Psych (Short Story) - 4/12/2026 4:08:31 AM
Kudos to you for your determination, strength, and resilience.
Psych (Short Story) - 4/10/2026 12:28:54 PM
It reads like an article, but it is your story. I cringed I read what you went through. Glad you are working your way through it, partly by writing your story.
My wife's first husband was such a fellow. She left me after three years, still suffering from what he had put her through. Finding that she married me, only to escape from him and from friends and family influenced by him.
Thankfully, ours was a mutual and uncontested separation. I sensed she was unhappy and let her go.
As I read your definition of a sociopath who my wife had schooled me on, I once again turned to the psyche of the president of the United States of America who seems to have a number of different psychoses that somehow, beyond my understanding, draw people into his fold of absolute loyallsts.
Ron
Psych (Short Story) - 4/10/2026 7:42:10 AM
A deep thrust into the costumes of deceit, especially as it pertains to marriage. There are many familiar thoughts in the insightful tapestry of woven choices of predatory minds and hearts. I can relate. Fortunately for you, me and others, there is or has been choice in how we adjust. It's rewarding for you, I'm sure, to know you had the courage to expose wrongs and to know: " Some day, I hope to free myself.
However, in the meantime; the leash has been cut back as severely as it had to be;
My family are now free. The predator has no more leverage through them." Lessons learned are often painful, but to learn affords the opportunity to avoid similar circumstances in the future. Wishing you smooth sailing.
Iron Roses - Clipped Wings (Short Story) - 5/28/2022 8:17:52 AM
Your poetry is better than ever. You have a poetic way of pulling your storyline into your poems so beautifully and artistically that it is like reading a fine painting of some bygone era.
But I'm having trouble linking the Darcy I read about with her neat little shop down by the seaside with what you are writing now. Is this something that came back from before, when she fled to the sea in the first place? I believe it may be. But I would have to go back to the first chapter and read again because I have mostly forgotten that part, it's been so long. Forgive me.
Strangely, I would like you to fill in something that happened between that shop and what you call "the middle part" so that there is a better translation for forgetful readers like me.
Ron
Tenant in 2C (Short Story) - 5/3/2022 8:41:07 AM
I sort of feel bad for this lonely woman, but she seems content in her own ways.
Well done! I like this story!
Sandie
Tenant in 2C (Short Story) - 5/1/2022 9:51:44 AM
Even when all one has is an alley cat that isn't friendly, one can dream of a cottage in a place where wild creatures like foxes find comfort comforting as well.
When I was young I lived in about 20 2Cs while in school dreaming of a place of my own. My first place was a beautiful little cottage on the hillside with stone slope holding walls and a stone fireplace overlooking a tropical looking acid blue green lake. That was lost when I had to move for a new job in a large southern city. While there, I built my dream home while living in another 2C. Nestled in a forest and overlooking a pond full of fish, with raccoons and squirrels on my decks, I had arrived at my dream. Only to find that a new job took me to the concrete suburbs of a metropolis where the only wild creatures these days are cautious feral cats roaming my neighborhood in search of any tuna we would wish to throw out.
Ron
Tenant in 2C (Short Story) - 5/1/2022 4:07:19 AM
I enjoyed the story.
A Special Moment in Time. (Short Story) - 2/5/2019 2:49:56 PM
these are some our best and most truly romantic memories.
budd
A Special Moment in Time. (Short Story) - 12/18/2018 1:53:22 AM
Yours are more proof that the best moments in life are free. But you must be receptive to them. I could tell you of my time on the non-tourist side of Lake Zell in Austria, in a Pensione with a veranda extending out over the lake, with the Alps as a backdrop, sailboats on the lake, cool breezes, a bottle of Spatelese, a home-cooked meal, soft music, and--but I won't. The ending would be too rough on your readers' body parts. Sigh...
A Special Moment in Time. (Short Story) - 12/17/2018 8:28:48 AM
I beg to differ. There's a lot of romance in your recounting this wonderful experience with chocolate and the friendly beggar. Beautifully written and wonderfully remembered.
I can only compare it with experiencing chocolate from the Ghirardelli chocolate company in San Francisco and then, in a restaurant in Chinatown, having the owner's attentive poodle begging for a bit of my steak.
Who wouldn't fall for those big brown eyes?
Ron
A Special Moment in Time. (Short Story) - 12/16/2018 4:33:47 AM
A lovely memory to enrich one's senses!
A Special Moment in Time. (Short Story) - 12/15/2018 4:37:22 PM
I'm salivating at this gem of nostalgia you've shared with us. Have to read it again in the morning when I have my coffee and toast. Worth dreaming about Venice again.
Be A Grey Rock (Short Story) - 8/20/2018 3:11:53 AM
I haven't read part one, but feel the isolation and despair seeping through the surroundings you describe.
Be A Grey Rock (Short Story) - 8/6/2018 9:18:18 AM
I reread part one and am having trouble linking the two. Lucy may be young woman in the picture and the cause for you being thrown into the basement? A lot of questions from your beautifully written words. I'm also beginning to think this may be a novel and the parts may be chapters.
Looking back, "Be a gray rock," reminds me so much of my struggle with engineering graduate school listening to Simon and Garfunkel sing, "I am a rock," from my third-floor YMCA room in midwinter. Apropos to my mood. Your description of driving through the English countryside and encountering an angry, impatient driver (like the husband in the story) is so lifelike I felt I was riding along with you.
Ron
Be A Grey Rock (Short Story) - 8/5/2018 5:03:24 PM
No doubt! I have to go back to make sure that I read Part I!! This is good stuff!
Love ya!
Jane
Be A Grey Rock (Short Story) - 8/5/2018 1:36:06 PM
Reading this, I couldn't help flashing on my memories of "Mullholland Dr." a film by David Lynch in 2001 that posits imaginative dreams and reality after a car accident renders a woman amnesiac. Yet, having read part 2, I think your story took a turn that delved even more intrinsically with the minds ability to work imagination with the unexpected in order to deal with reality that is difficult to accept.
Be A Grey Rock (Short Story) - 8/5/2018 1:27:27 PM
Even though a part 2 (i have to read part 1 now) this is a stand alone compelling read. Imagination seems boundless in your penning of this personification of inert surroundings coming to life. Thoroughly enjoyed these few magical moments of wordsmithing. Thank you.
Be A Grey Rock (Short Story) - 7/15/2018 10:01:00 AM
Since this is only part one, I am surprised by Lucy at the end. What made that gray rock disappear? A smile? The title would suggest that Red is on her way to a boring job along a very familiar path. But the end of this part seems to blow that theory out of my head. I am pleased that you chose Jazz as the name of Red's furry friend. If you don't know why, here is my story about a dog named Jazz.
http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewshortstory.asp?id=3718&authorid=3918
Ron
Be A Grey Rock (Short Story) - 7/15/2018 2:58:22 AM
Lucy has come full circle...
Be A Grey Rock (Short Story) - 7/14/2018 7:21:40 PM
So cool in a round about way. You took me deep.
Love ya!
Jane
Be A Grey Rock (Short Story) - 7/14/2018 6:23:50 PM
It is all a matter of perception, for the most part. Don't ya think?
Be A Grey Rock (Short Story) - 7/14/2018 4:42:04 PM
I can identify with Red. I keep my vocal chords in tune to "I won't dance" while imagining Jane Monheit and I are actually dancing..or something. Glad to see you are getting back into the thick of things, Ruan. Good for your spirit--and mine.
Warm regards, Ed
Meanwhile, at dawn (Short Story) - 5/10/2018 8:56:08 PM
Great twist in your snippet just as life's turns which this is a fine example of. Life is not what it seems.
Love ya!
Jane
Meanwhile, at dawn (Short Story) - 5/6/2018 9:13:04 AM
Time and tide doesn't wait for anyone, nor does it sympathize. Hopefully, you'll get more miles out of the tractor.
The Loss of Something Precious (Article) - 2/8/2026 3:31:07 PM
Such a beautiful tribute to your precious Jake. Our animals aren't pets they are family and we treat them as family. They love us unconditionally and we pray that they understand that they are loved that way. I am sorry he had to go but we cannot watch our fur babies suffer.
Rose
The Loss of Something Precious (Article) - 12/27/2014 10:47:03 AM
~Ruan~
A beautiful dog your "Jake." Wonderful and so loving a companion.
He has brought blessings untold for you to hold precious.
Lady Mary Ann
The Loss of Something Precious (Article) - 12/26/2014 8:52:14 AM
I hope in his own dog way, he can read what you've written. My twin brother lost his wife last March in a fall and is taking it quite well. Now relies on Rocky, his golden retriever for companionship. But Rocky is getting old and will die soon. Such is the way with dogs, they tend to die before we do. My little Pomeranian, Jazz, was killed by a larger dog. I wrote about his death here in the story section. It was one of the most traumatic experiences I've ever had.
It is strange that we can easily euthanize our pets to ease their pain, but we can't do the same for our elderly parents or siblings when they are suffering so much.
Ron
The Loss of Something Precious (Article) - 12/25/2014 6:47:09 PM
What a beautiful tribute. Pets bring us love at a time when we need it most. They never waiver in their loyalty, ask for nothing in return, and will actually defend us to the death if necessary. I have never met a human who would do half as much. I know your loss. Research into the subject convinces me that Jakey Boy is alive and well and waiting for you on the other side. It's a bond that cannot be broken.
The Loss of Something Precious (Article) - 12/25/2014 4:23:06 PM
What a beautiful, but sad, tribute, Ruan. I have been down that road also, and there is nothing in the world quite like losing a dog who loves you completely. Please. Get another one.
The Loss of Something Precious (Article) - 12/25/2014 3:59:18 PM
There are few subjects of sentiment (void of sentimentality) that move me, but a dog... Well, they are special beings. I so can relate to your sadness, your decision, your intelligence and expansive heart. I lost two labs. One with brain cancer, the other, I speculate, by a broken heart, passing as he did in his sleep so soon after. You've penned a heroic dedication to Jake, and with that, I trust you'll have closure in a resolute and calm way. Wishing you well. Odin
Time Waster (Article) - 10/29/2014 6:22:33 PM
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Time Waster (Article) - 10/27/2014 2:36:04 PM
I wish I could help....I husband takes care of the
stuff I can't.
Always,
Deborah
Time Waster (Article) - 10/27/2014 11:24:18 AM
The original computers with a simple GUI (graphical user interface) were introduced by Apple around 1985. Programmers for mainframes and minicomputers scoffed at these devices as being just toys. However, Apple got Microsoft to make a word processor, MS Word, and spreadsheet program, MS Excel, and a presentation program, MS PowerPoint, as well as some powerful drawing and painting programs, like McDraw, and McPaint. It took a long time for these programs to reach the public, but I used them from the beginning to do engineering and business work very fast and accurately. Computer geeks with keyboard skills continue to scoff and work with inferior software by typing a lot, ridiculing the mouse.
By 1993 or so, Microsoft realized that it was losing ground and created Windows, a copy of the Apple GUI. In order to make money, the people that created these powerful, yet simple application programs, polled their clientele and asked what could be added. What they learned was added in the next version. Each upgrade required additional cost and much more complexity. Hence, while I spent more on each upgrade, I usually found more problems and difficulties operating the newer, but harder to use, offerings. Now, with the Internet and new applications or "apps" being generated at lightning speed, along with many experimental interfaces to the Internet and each other (social uses rather than straight business) we have a very complex and dysfunctional computer system(s)r out there for everyone to get frustrated with. I have an older computer in the house that I use for all my heavy work, and this newer one for social networking like AD. Got the best of both worlds.
Ron
PS. Beware of upgrades… They can be huge app killers!
Time Waster (Article) - 10/27/2014 7:33:46 AM
Meanwhile, on the other side of your equation, Bill Gates has cashed in well over $1 billion of Microsoft shares this year, the same for the boys at Apple. But not to fear, your technical issues have been outsourced to Pakistan or India where you will find they read a script offering to fix all your problems for a mere $349.95. But if you want a list of new techno terms for instructing all of them where and how to insert their creations into their ugly body parts, call me.
Time Waster (Article) - 10/27/2014 5:21:38 AM
Sounds like Windows 8 to me. I had one. After two months of going insane, and to save my sanity, I sold it and bought a reconstructed computer with Windows 7. Life is better. I really feel for you, because I KNOW what you are going through.
Are you letting your Vet poison your best buddies? (Article) - 9/22/2014 6:16:28 AM
Interesting and useful information.
I only had one dog, a Pomeranian. He got his shots annually and was always very fearful of going to the vet. I have to thank the vet for providing me with monthly heart worm and flea pills that were all he needed to stay healthy and recover on his own from three dog attacks where he was severely injured until he was finally killed by the last one, the same dog that had attacked him the year before. I never gave him vitamins or any antibiotics and he was very lean, mean, and active at over 10 years.
Ron
The Lunacy of the English Language (Article) - 3/13/2013 3:33:09 PM
yes it is a crazy language--I can understand why people from a foreign country when they come to North America tell me that English is so hard to pick up--and all this slang and manner of expressions is proof of that-I am from the Maritime provinces and if you ever go into say a bar in Newfoundland you will think you are losing your mind as some of the locals have their own shall we say " unique " way of expressing themselves--their accent is wild
The Lunacy of the English Language (Article) - 6/26/2012 11:40:08 AM
Yes, English is a crazy language. I have spent a lot of time in Korea. Hangul is the written portion on the Korean language. One can actualy learn to read it in a matter of days. English takes a lifetime.
The Plague of Mankind (Article) - 4/4/2012 6:50:07 PM
Ruan,
Bravo! The Planet will fight back as it has in eons past and although nature may be altered its existance has been many times longer than ours. bravo again!
budd
The Plague of Mankind (Article) - 3/15/2012 8:59:51 AM
Wow Ruan.
We certainly are looking out the same window!!!
Bless you.
John
One's Best Ally. (Poetry) - 8/30/2026 2:27:43 AM
What a rare talent! I could read your postings well into the night and treasure every word. I hope all is well and stays that way.
The Watcher (Poetry) - 7/21/2026 10:54:52 AM
What an accurate rendition of what the time bandit, the city, does to people. The long commute. The rush from the station to the building. Arriving at the cubicle. Going through the same routine day after day, month after month, year after year. Until one is shoved out by efficiency, innovation and age.
So many end up without enough retirement to live any of the dreams they had when they were young and came to the city to become someone.
Ron
The Watcher (Poetry) - 7/21/2026 9:36:38 AM
Well expressed. Some unique imagery too. I've been an observer (watcher) since I was a child. Observing, I've discovered, is both a pragmatic skill and a philosophical practice that invites us to slow down, notice details, and to hopefully understand more objectively how human beings deal with their choices, and also how they interface with each other. Observing can be quite an experience at times; both good and bad. r
An 'Alternative Perspective' (Poetry) - 4/14/2026 12:10:26 PM
I have never, ever, been faced with the dread that you portray in this descriptive poem of your plight.
So, it is difficult for me to identify with your descriptive words here attempting to reveal what you went through. I sense that it was more mental than physical. But if physical, it wasn't specific like some of your early writings that I loved to read, thinking I was there with you.
Now, I'm lost to help you find the alternative you're looking for.
Ron
Only the Good Souls (Poetry) - 2/8/2026 3:18:03 PM
I am enjoying how you write Ruan. Yes we stay away from those who greedily to feed his own hunger. Thank you for your words and I like the picture you used.
Rose
One's Best Ally. (Poetry) - 2/8/2026 3:10:40 PM
Wow Ruan you took me back with you, rememberance of yesteryears. Thank you for sharing.
Rose
Moon Calling (Poetry) - 1/28/2026 10:53:53 PM
HOW BEAUTIFUL, YES...THE MOON! CREATED TO CALL US...TO A HIGHER PLACE AND ALL NATURE...KNOWS IT! SUCH A FINE WORK, THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS.
One's Best Ally. (Poetry) - 1/28/2026 10:48:05 PM
MY, WHAT A GREAT SHARING, RUAN...! A 'TOUCHING PAINTING' OF ONE WHO REMEMBERS A STRENGTH OF LONG-AGO. INDEED, THE PERSEVERENCE THAT USHERED THEM THROUGH YESTERDAY'S MADNESS, WHICH 'STILL' ENABLES THEM TO GO ON STANDING TODAY. IN HINES SITE; YESTERDAY, THERE WAS NO NAME FOR THE MIRACULOUS STRENGTH OF 'ALLY'. BUT, TODAY...WE KNOW HIS NAME. ENOYED, VERY MUCH. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS
Smart Thinking (Poetry) - 1/27/2026 9:27:45 AM
I enjoy rhyming and I enjoyed your words you have shared. There was soon a solution to her problem.
Rose
The Gathering of Joy (Poetry) - 1/27/2026 8:10:02 AM
I enjoy rhyming with most of my poetry. I truly enjoyed your words which said a lot and took us along with you. Thank you for sharing.
Rose
Moon Calling (Poetry) - 1/26/2026 1:54:11 PM
So much can be gleaned from this glimpse at the wonder of night time, whether conscious or born in a nocturnal dream. To reserve the moments of such clarity, to have it as part of one's appreciation and thankfulness for the cognitive ability to coordinate the thought into such meaningful words is a gift. Keep it coming.
Moon Calling (Poetry) - 1/26/2026 9:51:36 AM
So beautiful, the way you expressed your kinship in the moonlight with the hare. Wish I were there.
I remember so many moonlit nights, especially when it was warm, that were magical to be out in. To meet a creature like the hare makes it doubly so. I remember dangerous dogs that would come up to me to be petted as though I were a friend in the night.
Previously, while commenting on your last poem, I mentioned Little Boy, our friendly squirrel that always seems to ask permission for us to give him nuts.
Ron
The Gathering of Joy (Poetry) - 1/26/2026 9:33:19 AM
Why I follow you. Your way with words is exceptional, especially in poetry like this where you describe a scene so vividly and personal that the reader feels they are there.
I only wish you had revealed what bird this is, because I have been unable identify it from the photo provided.
Every morning we are greeted with joyful black chined sparrows who gather at our birdfeeder. Especially this morning because it's our first freeze and they are very hungry to ward off the cold.
And, we have a group of feral furry ones who watch intently from the sidelines, hoping to find a young bird a bit careless that they can snatch from life. Overhead there are hawks, they do the same. Nature’s way of keeping things in balance.
The Gathering of Joy (Poetry) - 1/25/2026 11:46:54 AM
Your work always brings a smile of joy to my face. Here you've shown once again that rhyme poetry is easy and effective in the hands of someone who knows the difference between forced rhymes and what is always present in your work, organic choice of words, and a steady adherence to rhythm. Keep up the excellent work and bring us more joy... it is in short supply nowadays.
Only the Good Souls (Poetry) - 1/27/2025 4:13:15 AM
I just read your poem on daffodils, your quite the poet Ruan, worth reading and digesting. lol, I love all your poems so far and hope to read more. I stay away from sociopaths of any kind lol, thank you for this one too, be well :)
It's all a question of balance. (Poetry) - 1/23/2025 12:47:08 PM
I don't know how I missed this lovely poem that simply exudes charm, and life, and beauty. It has your name, and talent all over it. But of course, there is only one Ruan, creator of prose and poetry, who elevates every person, place, and thing she touches. You touched me long ago.
Only the Good Souls (Poetry) - 12/7/2024 8:32:05 AM
A fascinating compilation of thought and perception. I assume most everyone knows he or she has a similar experience... either past or coming in the future. For as you say, "If only she could slay the vampire
...feeding from her, greedily" reminds us we all have to dodge that bullet when its fired.
It's all a question of balance. (Poetry) - 11/30/2024 1:45:56 PM
Truly, the primary human view of nature. But what seems tranquil, is really not.
When observed closely, all life is a grim struggle to exist, to survive, to the next generation. Fighting for a niche in the complex environment. Almost everything eats everything else. And homo sapiens is the top predator on the planet, eating almost everything and usually what's left to create wealth and prosperity.
If humans knew that, we would stop over populating and over using scarce resources until they are extinct. If we don't stop, we will soon follow.
Ron
It's all a question of balance. (Poetry) - 11/30/2024 9:21:11 AM
It's always an unexpected reward when I search for a poem that is worthy of many comments. Here, again, you have given one of life's most demanding conundrums simple eloquence and grace. Namaste.
Sum Total (Poetry) - 11/28/2024 11:46:58 AM
You have reached the core of the matter. We have come from this good earth. And although we will probably leave her, we can never really leave from our origin.
I am ever hopeful that we will be able to return our home to a more stable existence before we leave.
Ron
Sum Total (Poetry) - 11/26/2024 11:19:28 AM
Your logic is impeccable, Ruan. Your vision, flawless. Your soul is in a good place. Your writing, brilliant. Ed
Sum Total (Poetry) - 11/24/2024 7:02:08 AM
Your words describe the thought I have that we are a part of the earth's vibration and that we are grounded by that vibe. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece of work!!
Love ya!
Jane
A Different Drum (Poetry) - 11/22/2024 10:46:05 AM
Considering the state of this world right now, this is a very apt and timely write. Love, peace, and blessings to you, Ruan,
Regis. 🙏🌸🦋🍂
Parseltongue (Poetry) - 12/31/2023 7:50:58 PM
Thank you for teaching me something new. I always keep an open mind and love learning. This is well-written, engaging, and meaningful. Love, peace, and best wishes to you, Ruan,
Regis. 🙏🌸
Parseltongue (Poetry) - 12/31/2023 2:08:32 AM
I would know your words from a mile away.
So honest, and charming, with British flair.
They knock me for a loop every time.
Parseltongue (Poetry) - 12/17/2023 4:34:18 AM
This is so well written and creatively shared Ruan, a job well done. :)
Parseltongue (Poetry) - 12/16/2023 10:20:17 AM
Thank you for the education of the term, parseltongue. I certainly spotted the word, parse and realized what you are referring to. When I was only a kid, Native Americans in those days who still don't mind being called, Indians, referred to the officials from Washington DC as, "White men who speak with forked tongue."
Yes, doublespeak, innuendo, half-truths and downright lies are the mainstay of politics these days. Solving few problems, throwing a lot of money at keeping the problems going, and generally pitting citizens against one another over trivial pursuits.
Ron
Parseltongue (Poetry) - 12/16/2023 6:40:58 AM
Giving this a second read was as impactful as the first. Society, a huge part, is of this description. And, unfortunately, much of it comes from the top... top of our social structure governance. Your choice of descriptive layering was spot on, and the Parseltongue was thoroughly poeticized. Great work. Thanks for posting
A Different Drum (Poetry) - 11/2/2023 7:32:44 AM
I'm no expert at drum beats, discordant or otherwise.
But I can spot a gem from a mile away. This one sparkles.
And glows. And purrs. With talent.
A Different Drum (Poetry) - 10/31/2023 7:37:45 AM
As well you should. Marching to a different drum should be the outcry of the world's population, if for no other reason... as you say, we're not cattle-drive driven by a few... until, and as long as we are. Far too many turn in their identity having been convinced they're someone else. An arresting write and one more should read.
Summertime (Poetry) - 9/5/2023 10:43:15 AM
Beautifully penned Ruan. Your Border Collie is precious, one of the prettiest I've ever seen.
Summertime (Poetry) - 7/28/2023 9:09:07 AM
Stunning!
Summertime (Poetry) - 6/13/2023 12:05:25 PM
A perfect acrostic! I could feel summer and every word.
Lately I have been singing the old classic from Porgy and Bess, Summertime. In the days that it portrays slaves sweating under the hot sun made it possible the rich to relax and linger in the summer without a care in the world.
Ron
Summertime (Poetry) - 6/13/2023 5:09:14 AM
Beautiful!
Smart Thinking (Poetry) - 4/1/2023 3:04:24 PM
Your words enforce my belief that there are no problems, only solutions. I enjoyed reading this so I read it a few times..........and perhaps again!!
Love ya!
Jane
What more of a Tethered Yacht (Poetry) - 3/23/2023 11:58:17 AM
What a perfect record of a storm. Beautifully penned, Ruan.0
What more of a Tethered Yacht (Poetry) - 3/22/2023 8:48:55 AM
This has GOT to be one of your best, Ruan! "free at alst,"!!! I love it!
Love ya!
Jane
What more of a Tethered Yacht (Poetry) - 3/20/2023 8:25:52 PM
This is so beautifully etched in my mind long after the read, amazing work !
Ever-decreasing Echoes (Poetry) - 2/22/2023 8:40:46 AM
Yes, power begets more power, until it is powerless and falls. Why is that a human being so easily tracked by grandiose thoughts of greatness and greed? What is to gain from such narcissistic behavior? Beauty always phase with age, but wisdom grows.
You cut right to the chase, down to the nitty-gritty with this one. Beautiful imagery.
Ron
Pinnacle (Poetry) - 2/20/2023 11:46:13 AM
Beautiful and harmonious writing. Good message sent as well.
Pinnacle (Poetry) - 2/20/2023 11:28:58 AM
Reminds me of Silent Spring. Your mournful tale of how the earth feels about what we are doing to it and ourselves as we continue operating as though nothing is wrong with the way we are living and breeding as though all life was only us, more and more of us, richer and richer us, until we are all gone. And, as your poem suggests, the earth and all of its creatures continue on without the annoyance of us.
Beautifully written and so creative!
Ron
A Teatime Treat, with The Nonsense Party… (Poetry) - 2/11/2023 10:10:24 AM
You must've taken a long time to come up with this delightful tea time tryst of sorts. Loving every line I gobbled it up with the tea washing it down before the tea got cold. This one is never old. At teatime every day I will be one more just to perk me up for the day at hand.
Loverly, simply loverly.
Ron
A Teatime Treat, with The Nonsense Party… (Poetry) - 2/11/2023 7:29:43 AM
Your perky lines have the right lilt and punch, but they make for much disentanglement in the mind owing to the names of the players and their sumptuous roles. A fine skit that could fill in the intervals during a tragi-comic long-drawn out theatre play. Your words maintain a musical ditty sufficient in itself. Kudos! TW
Perspective (Poetry) - 11/29/2022 4:12:01 AM
Beautiful and introspective, I really enjoyed this Ruan
Perspective (Poetry) - 11/28/2022 9:46:46 AM
Your poetry has a kind of old world character to it, like some of the great poets of the past.
You also impart wisdom. In this poem the last stanza in particular, showing how we dream very much alike whether we know it or not.
Ron
Perspective (Poetry) - 11/28/2022 9:00:59 AM
A deep and allegorical journey for your readers that, if like me, find energizing and fulfilling. Maintain your faith in the "dreamer's eye" for within that state of mind waits realization.
Perspective (Poetry) - 11/27/2022 12:06:32 PM
Very true, and very well written.
Consequences (Poetry) - 11/27/2022 7:14:22 AM
Beautiful.
Consequences (Poetry) - 11/26/2022 9:08:25 AM
Your poetry is so unique and distinctive, that I can recognize it even if your name is not attached. In this particular poignant piece, your perfect rhyming and storytelling approach leads to that final line that is what it is, so true. And so worth reading over and over
It's really tough to have a bad start in life that can even become generational.
Ron
Consequences (Poetry) - 11/26/2022 7:41:46 AM
This is a top-shelf rendering of life's issues and challenges, with insight to its possibilities, revealed in words and style that bespeak wisdom. Another gift, another gem.
The Grid (Poetry) - 10/31/2022 10:41:16 AM
You paint a dismal picture of the world we are living in. But thankfully, near the end tell us the way out of the dilemma facing those who are tied to the grid by their screens.
For me the grid is a mixed blessing. I welcome it, but despise what it does to people and to our planet when we build such riffs between us in the process and can look the other way, not seeing the destruction for real.
As I became more paralyzed, I had to rely on technology more. For example, about 1998 I could no longer write either cursive or architectural lettering anymore, even though I had been able to keep secretaries busy with my architectural lettering. I can only type with one finger so typing was very slow until I got IBM Via Voice and wrote my second novel using the technology in 2001, followed by 13 others only possible, like this comment, by an array microphone and this screen that I'm so dependent upon. The air-conditioning and natural gas heat that keeps me warm and cool when necessary and the temperature gets beyond my body to control.
Both my professional and avocational career has been enhanced by high technology. I've even driven two highly modified vans, thanks to state funding that were more like flying a plane then driving a car for 165,000 miles over 19 years of extended ability to interact with people as a result.
Like you, I constantly warn about what we are doing to our earth as we move into new areas of technology without a thought of the consequences. Alex is right. Living off the grid is terribly difficult and actually isolates people from others. And it's destructive to the planet like preppers who foolishly think they can outlast major cataclysms by merely storing stuff. The answer is more efficient cities that do not rely on fossil fuels. It is as simple as that. we need to return farmland to wilderness and stop overfishing that over harvesting wild resources.
Ron
Schrodinger’s Heart (Poetry) - 10/22/2022 3:50:45 PM
ooh that was a clever last line. i love that. thank you for writing this piece. i would love to read more of him. it feels like his story is just unfolding.
Schrodinger’s Heart (Poetry) - 10/22/2022 12:54:48 PM
Thank you for your explanation of who Schrodinger was it helps a bit. What appears to be rather unflattering tribute to his life and times. And the first line and lash line refer to is paradoxical question to be answered before one looks in the box. Almost feels more like philosophy than physics. I'm afraid my simple, practical mind doesn't wrap well around it.
Ron
Lightning’s Eye - inspiration’s looking glass (Poetry) - 10/12/2022 1:44:13 PM
So smooth to read and the transitions are wonderful leading me down the poem to its ultimate conclusion. Beautiful.
Ron
In the words of a man more insightful than I (Poetry) - 9/30/2022 6:26:33 PM
A piece worthy of reflection, and thought-provoking. Love, peace, and best wishes to you, Ruan.
Regis 🙏🌷
In the words of a man more insightful than I (Poetry) - 9/27/2022 7:52:00 AM
You are far more knowledgeable of Greek mythology than I and even of 60s musicology, but I gathered from the conclusion that the essence of your poem was, "Com'n people now, let's get together, try to love one another, right now!" (The Youngbloods)
Ron
Oblivious (Poetry) - 9/17/2022 12:29:00 PM
Truth often comes in imagination-generated observations. Here, indeed, is one of them. Write on.
Oblivious (Poetry) - 9/17/2022 10:10:28 AM
If there were a Nobel Prize for poetry,
I'd nominate you.
Oblivious (Poetry) - 9/17/2022 8:03:36 AM
It's hard to miss that statue of a fawn, but we do, now most of us living in hectic cities and connected only by Internet and television to the outer world rarely get in touch with nature anymore. And nature is suffering while we don't see it.
Charitable organizations like The Nature Conservancy and others, are busy buying up private property, creating new wilderness and pathways for wildlife all around the world. Hopefully, helping indigenous people survive and letting tourism take the place of abusive practices from the past.
So that people will be no longer oblivious to nature's plight.
Ron
Oblivious (Poetry) - 9/15/2022 8:20:30 PM
this piece was soothing and refreshing. i loved it. thank you.
His Grip of Iron (Poetry) - 8/15/2022 10:50:48 AM
Hide like steel, heart of gold. You're indestructible!
His Grip of Iron (Poetry) - 8/13/2022 8:26:36 AM
Whatever this devil is, you have penned a mighty ode to your battle with him in a very few, but very biting and truer than true words.
Kudos to the best poem I read in many a day…
Ron
His Grip of Iron (Poetry) - 8/11/2022 8:11:52 PM
always and of course. such beauty in our Spirits to make art our of our melancholies. thank you for writing this.
His Grip of Iron (Poetry) - 8/11/2022 2:29:37 PM
We seem to be living in such a threatening world that escaping from the pandemic of demons is well near impossible. Your poem, in a very adroit fashion, points out that one's objective sense of right and wrong, love and hate, et al are impacted and often overwhelmed with the subjective experiences that are becoming more and more prevalent. It used to be we could go to the movies and fantasize any number of ways. Today, our everyday life is exposing us to those fantasies as realities. Yes... there is forgiveness, even when your smile becomes a frown, for you are steadfast in your conscious pursuit of healing. Stay with it.
Message in scarlet (Poetry) - 7/19/2022 9:53:31 AM
Those poppies are indeed, brilliant, like your poem.
Ron
Message in scarlet (Poetry) - 7/18/2022 6:16:05 PM
sweet, succinct and pure bliss- what this piece is. thank you.
What of a Tethered Yacht: (Poetry) - 7/7/2022 9:21:23 AM
Perfect words to a classic painting. It's good to see you
back in great writing form.
What of a Tethered Yacht: (Poetry) - 5/11/2022 8:53:06 AM
Oh! I hope and pray she breaks free!!! Sequel, please, Sir!!
Love ya!
Jane
What of a Tethered Yacht: (Poetry) - 5/8/2022 10:04:53 AM
A wonderful piece of personification. One rarely thinks of such aspects dependant on nature and less on man for its freedom. There is so much life even in the forgotten.
What of a Tethered Yacht: (Poetry) - 5/8/2022 7:58:40 AM
A wonderful personification or allegory for anyone who is encumbered by circumstance and waiting for some kind of hypothetical "storm" to alter the situation and free up whoever's in bondage. Great job. You really have a gift for nautical nomenclature.
Ron
Hidden in the Hawthorn (Poetry) - 5/5/2022 5:00:16 PM
Absolutely delightful!
So cleverly written…
Diana…🍃
Hidden in the Hawthorn (Poetry) - 5/4/2022 2:15:29 PM
I never understood the passion for hats. But I guess any well-dressed fairy would certainly be the appropriate hat for the occasion.
Cool write,
Ron
Secrets of the Blue Bells (Poetry) - 5/4/2022 9:27:37 AM
I LOVE this poem, Ruan. So unique and imaginative.
Secrets of the Blue Bells (Poetry) - 4/25/2022 2:23:25 PM
After reading this, I can't wait to get back on the trails in this area and just sit on a log and breathe deep. This is beautiful work!!
Love ya!
Jane
Secrets of the Blue Bells (Poetry) - 4/24/2022 1:54:12 AM
Absolutely delightful!!
My English Bluebells are flowering at the moment…
Every time I look at them I shall think of this beautiful
Poem…for Natures artwork is sheer perfection…
Best wishes,
Diana…🍃
Secrets of the Blue Bells (Poetry) - 4/23/2022 9:32:03 AM
Wonderful, fanciful spring flirting with flowers.
I have not had the pleasure of seeing bluebells, but I have seen bluebonnets turn the whole landscape blue. May those wonders of short-lived spring flowers never die.
Ron
Fact or fiction (Poetry) - 4/20/2022 9:01:09 AM
I believe you make some very valid points, Ruan. Well done! Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Regis. 🙏📘📚📖🦉
Fact or fiction (Poetry) - 4/16/2022 11:50:22 AM
So true. And told with skill, much insight, and with immpecably good taste.
Fact or fiction (Poetry) - 4/16/2022 11:35:00 AM
This is spot on, covert operations being devised every day.
Fact or fiction (Poetry) - 4/13/2022 9:56:55 AM
Good journalism is still alive in mainstream media. One way to tell is to listen to the so-called experts and see if they're pushing an agenda. The purpose of many media sources is to dig into history and try to prove certain mysteries about the past that never were true but are indoctrinated in many people's minds as true, having heard the stories from early in life when the brain is open to almost anything.
Ron
''Bated Breath'' (Poetry) - 4/12/2022 12:12:47 PM
The lift I needed today.
Wonderful.
John
''Bated Breath'' (Poetry) - 4/12/2022 9:58:06 AM
A powerful message that I believe I understand. So many seem to choose denial over the truth, slowing the progress of humanity greatly. Beautifully written in the sands of time.
Without looking in the dictionary, I've always wondered what "bated" breath meant. Is it holding one's breath waiting for a time when it can be released? Probably the correct answer. Or is it a kind of baited breath, that draws dogs and repels other humans for its offensiveness… Probably not, but interesting to consider. ;-)
Ron
''Bated Breath'' (Poetry) - 4/11/2022 3:37:53 PM
May your fighting spirit always rise above the dark sands of time,
and my you always win every fight Ruan, beautiful poem. :)
Those daffodils (Poetry) - 3/23/2022 8:58:42 PM
I'm back just the same and enjoying
every word.
Those daffodils (Poetry) - 3/21/2022 9:29:40 AM
If I am to guess, you are in this poem, ironically and metaphorically describing the horrifying events in Ukraine.
Ron
Those daffodils (Poetry) - 3/21/2022 8:15:24 AM
These are moving and meaningful verses that are apt and timely and in tune with the season and the sad state of affairs in this world. Love, peace and best wishes to you, Ruan,
Regis. 🙏🌳💚🌲🍁
Hidden Treasure (Poetry) - 2/26/2022 1:05:40 PM
“….no fickle footstep may tread” I like the way that is worded. When I look at this photograph, I think the word ‘hiding.’ Some real peacefulness that. ~~ djl
Hidden Treasure (Poetry) - 2/26/2022 12:14:09 PM
I want to live there!
Ron
Hidden Treasure (Poetry) - 2/25/2022 5:41:22 AM
Some treasures should remain hidden. Lovely poem, Ruan.
Brave Enlightenment (Poetry) - 2/5/2022 4:56:46 PM
I find so much beautiful language in this writing, but the content, the concept is even more gorgeous. Good title, fascinating photograph. That last stanza is a velvety finish full of positivity. Thank you* ~~ djl
Brave Enlightenment (Poetry) - 2/2/2022 12:38:37 PM
Written with the wisdom of a Sage! Change is inevitable. Life is how we deal with it.
Kudos+
Ron
Brave Enlightenment (Poetry) - 2/2/2022 8:52:52 AM
Nice flow to these verses and a wise message is shared through them. Love and best wishes to you, Ruan,
Regis. 🌳🌲💚🍁
A Season of Change (Poetry) - 1/11/2022 5:55:03 PM
A joyous and meaningful poem.
A Season of Change (Poetry) - 1/2/2022 3:00:24 PM
There is a lovely flow to this poem and your theme is a treasure, the meaning of which all should try to reach. Love, peace, and best wishes to you, Ruan.
Regis. 🙏🌳🌲💚🌺
A Season of Change (Poetry) - 12/13/2021 5:57:36 AM
This needs only a melody and
you will be a songwriting phenom.
A Season of Change (Poetry) - 12/12/2021 1:57:32 PM
Very lovely last six lines to finish this poem of the age. Love the “Then sheath all your sabers/And value your neighbours”. that is spot on. ~~ djl
A Season of Change (Poetry) - 12/8/2021 7:05:44 AM
Your poem sums up the many ways this season reminds us of our potential and of our lack of action. Well penned, Ruan.
A Season of Change (Poetry) - 12/7/2021 12:07:49 PM
We certainly are going through changes. But that does not mean that the world is going to hell as so many would like us to believe. This December, we have an opportunity as your poem describes, to mend fences and once again be joyous during this season that can't help but be joyous, giving and loving.
Ron
A Ghost of Christmas. (Poetry) - 12/4/2021 8:23:05 AM
Excellently written! Rhyming perfect…
A sad tale but with a sprinkling of festive Hope
for better times ahead..
I enjoyed this…a lot!
Best wishes,
Diana…🥲🌲
A Ghost of Christmas. (Poetry) - 12/3/2021 1:52:12 PM
You convinced me with this sad poem about how the ghost of Christmas was checking in on a lonely lady. Very well done!
Ron
A Ghost of Christmas. (Poetry) - 12/3/2021 12:08:45 AM
This poem works well whether as an introspection
or as a kind and loving verse about someone you love.
Either way, I applaud your skills and your humanity.
A Ghost of Christmas. (Poetry) - 12/1/2021 1:13:27 PM
You have proved over and over again that even a tried and proven devotee of free verse poetry can be swayed when the lyricism and rhyme is so perfectly formed and can be read out loud without the fear of sounding like a Roses are Red et al labored "gotta find a word to rhyme" at any cost. Just expertly done, as I said, "as usual." Kudos.
A Ghost of Christmas. (Poetry) - 12/1/2021 9:00:49 AM
Sad and yet with a gold dust glimmer of hope for better times. And yes, this world is very callous at times. Love, peace, and best wishes to you, Ruan.
Regis 🙏🌲🌳⛄🍁
ABOUT TURN (Poetry) - 11/15/2021 3:14:43 PM
I thank God for brave ones such as these
ABOUT TURN (Poetry) - 11/14/2021 10:56:36 AM
A great takeoff from my poem. The biting reality of those that march in step to a drum beat as though they were zombies, not knowing what they do.
Another way to look at it is Heilbroner's analogy of the world population all riding on the same train headed for the brink. The poorest in the front of the train going off the cliff first, but the wealthy, thinking they are safe in the rear of the train, are pulled off with a rich with no regard for their status for financial power.
Ron
ABOUT TURN (Poetry) - 11/13/2021 12:46:15 PM
A poem that I find stark, harsh, apt, and very real in theme. Your words make me think of the conference on climate change being held in Glasgow, Scotland and soon coming to an end, sadly seemingly without any "tangible" progress. I do like the way your poem flows and the use of the anaphora (repetition of words or lines in poetry) I believe it is called. Love, peace, and best wishes to you, Ruan,
Regis. 🙏🌲💚🌳🍁
ABOUT TURN (Poetry) - 11/13/2021 7:59:39 AM
“About Face!” is the drill sergeant’s command. And a sharp pivot and 180 degree body turn is the only soldierly response. But “About Turn,” and “yup” are humorous attention getters. As if this poem needs one. The masterful use of language appears with every word. The poet holds your attention from beginning to end with her attention to detail. Even the technique of ending and beginning each stanza with identical words is a clever way to force the reader to follow the flow of the message. And so, like soldiers we obey. Right to the end. Our confidence is stripped away, however, when we find too late that we’ve been led over the cliff like lemmings, aka soldiers. And for what purpose? To show us the outcome of what being a mindless follower can lead to from the point of view of the “select few.” Should we wake up before it’s too late? yup.
ABOUT TURN (Poetry) - 11/12/2021 10:07:59 PM
Wonderful poem ... this particular form is really quite enjoyable. I can't put a name to the form despite several minutes trying to find a bit of info online. Excellently written beginning to end.
Interesting perspective concerning the men and women in the armed forces.
Enjoyed reading ...
jeanne
Simple Pleasures (Poetry) - 10/16/2021 3:12:19 AM
What a beautiful little bug, but I would hate for it to splatter over my car windshield as it would be hell to clean it off, excellent write...-e-
Simple Pleasures (Poetry) - 10/7/2021 1:25:09 PM
ahhh yes, she is. so well portraied here
Simple Pleasures (Poetry) - 10/3/2021 6:53:24 AM
Your command of just the right adjectives to use here is truly impressive. Just the modifiers themselves could make a poem. You are gifed. Keep writing.
Simple Pleasures (Poetry) - 9/22/2021 2:59:30 PM
Being a butterfly lover, I photograph butterflies and this one is a beauty indeed!! I love your words as well!!
Love ya!
Jane
Simple Pleasures (Poetry) - 9/22/2021 9:56:47 AM
I had to look her up. Finding that she resides in Wales! She is certainly stunningly beautiful and your poem describes her so well and as beautifully as words can do.
Kudos to you.
Lately I've been watching our resident beauties. The giant swallowtail and the black swallowtail. Perhaps I need to write a poem about them. But I doubt if I could do as well as you have.
Ron
The Mirror of Shcragilo (Poetry) - 8/28/2021 9:14:55 AM
An intriguing piece (with a classic feel) that allows the reader more than one determination. For me: I see someone finally breaking free from a long struggle (mental and emotional) that has kept them in chains for far too long. Enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing. rlc
The Mirror of Shcragilo (Poetry) - 8/25/2021 9:36:41 AM
What a masterful poem! That shows so much the right way to go. Now I know why I missed your posting while you were gone.
Ron
The Mirror of Shcragilo (Poetry) - 8/24/2021 5:24:17 PM
Your words relay a wonderful feeling of the truly "free" humans. The one's who think for themselves and cannot be contained............YES! Fascinating writing!!!
Love ya!
Jane
The Mirror of Shcragilo (Poetry) - 8/24/2021 9:47:47 AM
For me, this has a "classic" poetic tone... ...and there is much to ponder upon as one reads your verses. Well done, Ruan. Love, peace, and best wishes,
Regis. 🌺🌼🌳🍁
The Mirror of Shcragilo (Poetry) - 8/24/2021 9:17:12 AM
So many ways your readers such as I could interpret this wonderful determination to treat baggage as baggage and not feel the burden of dragging it behind. Well done, Ruan.
Love's-Essence (Poetry) - 8/2/2021 9:45:45 AM
Especially for a woman.
Ron
Love's-Essence (Poetry) - 8/1/2021 10:11:53 AM
Your words paint a beautiful picture with your imagery! Write on!
Love ya!
Jane
Love's-Essence (Poetry) - 8/1/2021 9:52:57 AM
Perfect description of the paradoxical nature of the oceans and shore.
Witches, warlocks, wizards (Poetry) - 5/24/2021 12:20:51 PM
Brilliantly written, Ruan. As only you can do.
There's not only a tale within a tale, there is also
a moral, all wrapped in spellbinding poetry.
Witches, warlocks, wizards (Poetry) - 5/24/2021 12:04:12 PM
Your excellent poem brought to mind the guises prevailing throughout urban areas, the cities especially. Of course, media loves to promote and in a twisted way, glamourize these messengers of evil. Of late, news, TV and film have found the viewing and small reading community of humankind get off more on demons than real people. Sad. One can hope your poem reaches enough thinking people to get talked about. Write on.
Witches, warlocks, wizards (Poetry) - 5/22/2021 8:40:09 AM
I love your poem and am so glad that those kinds of evil people do not haunt our villages and towns these days except in their modern forms in the recesses of the Internet and in politics where they seem to want to gather with their conspiracies and money grubbing ways.
You left me when the warlocks brought in dragons. Although they are part of folklore going back to prehistoric China, dragons never existed except in the fearful minds of those who continued the story of their supposedly existence.
Ron
Witches, warlocks, wizards (Poetry) - 5/21/2021 7:55:34 AM
That is quite the tale, Ruan. Love, peace, and best wishes,
Regis. 🌺🍁
My Moment of Truth (Poetry) - 3/28/2021 9:33:10 AM
Yes, there comes a time when we know who our real friends are. While I only know you through your poetry and prose, I find a very fine writer who I love to see what she has written next.
So glad to see you back posting here once again.
Ron
My Moment of Truth (Poetry) - 3/28/2021 8:02:02 AM
Well said in succinct and entertaining verse. Enjoyed this, and I'm not one who usually finds such disciplined choices of words deftly placed on the page in such short order. Well done.
Atroshenko's Sax (Poetry) - 3/26/2021 9:19:51 AM
A fine haiku (maybe senryu), Ruan. I write a lot of those as well. They are brief in words but can be most evocative. Love and peace to you,
Regis. 🌺🌼🍁
My Moment of Truth (Poetry) - 3/26/2021 9:18:20 AM
Succinct but powerful in meaning expressed. Love, peace, and best wishes to you, Ruan,
Regis. 🌺🌼🍁
high and dry (Poetry) - 10/18/2020 5:34:40 PM
Yes, she was "run aground in her prime', Ruan. She still stands proud of how lovely she was in her day! Enjoyable reading! Thanks~!
Love ya!
Jane
Atroshenko's Sax (Poetry) - 9/22/2020 10:13:24 AM
Always loved it when Bob Shepard would bring out his sax at our parties and play like he was on another planet. I believe that saxophones can talk.
Ron
Atroshenko's Sax (Poetry) - 9/22/2020 3:33:00 AM
and they live there in harmony
Atroshenko's Sax (Poetry) - 9/21/2020 4:54:41 PM
To be able to play only a few notes on any instrument would be well worth being immortal...-e-
Subtle Strength (Poetry) - 9/20/2020 6:06:12 AM
beautiful sentiment
Subtle Strength (Poetry) - 9/19/2020 10:45:46 AM
And the wind bends the fibers of the stem and makes them stronger. Why plants grown indoors without any wind can have weak stocks and stands.
Ron
Artist's Autumn Palette (Poetry) - 9/15/2020 10:33:35 AM
While I'm not too fond of this short form Japanese poetry, you have colored this one quite well Through the pane of your existence. Darkly?
Ron
Schooldays (Poetry) - 9/10/2020 11:37:31 AM
Manual arts training for Boys and Girls . All important sports and boring history and civics classes, including that dead language, Latin. But oh, the math, physics and chemistry! Who could deny the wonders of school and the future.
Rock 'n' roll was blaring from every car radio, not taught in class.
Ron
Schooldays (Poetry) - 9/8/2020 1:26:20 PM
the music was the best
high and dry (Poetry) - 9/7/2020 11:34:40 AM
i think more a rememberance
high and dry (Poetry) - 9/7/2020 10:25:32 AM
It may be short, but it certainly is not sweet and says a lot. No one should have lost what she has worked so hard for to keep her afloat. But I'm glad to see you back here, trying again, because your poetry and your stories are so real and beautifully written.
Ron
high and dry (Poetry) - 9/7/2020 8:44:06 AM
Great Senryu poem that speaks for many during this pandemic time, but we should all keep that buoyance dream alive.
Sandie
high and dry (Poetry) - 9/6/2020 4:49:35 PM
Insightful and rather sad, yet... such buoyancy can be but more of the same. As you have penned often in the past, the future is what we make it, allowing that change is inevitible. This is so lean and poignant, yet much food for thought.
Bygones (Poetry) - 9/6/2020 9:13:47 AM
Oh, how big a part have your "My England" boxes played in so many memories. Thanks for posting. Refreshing archival memories aroused.
Bygones (Poetry) - 9/6/2020 9:03:36 AM
Very sad.
Sandie
World without a Compass (Poetry) - 9/4/2020 12:58:18 PM
Let's hope it doesn't reach XXX. Today was some day of national embarrassment. That bottom of the barrel idea, we seem to be in a bottomless barrel with thie man. Been awhile. Hope you keep posting.
‘Schrödinger’ in Residence (Poetry) - 9/3/2020 11:46:25 AM
A moving, soul-reaching write, Ruan. Thank you for sharing. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Regis. 🌺🍁
Harlequin (Poetry) - 6/2/2020 4:50:42 AM
a most entertaining and telling write.
budd
Harlequin (Poetry) - 5/24/2020 11:27:41 PM
I recall introducing Odin Roark to your talents long ago. I'm glad he has kept his wits and insightfulness about our discovery, as have I.
Harlequin (Poetry) - 5/20/2020 7:19:29 AM
I find that harlequins and mimes always seem to be hiding behind some great sadness. It's hard for me to laugh watching them perform. But I see your poem as an attempt to color your sadness with a bit of happiness.
It's so good to read you again.
Ron
False Representation (Poetry) - 5/19/2020 9:13:58 AM
Harsh, stark, and real... ...this is an apt and timely write, Ruan. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Regis. 🌹🌸🍁
Harlequin (Poetry) - 5/19/2020 9:11:31 AM
A meaningful (and colourful) write Ruan. You found an original way of presenting your personality. I also like the flow of this piece. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis 😀🌺🍁
Harlequin (Poetry) - 5/19/2020 7:05:00 AM
This inventive piece reminds me of how long it's been since I was alerted for one of your postings. This is a clever and insightful portrayal of character properties that seldom receives a poetic rendering. Thank you for posting and I look forward to your next.
False Representation (Poetry) - 3/8/2020 12:07:55 PM
A hard-hitting reveal of what is going on in government these days. The citizen legislator that serves for free are only expenses in a short term of service, is gone. In place, are career politicians only interested in making a name for themselves with accompanying wealth.
As Shakespeare long ago stated… "Something is rotten in the state of…"
Ron
False Representation (Poetry) - 3/7/2020 10:35:37 PM
Your words express so much of how I, and I'd bet many others, feel about this "situation at hand". Your last line sums it up! Excellent write!
Love ya!
Jane
MUTE (Poetry) - 1/28/2020 11:46:34 AM
Your words cause me to picture someone who was bought off, something came to light, and now lives with the shame. Deep! openly so!
Love ya!
Jane
MUTE (Poetry) - 1/27/2020 12:12:22 PM
I hope this is not a true life experience. But rather a deep philosophical view of what it means to withdraw inside and no longer seek "the slings and arrows of outrageous fortune."
Deep, dark, and thought-provoking!
Ron
MUTE (Poetry) - 1/26/2020 3:54:28 PM
Hopefully by looking inside yourself ,you can find that inner peace.
Interesting write.
MUTE (Poetry) - 1/26/2020 11:33:15 AM
I like the ending which is like a brilliant ray of hope. Love, peace, and best wishes to you, Ruan,
Regis. 🌸🌻🌺🌹🌷
‘Schrödinger’ in Residence (Poetry) - 1/10/2020 1:13:55 PM
Your words hold a deep memory.....I get visions of a death and a mausoleum. A house left empty? So many visions are offered through your words. I love this! I feel like a detective!
Love ya!
Jane
‘Schrödinger’ in Residence (Poetry) - 1/10/2020 8:05:26 AM
Your words make me feel a sad departure has taken place. "Sole witness to its soft release"........deep! Mourning is taking place and I doubt "her tale is ne'er forgot..."!
Love ya!
Jane
‘Schrödinger’ in Residence (Poetry) - 1/9/2020 6:04:46 PM
This place really sounds creepy spooky. A soul filed write.
JMD
Disrespect (Poetry) - 12/13/2019 2:24:31 PM
The world is full of disrespect. Well penned and wise.
Blue (Poetry) - 10/28/2019 9:33:15 AM
At times, one just has to let it all out in order to find peace once more. Love and best wishes to you, Ruan.
Regis 🍂🦋🍁
Disrespect (Poetry) - 8/19/2019 12:42:37 PM
This has happened to me once to often lately. I try to be a good friend, and in return I'm hit by cruel words. So cruel that I don't answer. It's amazing that I can still be shocked into silence.
Disrespect (Poetry) - 8/18/2019 12:23:26 PM
Beautifully rhymed and hard driven through and through. I really think this happens more often with women than with men. But believe me, men that I thought were my friends have come across quite rudely and crudely at times, making me wonder where their morals went. Perhaps it is the nature of man to be crass. And I have been accused time to time for things that I thought I wasn't, probably through misinterpreted communication. I'm not one to speak rudely and crudely to anyone. My father taught me that.
Ron
Disrespect (Poetry) - 8/17/2019 12:16:26 PM
I have very recently experienced this so it "hits home" big time. Love, peace, and best wishes to you, Ruan...
...Regis.
Disrespect (Poetry) - 8/17/2019 8:12:58 AM
Mostly I would agree whole-heartedly with Michael Schafer...
Just not this time.
Disrespect (Poetry) - 8/17/2019 7:56:41 AM
I think we all know where you're coming from, and know people who turned out not to be the friend we thought they were, but being disrespectful in return is not the answer. It's better to just walk away rather than become a toxic person yourself.
Disrespect (Poetry) - 8/16/2019 9:41:48 PM
A tight, well constructed poem that makes an important observation and point. It can happen and often does.
Analysing Ghosts (Poetry) - 8/11/2019 9:31:05 AM
A mournful call from looking back at what has been and cannot be changed. So sad to think that circumstances didn't go the way one thought. Something that happens way too often in people's lives. May you rise from this swamp of despair and write loving tales of promise once again.
Ron
Analysing Ghosts (Poetry) - 8/10/2019 10:27:10 AM
Words and music find their place even in times of sadness when emotions are raw and vulnerable. It is a time when nature seems to be out of synch with our needs. But healing must begin, and few know that as well as the sensitive soul who feels the most pain. “I feel your pain” is such a trite and worn expression. It does little to the majesty of your own words, told with exquisite calm but revealing so much more. You will likely visit them again and again, and well you should. Your words rip and tear against the unknown. They tell us more than your sadness. They tell us how we are all connected, and so much better than the stale cries of clerics.
Paws for Thought (Poetry) - 6/10/2019 1:20:29 PM
Delightful, Ruan! Purrfectly adequate description of feline personality. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
The Waiting Game (Poetry) - 6/9/2019 4:51:32 PM
Sometimes I feel like I am jammed against the wall with Ruan's mangled tether’s" forcing me to chew my way into the other side for a taste of what, at last, freedom looks and sounds like.
The Bear with Hair (Poetry) - 4/29/2019 6:17:05 PM
I love Fuzzy Wuzzy! My mother told me the rhyme. It was one of her favorites.
I am, who I am (Poetry) - 4/28/2019 11:09:16 AM
With a society bent on acquiring favor from without, your insightful treatise on what it is to find worth from within is at once arresting and a fiery awakening for all of us to trust the self love and respect we all innately possess. So many live their lives trying to be what others think they should be. To arrive at where you are is readily identifiable to those of us who have had our own epiphany of self-worth and have found contentment with who we are, if not downright happiness beyond reckoning... as I have. Bravo! Continue with you self-realized carpe diem.
I am, who I am (Poetry) - 4/28/2019 10:50:08 AM
A truer statement of personal worth, I have not read in a long time.
Ron
I am, who I am (Poetry) - 4/28/2019 7:19:19 AM
you are fine in who you truly are
budd
I am, who I am (Poetry) - 4/27/2019 10:37:06 AM
I dislike comparisons, but once in a while we get to read words
that are so honestly stated--with power, style, and grace--that also
reach into our collective humanity with daring and challenge. This is such a poem. The great poets of the past were all in your corner when you penned these words, Ruan. I can almost hear their cheers and applause. Superlatives cannot do justice to this masterpiece. For what it's worth, I am so proud of you that tears are flowing down my cheeks!
I am, who I am (Poetry) - 4/27/2019 7:15:33 AM
Fight the fight, and keep it write.
I am, who I am (Poetry) - 4/26/2019 8:55:52 PM
I really enjoyed reading this! A fine "epithet" it is! This is classic!
Love ya!
Jane
I am, who I am (Poetry) - 4/26/2019 2:20:42 PM
Fight the battle hard and true, my friend, and I understand that you do. You've been here on AD as long, maybe longer, than I have. Keep being who you are . . . I enjoy your posts.
The Bear with Hair (Poetry) - 4/26/2019 11:29:59 AM
I so enjoyed this! I'll save this one for future use!
Love ya!
Jane
The Bear with Hair (Poetry) - 4/26/2019 8:06:45 AM
I don't know how your g-daughter could ask for more.
This closed the generational gap for me, and kinda made me
like her g-mother more.
The Man in the Santa Claus Suit (Poetry) - 12/24/2018 1:29:11 PM
Food for thought, Ruan. Merry Christmas to you. Love and best wishes,
Régis.
The Man in the Santa Claus Suit (Poetry) - 12/23/2018 10:19:36 AM
Yes, but he then makes about 2.5 billion stops in 4 hours whilst delivering all those presents. The friction, alone, from such incredible speed is enough to make global warming more or less like a candle blowing in the wind. Or am I mixing up my stories? Merry Christmas, Ruan.
