Usury (Poetry) - 12/4/2015 7:35:25 PM
SILENCE IS GOLDEN AND IN MOST CASES(THOUGH NOT ALL) WILL TAKE US THROUGH MANY 'WISDOM FILLED' YEARS. WELL DONE AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
The Cinema (Poetry) - 8/5/2015 8:01:23 AM
Thank you for the review, Ron, and the question about the title. Hopefully I was able to clarify a bit in the description. Always welcome questions since I tend toward abstract thinking.
Have a great day!
The Cinema (Poetry) - 8/5/2015 7:05:34 AM
Interesting way that this is presented and its subject. I'm having trouble trying to figure out why it is called, The Cinema?
Ron
Poem from my coloring book (Poetry) - 8/1/2015 6:49:32 PM
Thanks, Christine! Very much appreciated. Interestingly, the quiet Inspirations book is out of print but I have included some of the short poems in the coloring book being published September. Recycling works!
Interruption (Poetry) - 8/1/2015 6:45:05 PM
Thank you, Paul, Christine and Andy! I've been away from Author's Den a while and only now seeing your very kind comments. So glad I've returned.
Usury (Poetry) - 2/16/2011 8:13:28 AM
Very well done.
Interruption (Poetry) - 10/14/2010 4:00:30 AM
Excellent work.
Interruption (Poetry) - 10/13/2010 7:08:49 PM
Now this is elegant wit and a fun imagination ~
Unexpected subject matter, so fresh!
Best Wishes,
Christine
Interruption (Poetry) - 10/13/2010 3:20:32 PM
Whoops, as I read the last lines I said out loud. "Heck man this is brilliant." What a clever write, one which many of us relate to.
Love the line "Scratches on a page" And the build up; appreciation for every new breath. Top work!
