Where Gods and Poets Rest (Poetry) - 11/26/2005 10:36:25 PM
I love your style of writing. Thanks for commenting on my piece. :-)
A Unicorn (Poetry) - 10/3/2005 9:27:57 PM
Excellent read...thanks for sharing!!
love Tinka
A Unicorn (Poetry) - 9/19/2005 7:03:36 PM
The stuff myths and legends be made of. Bravo!
Ron
Dreamscape (Poetry) - 9/19/2005 5:19:14 PM
Beautiful metaphors and similes. I like rhyme, but this is delicious.
Ron
Dreamscape (Poetry) - 9/19/2005 8:06:52 AM
Beautifully done all around, Joni. Thank you for sharing this lovely poetic offering. Love and peace to you.
Regis
A Unicorn (Poetry) - 9/17/2005 4:30:19 PM
This is magical in its content, imagery and just sweet styling, I really enjoyed and it is a keeper.
Felix
A Unicorn (Poetry) - 9/17/2005 6:39:34 AM
Dear Joni
My Lepricorn tells me only fair madiens see Unicorns. So Should I stop looking? As for many years I have searched. Now Leppy tells me this.
Kindest
Doppy
A Unicorn (Poetry) - 9/16/2005 6:30:58 PM
A compelling poetic tale constructed expertly with great rhyme and rhythm. Thank you for sharing this gift, Joni. Love and peace to you.
Regis
Dreamscape (Poetry) - 9/16/2005 5:21:58 PM
I am not very good at free verse myself but this was beauthiful and I loved it. Well done.
Felix
Dreamscape (Poetry) - 9/16/2005 4:02:45 PM
Joni,
I've always felt you're at your best when you write free verse. This poem is no exception. Please, continue on this path. You write, how painters should paint.
Where Gods and Poets Rest (Poetry) - 9/15/2005 12:49:18 PM
Joni,
I, too, am spellbound by your words; wow. I like what Andy said, I agree, 1000 per cent. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Twilight Sleep (Poetry) - 9/15/2005 12:48:18 PM
Joni,
Your refreshing voice is more than welcome here at Author's Den; you're among friends. :) Welcome!
And what a write this is--clever imagery, beautifully metered and rhymed verse, BRAVA! :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Forever (Poetry) - 9/6/2005 4:15:49 PM
Wow- This is TErriFic... Sorry- we dont' get to see more of your Inspriring Writing Joni-- hmmm... Share- I have read your 3- and they go back to 2003- are you still around- I must start tracking you dear- your mind speaks Volumes- Great Poetry you write- and I lOve reading and writing them myself- You've touched my Soul-WArmly,Sheee
Where Gods and Poets Rest (Poetry) - 9/5/2005 9:06:38 AM
The gift of the Greeks revived. Your understanding of the myths and choice of words is outstanding. I agree, spellbinding.
Ron
Twilight Sleep (Poetry) - 9/5/2005 8:56:41 AM
Welcome, poet! Your poem floats in that nether between awake and sleep, just as I oft do. You captured it well. My salute to you.
Ron
Forever (Poetry) - 9/4/2005 9:04:55 PM
Rhythmic brilliance. The poetic imagery is a gift to the reader.
Where Gods and Poets Rest (Poetry) - 9/4/2005 9:01:15 PM
The poem is spellbinding. You don't seem to write often. The word quality not quantity comes to mind.
I'm not worthy. The skill of your poetry is breath taking.
Twilight Sleep (Poetry) - 9/4/2005 8:56:12 PM
Blimey I must have dozed off in the twilight to have missed this delightful perfectly formed rhythmic penn.
Twilight Sleep (Poetry) - 9/4/2005 5:43:09 PM
WOW!!! EXCELLENT POETRY. wording, rhyme, rhythmn, --very very nice (i'm damn near envious). thank you for sharing the read.
TX
Where Gods and Poets Rest (Poetry) - 9/4/2005 3:18:48 PM
I am in awe of your writing, Joni. Thank you for commenting on my poem so that I came here to find your wonderful poetry. You are such a talented writer. Of the three poems I have read of yours today, I can honestly say I wish I had written each of them.
Take care,
Sherry
Forever (Poetry) - 9/4/2005 3:14:01 PM
Brilliant write, Joni. Life goes on, with or without us. How come you don't post more? Your work is fantastic.
Take care,
Sherry
Twilight Sleep (Poetry) - 9/4/2005 3:10:06 PM
This is such a beautiful poem of the movement of time through the changing seasons. Your rhyme unforced and wonderful, Joni, the flow smooth and gentle, your images strong and clear. This is just exceptional writing.
Take care,
Sherry
Where Gods and Poets Rest (Poetry) - 8/26/2005 6:31:11 PM
This is special and unique writing thank you for sharing your special insights with us.
Felix
Where Gods and Poets Rest (Poetry) - 8/26/2005 4:35:07 PM
Profoundly poetic and compelling, Joni. A wonderful gift beautifully shared. Please accept my gratitude for your offering. Love and peace.
Regis
Forever (Poetry) - 8/26/2005 2:32:44 PM
How beautifully this flows into the reader's soul, Joni. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you.
Regis
Twilight Sleep (Poetry) - 10/6/2004 7:35:44 AM
This is a wonderful poem. It sounds like one of the classics. The subject matter mirrored my feelings about the seasons. Great write. Janet
Twilight Sleep (Poetry) - 1/1/2004 11:49:31 PM
Beautifully flowing verses. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace, Regis.
Forever (Poetry) - 1/1/2004 9:29:04 PM
Someday we to dust return
And leave but changing ashes
And soon our footsteps disappear
Within the springtime's grasses
- Beautiful, I'm surprised more p[oets have not found you!
ShyPoet1
Where Gods and Poets Rest (Poetry) - 1/1/2004 9:25:34 PM
You are an amazing poet!
Only 1 poet has inspired me to constantly re-read her work, until now Melissa Rives! You are Outstanding and very inspiring!
Twilight Sleep (Poetry) - 1/1/2004 9:20:44 PM
I agree, you can really turn a phrase!
I had so much fun ....
Thank you ...
Let me re-read this gem ...
ShyPoet
Twilight Sleep (Poetry) - 12/2/2003 11:25:05 AM
the poem have great rhythm. and the iamages are supurb.
Twilight Sleep (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 6:59:51 AM
Love this poem. Glad I found you.
Twilight Sleep (Poetry) - 10/19/2003 4:49:38 AM
'A poet dreams with silver pen' Lovely. Really enjoyed this.
Twilight Sleep (Poetry) - 10/12/2003 7:18:35 AM
Yeah, language raises us above the animals. Well written with strong rhymes and good imagery.
But "small town gal" suggests you are American. What a disappointment. With a name like Joni Stewart - Hague you ought to live in one of Englands rural conties but also have a pied a terre in Chelsea of course ;)
Twilight Sleep (Poetry) - 10/6/2003 8:49:48 AM
Enjoyed!!!
Twilight Sleep (Poetry) - 10/5/2003 9:43:17 AM
Wonderful flow and very beautiful verse.
~Chrissie
Twilight Sleep (Poetry) - 10/2/2003 8:27:52 PM
THIS IS FANTASTIC! such great verses. :)
Twilight Sleep (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 2:59:53 PM
Great write!
Twilight Sleep (Poetry) - 9/28/2003 10:57:49 PM
I agree with James. This flows so beautifully.
~Jackie~
Twilight Sleep (Poetry) - 9/24/2003 10:28:52 PM
This is an exceptional piece of writing!
Twilight Sleep (Poetry) - 9/24/2003 9:00:26 PM
This just rolls off the tongue.
Nicely done.
-James
Where Gods and Poets Rest (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 11:19:23 PM
Spellbinding.. Loved this from start to finish. By the way - we haven't met yet. Welcome to the Den. Hope your stay here is as wonderful as mine has been.
Namaste'
Melanie
Where Gods and Poets Rest (Poetry) - 9/11/2003 11:16:11 AM
this is wonderful and the ending so tender to read..now that is something I have never said about a poem befor <tender> wow...
Forever (Poetry) - 8/31/2003 4:53:50 PM
Reminds us that WE are the temporary ones here on this earth. The land we claim to own will one day reclaim us.
Beautifully written piece.
-James
Forever (Poetry) - 8/31/2003 4:47:18 PM
Beautiful work. I love the rhythm you established. Bravo.
