sunset (Poetry) - 1/28/2006 9:41:39 AM
Your detailed imagery is very sensual in this poem. I love it because it is as if passion itself wrote the poem.Very good Jenn keep them coming.=)
sunset (Poetry) - 10/6/2005 4:41:31 PM
This has some wonderful images and almost reads like a story. Good work.
morning star (Poetry) - 4/26/2005 12:21:25 PM
short but good, well penned!
moonlight sonata (Poetry) - 2/24/2005 6:48:30 AM
Very inventive. I'll have to gaze at the moon tonight and see if I get the same feel.
M.Rose
moonlight sonata (Poetry) - 2/22/2005 1:37:33 AM
What a wonderfully imaginative poem. I loved it.
moonlight sonata (Poetry) - 2/20/2005 9:26:51 PM
This is very enchanting and a delightful read.
untitled) (Poetry) - 2/8/2005 6:09:06 PM
~~~this poem takes me to sadness, very nice poem~~~martin~~
RED (Poetry) - 2/8/2005 3:42:48 PM
Yep this is very passionate.
RED (Poetry) - 2/8/2005 8:17:19 AM
very passionate!
RED (Poetry) - 2/7/2005 11:43:16 PM
Very good write!
Love, Bonnie
p.s. You might want to change your title. there's another poem on this site, with the same title, written by "DANI".
76 (Poetry) - 2/3/2005 11:29:41 AM
I'm not sure what the title *76* refers to, but the poem is fabulous! :)
76 (Poetry) - 2/3/2005 10:26:20 AM
I think that hurtful words stab deeper than other wounds. This is a passionate write here.
fallen (Poetry) - 10/17/2004 3:21:49 AM
This poem flows beautifully and I love the ending stanza. There is something to be said about locking ones eyes with anothers. Very nicely done.
M.Rose
in obscurity (Poetry) - 9/30/2004 5:17:43 AM
Enchanting write, Jennifer. Enjoyed.
in obscurity (Poetry) - 9/29/2004 10:08:54 AM
This poem, "in obscurity" is a magnificent sample of poetic excellence.
I have enjoyed the scent of a poetic flower from the garden of a wise Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
in obscurity (Poetry) - 9/29/2004 9:36:18 AM
nicely written...wistful
origami (Poetry) - 7/11/2004 2:14:16 AM
very lovely poem ...
origami (Poetry) - 7/10/2004 11:42:34 PM
soft and sensitive~~wonderful poem~~martin
origami (Poetry) - 7/10/2004 11:31:53 PM
Beautiful inquisitive love poem...excellent.
Allen
piano music (Poetry) - 7/10/2004 11:41:07 AM
nice use of the flowing fingers as they can bring forth such beautiful songs and music in so many ways,
Tommy
piano music (Poetry) - 7/9/2004 6:34:32 AM
the intent is golden!
piano music (Poetry) - 7/8/2004 12:37:42 PM
what a great poem! reading this- a found needle in a haystack
piano music (Poetry) - 7/8/2004 2:49:40 AM
~~very pretty poem~~martin
piano music (Poetry) - 7/7/2004 11:30:23 PM
This is a beauty... love the flowing fingers.
shell (Poetry) - 6/22/2004 4:39:09 PM
like a tide this poem pulled me into its imagery ... well done!
shell (Poetry) - 6/19/2004 3:32:32 AM
sweet~~~peaceful~~marty
shell (Poetry) - 6/19/2004 2:32:03 AM
Jennifer, whisering wind as we listen to our fragile dreams by the stars. Sounds of love flow thru us and we no we are an undying part of the infinite. How wonderful it feels to share this with others. Keep searching dear heart and the door will be opened to you. Bill Murray
the circus (Poetry) - 6/18/2004 9:03:05 PM
Succinctly powerful. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace. Regis
shell (Poetry) - 6/18/2004 9:02:15 PM
Intriguing. Sure grabbed my attention. Thank you for this offering, Jennifer. Love and peace to you. Regis
the circus (Poetry) - 6/6/2004 6:12:28 PM
Short and, alas, bittersweet.
the circus (Poetry) - 6/6/2004 5:08:56 PM
Life is sometimes a circus that's for certain Jennifer
but your descriptive poem was nothing to laugh at,it said much about life and feelings and you made your point very well,in fact it almost brought a tear to this little clown's eye.
An excellent poem indeed.
Best wishes
from
kay
p.s.
I quote an old wisdom which I believe is apt:
'Long live The Differece!'
or as they said it
'Viva la difference!'
p.s. again
If you are different,be proud of it,the world has so many boring copycats,all the same,few original,be you!
traveling bus blues (Poetry) - 5/10/2004 11:49:50 PM
This is excellent...
God Bless
Michelle~
traveling bus blues (Poetry) - 5/10/2004 10:10:13 PM
Very nice. Almost perfect as a matter of fact. I don't like the non punctuation bit, though. Otherwise, it couldn't be better.
traveling bus blues (Poetry) - 5/10/2004 10:01:54 PM
Very romantic. Nice write.
another day to live (Poetry) - 5/9/2004 10:12:19 PM
This makes me feel soooooooooooo happy:) Loved it.
again (Poetry) - 5/8/2004 10:58:17 PM
I really enjoyed this. You have created some great images. I especially enjoyed the fire spoken of in the final stanza.
another day to live (Poetry) - 5/8/2004 10:56:43 PM
Beautiful images. I love the sense of longing felt here. The idea of taking all of these things to the sea expresses such peace to me. Thank you for sharing this.
again (Poetry) - 5/7/2004 8:18:58 AM
Nice nostalgic thoughts....
alone and tipsy (Poetry) - 5/2/2004 5:31:48 PM
Sometimes the weight of the world is a little much. Hang in there! A very evocative write.
alone and tipsy (Poetry) - 5/2/2004 7:29:04 AM
Very touching words.
alone and tipsy (Poetry) - 5/2/2004 6:44:00 AM
Interesting write, Jennifer!
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
alone and tipsy (Poetry) - 5/2/2004 12:28:51 AM
Some interesting thoughts. Especially those concerning the moon. Enjoyed!
who needs coffee? (Poetry) - 4/29/2004 8:32:40 AM
Well I have a cough fee, coffee they now say protects the heart, listen to them, we all go madder...hmmm now I gotta make some, darn need to go buy milk tat tar..
who needs coffee? (Poetry) - 4/29/2004 12:57:12 AM
Got to have the coffee.:)I enjoyed this,great write,
Blessings to you.
Charlie
who needs coffee? (Poetry) - 4/29/2004 12:04:38 AM
just finished kocking down a cup of Bustello so i know where you're coming from ... don't be so secretive, what else will keep you up all night?
who needs coffee? (Poetry) - 4/28/2004 10:41:50 PM
Never developed a taste for coffee, but love its smell in the morning.
who needs coffee? (Poetry) - 4/28/2004 8:59:54 PM
:) No, I prefer tea. Cute verse.
Jim Dunlap
vino 'ku (Poetry) - 4/27/2004 2:19:31 PM
I've fermented longer than most, so watch out for the belch.
vino 'ku (Poetry) - 4/27/2004 1:52:28 PM
at first i thought that this was just a single sentence an no 'ku at all but the ceasura come after "then" in line 3. nicely done
like the rythmn of the peice
john+
wasted time is not at all wasted with you (Poetry) - 4/26/2004 10:49:24 PM
Ah, how many times I have same wish, when everyday was a new adventure, even if it was just counting who had most frogs from lake, or won conkers, I it were grand....
i'm smiling (Poetry) - 4/24/2004 5:19:24 AM
you have captured the moment and the feeling.
good write
john+
aurora (Poetry) - 2/22/2004 2:30:08 PM
(((Jennifer)))
I LOVE the aurora borealis; glad i stopped by to see this breathtaking beauty! And that picture...WOW! Words just can't express the sheer beauty of the aurora borealis in real life! (I have seen the aurora several times, but NOTHING like that picture! Oh, to see the aurora looking like the one in the picture; that would be AWESOME!)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
into my library this one goes!
aurora (Poetry) - 2/22/2004 12:24:18 PM
(((jennifer)))
o, my...i love the aurora borealis, had to see what you'd written, and i'm glad i stopped in...a beautiful write and that picture is STUNNING
i live in texas, have seen the aurora on three occasions, but NOTHING as spectacular as this--are you in alaska or canada? TAKE ME WITH YOU LOL
i, too, write about the Lights :)--fascinating mystery of the night
(((((HUGS))))) and love, karla. *BRAVA!!*
aurora (Poetry) - 2/22/2004 1:16:12 AM
Beautiful effort
Cheers
Alain
bluebird (Poetry) - 2/19/2004 7:43:18 AM
Very beautiful.
bluebird (Poetry) - 2/19/2004 7:41:08 AM
Succinctly beautiful, Jennifer!
behind my eyelids (Poetry) - 2/14/2004 12:51:02 PM
An unusual expressive poem. I enjoyed.
behind my eyelids (Poetry) - 2/12/2004 3:03:42 AM
Past remembering, a long, long time! How nice if we can awaken to a loved one, long forgotten!
behind my eyelids (Poetry) - 2/12/2004 1:15:39 AM
Jennifer;
"I only drink darkness now." What a wonderful line.
Dan S.
tell me (Poetry) - 2/10/2004 5:11:48 AM
So starkly beautiful and emotive.
tell me (Poetry) - 2/8/2004 5:25:11 PM
it is a lonely place in realization.
Excellent write.
tell me (Poetry) - 2/8/2004 3:11:11 PM
A sad smile here.. it's a feeling that's all too common, I think.
tell me (Poetry) - 2/8/2004 2:52:15 PM
yes we all know how it feels...your job is to describe it in a unique way.
tell me (Poetry) - 2/8/2004 1:32:39 PM
Like a cold, cold heart. When you don't give a damn, wake up to the warmth of the sun each moring and go forth, it will be better--much better.
only me (Poetry) - 1/31/2004 12:44:25 AM
Enjoyed much!!!
only me (Poetry) - 1/31/2004 12:40:11 AM
Some very powerful lines.
only me (Poetry) - 1/31/2004 12:17:59 AM
Ephemeral, a light presence, a silent partner!
towards entropy (Poetry) - 1/29/2004 10:35:56 AM
Excellent write, Jennifer. One can only hope that pockets of sanity will form and subtract from entropy.
Best regards,
Leland
towards entropy (Poetry) - 1/29/2004 6:54:05 AM
great write Jennifer
towards entropy (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 8:43:33 AM
This is a wonderful write loved last stanza.
towards entropy (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 8:18:03 AM
and we should always try our very best...thats all we can do...nice writing...floria
for hershey (Poetry) - 1/17/2004 8:19:49 AM
beautiful tribute to hershey; he will live on in memory!~ i am so sorry~ ((((((((((HUGS)))))))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( >tears < it is always so hard when we lose a pet...i know; i've been there, more than once!
for hershey (Poetry) - 1/16/2004 7:35:35 PM
wonderfully written ...
for hershey (Poetry) - 1/16/2004 6:04:06 PM
A wonderful write and tribute to your puppy Hershey.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
aspiration (Poetry) - 1/13/2004 5:05:42 PM
Brave commentary, "if it includes youself or not." Thanks, Jennifer.
deity (Poetry) - 1/5/2004 3:22:06 AM
He's not so still, so far, or so cold. You have only to let Him in, He stands at your door knocking. We were created in His image, so we have free choice to choose his way or the world's way.
cry (Poetry) - 1/4/2004 6:35:38 PM
A feeling known well, exquisitely expressed.
deity (Poetry) - 1/4/2004 5:25:57 PM
Powerful emotions!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
cry (Poetry) - 12/27/2003 5:10:42 AM
Ouch, boy can I empathise, hope it soon changes for you...
cry (Poetry) - 12/26/2003 8:33:37 PM
once hurt, it's difficult to trust again ...
cry (Poetry) - 12/26/2003 5:58:47 PM
What a sad write this is!...Hope this is just a poem and everything is alright with you.
Good emotional display!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
3:30am (Poetry) - 12/26/2003 1:19:32 AM
Nice write, true confession. Heartfelt...I liked it... Have a great Holidays! To a great 2004!
when sadness calls (Poetry) - 12/25/2003 9:32:05 AM
A painful, emotional write.
paint my blues (Poetry) - 12/25/2003 9:26:50 AM
And what a rainbow it is!
3:30am (Poetry) - 12/25/2003 7:09:48 AM
look at the other side of he coin and ask "what can i become?"
3:30am (Poetry) - 12/25/2003 6:12:10 AM
I feel the same as you at times. We think ourselves into insanity, with no cause at all. And if we accept ourselves, well, that could be half the battle. Good words.
Gary
undo (Poetry) - 12/17/2003 8:11:49 AM
a fab write. well done
undo (Poetry) - 12/15/2003 7:29:25 AM
There's lots of powerful emotion jammed into this small stanza. Don't push the "undo" button, or it's gonna explode. Very nice poem.
undo (Poetry) - 12/15/2003 12:13:55 AM
I'm reminded of Peter Sellers' movie, "Being There," when he tries to undo real people bothering him by clicking the TV remote at them to change the channel. Thanks, Jennifer.
the spring dance (Poetry) - 11/16/2003 7:37:57 AM
Exzcellent emotions and expressions.
Peg
i am a chocoholic (Poetry) - 11/15/2003 10:44:51 PM
don't know whether it's coincidence or not - had chocolate cravings, grabbed a bar, surfed authorsden and saw your poem. lovely!!
the spring dance (Poetry) - 11/15/2003 9:21:50 PM
Very lovely sentiments, Jennifer!
Richard Vallance,
Ottawa, Ontario,
CANADA
the spring dance (Poetry) - 11/15/2003 7:35:28 PM
Great feelings well-expressed.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
let me fall (Poetry) - 11/12/2003 9:17:21 PM
Wow! Powerful! Full of the emotion that love evokes. And just as strong if the foundation is real. I love this one!
rain (Poetry) - 11/12/2003 5:51:01 PM
Mine, mine , mine!!! My Love is all Mine. I only hope to never part from my love. The one whom I call...Mommie.
rain (Poetry) - 11/10/2003 6:55:27 AM
Loved it.... of course it's my name so maybe I'm partial <-;
Beautifully written.
rain (Poetry) - 11/9/2003 7:39:36 PM
Beautifully written piece.
Allen
deaf and blind (Poetry) - 11/7/2003 8:02:06 PM
Deep, powerful, meaningful and totally excellant!
~Nikki~
deaf and blind (Poetry) - 11/7/2003 9:20:19 AM
this is one powerful write; thanks for sharing, jennifer! :( (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn.
deaf and blind (Poetry) - 11/6/2003 7:22:26 PM
If it wasn't for my gift of sight and sound, I might have missed you that day we met. And now that I have seen you, the world is a better place with you in my life.
I love you
deaf and blind (Poetry) - 11/6/2003 4:51:06 PM
excellent!!!!
deaf and blind (Poetry) - 11/6/2003 12:09:47 PM
thankfully, once those things are seen, it is possible to rise above them...an inspirational piece, this! thank you for sharing!
deaf and blind (Poetry) - 11/6/2003 10:11:11 AM
Powerful write...
God Bless
~Michelle~
shelf life (Poetry) - 11/5/2003 7:02:27 PM
This is lovely, a very well penned piece!
~Nikki~
shelf life (Poetry) - 11/4/2003 8:31:21 AM
i loved the ending, the way that it validated the worldview of the previous three stanzas and simultaneously relegated it to the realm of the distant past...something hopefully forgotten, or rather supplanted by a more realistic view of relationships...nice job, poet.
separation (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 6:45:55 PM
Wow, This reaches deep in the soul. Very good piece.
The Voice
shanties (Poetry) - 11/2/2003 7:09:05 AM
Well expressed write...I respect your spillage of the truth....BHUWAN
shanties (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 6:24:02 PM
Maybe they couldnt speak because they became breathless for that second. Or maybe they were blinded by your beauty? Just as I was when I first saw you. =)
shanties (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 2:23:00 PM
Feelings well expressed. Thanks.
shanties (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 1:52:28 PM
jennifer,
a strking evocation
of a reality not known in n.america north of thr rio grande
and a question that speaks to us here
john+
shanties (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 12:51:59 PM
This poem, "shanties" made me think, and made me see the otherside of our reality.
Keep writing, Poet. You got the veins filled with truth.
Most Respectfully.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
stars (Poetry) - 10/27/2003 10:19:39 PM
only a poet could express this so eloquently...
stars (Poetry) - 10/27/2003 7:15:24 PM
Maybe we can do a little dance, make a little love, get down tonight (under the stars) =)
stars (Poetry) - 10/27/2003 5:09:27 PM
if only you were a poet...beautiful scribe, writer.
headache (Poetry) - 10/24/2003 5:43:38 AM
hate to admit it but i have been in such a place- piece well written, tks.
headache (Poetry) - 10/23/2003 7:59:51 PM
yeah, felt this one just the other day.... funny thing, after I went to the bathroom it went away... great write....stay strong..
In Spirit,
Bear
headache (Poetry) - 10/23/2003 7:08:28 PM
how many times have i felt this?
paint my blues (Poetry) - 10/19/2003 6:08:42 PM
well enjoyed
thanks,
donna.
paint my blues (Poetry) - 10/19/2003 11:07:34 AM
beautiful.
paint my blues (Poetry) - 10/19/2003 9:05:57 AM
Jennifer,
"but all that color is but a darker shade
of black, and my blues are on its way."
The layer in this in deeply felt... when you mix all the colors, what do you have... an incredible, profound write.... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear
this cross (Poetry) - 10/15/2003 4:33:43 PM
This one is heartfelt and reads like a song lyrics.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
this cross (Poetry) - 10/15/2003 3:55:14 PM
Thanks for sharing your talent
God Bless You and Your Loved Ones
Officer William Heffner
spectator, i am (Poetry) - 10/14/2003 7:39:03 PM
I am always waiting for the next second, only to be closer to seeing you again. =)
i am a chocoholic (Poetry) - 10/14/2003 7:33:09 PM
I Like a da chocolate too mommie luv. Cause what mommie likes, I like too. But I like mommie the mostest.
~Fisherman
weary road (Poetry) - 10/14/2003 5:15:41 PM
Wonderful write! The poem fits the title.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
i am a chocoholic (Poetry) - 10/14/2003 9:26:08 AM
I bought choclate for the trick or treaters two weeks ago and oops it was choclate snickers all gone smiles.
Taylor
elvis (Poetry) - 10/10/2003 9:26:30 AM
wonderful tribute; even a fish can make a wonderful pet! may the king live on forever! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn.
elvis (Poetry) - 10/9/2003 7:26:14 AM
Beautiful tribute to your pet, Jennifer. May The King always live on in your heart.
feelings inexplicable (Poetry) - 7/23/2003 11:32:43 AM
Yes this is interesting and I found it to be good too! :O)
~Nikki~
feelings inexplicable (Poetry) - 7/22/2003 11:31:39 PM
This is interesting write...BHUWAN
feelings inexplicable (Poetry) - 7/22/2003 9:11:25 PM
This is called digging one's own grave....But aaaaahhhhh we've all been there. A little bit difficult to understand this poem, but I struggled through it.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
craziness (Poetry) - 7/21/2003 7:40:29 PM
Good job. Your last line is so true. Two thumbs up.
craziness (Poetry) - 7/21/2003 5:47:24 PM
I like this, whimsical and true!
Maria
craziness (Poetry) - 7/21/2003 9:44:56 AM
I am crazy all the time. Great writing.
craziness (Poetry) - 7/21/2003 5:01:33 AM
Lovely description of anticipation
craziness (Poetry) - 7/20/2003 10:24:29 PM
well done...I like it.
brown eyes (Poetry) - 7/11/2003 8:35:40 PM
I loved this one.
PJ
brown eyes (Poetry) - 7/11/2003 3:39:25 PM
That's pretty weird looking that photo! It's actually very intriguing to have a look at though.
As for your poem, it's very detailed and imaginative!
=-br-=
hear me, believe me, seek me (Poetry) - 7/11/2003 6:35:13 AM
This is truly moving.. I am with David (almost); God there must be one. But God is there to be served not to serve! Our unanswered prayers function as a call for his love and mercy...Jenny, we are appointed 'slaves'; it is amazing how self-righteous man really is demanding God to be his slave..
Love your poem, honestly!
Nevine
hear me, believe me, seek me (Poetry) - 7/11/2003 5:21:04 AM
Deep thoughts. My feelings oppose Eileen, gods, if they exist, feel nothing for mankind. Better to believe in a friend.
hear me, believe me, seek me (Poetry) - 7/10/2003 6:28:21 PM
Very deep powerful probings, sounds like the life of an ascetic,the answer is always faith ;-)Excellent write!
hear me, believe me, seek me (Poetry) - 7/10/2003 4:55:37 PM
Hmm... a story is unfurled in a precious bondage of poetry and soul. Very, very good.
-br-
blindness (Poetry) - 7/10/2003 5:02:09 AM
Welcome to the DEN....deep and powerful write...BHUWAN
blindness (Poetry) - 7/10/2003 12:00:59 AM
Deep write...very well done! ~Z~
