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 The Seventh Circle (Book) - 5/13/2022 9:22:55 AM
Let me start by saying this is far from my normal genre, but I really enjoyed the book. I’m going to simplify the storyline: a farmer and his family are kidnapped from their home, husband escapes and starts searching for his family, however teenage son falls in with the bad crowd and decides never to go back home. However, the novel The Seventh Circle Book 1 is much, much more! The reason for the kidnapping is due to revenge because of a love triangle and the kidnappers are warlocks of the Black Order. Mal Tarsis, the Anointed (head warlock) wants revenge against Aridhar Yelenti, but Aridhar wants his family back and will stop at nothing to get them. Escaping the kidnappers with the help of a disappearing “person,” Aridhar then comes across one of my favorite characters, Rumnel, a Mehari child – people who live in caves beneath the mountains – whose has lost his mother. Promising to help the furry companion, Rumnel become part of Aridhar’s travels and ends up being a big help to him in finding his wife Helga, and three children, Percy, Mary, and Thaklar. Taking up with his old friend, Lord Nikolas Untar, they go in search of the missing family, but Mal Tarsis has created Lokanrel, (who humorously in one scene has to adjust and get used to being in a human body form) a demon to do his dirty work in destroying Aridhar Yelenti. Mal Tarsis also sets out to convert, Thaklar, Aridhar’s son to the Black Order. Surrounding the story are elaborate locations with varying cities, towns and terrain where travel can be challenging at times. Along the way, the rescue team grows, and magic comes into play. Shortly before the kidnapping of his family, Aridhar awakens one day to discover unexplained marks – 3 lines on his palms and crescent moons on his wrists. Of course, there is good magic and bad magic, some magic stronger than others and beginner’s magic. We learn that Aridhar and Rumnel share the same markngs. Others that join the group, such as Chyrius, an old sage who agrees to help them learn also has the same markings and they know it means something, just unsure what. They travel miles and miles to learn the meaning of the magic, the markings, and how to rescue Aridhar’s family. No spoiler alerts here because I want you to read the book. It is wonderful. Full of love, drama, fighting, humor, violence, vengeance and more. Todd Cheney has created a very well-written saga with book one of a promising series. The Seventh Circle is a great stand alone, but I look forward to reading additional works. The details provided by Cheney are great; for example, when the group is crossing the sea and the ship is damaged, Cheney does not gloss over the matter quickly but provides a detailed explanation of how they fix the boat to continue their journey. As a reader, I appreciate that attention to detail and it is provided throughout the novel. If you are looking for a good read in the world of fantasy and magic, but with a underlying storyline, The Seventh Circle, Book one is a exceptional weekend read. I highly recommend that you check this one out/ It does not disappoint!
 The Bracelet (Book) - 12/12/2009 9:24:58 PM
As a reader, I’m the first to admit this is the first book I’ve tried to read with a Christian feel or undertones to it. That said, I was pleased to read such a well put together, thought provoking, and meaningful novel but a talented writer. From the start of the book, the reader begins to get to know Mike, his circumstances, his feelings and most everyone can certainly feel for him as we’ve all been in those shoes at least once or twice. Once Mike receives the mysterious bracelet, his whole world changes. For good or ill? Well, that’s for the reader to discover and also to decide for themselves. The characters, the plot were all a fascinating mix that will hold readers attention and also make them begin a self-examination of their own inner selves. The book leaves the reader with interesting questions after the last page is turned which is the mark of a wonderful title. Mr. Cheney has written a superb piece of fiction that will appeal to all readers, even if it’s not usually their cup of tea so to speak. Mike Alex has an appeal that any man or woman can identify with.
 The Soulstone (Book) - 4/25/2005 9:01:05 PM
Sounds Great! Glad YOU didn't give up- which means, you believed in yourself and your book. Lady,Sheee
 The Soulstone (Book) - 3/24/2005 8:39:52 AM
Congratulations on hitting that goal!!
 The Seventh Circle (Book) - 11/7/2003 4:18:42 AM
Sounds like an exciting fantasy adventure...well written and very escriptive...best of luck, Jim.
 The Seventh Circle (Book) - 9/5/2003 12:30:16 AM
Sounds interesting in fantasy Todd. Descriptive and well written. G
Jeremy's Hunt (Short Story) - 3/16/2016 1:51:30 AM
intriguing read, well done

Shiny Things (Short Story) - 3/16/2016 1:50:07 AM
intriguing read, holds reader interest, well done

The view from my window (Short Story) - 6/30/2005 5:49:42 PM
well done

The view from my window (Short Story) - 11/20/2004 7:46:22 PM
Very detailed to the point where I can see what you see. I just don't like cold weather. Good writing, thanks for sharing it.

Jeremy's Hunt (Short Story) - 3/17/2004 7:28:20 PM
Enjoyed this excerpt very much Todd, an imaginative write that kept my interest throughout.

The view from my window (Short Story) - 3/17/2004 7:21:01 PM
A well written descriptive piece of writing that takes your reader into your world to feel not only the cold that nature brings but also connecting us with the inner cold that being alone can manifest. Well done!

The view from my window (Short Story) - 3/14/2004 4:30:09 PM
I would say the depression is from within, not without. The view from your window simply IS; having grown up in cold-wintered Montana, I remember looking out my window, seeing barren and cold, wishing it were sping with the freedom that brought. My dad always said, "If wishes were horses, we'd all take a ride..." I was in Chicago once, walking in a concrete forest of dilapidated buildings. The feeling was of hopelessness, empty. I hurried to get to my car, past the dinginess, but then I saw a bright yellow perky flower, strutting atop its green stem and spikey leaves. The lowly dandelion, but forever after, have thought of it as the Dandy Lion Who Roared Life IS... it changed my memory of that place. Todd, I liked this piece... it will surely fit into something. Thanks for posting it.

The view from my window (Short Story) - 3/14/2004 2:38:12 PM
Actually, I liked this write very much, Todd. I do these once in awhile myself, just to practice observation techniques. But I like to balance cold dark observations, with sunny bright ones, and lots of nature writes.

The view from my window (Short Story) - 3/14/2004 10:58:27 AM
A cold, dark, lonely story, Todd...Hope you find warmth in future, either in friendships, or just a good bottle of kentucky bourbon...well thought out and put together, I liked this alot, Peace thru the Write, Ed & Rufuz

Jeremy's Hunt (Short Story) - 3/10/2004 6:47:29 AM
Hello! Enjoyed the reading of this very much. Your writing has a way of grabbing the reader, pulling into the story. No glitches in rhythm. As to the storyline, I wonder how often something like this has actually happened in our world? Since the movies about the Matrix, I've been wondering how often the storyline changes for US?? Few of us compare what we think we know about history, i.e., the stuff 'everyone knows'... But that sort of wondering is what makes us writers, isn't it. Yes! Looking forward to reading more of your work. Judith

AI as artwork (Article) - 3/28/2025 8:36:10 AM
Todd, this is a wonderful article. Like you, I only use AI for covers and illustrations. I know there is nothing dishonest in doing this but I do not use it in writing. I can't help but wonder that in the near future there will only be AI written books, poety, articles and the creativity, emotions and voices of real writers will be disregarded and undeveloped because of AI. Humanity will suffer if this happens. Thanks for writing this, it needs to be said.

AI as artwork (Article) - 11/16/2024 7:24:43 AM
Enjoyed this article. It says a lot about the choices creatives are having to make these days between ease and efficiency versus human-to-human collaborations or partnerships. In short, it says a lot about human values. Generative AI can be a useful tool in the kind of financial and professional situation you describe. Some who can afford to pay for the publishing services you noted have intentionally used AI-generated art to make a point about its effectiveness. AI art is good at “filling gaps” exactly as you and many others have described. Because it is artificial intelligence as opposed to human intelligence, it automatically lacks the quality of what some might call the essence of what it means to be human, such as any visual evidence of striving to accomplish a specific creation, or a subtle flaw that gives the work a kind of paradoxical value. In regard to text, OpenAI cautions that generated text is prone to errors. Experimental texts generated for my AI Literary Chat Salon have all required rigorous human editing. For myself, I would not be inclined to trust such texts completely for the reasons you stated and for others as well.

Another Cover (Article) - 3/30/2005 4:35:23 PM
It's very eye-catching. The space really helps with that. M.Rose

Another Cover (Article) - 3/26/2005 6:17:59 AM
actually, i like the space

Cover Examples (Article) - 3/25/2005 7:36:51 PM
nice cover

Cover Examples (Article) - 3/24/2005 8:58:13 PM
Yes. I love this. My eye goes right from top to bottom. Middle balance is fine to my eye. Judge a book by its cover, huh? Well once there was a rookie cop who saw a prisoner, in bright orange jump suit, driving a big Mercedes down the street. The cop pulled him over. To his horror, he discovered the driver to be the most respected judge in the city on his way to a Mardi Gras party. The cop ended up on desk duty, and thereafter he swore he would never again book a judge by his cover

Another Cover (Article) - 3/24/2005 8:53:43 PM
There's a lot of space in the middle. You need some way to draw the eye between the title and the imagry. Maybe longer grass or gradually fading color....

Another Cover (Article) - 3/24/2005 7:11:23 PM
Toddy, I love the font on the title. Grabbing. I agree, too much space inbetween. Is it possible to move "The Seventh Circle" under the word "Nature"? From this display, I didn't know that was a hooded figure and the army. Very dark. Does it show better in person? Congratulations on your continued success! Cynthia

Ice Queen (Poetry) - 8/31/2025 10:20:11 AM
One line bothers me… Where Ponadrial (a queen?) found herself in the bed of the queen draped all over "him." The king? Was she involved in an affair with the king? I just wrote my first fantasy. Most of my writing has been very true to history because it is and was strange enough without having to resort to impossible constructs. I use those impossible constructs to take two familiar fantasy stories, and parody them in a real place in a real time… the Amazon, circa 1000 CE. Your poem seems to be firmly rooted in the traditional feudal kingdom fantasies that are largely European based. Stories originally meant to teach children lessons of behavior. Ron

Beauty (Poetry) - 6/8/2025 11:23:35 AM
A simple but complete view of you, and hopefully others of us, who share your humble tenacity for life and the beauty. I've always contended that one can't really know beauty without having experiencing the opposite and ingested a lesson or two. Thanks for posting. Enjoyed your approach.

The Lazy Poet's Mantra (Poetry) - 1/13/2011 11:39:56 AM
MONEY IS The nuicence that_________ Gets in the way of LIVING !!! ________

A Very Short Poem (Poetry) - 4/8/2008 10:17:17 AM
Most deep concepts are always best said in few words...you speak what so many need to hear but afraid to say out loud. Thank you for speaking for them...great poem!

In the Sky (Poetry) - 3/7/2008 12:33:44 PM
Read lots of your wonderful poetry. You are yourself and show it in your writing and you are going to go far in life. The 60's were a lot better than now I think in some way, but thanks for writing inspiring poems and all. Take care and chug along and keep sane in this mad mad world.

A Very Short Poem (Poetry) - 2/3/2008 11:30:15 PM
You have said much in very few lines. Well written.

Commercial Schism (Poetry) - 9/22/2007 6:58:29 PM
Making Me Think.....Yep Very Thought Provoking Piece In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love Vickie

A Very Short Poem (Poetry) - 9/22/2007 6:48:00 PM
This Is A Very Short Poem Indeed! And Also Deep-I Love It!! In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love Vickie

A Very Short Poem (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 1:54:37 PM
I love the closing lines especially. A silence I wish I could speak into. So nicely done. Thanks for sharing ;) ((Hugs and LOve)) ~SilentDream

Commercial Schism (Poetry) - 12/6/2006 7:40:15 AM
Heard and felt! You say it so well!

A Very Short Poem (Poetry) - 11/21/2006 3:20:01 PM
You capture the thoughts, emotions, and desires of many with this short but deep, introspective write. Well Done! Lena

A Very Short Poem (Poetry) - 11/3/2006 8:34:09 AM
Introspective and insightful. I like this poem. R

A Very Short Poem (Poetry) - 10/5/2006 3:03:42 PM
A great poem about longing.

A Very Short Poem (Poetry) - 10/3/2006 8:55:21 AM
There is such a wide scope for readers to place their own interpretations to your three considerations that I really think the title does not do the poem justice. Yes it is a short poem but the simplicity of the statements may give poeple much pause to consider how they relate to one or more of those statments. Perhaps the poem should be entitled 'I wish I could' or something a little more puilling than the rather pragmatic but unrevealing 'A very short poem'. Love the poem - but please consider changing the title.

To arms (Poetry) - 9/6/2006 1:32:36 PM
yes, yes... glad i came across this, much is spoken here and how very well cried out, with the sanity needed in times so unravelled, thank you for this!

A Very Short Poem (Poetry) - 8/12/2006 11:00:42 AM
Simple and Ingenius, you've brightened my day.

A Very Short Poem (Poetry) - 7/20/2006 5:49:04 PM
Gorgeous poem!! May wishes come true!!! Love, Suzie :-D

A Very Short Poem (Poetry) - 6/15/2006 8:22:30 PM
A very short poem that says a whole lot. Nice! Chanti

A Very Short Poem (Poetry) - 5/17/2006 2:48:06 AM
Just perfect! Enjoyed, Safi

A Very Short Poem (Poetry) - 5/4/2006 9:01:08 PM
Todd, Very insightful. Is this part of your book? Cynthia

Lawn Street (Poetry) - 12/21/2005 5:10:40 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry. Best of luck with all your writing ventures.

Mehari Listen (Poetry) - 10/16/2005 1:13:48 AM
Nice freestyle. Enjoyed.

Procrastinator (Poetry) - 10/15/2005 4:31:06 PM
This makes sense. I kick those kind right out of my life

Mehari Listen (Poetry) - 10/14/2005 4:41:43 PM
Okay, I'm having a dumb moment. I don't understand this poem. Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

In the Sky (Poetry) - 8/18/2005 4:17:42 PM
Oh so true! Well done, Todd! Monette

Reach (Poetry) - 4/27/2005 11:33:21 PM
Todd, Let the ghosts rest. Go for reality! Cynthia

Reach (Poetry) - 4/19/2005 11:06:46 AM
Follow your dreams, believe what you do not see, follow your heart and it will lead you home. Blessings, Joseph

Reach (Poetry) - 4/19/2005 7:09:32 AM
Absolutely. We've all fooled ourselves ito seeing what isn't there, or refusing to see it until we learn the hard way.

Reach (Poetry) - 4/18/2005 4:11:42 PM
isn't that life for sure. great poem

You see (Poetry) - 3/5/2005 7:24:26 PM
Todd, Very good poetry. Glad I came back to do some more reading! Sherry

In the Sky (Poetry) - 3/1/2005 6:27:40 PM
Todd, This is my first visit to your work. Intriguing and beautifu. Sherry

In the Sky (Poetry) - 2/7/2005 7:36:53 AM
How right. Keep going forward. Don't look back. Life always works out, I think

In the Sky (Poetry) - 2/6/2005 7:39:05 PM
a wonderful sense of perspective in this poem ...

In the Sky (Poetry) - 2/6/2005 5:16:06 PM
fantastic write...I didn't want to come down...well done Allen

In the Sky (Poetry) - 2/6/2005 2:52:10 PM
I like the imagery here too and feel like just flapping my arms to touch one of those clouds.

In the Sky (Poetry) - 2/6/2005 2:41:37 PM
Beautifully imaged, especially love the lines, "...and in the folds of nimbus we will speak...." <------------------EXCELLENT! (((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

To arms (Poetry) - 12/2/2004 5:42:56 AM
This is better than the other one I read. However, words won't stop bullets. Somebody said "it's dangerous to be right if your government is wrong" or words to that effect. Anyway, your point is well made.

The Good Citizen (Poetry) - 12/2/2004 5:40:51 AM
I'm a political sort of person. I can't imagine not voting because my boss wouldn't like it. I asked for, and got the day off, on election day.

A Very Short Poem (Poetry) - 11/20/2004 7:56:43 PM
I find I can do that by going within. I like this write. It's short and deep.

The Good Citizen (Poetry) - 10/23/2004 4:38:58 PM
This is one that I want to take and run with, editing a bit and adding my own two cents. Really like the first four and last four lines. I guess it's my political enthusiasm that wants to plug in my own words in the middle. You may have started something, since my muse died of "shock and awe." Don't worry, I won't plagerize this, I'll just play with it for my own satisfaction. Thanks for the inspiration!

The Good Citizen (Poetry) - 10/18/2004 7:48:42 AM
Good sarcasim. I think most everybody feels that way from time to time

The Good Citizen (Poetry) - 10/17/2004 2:46:34 AM
Otherwise known as the sheep theory. M.Rose

A Very Short Poem (Poetry) - 10/6/2004 11:57:56 AM
i really dig this.

A Very Short Poem (Poetry) - 10/5/2004 10:16:36 AM
this makes sense in the middle of this day. I'd love to show down and address some issues

A Very Short Poem (Poetry) - 10/4/2004 11:13:08 PM
Great poem.

A Very Short Poem (Poetry) - 10/4/2004 12:07:51 PM
Sometimes they are all different, and sometimes they are all the same.

God's in (Poetry) - 8/9/2004 5:43:37 PM
Very inspirational and to the point. Good write Todd.

To arms (Poetry) - 5/15/2004 8:51:45 PM
Ah yes WRITERS TO ARMS! :O) ~Nikki~

Before (Poetry) - 5/8/2004 6:40:42 PM
yesssssssss........the empty page.......that we could begin our story on again.......this is so inspiring.......hmmm food for thought........I must save this.......ty pax....... A

Before (Poetry) - 5/6/2004 11:10:11 AM
We all long to return to our innocence days, quickly forgeting our haste to leave them. Good poem. Thanks for you comment.

You see (Poetry) - 5/4/2004 6:23:58 PM
This is a good one...I like it.

Before (Poetry) - 5/4/2004 6:21:23 PM
Splendid write. Sometimes, we all wish ,at some point, we could go back. Thanks for sharing this with us.

Before (Poetry) - 4/18/2004 12:39:23 PM
We all sometimes wish we had an empty page, and could start all over again; but, alas, we don't.

Wanderer (Poetry) - 3/28/2004 3:52:18 PM
yes, this one has a dire overtone as well as an allegorical feel and it quite makes one think, you know? Most intriguing, thank you, Todd, m.

A Brief Telephone Conversation (Poetry) - 3/28/2004 3:50:09 PM
love this idea, and yes, very well done... thank you

God's in (Poetry) - 3/26/2004 1:21:46 PM
Inspiring Todd......

God's in (Poetry) - 3/25/2004 9:04:50 AM
Powerful write!!!!!

God's in (Poetry) - 3/20/2004 6:17:54 PM
Amen for a beautiful short write enjoyed much William

Top Dog (Poetry) - 3/20/2004 4:10:00 AM
Excellent write and so right on!

Belief (Poetry) - 3/18/2004 3:42:43 PM
Quite interesting, I understand it well for my highschool self.

God's in (Poetry) - 3/18/2004 1:09:15 AM
He is! SO little says so much Todd, TY Ch'erie

God's in (Poetry) - 3/13/2004 12:37:58 PM
Inspirational verses that are a tribute to your faith. Love and peace. Regis

God's in (Poetry) - 3/13/2004 12:08:07 PM
Beautiful! You write inspirational in such a few words :-)

God's in (Poetry) - 3/9/2004 9:56:11 PM
small particles are magnificent once we turn them over to Almighty (not Bruce,. . . God). keep expressing Todd, blessin's, cynth'ya lewis reed

God's in (Poetry) - 3/9/2004 5:36:34 PM
The diversity of font color does well to emphasize the truth of your message. Very enjoyable.

Wanderer (Poetry) - 3/8/2004 2:51:08 PM
Interesting, sinister tale, told very simply. It sounds a bit like our local social club! But seriously... I like this one a lot. Sara.

God's in (Poetry) - 3/8/2004 2:49:24 PM
Short but meaningful... very profound. This was worth reading a few times over. All the best, Sara.

God's in (Poetry) - 2/14/2004 11:51:30 AM
So beautiful and humble! Thank you!

God's in (Poetry) - 2/14/2004 10:39:07 AM
Selah...a powerful declaration.

God's in (Poetry) - 2/14/2004 10:31:42 AM
A beautiful poetic expression of atomic theory. Best regards, Leland

Platitudes (Poetry) - 2/13/2004 1:53:37 AM
Whoa some heavy thoughts there, good one m8 Ch'erie

Platitudes (Poetry) - 2/12/2004 6:18:53 PM
Platitudes...I find that hard to believe. And if so, they are superb.

Platitudes (Poetry) - 2/12/2004 5:59:37 PM
Hard to decide what to do in life, so many people, so little energy!

A Brief Telephone Conversation (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 5:16:21 AM
well done ...

Eulogy to Scary Bug (Poetry) - 1/26/2004 5:33:32 AM
You are so funny,this one made me laugh and laugh,a beauty!

The Shovel (Poetry) - 1/26/2004 5:29:02 AM
I agree with Trixie....'Bravo'.

The Rose (Poetry) - 1/26/2004 5:26:55 AM
Excellent Poetry.

A Brief Telephone Conversation (Poetry) - 1/24/2004 7:19:49 PM
Well done and expressed well in verses.

Green to Gray (Poetry) - 1/9/2004 3:10:19 AM
How very true this is,I like the way you think.

Reject (Poetry) - 1/9/2004 3:08:27 AM
Yes,very true,another excellent poem.

You see (Poetry) - 1/9/2004 3:07:29 AM
Oh my oh my oh my,this one was such a treat to read,I just LOVE your poetry,you really are excellent.

Top Dog (Poetry) - 1/9/2004 3:04:54 AM
An awesome wise perfect gem I am ssssoooooooo glad I read this one. Best wishes always from kay.

Emperors of Darkness (Poetry) - 11/8/2003 5:10:16 PM
Fantastic, Todd! I especially like that "the Dark shall fall," as I believe is shall. Visit me sometime. Love in Christ~~ Bonnie Q Unicorn Haven

Emperors of Darkness (Poetry) - 9/30/2003 5:46:24 AM
Ending is excellent.

Eulogy to Scary Bug (Poetry) - 9/21/2003 3:30:57 PM
This was amusing and ironic because I just had a confrontation with Scary Bug's uncle, Harry Spider, this morning in MY shower! Sadly, I didn't mourn him at all after he met his end with a disposable razor! This poem is great! I really enjoyed reading it and am inspired to write one of my own about my experience with one of the biggest, ugliest, hairiest spiders I have ever seen here in Costa Rica, or anywhere for that matter! Thanks for the inspiration and the smiles! - J -

You see (Poetry) - 9/21/2003 3:21:49 PM
Todd, this is very good. I really like it. I'm going to read more of you! - J -

Eulogy to Scary Bug (Poetry) - 9/16/2003 7:16:05 AM
Oh this fairly cracked me up LOLOL, what a write, what a topic. She says still laughing,..I wrote one called the bug, but it wasnt one you could smack out with a bottle, it smacked me around for 48 hrs LOLOL Youve put a smile on my dial tonight Todd, TY Ch'erie

Eulogy to Scary Bug (Poetry) - 9/15/2003 12:56:07 PM
(((todd))) *sheds tear for scary bug* hysterical, vivid, imaginative write but i'm afraid i'd act the same way *i hate scary bugs...especially cockroaches and spiders >cringe <* (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Eulogy to Scary Bug (Poetry) - 9/15/2003 7:12:46 AM
So Adorable! So Yecch! Love your lively imagination.

Eulogy to Scary Bug (Poetry) - 9/14/2003 10:31:45 PM
very cute and different

The Shovel (Poetry) - 9/11/2003 10:22:55 AM
Hi Todd, Bravo!!!! Great write.. Trixie :)

Dead Men Don't Talk (Poetry) - 9/8/2003 4:34:45 AM
Loved it!

The Lazy Poet's Mantra (Poetry) - 9/8/2003 4:34:14 AM
Excellent!

A Masochist Viewpoint (Poetry) - 9/8/2003 4:33:31 AM
Great!

The Statue (Poetry) - 9/8/2003 4:32:58 AM
Wow!

A Masochist Viewpoint (Poetry) - 9/6/2003 7:25:38 PM
creativity shall keep you afloat...

A Masochist Viewpoint (Poetry) - 9/6/2003 12:17:20 PM
Interesting write; well done! :D (((HUGS)))

A Masochist Viewpoint (Poetry) - 9/6/2003 11:45:04 AM
I'm not sure this is how their view points, but then again who am I to know this? A thought-provoking piece... May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

A Walk That Way (Poetry) - 9/6/2003 12:26:37 AM
you have a talent for provoking thought Todd. and wonderment in meaning. G

Belief (Poetry) - 9/6/2003 12:24:13 AM
now this one made me think Todd. Quiet interesting. G

Guardians (Poetry) - 9/4/2003 8:38:47 AM
Oh, This was wonderful..makes me want to read your book! Reindeer

Guardians (Poetry) - 9/4/2003 8:38:18 AM
a wonderful read

Expectations (Poetry) - 9/3/2003 11:36:24 AM
mmm...now this I like. This is an excellent commentary on this age of conformity and refusal to accept reponsibility...god forbid you show individuality...just follow the crowd...you will be okay... Excellent job here!

Expectations (Poetry) - 9/3/2003 11:03:28 AM
Nicely done!

Expectations (Poetry) - 9/3/2003 5:16:15 AM
I keep losing socks. Your poem was very witty. Excellent!

Expectations (Poetry) - 9/3/2003 4:15:28 AM
somedays life would be great if there were no expectations but than again I rather enjoy a good challenge...this took me back to childhood. Don't, No, Not Now...good one Todd! ~Z~

Expectations (Poetry) - 9/3/2003 2:47:23 AM
yeah, keep it simple

Green to Gray (Poetry) - 9/1/2003 10:19:15 PM
You have a profound perception of life. Roe Sims

Taco Stand (Poetry) - 9/1/2003 10:11:35 PM
interesting title....interesting poem

Green to Gray (Poetry) - 8/31/2003 4:53:21 PM
Well done.