrected with her awakening -- his fire, now magic again in the embrace of their nocturnal love making -- this is the most romatic impression you left me with -- and thus, the one I choose to believe you intended -- the change in gender still leaves me wondering though -- very nice work Chanti -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael
Dying Dragon (Poetry) - 5/8/2009 11:21:37 AM
Considering the circumstance that inspired this, I am amazed by by the delicacy and beauty you've crafted in this expressive write. My take would have been caustic to say the least...;)
Great write my Snuggles!!!
Da' Bear
Dying Dragon (Poetry) - 5/7/2009 2:39:15 PM
I found this piece extremely moving...the imagery strong yet emotionally evocative...Simply beautiful in its entirety..
Hugs, Diana
Dying Dragon (Poetry) - 5/7/2009 3:57:29 AM
A compelling and strong written piece.Great work,take care
Edwin
Dying Dragon (Poetry) - 5/6/2009 7:18:51 PM
Raw emotion, strong sentiments come through in this piece. A vision of strength after a long ordeal. Stay well sweet lady....
Be always safe,
Karen
Dying Dragon (Poetry) - 5/6/2009 11:08:58 AM
I find this write powerfully metaphorical and symbolic in meaning expressed, Chanti. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Dying Dragon (Poetry) - 5/6/2009 10:15:28 AM
Perfection, as always. Stark imager with beautiful and full meaning between each and every line. Blessings. -- Jeff
Dying Dragon (Poetry) - 5/6/2009 10:06:49 AM
The dragon, imagined or real (an impotent lover perhaps),
effectively discarded in her dream, even the memory goes
up in smoke. Even if I'm off by 180 degrees, Chanti, I
love the sound and shape and scent of your words. -gene.
Dying Dragon (Poetry) - 5/6/2009 8:45:33 AM
I loved the dreamscape you painted in this and how the dragon in death is not described as evil but as a dignified and misunderstood creature. Also the ending was perfect in keeping with the dreamlike mood of the write. Bravo Chanti and glad to see you posting again.
hugs
fee
Dying Dragon (Poetry) - 5/6/2009 3:34:35 AM
OMG, I know where THIS poem came from...one of your most powerful pieces yet Chants. Devoured every line...Love and hugs, Michelle
Dying Dragon (Poetry) - 5/6/2009 2:55:56 AM
WOW! very strong prose. The bitterness, anger and hurtful words that should never be spoken in demise of a relationship come through clearly and vividly in this write.
Stay well and keep writing
Ed
Come to me... (Poetry) - 4/21/2009 1:48:24 AM
Such beauty and truth, said in expression of love and soul!
I know these feelings well, and the strength in which you were given!
A grateful loving expressive poem!
As you reach where you NEED to be Chanti!
God Bless YOU, Edwin,(Eddy) and etc...
Love reigns supreme! IN my book!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings of Love, Light, PEACE, Joy and Inspirations, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
P.S. Fly amongst them all and you will NOT fall! Let your passionate for emotions be seen by all, as I hope to take this same upward flight...I see in the depths of my sight!
Foxy Lady (Poetry) - 4/16/2009 8:25:07 PM
Chanti,
I did not see the video - I did not have to.
Yours words are few but powerful. Keep writing!
Vasu
Still and Stretched Out (Poetry) - 4/11/2009 1:09:49 AM
A wonderful tribute for your brother.
This had to be a tough one to write.
Multiple blessings to you and your family,
JMD
Come to me... (Poetry) - 4/5/2009 8:09:43 AM
by the power vested in me,I now proclaim you have the alar appendages that free you to soar above the earth, above your emotions -- confidence resides in the valley of the spirit of open minds where feathers fly and drift with grace - a most magnificent capture of the emotions of self confidence -- your work is to be admired - peace and love-- Jon Michael
The Answer (Poetry) - 4/4/2009 1:53:17 PM
That is an exceptionally fine portrait. You've captured his soul in those eyes and your words capture the love you have for one another. Well done. Blessings, J'nia
Come to me... (Poetry) - 4/3/2009 12:31:41 AM
This poem blew me away,this is absolutely sweet and breathtaking.I enjoy reading this poem,take care
Edwin
Come to me... (Poetry) - 4/2/2009 10:59:01 AM
Beautiful...
Cryssa
Come to me... (Poetry) - 4/1/2009 1:06:43 PM
You receive inspiration in the full measure that you give it. Call it inspiration or call it love. Either is a synonym for giving and sharing. We are grateful that you let us observe the process.
Come to me... (Poetry) - 4/1/2009 10:16:38 AM
Very good. I enjoyed this poem
A Father's Shame (Poetry) - 3/31/2009 2:27:44 PM
touching poetic story Chanti,
Come to me... (Poetry) - 3/31/2009 2:24:15 PM
great versing poetess, enjoy the allure of this, cheers
Come to me... (Poetry) - 3/31/2009 7:43:55 AM
Absolutely beautiful...
Carole~
Come to me... (Poetry) - 3/31/2009 6:00:22 AM
Chanti beautiful songs and sounds of love.
Enjoyed reading "Come to me"
Thank you,
Gwendolyn
Come to me... (Poetry) - 3/31/2009 12:12:37 AM
Truly, truly beautiful.
Come to me... (Poetry) - 3/30/2009 9:09:46 PM
well said
Come to me... (Poetry) - 3/30/2009 6:40:07 PM
A very passionate and emotion filled expression of poem...to be inspired like this is to truly know or to have truly experienced more than life...
love is the emotional tie to inspiration, it can have us within the skies and the dreams of beyond...may your love last into Eternity...
nice...
Art Sun...
Come to me... (Poetry) - 3/30/2009 5:12:34 PM
Beautiful write. The passion shared yet hesitation from past experiences try your your strength, only to be overcome by the true bond of love. I wish you both an everlasting flight.
Ed
Come to me... (Poetry) - 3/30/2009 4:47:34 PM
Truly powerful and compelling; the reader can feel the passion with which you appeal to your "inspiration." Love and blessings,
Regis
Come to me... (Poetry) - 3/30/2009 4:33:05 PM
Beautiful write...it's good to have an inspiration you love so dearly.
Come to me... (Poetry) - 3/30/2009 3:57:40 PM
Very beautiful and makes up for the long time between now and your last post...well worth the wait.
hugs
Fee
Come to me... (Poetry) - 3/30/2009 3:49:27 PM
I so wish I could do what you are doing now...living with the love of your life, working towards a goal together. I'm so envious, and so very proud of you and your happiness...much love, Michelle
Come to me... (Poetry) - 3/30/2009 3:04:35 PM
God bless you for this beautiful piece. Such wondrous visions open up and reach the multitude of happiness shared by two whose souls have joined.....
Be always safe,
Karen
Come to me... (Poetry) - 3/30/2009 3:01:34 PM
Great...Now get back to work...;)
Kidding aside, this is absolutely beautiful....you're one talented and beautiful woman...and I am a very lucky guy
Now get back to work :)
Come to me... (Poetry) - 3/30/2009 3:01:14 PM
What a beautiful piece, my friend. It makes me reach for my own inspiration. Just beautiful.
Hugs,
Tami
Come to me... (Poetry) - 3/30/2009 2:24:38 PM
To be the recipient of this dramatic and beautifully crafted
love song, Edwin, you're a luc ky guy. But you know that.
I love this, Chanti. -gene.
The Answer (Poetry) - 3/27/2009 1:22:49 AM
No greater tribute could you give to him and to the love you share with him. You are a woman of many talents, the painting is beautiful as well.
Ed
A Father's Shame (Poetry) - 3/27/2009 1:14:32 AM
Been a long time. This a masterful piece depicting unparelled shame and brutality that man-kind has yet to overcome. His crimes against humanity are bare testiment to the primal and disturbed being he is. Wonderful angle as the mother.
Ed
The Answer (Poetry) - 3/15/2009 4:11:57 PM
Chanti, I was told some years ago that it was difficult to wed
the art of painting to the art of writing. I didn't believe it
then, and I definitely don't believe it now. Your intense love
for Ed shines through in both media, and I suggest in all media
should you put your lovely hand to it. -gene.
A Father's Shame (Poetry) - 3/14/2009 8:59:50 AM
A triumph, Chanti. You are remarkable in mind and heart as well
as in your immense talent with the pen. After all these years,
I'm delighted I finally stopped by. I'll be back. -gene.
The Answer (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 12:11:17 PM
I love LOVE! And i love the way you expressed your love for your 'love'. Fantastic painting as well Chanti!
Anthony
A Father's Shame (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 1:54:56 AM
Chanti, this poem and the paragraphs afterward just rip the heart and tears the soul into pieces. How could someone do this to another human being, and an infant too? It is just so numbing to know people like this exist. I hope and pray for a day when there is no more crime, no more hatred, no more wars, no more indifference, no more violence, no more negativity...period.
What I cannot understand is, why do people have to do things like this to others? I am just so saddened that things like this go on in our world. I am glad that you and your family survived, and my heart weeps for all the families that have been lost, or that lost a loved one to this kind of outrage.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
A Father's Shame (Poetry) - 3/9/2009 1:41:57 AM
Hi Chanti,thank you for sharing this.take care
Edwin
A Father's Shame (Poetry) - 3/8/2009 4:18:04 PM
Chanti,
Heavy truth here. Thanks.
Rockie Coppolella
Visual Melody (Poetry) - 3/8/2009 4:15:08 PM
Another poem of beauty, loving and versed so
River of stars (Poetry) - 3/8/2009 4:14:12 PM
FABULOUS! Your tender way with the written words.
A Father's Shame (Poetry) - 3/7/2009 7:44:44 PM
Chanti, my heart is weeping for all the victims including you, your son and your daughter. It is a testement to you and your family's strenght of character that you have not only survived but can forgive those who did such an awful thing to you. I will pray for you all. And for the father who feels the shame of what his son has done.
A Father's Shame (Poetry) - 3/7/2009 6:05:22 AM
I read this and the following explanation and as a father I have often wondered when seeing these horrific crimes what the parents must go through. You would I suspect still love the child that you knew but how could you love the monster they'd become. Thank you Chanti for sharing this poem and so much of your own caring heart and feelings.
Big hugs
Fee
A Father's Shame (Poetry) - 3/6/2009 7:24:46 PM
I think it's perfect!
JCP xoxoxo
A Father's Shame (Poetry) - 3/6/2009 5:03:24 PM
Tragic. It's true, there are almost no words. And to think you can hardly visit your own country without chaos! Lots of problems here where I live too. A truly powerful write.
A Father's Shame (Poetry) - 3/6/2009 8:29:22 AM
There are no words I could add, I am sure they have all been said...so much pain and horror. This must have been a tough one to write...
Carole~
A Father's Shame (Poetry) - 3/6/2009 4:45:47 AM
Heart wrenching and to remember the family, their feelings of shame and guilt. I feel sick after reading this horror. Forgiveness for this type of act is hard to imagine!
A Father's Shame (Poetry) - 3/5/2009 7:57:34 PM
Chanti,
Words fail, except those of horror ... shock ... dismay ... and justifiable anger. Powerfully penned sadness ... I can't imagine.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
A Father's Shame (Poetry) - 3/5/2009 7:46:00 PM
Hello Chanti,
Your post reveals a lot more than the mind sees. The shock is there, and the anger too, but the fact remains that EVIL does exist in the world and from the times of the Bible it has existed. GOOD also comes, with FORGIVENESS and JUSTICE, and we have hope for the victims as AWARENESS is ignited by writings such as yours.
Cynthia
A Father's Shame (Poetry) - 3/5/2009 7:28:23 PM
My dear friend, I remember when you first posted this story. It's as heart-wrenching now as it was then. Some of the lines in your poem tug at my heartstrings as I remember struggles with my own son. Your work always stirs emotions within me. To me, that is the fingerprint of an excellent writer.
Much love,
Tami
A Father's Shame (Poetry) - 3/5/2009 7:16:29 PM
So many emotions in this...so much wrong...the human mind? Scary.
A Father's Shame (Poetry) - 3/5/2009 7:04:08 PM
I hope the b****** fries in jail; he's lower than dirt, in my eyes! How can he even call himself a "human being"??
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :( >many tears!! <
A Father's Shame (Poetry) - 3/5/2009 6:22:16 PM
Tragically horrific; this leaves me breathless, Chanti. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Regis
A Father's Shame (Poetry) - 3/5/2009 6:21:16 PM
How incredibly heart wrenching...only a mother could understand the loss that another mother can feel...even more heart wrenching if the child turns out wrong, and commits crimes as dreadful as these. Amazingly portrayed Chants...love, Michelle
The Answer (Poetry) - 2/18/2009 8:29:11 PM
Nothing sweeter than 2 people soooo in love....what a beautiful story, you are both blessed.
Christine
The Answer (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 4:00:28 AM
your painting talent is astonishing and your way with words are beyond compare, thanks for sharing,
best regards
The Answer (Poetry) - 2/16/2009 9:22:58 AM
Wow...what to say?!...This means so much to me...Thank you Snuggles!!!! I love you!
The Answer (Poetry) - 2/16/2009 8:07:39 AM
Dear Chanti, as I said in my review of Edwin's poem for you, we miss your works here on the den and this write shows why...lovely indeed.
hugs
fee
The Answer (Poetry) - 2/16/2009 4:18:28 AM
This is absolutely beautiful and your painting of Eddy is out of this world. Thank you for sharing your talents with us Chanti.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
The Answer (Poetry) - 2/16/2009 4:04:16 AM
Gorgeous poem and amazing gift.You are extremely talented.take care
Edwin
The Answer (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 10:47:47 PM
A fine gift. Lucky fellow. My best wishes to you with love and peace,
Regis
The Answer (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 8:14:10 PM
Chanti, beautiful poem of love. So what is the question?
This is a very cyberspacetic voyeuristic journey into your world, Chanti. All the best to you and Edwin. ~ Sara
New Image (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 7:28:45 PM
These are such descriptive beautiful harmonic words. Like reading a song!
Love your style!
Carol
The Answer (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 7:27:28 PM
Remarkable the talent in your painting...and your loving words to your BABY!
The Gardener (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 12:58:58 PM
Sorry I missed this one....Well done macabre scenario. Leaving much to the reader to fill in...
Walt
No Longer Young (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 12:57:08 PM
I have seen the faces of children in war torn countries who no longer have that childish sparkle in their eyes. Youth snatched away and replaced with tyrany and despair.
Walt
The Answer (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 12:52:16 PM
Very special...
Walt
The Answer (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 12:33:25 PM
This is so beautiful, my friend. I found my own personal connection within the words you wrote. Additionally, I am always absolutely amazed at your talent to paint. This portrait is incredible!
I have just recently returned to AuthorsDen after a very long, unintended absence, and I've missed being here. I miss writing even more.
More than that, though, I have missed your friendship and have missed talking with you soooo much! Do be in touch as you're able.
My love to you,
Tami
The Answer (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 11:35:23 AM
How I envy you Chants...I'm so happy for your happiness. Much love, Michelle
The Answer (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 11:11:30 AM
Ah, this is juat too beautiful, it touched the core of me...God bless your union
The Answer (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 10:38:34 AM
Chanti, you are truly blessed with love. It exudes from each word. Both of you are so lucky to have found each other! Beautiful words form a circle of love within your life.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
The Answer (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 10:25:56 AM
Too wonderful
x0x0x
Ron
The Answer (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 10:25:19 AM
A beautiful and tender love poem ... great write!
Carole~
The Answer (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 9:20:56 AM
Chanti,
Welcome back, I've missed you! This is a beautiful return; well done, and congratulations for having found true love!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
The Answer (Poetry) - 2/15/2009 9:07:34 AM
Passionate. . . .
Truthful. . . . .
All these things spring from the poem
Enjoyment. . . .
Doug
No Longer Young (Poetry) - 2/5/2009 1:49:52 PM
You know and use the power of brevity perfectly. Huzzah!
No Longer Young (Poetry) - 2/5/2009 11:19:09 AM
Chanti~!
Your poetic talent is exceptional - clearly shown here in this penning!!
Best Wishes,
Lance
No Longer Young (Poetry) - 2/2/2009 8:48:05 PM
excellent write Chanti
but it is written in his face
and eyes the terror
he has lived through every day
in his few years of life.
Love & Peace be with you
William
No Longer Young (Poetry) - 2/1/2009 7:19:42 PM
sadly, I think change has had its chance...
and nothing has changed but the faces.
No Longer Young (Poetry) - 2/1/2009 4:17:46 PM
Chanti,
Powerful in its truth and evocation, haunting, disturbing and unfortunately all too true. Thank you for this.
John
No Longer Young (Poetry) - 2/1/2009 9:54:47 AM
The naked starkness of this heart-numbing piece is so powerful, Chanti...outstanding write!
Carole~
No Longer Young (Poetry) - 2/1/2009 8:56:59 AM
Raped of a childhood, Truly sad,,,and brings a tear!
No Longer Young (Poetry) - 2/1/2009 3:23:44 AM
This one strikes out with the force of a sledgehammer to the heart...so much reality and pain in these few words and all too much to think about as we know how much torture is still going on in this so called civilized world of ours. It's so nice to see your name come up again on the list of new poems...Chanti I can only say you have been sooooooo missed. Welcome back
hugs
Fee
No Longer Young (Poetry) - 1/31/2009 8:39:51 PM
Powerful statement, Chanti. When indeed? And who will stop the
madness? Who will save the children? Who will save us all? These
are questions as old as time. -gene.
No Longer Young (Poetry) - 1/31/2009 8:25:59 PM
Thanks for all the reviews fellow ADers. It's been a long time since I've posted anything up on AD but not for lack of inspiration.
Michelle, my dear friend, the inspiration for this was the photo. Children at war has long been a bone of contention for me and images of children with guns in Africa have always haunted me. I once wrote a poem called 'I see the War in your Eyes' which I posted up here that chronicles this horror from my own perspective. This was another in the same vein. When will the madness stop?
No Longer Young (Poetry) - 1/31/2009 7:51:52 PM
Stark and real and the reader cannot help but be awakened and pay attention. Powerful stuff, Chanti. Love and best wishes,
Regis
No Longer Young (Poetry) - 1/31/2009 7:39:12 PM
Merciful heavens! I'd like to know the inspiration behind this poem. Wow...it's stark, honest, and downright "in your face". Amazing work my friend...Love, Michelle
No Longer Young (Poetry) - 1/31/2009 6:58:31 PM
You have captured the unnecessary horror and sadness in this world. You are an angle. Warmth and Love to you. Carin'
No Longer Young (Poetry) - 1/31/2009 6:49:39 PM
Very stark and real. Loved it.
No Longer Young (Poetry) - 1/31/2009 6:30:33 PM
Such a shame that he may never be able to share what he has seen, where he has been and what he has done or what has been done through the years. Thank you Chanti for a touching write.
Newfie hugs, Rose
