Matthew 18:11-14 (Poetry) - 9/27/2006 11:31:46 AM
Wonderful work, John.
Glad you are home.
Elizabeth
Stumbling Through Today (Poetry) - 3/4/2006 7:51:36 PM
Your sentiments come through powerfully in these verses, John. Love, peace, and strength to you,
Regis
Matthew 18:11-14 (Poetry) - 3/4/2006 7:49:42 PM
Thank you for sharing this meaningful offering, John. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Matthew 18:11-14 (Poetry) - 3/3/2006 10:35:42 AM
This is splendid poetry! Thanks for sharing!I'm awake;-)
eT
Stumbling Through Today (Poetry) - 2/21/2006 5:33:54 PM
Wow, John.
I'm glad you are coming home.
Nice work, too.
Closure (Poetry) - 2/18/2006 7:05:01 AM
beautiful.... touches so close to home.. you express things so well with your words
Stumbling Through Today (Poetry) - 2/18/2006 5:41:37 AM
I hope poetry is the healing force for you that it is for me.
But it does fall short. Just something about putting pain out there.
John
Closure (Poetry) - 2/16/2006 8:52:41 AM
Well done, John.
Closure (Poetry) - 2/16/2006 4:06:19 AM
this is a profound write, one i find i can truly relate too. well penned.
Long After The End (Poetry) - 2/11/2006 8:13:27 AM
wonderfully done.. the expressions and the emotions shine thru in this .... beauty in writing
Take It Back (Poetry) - 12/8/2005 7:26:34 AM
Sometimes it feels like there is nothing ahead, doesn't it? Those are the times I turn to God, put my hand in His, and let Him show me the way. Very good write, John.
Peace. Joyce
Blue (Poetry) - 12/8/2005 7:24:19 AM
Ah, the many shades of blue, John... past, present and future. You have a sense of time and space in your writing. I enjoy it.
Peace. Joyce
Long After The End (Poetry) - 12/8/2005 7:22:40 AM
A sad tale of two people who once cared for each other growing apart, and maybe not even knowing it. You write about it darn well, John Grubbs! (:D I remember being like this! Well done!
Peace. Joyce
Long After The End (Poetry) - 12/2/2005 7:30:32 AM
Really like your song, John - and I read your Bio - Welcome Home!
Long After The End (Poetry) - 12/2/2005 5:26:58 AM
If they cannot be livers, then be friends. I guess the memories always stays when two are good friends.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sanide Angel :o)
Bring Me Down (Poetry) - 11/20/2005 3:20:33 PM
Cool song, John. I like the zzzzzzs
Blue (Poetry) - 10/20/2005 10:12:16 AM
Sweet one, John.
Images Of Losing You (Poetry) - 5/20/2005 11:16:16 AM
I know this feeling. Fantastic capture of such deep emotions.
Images Of Losing You (Poetry) - 5/5/2005 9:00:31 AM
Powerful write my friend....love n luck....BHUWAN!!!
I Wouldn't Have to Love You (Poetry) - 5/4/2005 1:26:49 AM
Awe! : ) That's Sweeeeeeeeeeet.. she is still surely in love with you.. After, reading this WArm response to your deeper feelings! Truly-Lady,Sheee
Nothing (Poetry) - 5/4/2005 1:25:19 AM
Yea right ;( I hope all has changed since this writing my friend... I feel desperate here.. REad it over, as the time goes by... I do that with my Poetry.. it's interesting to see/feel a differ. opinion of your own work at that time....
This is GREAT but,I always started tearing.......Almost, good U closed when U did. Smile, and Enjoy your day... Find Peace 4 U 2~! Truly-Lady,Sheee *Sheila
Images Of Losing You (Poetry) - 5/4/2005 1:22:06 AM
Awesome!!! :) Poem- So much shared and felt- Wow.. I'm keeping this one in FAvor.s - Have a GREAT DAy... and Thanks for helping in the serice and doing So much and giving so much of yourself. Thanks to your family too.. all they supported you on 4 all of us in the BiG world... Truly-Lady,Sheee OH, thank you 4 your nice reviews on my writings lately. P.S. I love all kinds of music.. my boyfr. is a confessed Guitar player and loves it.. I'm serenaded too often, I love it... :) and I kept your site to check out... :) Thanks 4 sharing........ C. U. on Soon..YOur writings are hOnest and Straightforward, not alot of thinking for time involved.....
Images Of Losing You (Poetry) - 5/2/2005 1:47:46 PM
Wow, John... if this is written from life, I hope you don't stay there long. Really well done.
Elizabeth
Images Of Losing You (Poetry) - 4/30/2005 6:29:42 AM
A very heart-felt poem. Your frustration and devotion show through your words. Very nicely done.
M.Rose
Blue (Poetry) - 9/19/2004 7:56:31 AM
Beautiful young man, John, I bet he will be the next Clapton, or BB King, learning from his dad how to crank up that music...Peace, Ed & Rufuz
I Cannot Hide (Poetry) - 7/20/2004 7:56:40 AM
love the lyrics, could almost hear the music. Dawn
I Was (Poetry) - 6/1/2004 8:38:13 AM
these are great lyrics.
I Was (Poetry) - 5/28/2004 5:41:54 PM
Awesome song John...
Excellent in every way!
~Linda
Dreams (Poetry) - 5/28/2004 4:00:32 PM
Dreams are the joy and the torment of most people, and they are also a window on the soul. They tell us things we don't know, whether we want to know or not. I have written a lot of dreams poems over the years, so I wish you luck with exorcising your demons.
Rose (Poetry) - 4/24/2004 4:20:07 PM
Good inspiring write.
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
When We Bled (Poetry) - 4/16/2004 12:41:14 AM
You have captured your thoughts herein with an interesting fare, now that I am hooked, I will have to follow & read more, Peace is the Only Way, Ed & Rufuz (w00f)
When We Bled (Poetry) - 4/11/2004 8:18:20 PM
Very nice,, touching write.
When We Bled (Poetry) - 4/10/2004 4:18:21 PM
Great expression of emotion. Nice write.
When We Bled (Poetry) - 4/10/2004 4:18:04 PM
Very nice John..great lines...floria
When We Bled (Poetry) - 4/10/2004 3:45:27 PM
Beautifully written and so deeply moving, Really got to me this afternoon,
Reindeer
Dreams (Poetry) - 1/4/2004 1:25:29 PM
Wonderfully writen. It beautiful.
Speak to me in Anarchy (Poetry) - 12/31/2003 6:35:10 PM
sometimes we must feel what is inevitable...
Dreams (Poetry) - 12/29/2003 5:31:03 AM
I think everybody has shared this dream at one time or another. You've said so well. Lisa
Dreams (Poetry) - 12/29/2003 4:57:51 AM
This one is a dream of emotions excellent.
Old Songs (Poetry) - 11/15/2003 7:19:57 PM
Well expressed...
Gina
Old Songs (Poetry) - 11/15/2003 5:17:50 PM
Interesting capture of the bitter sweet effects of memories from lost relationships...well expressed, wonderful imagery.
Old Songs (Poetry) - 11/15/2003 4:53:40 PM
Some wonderful old memories are well-worth the cheers. Good wrote!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Glass Soul (Poetry) - 9/17/2003 12:52:46 AM
As always I am a bit late but I liked this poem of yours also. Nice images, well done
elliott
Blue (Poetry) - 9/17/2003 12:50:08 AM
That was a beautiful piece. Childhood it doesn't ever come again, well not until old age at least. I wish BLUE a wonderful life of joy.
Blue (Poetry) - 9/16/2003 7:47:43 PM
Aww, this was superb! When I saw this sweet
little baby, I had to check out the poem.
This was a wonderful write. :)
Blue (Poetry) - 9/16/2003 7:46:33 PM
Beautiful poem.
Glass Soul (Poetry) - 7/29/2003 9:25:44 AM
This is beautiful in procession of thoughts and descriptions, a wonderful slice of life and it's observations and realizations...beautiful piece...beautiful poetry!
~Nikki~
Glass Soul (Poetry) - 7/28/2003 6:51:24 PM
Sometimes images crack when given close scrutiny. Excellent write, John.
Leland
Glass Soul (Poetry) - 7/28/2003 5:27:24 PM
It dawned on me
as I heard her speak,
and watched her check herself.
The nectar we feed on
isn't always
found outside ourselves,
it comes in forms that others see
as simple gestures of life.
Beautiful
Glass Soul (Poetry) - 7/28/2003 4:53:43 PM
Wonderful indeed!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Glass Soul (Poetry) - 7/28/2003 4:50:00 PM
Beautiful thought, that last line. Well done, John. Your lines flow into each other to make a wonderful whole.
Rapture of the Mind (Poetry) - 7/28/2003 4:34:13 PM
Wonderful write indeed! Love the imagery you have created.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Nothing to Recall (Poetry) - 7/28/2003 10:37:37 AM
"...So, I watch the Sun
in its rebirth,
and wonder where she has been..."
Well done.
Nothing to Recall (Poetry) - 7/28/2003 12:33:01 AM
I can really feel the emotion in this write...very well done! ~Z~
Nothing to Recall (Poetry) - 7/27/2003 7:57:39 PM
<tears>
I feel your sadness
Beautiful write of
a love lost..the
yearning in this
write is overwhelming..
If this is reality I
hope things get better
for you.
~~Linda~~
