game face (Poetry) - 3/11/2017 7:39:58 PM
I understand your uneasiness about this moment, but you make it into a beautiful milestone.
departure (Poetry) - 3/11/2017 7:35:37 PM
So passionate.
darkness (Poetry) - 3/11/2017 7:34:09 PM
How dare you smite darkness… you should be ashamed of yourself!
a mother's prayer (Poetry) - 9/2/2014 8:06:13 AM
A wonderful sendoff. I'm sure she will come back with a lifetime of memories whatever venture is. A year is a significant investment in her young life filled with action.
Ron
a mother's prayer (Poetry) - 9/2/2014 1:29:12 AM
This is so beautiful!
Kathy J Parenteau
the words of a friend (Poetry) - 7/19/2014 11:23:51 PM
Your imagery and expressions are so profound!
reprieve (Poetry) - 7/19/2014 11:17:35 PM
This poem seems to have come to you so naturally! Brilliant.
outside . . . looking in (Poetry) - 7/19/2014 11:11:00 PM
"you are my bridge
to the life
i should have had
to all i left behind"
"in your wake
there is only emptiness
and longing
for life that was"
Thats huge!
Do you realise?
game face (Poetry) - 7/19/2014 11:05:26 PM
Pinching.
the words of a friend (Poetry) - 1/3/2014 10:26:47 AM
Wow! I've been reading through some of your poems and now I'm hooked! I'll sure come back to read more. Great work!
the words of a friend (Poetry) - 8/15/2013 3:42:55 PM
Such a sweet poem to read today. Each verse was so beautifully
expressed. I especially enjoyed reading these verses, free to grow and bloom a tumble of happy blooms.
the words of a friend (Poetry) - 8/11/2013 9:15:24 AM
I really love the metaphors expressed. Very creative and lovely to read. One case where absence makes the heart grow fonder.
Ron
the words of a friend (Poetry) - 8/11/2013 4:27:09 AM
beautifully chosen words and rhythm to this piece...welcome to AD I think you'll enjoy this site...pmedlin
waiting (Poetry) - 2/15/2012 9:11:34 AM
I certainly hope so. Otherwise, this lovely poem would be wasted.
Ron
waiting (Poetry) - 2/15/2012 4:52:39 AM
I can feel the passion and the longing so clearly in your words. Lovely poetry!
Peace, love and light,
Amber
undoing (Poetry) - 8/16/2011 11:24:47 AM
I enjoyed this poem, I agree with Glen, your format enhances your title.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
undoing (Poetry) - 8/16/2011 1:01:07 AM
The way you've wrote this and as I read down the lines... seems the verse is as the title says, "Undoing"... Thanks for sharing...
rewind (Poetry) - 8/15/2011 7:18:57 AM
Beautifully written, charming and profound!
Blessings,
Christine
departure (Poetry) - 7/23/2011 5:11:29 PM
I can feel your pain, how sad to lose someone that was a love. Beautiful poetry.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
departure (Poetry) - 7/23/2011 1:05:57 PM
oh wow...what soft images this brings to mind...'leaving echos of promises'...so many can relate to these wistful words
