The Teacher (Short Story) - 3/3/2015 11:01:42 AM
Is not my genre and I'm not at all familiar with the computer game this seems to be written for, but it's a well-written story with a couple of twists that makes it interesting. While I realize it's great escapism, with a whole lot of human foibles thrown in, like a Greek tragedy, it's just not very scientific for science fiction… It's more fanciful, even with all the scientific terminology.
I thought that, perhaps, that Dr. Lowe seemed more like a trainer than a teacher.
Once again, very good work.
Ron
