Beat Well (Short Story) - 8/31/2006 1:29:30 PM
Excellent! You said the images from the credits were burning in your head, well now they are burning in my too. Great story!
Beat Well (Short Story) - 5/17/2003 4:26:54 AM
chilling! Brilliant!
Beat Well (Short Story) - 4/16/2003 9:40:34 AM
Creeepy
LET MY WORDS TAKE WING (Poetry) - 12/7/2003 9:37:42 PM
Exceptionally good write, Steve, with an exceptionally good attitude! Bravo, my thoughts exactly. ~~Bonnie Q
THE FLICK OF A BIC (Poetry) - 7/7/2003 9:24:18 PM
I'm glad you shared this with us before it got stuck alight ;0). Great write Steve.
THE FLICK OF A BIC (Poetry) - 6/6/2003 3:41:35 PM
this is very interesting, you brought me images with you words. very good
THE FLICK OF A BIC (Poetry) - 6/6/2003 2:18:50 PM
We can only assume.
May Lu $*_*$ a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
hanging onto nothing (Poetry) - 5/29/2003 9:58:53 PM
This is a deep write - good poem.
hanging onto nothing (Poetry) - 5/17/2003 4:31:08 AM
Very good poem. LOt's of sharp images here. Nice.
hanging onto nothing (Poetry) - 5/15/2003 11:03:14 PM
Wow...really packs a wallop. Well done. Relationships are difficult to understand, especially our parent's relationship, yet it is the model for our own unless we change something. Bravo. Fine work.
LET MY WORDS TAKE WING (Poetry) - 5/8/2003 9:58:58 PM
"so many feathered clothespins" I really like the image - clever!
Saint Valentine's Massacre (Poetry) - 5/1/2003 3:55:16 AM
Aaaaahhhhh!.... Love just sucks sometimes! But this was violent. I don't know if he would ever go back to her again.
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
Where's Richard Simmons When You Really Need Him? (Poetry) - 4/28/2003 4:42:03 PM
LOL! This is great! Congratulations on your weight loss! I used to weigh 200 plus pounds myself (230 to be exact!) so I know exactly what you mean! But I changed the way I eat and added a lot of exercise and now weigh 150 lbs so I know where you were when you wrote this, I think, and its really good! Keep going with the weight loss, it takes forever but it is so worth it! And that advice goes for your writing also. Keep going, this is a very good write!
- J -
Bar Song (Poetry) - 4/19/2003 12:42:13 PM
I like it! I can see it, I can smell it (ew), I'm right there ...
\sharon\
Bar Song (Poetry) - 4/19/2003 9:16:10 AM
Very creative!....
Sandie Angel :o)
Bar Song (Poetry) - 4/19/2003 7:15:14 AM
This was good stuff, I liked the images of big butt cracks sitting on stools and the roar of belching as a backdrop. Tempting me to pour another one.
Bar Song (Poetry) - 4/19/2003 12:57:54 AM
Very well done, I felt like I was there in, I especially liked "wished out wells" and particularly the last two lines. Great job.
I enjoyed the journey.
Bar Song (Poetry) - 4/19/2003 12:47:22 AM
"...a thousand hard luck stories
thrown like stones in a wished out well,
pasteboard smiles of regret,
hollowed out pipedreams,
the sour candy apples of hops and hope,..."
Why I avoid them. Well done, great imagery.
Bar Song (Poetry) - 4/19/2003 12:33:54 AM
Very good Steve! Old barhead Bill
Role Model (Poetry) - 4/18/2003 10:52:01 PM
Steve, this is great...I shall visit to read your work. It's good.
Role Model (Poetry) - 4/17/2003 11:56:24 AM
Funny. Bravo.
LET MY WORDS TAKE WING (Poetry) - 4/16/2003 2:09:07 AM
"More poetry on the way!"
A lifelong member, eh?
(sloppy spelling corrected)
