Old Men and God (Short Story) - 1/6/2013 4:52:53 PM
wow michael....this is whats knoown as writing 'naked' or nekkid as i say. keep honing your talent... its raw and real. nice job
Tucking Dad In (Short Story) - 7/13/2012 7:38:58 PM
Michael, I read your story twice and my heart feels burdened for you and the pain of all that you write about. I am a nurse and have worked with drug and alcohol patients for 9 years..What a heart-breaking situation for family, patient and those caring for them....You have well painted the feelings that I have heard so very plainly ever day..The tears that men and women, moms and dads shed many times....My prayers are with you.... Sandy
Tucking Dad In (Short Story) - 7/12/2012 9:07:22 AM
This was a good descriptive read michael...a realistic peak into what so many young boys and girls experience everyday...the fear, shame and lack of protection through no fault of their own
UnCommon Table (Poetry) - 7/14/2012 9:09:41 AM
And we want to fire the slackers, the angry, the drugged, and the unskilled. Outsource to a better place with lower cost. Take away all the safety nets for the poor. Let them starve and freeze under a “thousand points of light” while they lower our taxes so that we can accumulate a few more toys oh one upmanship in our race to become the richest person in the world. Let them eat cake.
You have written a very compassionate, stirring opus that all conservatives should read.
I feel your pain brother. I'm helping in whatever way I can. But not only on T-day. I am helping a few individuals, year-round.
Ron
Killing Felons (Poetry) - 7/13/2012 3:50:55 PM
I didn't notice the R before I began to read.
It's a passionate writing, sharing so many emotions as you seek to leave the past behind and restrain yourself from reacting.
I personally believe the foul expressions detract from the importance of what you wrote.
Connie
UnCommon Table (Poetry) - 7/13/2012 3:45:41 PM
A vivid picture of his heart--and yours.
Welcome to Authors' Den!
Connie
UnCommon Table (Poetry) - 7/13/2012 3:36:41 AM
bless your compassion, Michael,
and thank you for sharing this,
it resonates with me deeply
best wishes
john