They See With Their Hearts (Poetry) - 5/21/2016 1:17:16 PM
Yes! Honest, loving and generous smiles. Children have the treasures we lack.
Susan de vegter
Blackbird (Poetry) - 10/8/2003 9:15:46 PM
I can't believe I missed this. What a wonderful write!!
~Jackie~
Blackbird (Poetry) - 9/20/2003 9:20:28 AM
..hmmm..you sure are changin'..I'm impressed!
Great write...ty
vesna
They Look Down (Poetry) - 9/18/2003 2:38:16 PM
Sad one.
If they look down at you, just ignore them. You don't need them. You got lots of friends in here. One cannot be appreciated, accepted and loved by everybody.
Nico
Shower (Poetry) - 9/18/2003 2:35:38 PM
Lol. Why are my showers always different to what you write in here?
Good one.
Nico
Blackbird (Poetry) - 9/18/2003 2:33:57 PM
Not a "typical one " for you, but enjoyed reading it.
Nico
Blackbird (Poetry) - 9/17/2003 3:14:59 PM
Outstanding. So creative
~Chrissie
Blackbird (Poetry) - 9/15/2003 4:49:11 PM
Beautiful, just beautiful!
Reindeer
Blackbird (Poetry) - 9/13/2003 7:21:43 PM
Brief and charming.
Gina
Blackbird (Poetry) - 9/13/2003 3:52:44 AM
The world seems to resist what it needs most. Lovely write GM
Blackbird (Poetry) - 9/13/2003 3:49:25 AM
I keep having this beautiful dream... What a wonderful reflection, dear, gentle friend... and how lovely it is to read you again. **smile**
~Alexandra~
Blackbird (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 10:25:02 PM
Excellent analogy....great write, Gentle Man.
This really moved me tonight.
Jenni
Blackbird (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 8:39:46 PM
Birdies with jungle fever. :o] I imagine
you were smiling in your sleep.
Blackbird (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 1:37:02 PM
(((o, if only)))
powerful, wonderful write, gentle man
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
love knows no color
Blackbird (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 10:10:54 AM
This was a touching write...I feel kinda "black" minded today!!
Got some bad news from a dear friend!!
I will miss him very much!!
Love Tinka
Blackbird (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 8:40:42 AM
GM, This is an interesting take. We should be so lucky that society could walk in tune. Great write. Lisa
Blackbird (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 7:54:08 AM
The is wonderful, Peggy. Excellent.
Blackbird (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 7:39:05 AM
Gentleman,
Have missed you Sir!
"I dreamed I
saw a blackbird
flying side by side
with a dove
They landed on
a branch and
began to kiss
and I thought
oh, how this world
needs their love"
Excellent piece.
Lady Peg
Blackbird (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 7:00:35 AM
Loved this!
Excellent write, my friend
~~Linda~~
Blackbird (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 6:59:37 AM
T.G.M. Very creative. I like that idea. Good and evil getting along. Oh! what they could teach.
Blackbird (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 6:57:31 AM
Fortuntely this is something the world is seeing more of these days :-) I believe in the day when love conquers all :-) Great write.
Shower (Poetry) - 9/1/2003 8:38:56 PM
Shower's work every time. "Smile !" Fine write !
Shower (Poetry) - 8/30/2003 12:10:38 AM
..hmmmm...you haven't lost your touch...LOL
Exquisite write!!
Vesna
Shower (Poetry) - 8/27/2003 2:23:50 PM
An excellent write. Enjoyed.
Shower (Poetry) - 8/25/2003 7:12:00 PM
Very erotic. I'm going to bed now... happy!
Good write, my friend.
Jill :)
Shower (Poetry) - 8/25/2003 4:57:16 PM
Gentleman,
so erotic and sotly done and romantic. Excellent.
PJ
Shower (Poetry) - 8/25/2003 3:54:53 PM
Skillful hands for a fact. Very well done.
Shower (Poetry) - 8/25/2003 3:09:00 PM
:-) I would never get out of the shower! :-) Great write!
Shower (Poetry) - 8/25/2003 2:50:06 PM
Beautiful write of tender erotic passions. Now I need a shower! ~SH~
Shower (Poetry) - 8/25/2003 1:25:13 PM
(((GM)))
o, my
beautiful write! :)
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Shower (Poetry) - 8/25/2003 12:24:38 PM
Exquisite, my friend..
Sensuality at its best!
I loved this!
~~Linda~~
Shower (Poetry) - 8/25/2003 11:47:17 AM
Well...I Methinks...its time again!!
I love to shower!!
But usually to late...lol!!
Love Tinka
Shower (Poetry) - 8/25/2003 10:45:13 AM
nice and sensual write; nothing like two people being in love, huh? (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D
They Look Down (Poetry) - 8/23/2003 8:58:52 PM
It happens.... people can be rude in many areas. Sad to say, but its alot of mean spirits floating around. Sometimes in life were better of if they do pass on by !!! Fine write ....best always !
They Look Down (Poetry) - 8/21/2003 8:13:56 AM
A beautiful and excellent write.
They Look Down (Poetry) - 8/21/2003 6:53:27 AM
I can relate, I really feel you on this one,
at 5/3 and 200 lbs. But it's there loss, because here, you are a man well respected and highly thought of and admired...In other words: Looked up to! Remember, GOD made all hearts from the same ingredients. ***much love***denise
They Look Down (Poetry) - 8/20/2003 4:16:31 PM
This was excellently written, so beautiful, so very sad,
Reindeer
They Look Down (Poetry) - 8/20/2003 12:57:56 PM
Oh Gentle Man... this is such a powerful write. It says so much so beautifully. Thank you.
Jenni
They Look Down (Poetry) - 8/20/2003 9:39:06 AM
Ouch! Hugs. Great write on this emotion and experience.
They Look Down (Poetry) - 8/20/2003 9:36:42 AM
(((GM)))
o, this one rends the heart
powerful, undeniably emotional and beautiful
i wouldn't pass you by, either
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla.
ALWAYS hold your head up, GM--be proud of yourself--i am honored to be your friend
They Look Down (Poetry) - 8/20/2003 7:03:45 AM
Well GM, It would be hard to look down on somebody with a frame such as the one you have described. Lots of feeling in this write of sadness. ~SH~
They Look Down (Poetry) - 8/20/2003 6:45:35 AM
A sad write-unexpected from you, but I liked it all the same. I know how this feels and I believe that if everyone really thinks about it-they have been there as well:)
They Look Down (Poetry) - 8/20/2003 6:40:29 AM
This write really hit home to me,
my friend. I have never felt "good
enough" or equal to the world. I
stay to myself alot because of feeling
so inferiour. This touched me deeply
this morning.
~~Linda~~
Seduction's Recipe / Haiku (Poetry) - 8/20/2003 5:26:16 AM
Getting extremely warm in here...isn't it?
**S**
~Jackie~
They Look Down (Poetry) - 8/20/2003 5:24:15 AM
Great words of understanding that we should all take to heart.
~Jackie~
They Look Down (Poetry) - 8/20/2003 4:51:52 AM
People either do one of two things when seeing men like us, look down and away, or stare. I prefer the stares, as I respect courage.
They Look Down (Poetry) - 8/20/2003 2:38:08 AM
You are definitely a man who should be looked up to and it is their loss to those who look down. A beautiful write, GM, it touched my heart.
They Look Down (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 10:03:20 PM
Very well written....well if you THAT big..I'll have to look Up to you from way down below at 5'5 and 130lbs......ag shame...you will squash me to pieces...but I am still a kicker like a rooster......lol!!
Love Tinka
They Look Down (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 10:00:53 PM
Ahhhhh such a brilliant in depth piece that speaks in great volumes and says so much more than what you have really written, and it would seem we all wonder the same about one another! Brilliant and Exceelant Work!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
P.S. Just for the record I most assuredly would not pass you by or anyone else without at the least saying "Hello" :O)
They Look Down (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 9:59:12 PM
No Eileen, when I was young and in my prime with my youthful step and uplifted eys ... they never looked down. It started happening as I grew older and older and older. The more older I got the more they looked down.
It has something to do with old age. The older we get, the more invisible we become.
Bill Murray
They Look Down (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 8:57:11 PM
Excellent write, but did you ever wonder if they are thinking the same exact thing about you;-)I have....
Seduction's Recipe / Haiku (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 5:48:53 PM
mmmmmmmm! yummy yummy! I want the ingredients to this recipe! serve while hot!
Dawn (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 5:45:40 PM
This is dreamy, GMan! I love the dawn, the waking of a new day. Love it!
Seduction's Recipe / Haiku (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 10:31:19 PM
My head just flew off ....." LOL!" HOt Haiku!
Over The Waterfall (erotic) (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 4:13:27 PM
(((gentle man)))
stop stop o, my *siiggghhh*
whew, what a steamy, passionate, yeah! kinda write--LOVE IT
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
i love waterfalls, too *grins*
Young Heat (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 4:10:13 PM
(((gentle man)))
now THAT'S my kinda man LOL
WOW--passionate and suddenly, it's gettin HOT in herre *and it's hot enuff outside* LOL
great write--methinks i'll go back and enjoy it again *grins*
((((HUGS)))) and love,
karla. :)
Seduction's Recipe / Haiku (Poetry) - 8/16/2003 3:18:16 PM
is it gettin HOT in herre??? *whew*
well done--you leave little to the imagination LOL
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
lemme go back and read that again mmmmmmmm!
Seduction's Recipe / Haiku (Poetry) - 8/16/2003 2:07:38 PM
reachin' for the oxygen...*gasp, gasp, gasp* (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. LOL :D
Dawn (Poetry) - 8/16/2003 4:54:46 AM
Beautiful write and my favourite time of day. Excellent!
Dawn (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 5:16:19 PM
Soft, sweet sentiments for sure.
~Jackie~
Dawn (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 2:47:53 PM
Exhilarating, superb you made a believer out of me with this one
They See With Their Hearts (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 2:17:20 PM
Wise words - so true.
Let children rule and the world might become a better one.
Try to look with your heart. Love that statement
Nico
Dawn (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 2:15:16 PM
Wow!!
That's why I like dawn better than sunsets! There is something erotical about it.
Fantanstic as usual
Love
Nico
Dawn (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 12:11:16 PM
exceptional writing!
Dawn (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 10:17:40 AM
This is what poetry is all about! Your words painted a superb image!
Dawn (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 10:03:50 AM
I love waking up like this..... smile... thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear
Dawn (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 9:21:30 AM
So beautiful to read this morning, just so lovely, I love the Dawn..
Reindeer
Dawn (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 8:20:02 AM
Absolutely beautiful.
~Chrissie
Dawn (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 6:44:47 AM
Just Beautiful Gentle Man!!
Today something weird happened...as I looked at the sun there was a full circle like a rainbow around the sun...and I thought by myself..this is the first time I have ever seen that...it was at about 11 0'clock this morning...and at 3 o' clock it was still like that...ddi you noticed that..or is it just my eyes playing tricks on me?
Would like to know!!
Love Tinka
Dawn (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 6:25:39 AM
very beautiful..Floreann
Dawn (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 6:15:47 AM
Wonderful passionate, nature write!
Dawn (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 6:14:18 AM
T.G.M. wonderful write. This brings a whole new world to life. Well done.
Dawn (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 5:54:34 AM
~Exquisite my friend..
Loved this.
~~Linda~~
Dawn (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 5:40:25 AM
What a gentle, sweet return, gentle friend...
Dawn (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 5:24:35 AM
What a beauty this is, so good to be reading you again GM.
Dawn (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 5:16:20 AM
Me loves fondling.
Dawn (Poetry) - 8/14/2003 5:15:02 AM
Now this is refreshing moment. Loved this! ~SH~
They See With Their Hearts (Poetry) - 8/13/2003 8:33:50 AM
A very touching an true poem, yes indeed, our eyes as adults are our primary weakness.
They See With Their Hearts (Poetry) - 8/12/2003 5:06:18 PM
I agree with every comment above. This is true revelation, if adults could see with their hearts like children,, what a great place the earth would be to live!! This is special, GM.
They See With Their Hearts (Poetry) - 8/11/2003 10:33:28 PM
I enjoyed tis poem for its soft and gentle
nature. Thank You. Bill Murray
They See With Their Hearts (Poetry) - 8/11/2003 9:17:03 PM
Gentleman,
May I plead 7 1/2 hours on road very little sleep in past four days and Insanity for a split second... This is an awesome right... I messed up forgive Please...
PJ
They See With Their Hearts (Poetry) - 8/11/2003 5:48:31 PM
absolutely wonderful write. I see it everyday, and each day it moves me to tears
Beautiful...
They See With Their Hearts (Poetry) - 8/11/2003 3:44:55 PM
nifty write; thanks for sharing! oh, if we adults could be so innocent....sad how we have become! :( (((HUGS)))
They See With Their Hearts (Poetry) - 8/11/2003 1:44:16 PM
Keen perception, wonderful write! Yes there innocent eyes have yet to learn distrust and meaness.Unfortunately it will come, then the eyes take over when the heart gets hurt!
They See With Their Hearts (Poetry) - 8/11/2003 1:00:24 PM
Excellant in every way said!
Children do see with their hearts, if only some foolish adults could take example!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
They See With Their Hearts (Poetry) - 8/11/2003 10:26:00 AM
Excellent educational write! We always try to teach children things, too bad we don't let them teach us a thing or two. ~Z~
They See With Their Hearts (Poetry) - 8/11/2003 10:04:32 AM
This is so beautiful.... I wish it could only be true!!
Love Tinka
They See With Their Hearts (Poetry) - 8/11/2003 9:06:06 AM
G.M. excellent poetry. If only we could all see with our hearts and be proud of what was in them.
They See With Their Hearts (Poetry) - 8/11/2003 8:49:55 AM
That is a very beautiful thought! Only if! Yes a child sees with their heart,,and they see things that are not even visible to adults,,Great write,,,thanks for letting me pretend! ~SH~
They See With Their Hearts (Poetry) - 8/11/2003 8:26:50 AM
If only we all had the untainted heart of a child. So wonderfully put...I loved this one!
~Jackie~
They See With Their Hearts (Poetry) - 8/11/2003 7:16:09 AM
It is highly possible, but in the real world, because of the fight for power, people must be stepped on to obtain what others want. Utopia is a perfect place, it just does not exist in this lifetime. Thank you for allowing me to pretend it does for a second, you are as eloquent as ever with this write.
They See With Their Hearts (Poetry) - 8/11/2003 7:03:22 AM
This is exceptional, my friend.
The innocence of a child is
profound. I have often watched
them at play also...and marveled
at their complete acceptance of
each other...I wish we could all
stay in a childs world...:)
Loved this so much
~~Linda~~
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/6/2003 9:57:54 PM
Yes YES YES YES,
P.S.
Don't tell my guy though...ssshhhhuuuu!!!
Seroiusly though,your poem is very tempting,one of the best I have read in ages.
Best wishes
from
kay
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/6/2003 11:59:00 AM
Beautiful poem, that is my kind of man .. and I am fortunate enough to have one just like that, with a soft and tender heart. Jackie <> <
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/5/2003 10:18:53 AM
Oh this is so wonderful(:
Hugs
Lady G.
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/4/2003 11:02:41 PM
This was so lovely and moving, very beautiful,
Reindeer
The Changing Room (Poetry) - 8/2/2003 4:35:52 PM
I know it is a mistake to always order clothes by catalogue. This poem made me change my mind. Will go shopping next week.
Love
S
She Dreams Of Three (Poetry) - 8/2/2003 4:33:39 PM
That is quite a question. I don't know the answer either but it is worth a thought - definitely interesting.
Good write
S
The Room In My Heart (Poetry) - 8/2/2003 4:31:43 PM
That one is outstanding.
Love it.
S
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/2/2003 4:30:55 PM
She will not let you fall. She will know that it is love, not weakness. True love.
Wonderful one.
S
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/2/2003 10:16:55 AM
This is very touching! You really open your heart and show your tender side. It takes a REAL man to reveal such vunerability. True to your name "The Gentle Man"!
much love: Denise
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/1/2003 9:25:40 PM
Excellent poetry!! These lines really got to me..
" When grief leaves me in tears,
will I find your open arms or
will you see me as less than a man?"
It takes a real man to show his true feelings, even when it means shedding a tear or two..
Jenni
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/1/2003 7:29:04 PM
Have you ever heard the song
"The Rose"? Go for it, my friend.
Beautiful longing write...
~~Linda~~
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/1/2003 7:25:01 PM
The last time I felt the ground getting
softer and started to shift, I was drunk when
I fell.(smile) Lovely write.
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/1/2003 6:09:54 PM
If she is the right one for you she will go into the water with you :-) Great write!
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/1/2003 3:58:23 PM
Beautifully expressed words of love, I hope you get the right answers!
The Room In My Heart (Poetry) - 8/1/2003 3:37:13 PM
What a wonderful spin that leaves for anticipation.
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/1/2003 3:34:51 PM
Well worth reading over and over again. You drew me in with such well placed words. Well done!
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/1/2003 10:21:08 AM
If you fall, all you can do is pick yourself up and go on! Wonderful and emotive piece, Gentle Man; enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :) (I tend to do that a lot..fall.., and I can't help it! Darn old legs...)
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/1/2003 8:45:39 AM
Don't fall, dive in with the answers... love this Gentle Man...
In Spirit,
Bear
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/1/2003 8:40:57 AM
The crossroads of love can be a very confusing place...keep following your heart. Love and life are but lessons you can only grow wiser no matter the outcome. Very Good write! ~Z~
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/1/2003 7:26:31 AM
Bet ten to one she steps on it, even if she say's that it is by accident.
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/1/2003 6:09:17 AM
This is an exquisite write. So much love within these verses. One would be nuts not to cherish them. ~SH~
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/1/2003 5:58:11 AM
Tender and beautiful write!!
True love will do this and more!!
Even take on a battle with the world!!
There are more than one kind of
love...remember that...always!!
Love
Tinka
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/1/2003 5:50:09 AM
One of the most freighting places for a man.
The fall even more freightening is to love and lose all.
good write.
LM
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/1/2003 5:41:24 AM
Oh Sweet Gentle Man, I hope that call is from a heart of love as gentle, passionate and sacrificial as yours. Exquisite poem.
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/1/2003 5:21:49 AM
Gentleman,
This one is so tender and beautiful
so full of questions as love can do????
This is very good .
PJ
Before I Fall (Poetry) - 8/1/2003 5:06:22 AM
..dear friend in LOVE you will never fall..in LOVE you can only dance the dance of ecstasy...swirling and twirling with delight..do not allow fear to destroy that which you wish to share and be..be the extension of Love that you are..go for it!!!
{{HUGS}}
Vesna
The Room In My Heart (Poetry) - 7/30/2003 6:25:32 AM
Oh dear friend..I hope your true love has come..hmmmm...'twas forseen..was it not?!....LOL....Bless you!
Well written...
Vesna
The Room In My Heart (Poetry) - 7/26/2003 6:18:39 AM
Don't know why I never read any of your poems before.
You're a true romantic.
It reminds me of that Shania Twain song.... hmmmm... think its called: Never See That Day.
Lovely tribute to your lady, if that be the case. ;o)
The Room In My Heart (Poetry) - 7/25/2003 3:22:15 PM
This was so lovely and romantic, just so beautifully written,
Reindeer
The Room In My Heart (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 4:58:23 PM
Beautifully touching....
Jenni
The Room In My Heart (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 12:47:18 PM
Aw... That was cute. :0) You should write
this poem on pieces of cut out heart shaped
paper, for your lady on valentine's day;
if you haven't done so already. :0)
The Room In My Heart (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 12:15:07 PM
Simple, straightforward and exquiste! This is nicely done!
The Room In My Heart (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 12:13:46 PM
This is so beautiful it made me cry too, oh what "real love" can do!
~Nikki~
The Room In My Heart (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 10:21:50 AM
Who? Me? Not? Oh shit wrong heart!! Sorry??
I lost my way Sir!!
Can you perhaps show me the way?
Love
Tinka
The Room In My Heart (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 10:15:06 AM
So beautiful, sweet, and deeply touching...
The Room In My Heart (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 10:12:11 AM
Exquisite write and touches the reader deep down.
This really stirs all the emotions
well done
The Room In My Heart (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 9:05:38 AM
Gentleman,
This one is
so beautiful
so beautiful
{{tears}
PJ
The Room In My Heart (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 8:41:44 AM
Very good! Made me cry though. ~SH~
The Room In My Heart (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 8:28:29 AM
This is absolutely beautiful and a lot of wisdome within it. Great write!
The Room In My Heart (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 8:27:42 AM
This is very moving and so lovely
The Room In My Heart (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 7:42:30 AM
I bet you have a book full of ladies names with a write like this one.
The Room In My Heart (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 7:38:45 AM
GM, this is exquisitely beautiful, brought tears to my eyes, this is what love does.
She Dreams Of Three (Poetry) - 7/23/2003 7:40:14 PM
Three would not fit in my bed
EVER
but to each their own
and fantasy can be fun as this poem proves.
Away from the fun side
I admit I would hate my guy's guts if he ever approved of another man touching me.
(I am a self confessed possesive bitch
in the bedroom and in my love life.I can't share there.)
Your poem is brave erotic sexy and hot hot hot,excellent work.
She Dreams Of Three (Poetry) - 7/23/2003 8:17:36 AM
elegant write for erotica the warmth and yearning was soft yet powerful
She Dreams Of Three (Poetry) - 7/23/2003 8:04:21 AM
Excellent question excellently put.
She Dreams Of Three (Poetry) - 7/23/2003 6:09:02 AM
Wow, this is very passionate and very erotic.
She Dreams Of Three (Poetry) - 7/22/2003 7:51:51 PM
I shared a fantasy, had it for twenty years, acted on it and had it for another twenty. Hows that for luck?
She Dreams Of Three (Poetry) - 7/22/2003 7:42:42 PM
True lovers can tell each other anything :-)
She Dreams Of Three (Poetry) - 7/22/2003 6:15:37 PM
this is some dream! Maybe she will talk in her sleep and tell him :)
Nice write
She Dreams Of Three (Poetry) - 7/22/2003 4:09:29 PM
... a definite 'yes' on this one; all fantasies should be shared. if you cant share your darkest desires, you are with the wrong lover.
She Dreams Of Three (Poetry) - 7/22/2003 2:41:43 PM
hehehehe....hey what are you talking about???
How did you know what I was dreaming???
Wow!! stop the bus....I need to do some shopping!!!
(Thanks for the e-mail)
Love
Tinka
She Dreams Of Three (Poetry) - 7/22/2003 2:33:14 PM
Deep in fantasy. Great one. Thanks for sharing your sexual thoughts.
She Dreams Of Three (Poetry) - 7/22/2003 1:45:53 PM
Not one of my dreams, but a very erotic poem all the same GM!
She Dreams Of Three (Poetry) - 7/22/2003 1:02:29 PM
Striking and ardent poem... and dream, with The Gentle Man's unique touch.
She Dreams Of Three (Poetry) - 7/22/2003 12:54:41 PM
beautiful and passionate write, gentle man! well done, as you always do! (((HUGS))) :)
Love's Fountain (Poetry) - 7/22/2003 5:55:29 AM
You tell'em baby!
I Blame You (Poetry) - 7/22/2003 5:45:29 AM
You got that right baby!
The Changing Room (Poetry) - 7/19/2003 12:20:18 PM
Steamy and sizzling
The Changing Room (Poetry) - 7/18/2003 1:03:11 PM
Wow!! enjoyable read indeed!!
Shit its warm in here!!
Ted....you a star!!!
love
Tinka
Hungry / With Labelle Rouge (Poetry) - 7/18/2003 12:20:21 PM
This is what I'd call romantic erotica. Splendidly done
The Changing Room (Poetry) - 7/18/2003 12:16:13 PM
gee it's awful hot in here. I like the ending
The Changing Room (Poetry) - 7/18/2003 12:10:25 PM
Fine erotic work, sir.
The Changing Room (Poetry) - 7/18/2003 11:11:12 AM
Whewwwwwwwwwwww gentleman,
This one is very excellent
PJ
The Changing Room (Poetry) - 7/18/2003 10:46:20 AM
Nicely done. I'm worried about Ted, however. [smiles]
The Changing Room (Poetry) - 7/18/2003 10:42:46 AM
hot stuff! (I don't NEED to be hot today; it's supposed to be 100 degrees here in northcentral texas! Supposed to be hot all weekend before a cool front brings some relief next week! :( ) (((HUGS))) Excellent write, Gentle Man!
The Changing Room (Poetry) - 7/18/2003 10:33:13 AM
Absolutely great!! With a wife like her, who
needs strip joints! This is how to keep the spice in a marriage! Super job, G-MAN!
Denise
The Changing Room (Poetry) - 7/18/2003 9:48:53 AM
This is good, GM! I don't like those changing rooms either! Maybe I should put on a show like Ted! LOL...
In Spirit,
Bear
The Changing Room (Poetry) - 7/18/2003 9:41:24 AM
Sometimes in public, it is the excitement that is the thrill :) Very hot.
Thanks,
Emilie
The Changing Room (Poetry) - 7/18/2003 9:36:24 AM
Now this is a hot orginal write! Wow.
The Changing Room (Poetry) - 7/18/2003 9:22:38 AM
... playfully hot.
The Changing Room (Poetry) - 7/18/2003 8:51:40 AM
Breathtaking and wonderfully provocative, as always. The conclusion is simply genial!
The Changing Room (Poetry) - 7/18/2003 8:23:17 AM
Love and Lust, the perfect partners!
The Changing Room (Poetry) - 7/18/2003 8:14:46 AM
WOW! It's hooooootttttttt in here! I just love it when matrimony and the evils of life can't stand in the way of erotica between husband and wife. Somehow it reknews those vows everytime it happens. Loved this! ~SH~
The Changing Room (Poetry) - 7/18/2003 8:13:54 AM
My wife refuses to change in them because she thinks somebody is watching via camera or otherwise, I don't mind if that is the case, I always just for fun, pull it out and shake it at them, so far no takers.
Hungry / With Labelle Rouge (Poetry) - 7/17/2003 12:54:41 PM
Wow. This is excellent. Okay, now you tell us how you wrote this-it can't be that you and her were sitting on different computers, just putting this together?
Fantastic.
S
