Shame (Poetry) - 1/18/2012 8:11:36 PM
i like where this poem begin to venture yet find it difficult to say your poem is a waste, proud upon its own direction, that is unless i missed the sarcasm in the voice of this poem, which i somehow don't believe i did, and then shame on me ... still in all, i think this poem's pretty cool ...
Shame (Poetry) - 1/18/2012 8:43:26 AM
Much on this Earth doesn't matter to most. Eloquently written poem that we disregard to our own risk.
Ron
