Cut By Plumb (Heartbroken) 1 (Poetry) - 4/10/2012 2:54:10 PM
Ah, such if life among the lovers of this great earth. Ecstasy and despair within a short twenty-four-hour period. Yes!
Cut By Plumb (Heartbroken) 1 (Poetry) - 4/9/2012 9:42:14 AM
Things are not always as they seem… as illustrated by your poem.
Ron
Here I Stand (Poetry) - 4/8/2012 10:50:17 AM
i love this heartfelt piece...read it 3 times to get the full effect...must agree with ronald a re-structuring of your lines would make it even more profound...easier to read because so many areas deserve to be dramatized with a line break. a nice write harry...look forward to more...pmedlin
Here I Stand (Poetry) - 4/8/2012 9:01:00 AM
The first stage to recovering is understanding the problem. Here I Stand addresses that. It would help if you placed a space after each comma, or even a line to make your work more readable.
Ron
Here I Stand (Poetry) - 4/7/2012 5:08:48 AM
Harry,
I also gaze at the sky and wonder why in my life did I do some of the things I did. Unfortunately, we can't undo them. March forward Harry, put the past behind you. Make your future better than your past. Have faith in yourself. We could all learn from your poetry, Harry. None of us is perfect.
Blessings to you,
+ Linda
Here I Stand (Poetry) - 4/7/2012 12:45:44 AM
DID YOU KNOW THAT...'ALL HAVE SINNED AND COME SHORT OF THE GLORY OF GOD...'(ROM 3:23-THERE IS NO 'PERFECT' PERSON)AND...'HAVING DONE ALL TO STAND...WE STAND...'(EPH 6:12-13-GOD KNOWS IT ALL, THUS WE DO ALL WE CAN DO AS WE 'PRESS ON' STANDING UNDER THE AUSPICES OF HIS MERCY AND GRACE THROUGH 'TRUE' REPENTANCE).CONSIDER...YOU CANNOT DO IT ON YOUR OWN BUT, (GAL 2:20)...''HE' WILL DO IT FOR YOU, IF, YOU WANT HIM TO...' THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS AWESOME WORK. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
