Feel Me (Poetry) - 12/9/2012 6:14:43 PM
Warm invitations are the best!
Peace,
Dayvid
Feel Me (Poetry) - 12/7/2012 1:53:57 PM
thisb is the kind of beckoning that a weary traveler wishes to hear
budd
Feel Me (Poetry) - 12/7/2012 8:44:15 AM
A broken soul in need of a wonderful woman's touch, both physically and mentally has it supplied within the lines of this poem. It touched me personally, for once I was that broken man.
Dizzy (Poetry) - 9/29/2012 4:58:21 PM
spun to perfection ...
Dizzy (Poetry) - 9/23/2012 9:36:23 AM
A unique and beautiful love poem that gives me thoughts something not so beautiful underneath. But you have written it so well with the reference to the potter's wheel!
I sense a song somewhere there… Spinning, spinning,… Spinning.
Ron
Dizzy (Poetry) - 9/21/2012 7:26:44 AM
Amen to all that spinning, Linnea (love that name).
"Too hard, too tough, too real,
But changing towards the beautiful
On this patient potter’s wheel."
Yesssssss . . .
Day's Prince (Poetry) - 9/19/2012 2:12:50 PM
Your words add a touch of wonder to the reign of the sun, moon and stars over God's sleeping world. I love the concept of the stars as "an infinity of attendants...with dimmer sprinkles of Delight." Delightful!
Connie
Rescued (Poetry) - 7/5/2012 5:03:10 AM
This is so awesome! Get what you need to get!
Rescued (Poetry) - 6/28/2012 8:58:47 AM
Fantastic imagery of desperation! Very suspenseful and unique.
Ron
Rescued (Poetry) - 6/26/2012 10:19:11 AM
Woeee! Sucker punched me with those last five words. I like that, the masochist that I am. Kickass poetry!
Never, Never, Never, Never... (Poetry) - 6/21/2012 11:22:32 AM
Only the imagination restricts ones imagination or frees to go wherever you choose.
I feel this penn has a cathartic release for you.
Very fresh and clear poem.
Never, Never, Never, Never... (Poetry) - 6/21/2012 9:53:33 AM
Should be titled, Ever, Ever, Ever for its redeeming qualities. Enjoyed.
Ron
Never, Never, Never, Never... (Poetry) - 6/21/2012 8:21:16 AM
what wise knowing words you've laid before us in such a soft lyrical tone...beautiful work...pmedlin
Favorable Death (Poetry) - 6/18/2012 7:06:58 AM
hang in their 'womanhood'...you're so much stronger than you think you are. the only place to go now is...up! thanks
asa
Favorable Death (Poetry) - 6/16/2012 3:51:47 PM
The Donner Party fell upon some hard times, did they not? This sweet young(?) thing would be tender to the bone. I know. I know. But YOU started it! Welcome to AD.
Favorable Death (Poetry) - 6/16/2012 11:48:35 AM
I'm not sure where it is leading to. but it sure is gruesome.
Ron
