A Chapter from a once secret project (Short Story) - 9/8/2015 10:45:48 AM
If Samuel James Souths hadn't already been smacked in the face with a newspaper by his math teacher, I'd say he was dreaming. I enjoyed your well-written story, and I'm ready to return to Ash Fire Museum.
A Chapter from a once secret project (Short Story) - 9/8/2015 6:34:36 AM
I'm not into angels, but your story is quite well-written and interesting to read. Samuel James Souths may have a mental illness, either drug-induced or not.
A couple of corrections: "… In which you are [bound] to." and "[god]-damned"
Ron
