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Recent Reviews for Kathie Freeman


KARL AND KELLY'S LONG JOURNEY - A (NOT REALLY) TRUE STORY (Short Story) - 8/13/2015 11:41:58 PM
I envision your story with illustrations of all the geographical places the koalas ventured to.

KARL AND KELLY'S LONG JOURNEY - A (NOT REALLY) TRUE STORY (Short Story) - 6/23/2015 6:53:21 AM
This is a satirical story intended to point out the absurdity of the Biblical account of the Great Flood, which is about as far from reality as one can get. According to Genesis, animals do indeed appear out of nowhere and are magically and randomly transported great distances.

KARL AND KELLY'S LONG JOURNEY - A (NOT REALLY) TRUE STORY (Short Story) - 6/21/2015 6:02:31 AM
Written in a way children can follow. However, when we tell stories that are so far from reality like the koalas growing bigger from not eating and walking great distances which they can't, we mislead children into believing that all stories are true even if the circumstances are not. I much prefer a story much closer to nature with a lesson or lessons about behavior along the way. The way your story is portrayed, animals can appear out of nowhere and survive anything. I don't see a life lesson in that. Ron