Ascension (Tentative Title) (Short Story) - 6/23/2014 5:55:39 AM
A very fanciful piece that is well-written. It's not my genre so I didn't finish reading it. It appears to be a clone of the popular series of books and stories of this type. I'm sure it will be well received by those that love this kind of fiction.
I would only caution you to say that I hope you have included some moral or redeeming value in all of the violent encounters contained. Classic literary works always do that, whether they be satire, allegory, or fable.
Ron
A Hero's Purpose (Chapter 1: A Walk Inside) (Short Story) - 3/26/2012 7:50:49 AM
Always leave the reader wanting to read more ---- and this is exactly what you've done here. Good writing.
Donna
The Termina Chronicles (Chapter 1: The Last Farewell) (Short Story) - 3/18/2012 11:30:14 AM
This story is connect to the other one, right? This had some anime and sci fi in it. Sounds like you have a great book on your hands. Why so short? I'm intrigued. More please. Well written.
A Hero's Purpose (Chapter 1: A Walk Inside) (Short Story) - 3/18/2012 11:28:13 AM
Do you have more of this? I like a good mythical story. This had a science fiction feel to it. I'd definitely read more of this.
